The Demon King Need Not Be Defeated

I feel that the biggest dissuasion for me in reading this book is not that the plot is too watery (of course the plot is a bit watery, but not that watery), but that a group of people say the plot is watery in a rhythm. Everyone felt that the plot was watery. Then everyone took a look and thought, oh, I'm not the only one who feels stupid, and I'm trying to persuade a bunch of people to retreat. I am not a die-hard fan either. I know Luo Qing from Miracle Summoner. Later, I fell into trouble due to academic problems (🌿), but at least I was a leader. So it's not a free prostitution party. Let me make a disclaimer first. In fact, the matter of water injection itself is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. Two questions. The first is that Luo Qing has some problems of her own (of course, readers also have problems to some extent). That is, I like to cover everything and explain the causes and consequences of what happened. This is not a big problem in terms of comprehensive comics. After all, the combat power of each world does not match, and some explanations are needed to "reasonably equal" some damage. But when it comes to original work, you don't need to be so rigorous. After all, everything is under the control of the author, and any patches will be added later. And to put it bluntly, the most unpleasant thing for readers is Tu Yile. If the whole plot is followed, they won't pay too much attention to too many details. But here's the problem. Luo Qing spent a lot of pen and ink describing the details in the early chapters, resulting in readers only reading the details, so they can only criticize the details. Luo Qing wanted to patch up these details again, making the already detailed plot full of nesting dolls. This is why readers clamored that it was too watery. The second problem is the problem of character creation. When the character created by the author is a character similar to a wise man, readers will find it reasonable to conduct psychological analysis of the character, describe the activities, or even spend several chapters structuring one thing. But this Sheen book certainly isn't. What is the positioning of this book? Long Aotian, Shuangwen, Loli (fog). These are all bad plots from the starting point. What readers expect is one explosive point after another. Rather than a long setting. Luo Qing felt that her reversal of the explosive point was very satisfying, and she spent a lot of time describing the protagonist group, but before she wrote it, she was just the same old Riddler. In addition, some descriptions are really not needed. For example, the section describing the princess' coming out. Although everyone is an LSP, it is understandable that they like pretty girls. But I can't help but describe too much. For example, for COC players, even if it is written - the breeze blows three thousand black silk, and the black hair on the temples is teased and flirted with the cheeks, causing a smile and a beautiful frown on the lips, walking lightly on the stone steps, accompanied by the flying cherry blossoms all over the sky, and sometimes the falling cherry blossom brocades are floating around, like a fairy descending to earth, elegant and gentle. ——It would be better to post an app90 like this. Perhaps this is also a reason why readers think of water. Also, I really think some readers are really wrong. Yes, Luo Qing is a master of L5 novel writing, but when it comes to originality, she is just trying to get across the river by scratching her head, and knows nothing about it except for some writing skills. Rhythm, plot needs, characterization. These are all made from scratch. Why don't you let people who write programming fix computers? According to the reader's logic, they all work on computers, so why don't they even know how to repair computers? Again, if you don't like it, just leave. There is no need to make people all over the world say that water is not water. This is really discouraging. What's more, the originality is really generated by Luo Qing's love. If this love is gone, there will be a trap. Looking back on writing comprehensive comics, I am still a good man. Really, there is no need, there is no need to spray water without water. Quality is in people's hearts - I think those who clicked in are all LSP readers who have read it for many years. There is no need to embarrass each other It took one and a half hours to type by hand. I deleted a lot and apologized for my first long review. I can't scold you. If you scold me, I will suffer. I am just a little turtle.

What to say, you can't listen to everything or not listen. This degree is difficult to grasp, and it is even more worrying about gains and losses during the exploration period of original transformation. But as long as Ruqing sticks to the original intention of writing a book, she will read the books that you think about from the heart. Although I am in a very miserable situation now, the business failed and the house was sold and I can't give a reward, but I still book it all to express my feelings. After all, it is quite stressful to have a three-year-old daughter at home and save money to redeem the house.

