The Continuation of Rebirth and Immortality

It's well written, from seeking immortality to finding your own way, from seeking from the outside to seeking from within. You can see the change of the protagonist, from determined to live forever, to wavering, and then determined to clear the way for immortality. The idea is good and the writing is good, but it is a slow-burning type. Come on.

First of all, the protagonist created by the author is a character with self-morality and a human stance. Then, the author arranged a disgusting plot: There is a rabbit demon who is unfamiliar with the protagonist, and he goes against the protagonist, and joins some ghosts to fight against the protagonist. At this time, there are still some mortals who are worried that the protagonist cannot cope with it, so several people pester a rabbit demon and let the protagonist deal with other ghosts. Then, this mortal was killed by the rabbit demon for the protagonist. At the same time, the author also described the rabbit demon's values ​​​​that humans are like ants, killing at will without any psychological burden is obviously intentional killing. In the end, the protagonist solved the ghost, and the author came up with a plot twist to clear things up, showing that the rabbit demon was coerced into killing these mortals in order to save other people. The author's arrangement is to destroy the rabbit demon's cultivation and return it to its original form. What's even more disgusting comes next, in the next chapter, the author arranges for the rabbit demon to drink the protagonist's medicinal wine, and the protagonist also works hard to help the rabbit demon heal and increase the rabbit demon's 60 years of cultivation. This series of arrangements makes me sick... The essence of this is that the protagonist acts as a court to forgive the family of the deceased, and allows the intentional murderer (rabbit demon) to hand over money (cultivation), so that the death penalty can be changed to fixed-term imprisonment. And soon, the money (cultivation) will be returned to the murderer.

If the introduction is not good, write a good introduction. The title of the book is average. The reason why many bad books are so popular in the early stage is because the introduction is well written.

This book is updated slowly to practice writing skills and writing skills. If you like it, you can support it. If you don't like it, you can point out the problems. It will make you feel more comfortable as you write slowly.

This book is very awkward. The author wanted to write that kind of fairy tale, but he couldn't write that kind of demeanor of a game of mortals. His mood was so bad, it's not much different from those novels with a lot of resources.

It's Yang, please change it slowly, it's uncomfortable

It's a rare work by a great master. Popularity is accumulated through one book. I feel that if you write this book well, it will accumulate a lot of popularity. Opportunities are also very important. I hope it will become popular.

The only word I can use to describe my current mood is "fuck". As long as the back of this book is not watery or jumpy, it will be an absolute masterpiece (maybe exaggerated). No matter how bad it is, it is still a fairy tale. I discovered it last night and stayed up late to read it.

The author's writing is great! Why is there no one there?

It's a pity that you even finished your meal with perfect attendance.

The introduction needs to be changed, it's a bit cliche, but the rest is pretty good, and the content is wonderfully written.

There are too many psychological activities. When two people meet, just each other's psychological activities can cover most of it.