I Only Wanted to Be a Bit Player

As a long-time reader of Luo Qing, a reader who prefers Phantom, and a reader who dislikes Sheen, when I see someone wanting to rewrite Phantom, I want to say it. There was no support in the previous book, and now there are two lines of tears. The comments section of the previous book is all negative and no one cares about it. After I changed it, it disappeared. This book just started to improve, and it started to be like this again. If the book is cut, will some people complain that it is not as good as the previous book and continue to argue? Is there any point in arguing about this now? In a sense, if Luo Qing doesn't read the comment section, it's really right. The comment section that Luo Qing has seen since entering the trap has been so smoky. The fact that Phantom was laid off in the past has made some people see that as long as there are more negative comments, someone can be laid off. There is no possibility of a book. Who likes to chat with each other every day in the comment area? Who doesn't want to see more people discussing the plot, and even looking for some bugs to tease Luo Qing? How can there be such a big difference between old and new readers? Sometimes the comment area is really scary, and I feel aggrieved after reading it.

After looking at the comment section, I support a split of 50 and 50 between original and comprehensive comics, so why not do originals and mixed comics like the first book "Girls' Great Summons"? 🤔 The comfort zone is a test for the author, and it is also a test for the readers. The span is so wide all at once, and there will be a huge gap for those readers who have been waiting for a long time. After all, there are not many authors who are good at writing comprehensive comics. But thinking about the current environment, Luo Qing understands that she needs to transform. Nowadays, there are not many good animations in a year, and 80% are otherworld show-offs. I miss the old days when animation and comprehensive comics were booming.

Come on, if the author doesn't want to review it, I'll review it for him. What is the problem with this book? In other words, what is the point of failure? 1. Second Dimension What is the essence of this book? 2. Three Dimensions What is the core of the worldview of this book? 3. [Weak humans and monsters survive in desperate situations] The current situation of this book 4. [The combat chapters are all explanations] (1 & 2) Why is the second dimension the worst point of failure? Just like someone in the book club said well Spells are fixed, and learning depends entirely on comprehension? Expansion, no changes? Do you really think this is the second dimension and there are 100 ways to die? Please, this is the story of human survival in the third dimension There are talented people and strange things, and there are infinite possibilities To put it bluntly, everyone likes to see this possibility and the writing skills of the author surrounding this possibility You This kind of painting is a turn-based system. You put a skill and I put another skill The battle must be active. As for the starting point of the battle that can be moved vividly, the master has many practical examples Give me an example Can't there be some strange person who can use two spells at once? Can't a warlock with natural divine power catch up with a hunter's physique? Can't some researcher develop a more convenient practice instead of replacing it with blood that changes its own nature? The author's setting gives these characters unlimited potential But the author only mentions two sentences about family background Higher warlocks are born to be awesome and high-level hunters are born to be awesome In the end, it is still the bloodline theory that cannot be escaped in the old two-dimensional or animation field Even if it is the bloodline theory, you can also add that the protagonist works hard and makes various efforts to break through the bloodline theory But here, I can't do it! The system draws cards! I think this is unstable! The system draws cards! This is what makes all book friends very irritated. There is no system, it is just a disguised lineage theory. All resources and items can be provided by the big family, and then the protagonist is lucky enough to pick up a few artifacts. Isn't it normal? To put it bluntly, it is to use the system to give the protagonist an excuse not to work hard or to say that he does not want to write about the hard work 3. [Weak humans, monsters are powerful PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds] I am afraid this is just like a fake The beginning renders how cruel the world is Humans only have a few cities In the end, humans have everything, and they don't live like they are near the end of the world What can you do with a big daddy behind you But most people at this level Under other circumstances, cities are separated by very scary no-man's land Ordinary people have long gone crazy, short of water and food, and such a dense place cannot accept several impacts every year In this way, people live and work in peace and contentment, and it is not like the end of the world. At this level, there will definitely be unified mechanized management 4. I asked for leave once, and the time in the underworld was updated, and my father was sick and he asked for a month, but when he comes back, he can ensure that the things he writes are of high quality, funny and serious at the same time The battle is basically to fight for the short release of skills. After releasing, you have to render a chapter before completely typing it out. Isn't it annoying? Over and over again, I still talk about mosquitoes (after all, mosquitoes also often ask for leave, and the similarity is very high). Mosquitoes can do it so that readers will not be bored even if it is a chapter. Even if it is a normal thing After the expansion, there will be more than 30 pages and 10,000 words. The update is still one chapter. Readers can enjoy it I feel so frustrated in this book It took several chapters to finish with various forced explanations But people explain so much because you don't understand if you don't explain br>And the author's explanation is just to make up for the word count, it's such a simple skill Li Guang Xinggui One sentence is invincible, it consumes a lot of money, and it is difficult to learn Can't it be interspersed with writing later? Isn't it necessary to repeat it over and over again? They are not elementary school students (Don't talk about family problems, it's not like someone is critically ill after giving birth. You can't use this thing to ask for leave. Why should readers be used to writing books? Can't you ask for a leave and do a good job and write a chapter with high quality? They are originally people who make money with starting coins on the shelves. The working group just takes advantage of it and says I want to take care of my wife)