Old book friends are here to report!

I have only read about eighty chapters so far, but the experience is still very good. It gives me the feeling that the author is seriously writing a story, rather than making a quick snack out of patchwork bits. But what I didn't expect was that this storytelling model was completely unpopular at the starting point. I can't understand a lot of people who say it's unfair. The character's psychology seems to be unreliable, and so is the worldview. Do you really want every chapter to be an intense fight scene and plot? Or what do you think is unfair? Secondly, this chapter contains many confusing remarks, which are full of bitterness and hatred towards the world. Maybe it's because real life is too depressing, so the fantasy of being superior to others is placed in novels? I can understand it, because the battery squeezed by the capitalists should have a deep understanding of class and want to vent the dark desires in their hearts. However, I still hope that such book friends can be as kind as possible. Real life is already very hard, so don't embody that kind of emotion in novels. Is the world of truth, goodness and beauty so unpalatable? Does it have to be all intrigues and intrigues? In this case, it doesn't matter whether it's fantasy or urban. Aren't light novels supposed to be more relaxed and cheerful? To be fair, you can grab a lot of novels that focus on refreshing and coherent excitement. There are many people who go against the routine and have excellent ideas. Why should we teach authors to write books here? I believe there are still people who like to read this kind of novels that tell the story of a world that slowly unfolds. Hope the author can stick with it. After all, there are not many authors who don't take advantage of the popularity, write original works instead of stitching monsters, and have certain writing skills. The student party doesn't have much money, so it can only show its support by ordering a full reservation.

How many readers did you dissuade from the part about breaking off the engagement?

I am building a building here. I think there is something wrong with the character of Rosie. She is obviously a princess of a country and a genius, but she is humble to the extreme and licks the male protagonist desperately.

Lsp Ru Wuyan didn't make fun of the marriages of the heroines. After reading Ru Qing's book for so long, I felt uncomfortable with Sheen's character. Even the naughty Luo Zhen can see his shining points and the feeling of growth. Although they are all written by Ru Qing, Sheen... Has already been eight hundred chapters, and his strength is close to the end of the world. I really can't see the shining points in him. , It feels like everything you get depends on the plug-ins you get, including love. The overly frivolous character makes people feel that without the blessing of the Supreme God and the relationship of the brave, Xian can't have everything. Everything that the protagonist currently has makes people feel that he can get these because he is a brave, not because the brave is Xian. , I like Luo Qing, because the male and female protagonists in his works have their own attractive characteristics that are different from the original anime. However, in this novel, although there are many female protagonists, no one can make me feel the charm they should have. Luo Zhen and Mash, Na Yue, Fang Li and the singer, even in the silent story of lsp, I can see the mutual affection between the eldest brother, Icarus, and Kuang San. The beauty of throbbing and mutual attraction, in this movie, it feels like everything has become the blind obedience of the heroines to the hero due to their status as heroes. The setting of three wives and four concubines in another world is very normal, but the woman is like the princess and the dragon demon, and she doesn't mind the presence of other people around Sheen. Sheen even broke off the engagement because he felt he was at a disadvantage. Even if it is a joke, it is funny. Is the woman's love so cheap? I don't object to lsp's character design, but Sheen looks like a cheating scumbag no matter what. He still needs to chase what should be pursued, and Luo Qing still has to support him, but this is not because he likes the protagonist who has never had any consciousness, just because he is the fifth younger brother in Luo Qing's works who has not yet grown up.

Open an investigation building! Do you think this book has 2,000 words per chapter? Or is it better to have a chapter with 3,000 words? If everyone thinks that three thousand words is better, Ruqing will adjust it later and write a chapter of three thousand words. Of course, the limit is to update 6,000 words a day for a new book issue. If it were replaced with 3,000 words per chapter, then there would only be two chapters a day before it was put on the shelves. In other words, the number of words per day remains the same, only the number of chapters has changed. You can put forward your own opinions. This survey will be maintained until tomorrow evening. After tomorrow evening, after counting everyone's opinions, we will make a decision for update. Tomorrow's update will be left until tonight. Everyone can just put forward their opinions based on their own opinions.

[Holy Sword] ·Exclusive: Xion ·Level +100 ·All skill levels +10 (can exceed the upper limit) ·All types of damage reduced by 99% ·All negative status immunity ·Sharpness is at the highest level ·Durability is at the highest scale ·Causes great damage to evil objects ·Purifies and removes evil properties Except for the effect ·Limited to users, cannot be discarded, cannot be transferred, cannot be destroyed, cannot be transformed, cannot be interfered with ·Unique skills ·When upgrading, all ability types are increased to the maximum value ·When upgrading, skill points are gained The amount taken is the maximum value ·All skill acquisition conditions are reduced to the minimum ·All skill upgrade conditions are reduced to the minimum ·Permanently valid and cannot be canceled in any way [Blessing of the Supreme God] ·Special skills ·Get the protection of the world ·Only for the Protoss, all conditions can be met ·Only for the Protoss, all interference can be avoided br>·Only for the Protoss, all functions can take effect ·Only for the Protoss, all effects can be blessed [Enemy Perception] ·Resident Skills ·Detect hostile objects [Physical Resistance] ·Resident Skills ·Weaken the damage of physical attacks [Evasion] ·Resident Skills ·Improve the ability to dodge [Magic Resistance] ·Resident Skills ·Weaken magic damage [Two-Handed Sword] ·Resident Skills ·Improve the skill and attack power of two-handed sword type weapons [War God] ·Resident Skills ·When entering the combat state, depending on the skill level, you will be able to It is enough to display a certain degree of combat skills like instinct ·Have a certain degree of control over the battle situation and the direction of the battle ·Improve combat intuition ·Improve the control of the body [Hidden] ·Resident skills ·When entering hiding, lurking, ambush and other states, depending on the level of the skill, the smell, footsteps, breathing and even The sense of presence will be eliminated to a certain extent. If the skill level is high enough, the skill can also be effective on the surrounding environment and other surrounding individuals [Assassination] ·Resident Skills ·Launching attacks while hiding, lurking, ambush, etc. Will increase the probability of killing with one hit ·While hiding, lurking, or ambushing, you will be able to detect the enemy's weaknesses with a high probability [Abnormal state resistance] ·Resident skills ·Increased resistance to abnormal states [Immortality] ·Resident skills ·Improve your own recovery ability and the recovery effect of recovery status ·Have certain resistance to instant death attacks and abilities ·When a situation where you cannot maintain your own vital signs occurs, you can force it by consuming magic power. Continuously maintain vital signs [Extreme Change] ·Active skills ·Directly effective on the life level ·When used, all abilities are amplified, and the effect is determined by the amount of magic power consumed and the level of the skill [Magic Guide] ·Resident Skills ·Significantly increase magic power [Magic Recovery Recover] ·Resident skills ·The consumed magic power will be restored automatically ·Significantly improve the effect of magic [Ride] ·Resident skills [Tamation] ·Active skills ·Use magic power in a specific way to achieve the effect and purpose of taming magic. The higher the level, the higher the level of the monsters that can be tamed. , And the more you can tame rare and powerful monsters [Magic Perception] ·Resident Skills [Magic Operation] ·Resident Skills [Magic Sword] ·Active Skills ·You can add magic attacks to your weapons. The higher the level, the stronger the power, and you can freely expand and contract and change shape [Penetration] ·Resident Skill ·Able to ignore a certain degree of defense [Armor Destruction] ·Resident Skill ·Can destroy the opponent's armor and disintegrate the opponent's defense [Acceleration] ·Resident Skill ·Able to increase one's movement speed with the level [Free Movement] ·Standing skills ·You can move regardless of external obstacles under any circumstances, so you can do things such as running on walls, moving on water, and climbing through various obstacles in dangerous places without letting external factors affect your speed [Close avoidance] ·Standing skills ·Able to detect the enemy's movements, not only able to dodge During the enemy's attack, you can also use all means to get close to the enemy as quickly as possible ·"Evasion" advanced extended skill [Instant Teleportation] ·Active skill ·Ignore the laws of physics when you are about to be attacked, and instantly move the user to another position [Oppression] ·Active skill ·Able to release Use magic power or your own momentum to mentally and even physically oppress all objects within a certain range [Chanting] ·Resident Skills ·Can increase the chanting speed and proficiency of spells [Meditation] ·Resident Skills ·Can use spirit and thought to change the nature and form of magic power, allowing it to intervene in the principles of the world [Magic·Fire] ·Standing Skills [Magic·Ice] ·Standing Skills [Magic·Thunder] ·Standing Skills [Magic·Wind] ·Standing Skills [Unarmed Combat] ·Standing Skills ·Improve skills and abilities when fighting with bare hands