Today I went back and read the reviews of Luo Qing's previous works. Surprisingly, the trend has changed, and the good works in my memory have become full of poison under the eyes of today's readers. In view of the fact that Luo Qing has basically made little progress in recent years, I think it is best for everyone to take a precaution. Even if she returns to the comprehensive comic in the next book, she may not be able to regain her glory. In my personal opinion, it starts to go downhill from Qizhao. It will obviously feel more watery and the plot logic will become more and more far-fetched. Therefore, if the next one is really a comprehensive comic, my lowest expectation is that it will be better than Qizhao. It will be considered a success.

Ruqing, please write a side story about practical teaching. I've been waiting so hard!

The smell is too strong. . . The storyline between Xu and An was too outrageous. I never imagined that a freshman would have a fan group that was all female just a few days after entering school. . . . And isn't the protagonist just a righteous person? Then why did the author forcefully arrange so many coincidences?

A hypocritical article under the guise of human development? Protagonist: Oops, the goddess came to my door and exposed me. I didn't want this to happen. This was an accident. I really didn't want to attract other people's attention; Oops, I didn't want to accept the date either, but I had to find out the truth of the matter. , This is force majeure; Oh, I really don't want to get into this trouble, but you see, I ran away, but I couldn't win (haha, a mage doesn't use spiritual skills to race against a warrior, you are really "serious" in resisting). After a year of being exposed by a stupid x, Gou didn't feel angry at all (forget about "I'll keep this grudge", the protagonist was very happy to have his blood sucked) When he went to the appointment, he sternly refused, and directly said that if he disturbed his growth, Gou would be ready to have a deadly feud with him, completely draw a clear line, and then go back to calm down the storm with the excuse that the stupid x heroine was interested in his blood. Isn't this good? Oh, but if you write it like this, there will be no chance for the male and female protagonists to interact, and the subsequent plot will not be able to develop... So do you have to rely on the male protagonist's pretentiousness to develop the plot? (I'm a little disgusted by the male protagonist's hypocrisy. If I'm the only one who thinks so, please pretend I didn't say it...)