I have to say that this book has almost become useless recently. I used to look forward to the update every day, but now I can open the latest chapter and read it in one minute before going to bed. I can cope with it now. The most important thing is that I am not coping with this, but the author is coping with it. When I read the author's previous books, I felt that they were so watery that I doubted whether these two books were written by the same person. After all, the progress of this book was still very normal at that time. But now I really believe it, without any doubt. To be honest, if you're just talking about the number of words, Shuishui's dialogue with Shuishui and daily life, forget about it. As for the several skills that need to be described again in each chapter, there are only a few destiny that can be used over and over again, and we have to repeat the description several times in every battle. We are really not stupid, and we can't even remember these. The current process is water dialogue→water various supporting characters' psychological activities→water battle→water dialogue and various supporting characters' psychological activities during the battle, and then a week passes in the real world, and even a day may not have passed in the novel. Have you ever been able to escape from that dark elf before? Knowing that the opponent is an old monster who has lived for the past year, you don't just draw the holy sword and kill it with one strike, but you still have to wait for others to reveal their trump cards? Don't talk about hiding your identity, there are only three demons present. Ai Yi already knew that the demon was a young girl, and whether the beast demon knew it or not, after all, the boss knew it. Isn't it worthwhile to expose an insignificant identity and kill an enemy who will pose a threat to those around you with a sword? With Sheen's current strength, except for the three gods and six demons, who in the world can do anything to him? In every battle, he would come up and kick, then the supporting character would be shocked and angry, then the supporting character would attack recklessly, then Sheen would play around but not fight, then the supporting character would be furious and explode, then Sheen would be slightly shocked and play seriously, then the supporting character would reveal his trump card, then Sheen would have to fight seriously, and then the ten or so chapters would have passed, and with the meeting and dialogue with the supporting character, and the psychological activities of the supporting character, these twenty chapters would have passed. Don't believe it, I have restrained myself. The plot has gone from Chapter 568, after Sheen left the Elf Forest, to Chapter 607, 40 chapters now. What is it about? Sheen arrived in the empire, helped the knight family to rescue the siege, wiped out the family, exchanged information with the prince, and went to the location to investigate. And these things were pushed forward without any hindrance. That's it? Chapter 40 and we haven't even seen Moro yet, why are we still dealing with her? Shouldn't this last another hundred chapters? Unless you push directly in the next step. By the way, we still need to find Laisha and Thiel, which will take dozens of chapters. I also know that Luo Qing has something going on at home recently, but writing novels is your job. If you work with this attitude. . . Then you might as well update a chapter every day without pain to maintain full attendance, and then revise the plot, and then slowly make up for it when the status is adjusted, so as not to feel like a useless thing now. You are tired of writing and it is boring for some of us readers to watch, and we have to debate whether to continue subscribing. If any old fans see this, please don't troll me. Old fans of old authors are really difficult to deal with. Please don't delete my posts. I still have 8,000 followers, so I can't even post a complaint, right? Speaking of which, did the catastrophe of all races in Eagle happen to be like this before?