Author, you are losing readers. Did you know that the performance of your books has been getting worse and worse in recent years? The book review sections of many platforms say that your writing is poor. Is it true that there is no truth at all? , Masters, writing is nothing more than not following the main line, but it is still interesting. Your writing is just copy and paste, always repeating some things mentioned before. There is no problem with the author's writing style, and the writing is very strong, but I feel that you are becoming more and more perfunctory in writing books. Yes, you have a lot of things to do about getting married and having children. I don't know if you are full-time , I understand that the more words you have, the more money you will make, but if you are a full-timer, the most important thing is to become a master and become platinum. Readers are the foundation. In this way, even if you go to other platforms, you will never make less. The contract is the last word. How many die-hard fans do you have who can support you to become a code word machine? Can you support your whole family? Or live a better life? Fei Mosquito only writes one page a day, and takes half a month off every time. There is still no shortage of readers. The first one is just ordinary, and the second one is a masterpiece. Qingquan's original content is almost exactly the same as the previous one. Is it good to read? It still looks good, but what about the results? Better than all his books. You can touch on original content right from the beginning, but you don't seem to dare to write it. Let's not mention the miracle. The setting is useless as soon as you write it down. Demon King, ha! I started copying and pasting. I want to be perfunctory as much as I want. I started from Shao Zhao, Omni, Straight to Death, Miracle, Chasing the Devil. I hope you can write better and better. The future of the author = money.

After sorting it out, this book's setting of strength: Grading is my own understanding. If you don't like it, please ignore it. The accumulation of 'quantity' refers to the accumulation of strength through cultivation. Personally, I feel that moving from a subordinate to a superior is like changing jobs in a game.

As for the next book, personally, I strongly recommend Luo Qing to write a "complex comic" type! If you have to write an "original" type, you can also write a semi-original and semi-comprehensive comic like "The Great Summoning of Girls". The comprehensive comic part is a way for the protagonist to improve his strength, and the original part can be the reason why the protagonist improves his strength, such as fighting against the invasion of another world, such as finding a way home (Earth). It should be noted here that the protagonist does not have to be a time traveler, just a person from the original world. Here, I might as well take the book "I Clearly Just Want to Be a Sidekick" as an example, and turn it into a semi-original work! ——"The Phantom Demon is a human enemy from another dimension. It came to the XXX continent in XXX year and started a protracted war with the XXX Alliance (Human Alliance). The XXX Alliance was defeated in the XXX battle in XXX year, and the territory it owned was only one-third of the original territory. Su Ming is an ordinary student at the Demon Hunting Academy in Longyao City, the human border defense line. He does not have such a grand dream of saving mankind because he knows that his talent is ordinary in the academy. However, Su Ming had an extraordinary adventure. In an accidental incident, Su Ming obtained a system from another world (it was a plug-in anyway) and had the ability to travel to other worlds (various anime worlds). However, he had a distrustful attitude toward other worlds and never used it until he witnessed his hometown being destroyed by a demon. That day, Su Ming understood one thing - in such an era, if you don't have the power, even if you just want to be an ordinary person and live an ordinary life, it is delusional. Su Ming finally figured it out. He needed enough power, even if it was the power of another world. As long as he could expel the phantom demons and avenge his relatives and friends, there was nothing wrong with it. Thus, Su Ming walked into the depths of his soul for the first time, faced the existence that could bring him power for the first time (referring to Su Ming's plug-in), and used the power from another world for the first time. However, Su Ming never imagined that it was his choice this time that would bring about a huge turning point in the fate of mankind. Of course, if Luo Qing writes a "complex comic" next but doesn't want to write an old genre, she can also try Contractor Battle! Similar ones include "Unlimited Anime", "Book of Girls' Contract", "Reincarnation Paradise", etc. In my impression, Luo Qing has never written this type of "comprehensive comic", so why not give it a try! (Don't tell me that it's infinite, it can basically be called the "stand-alone version of infinite". There are basically no other contractors showing up) If the next book is still purely original... I don't know what to say, I can only hope that the next book will be very exciting and have a super good result! However, as I said at the beginning, I am still more optimistic about Luo Qing continuing to write "complex comic" type books! ! ! By the way, can you write a second episode of Practical Education? In the past, it was just a plot without it, but now it is. Isn't the second season coming out in July? According to rumors, the third season of Practical Education will also be broadcast next year, so I am looking forward to seeing Nanaya Fangri's appearance again! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ——This is the point, this is the point, this is the point (say important things three times)