A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting with Possessing Qu Hun

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Momojiji is already at chapter 18, and he hasn't started practicing yet. I don't know, I thought you were writing One Punch Man? Now that you are in the world of immortality, why are you still doing those low-level kung fu and martial arts?

Well written. There are a lot of bad comments in the comments. The protagonist, Goldfinger, is in the Taixu Realm. He can quickly master the techniques and spells, and can deduce and fuse them, but it takes a long time. I feel that this point has not been fully utilized, and there are too few spells deduced, which is missing an advantage. First, Han Li and Tainan Xiaohui separated, and the protagonist went to the Divine Weapon Sect. Not counting the nanny, but the nanny is because the protagonist gave the Ascension Token Talisman Storage Bag to Han Li. But I think doing this makes the protagonist's IQ appear online. First, the protagonist has no magic power. It is of no use if he wants it at that time. Han Li will still be remembered if he deceives him. It's better to buy Han Li a favor and give him timely help and get more later. Second, the protagonist is not in a hurry to become an immortal. That's because the protagonist has his own plan, and it's not slow at all. Firstly, because the protagonist doesn't know which spiritual root he has is better, he can't blindly practice it in the early stage. He must change his skills and practice it again later. The second is to use the Seven Ghost Soul Eaters to convert the internal energy and blood into mana, which is equivalent to converting three years of martial arts into three years of cultivating immortals, and becoming the third level of Qi training. This progress is not too slow. I don't understand what's going on in the comment section. It is rare to find novels like this that are written in a normal and logical way, with the main character having an online IQ and a plan, so cherish it. Don't be confused by the cool stories about killing and killing.

Why spend so much time on the Seven Ghost Soul-Eating Technique? To take away the bodies of mortals to become immortals? I wonder what I need urgently?

This protagonist is Han Li's nanny. If she has any good things, she will give them directly to Han Li. She also says that she will wait for Han Li to repay her in the future, and the result will be even more. Even after receiving the immortal cultivation technique, he said that he was afraid of affecting his relationship with Han Li. You can't stop being immortal, but you still write shitty novels about cultivating immortals.

Why is this protagonist's character so trashy? The protagonist is not Han Li. As a true disciple of the divine soldiers, the sect did not treat the protagonist badly, but what did the protagonist do? You accept apprentices from outside without bringing them back to the sect, and then you back up and establish an organization similar to a sect, using the apprentices as tools. Is this what you do as a human being? Thinking about kneeling down and licking Han Li all day long, and using the sect's elixir recipe and inheritance to trade with Han Li, doesn't the protagonist feel ashamed? And he also went to Han Li's cave to steal things. It's really a shitty movie. I won't watch it anymore. The main character is so disgusting.

​​Looking at the mortals, none of them develop in the same sect. For the sake of their own sect, they are all young men, taking advantage and running away. If you have nothing to do, you have to make others grateful. In order to cultivate immortality, you can cheat and cheat, but there is no fluctuation at all when they go fishing and killing people one by one. They also say that it is because of the world of cultivating immortals. I am this kind of person. Such people should die directly. What about your nine years of compulsory education before time travel! What a beautiful character you have!        ，，，，，，！ If you don't pass it on to the Divine Weapon Sect, are you deceiving your master and destroying your ancestors, or are you violating the oath you made when you started?

Hahahaha, you don't dare to take the small bottle and turn around to steal the spiritual grass from Han Li's cave. Unless you plan to write the protagonist to death, otherwise Han Li will become the ancestor of time. When time goes back...

Originally, when I saw Zhang Tie's opening, the protagonist had plans and layouts, what did he write in the end? What is the difference between the relationship with Han Li and that of a stranger? Instead of hiding the elixir, and steal it in a vulgar way? ? What about the protagonist's wisdom shown at the beginning? And after reading so much on QQ Reading, I don't even know where the author's main line is! The protagonist doesn't even know which skill he is majoring in right now! When I see the elixir formation, I don't even know which method is used to form the elixir! I originally went to Dajin to find the Blood Spirit White Bone Dao inheritance to refine my body! As a result, I got some Buddhist inheritance along the way and turned around and went to Jinguang Temple? ? This can also be explained by the need to suppress the bone beads! After solving the problem, he turned around and went overseas to form pills! The matter of refining the body is not mentioned at all! I don't even know which technique is used to form the elixir! Such a big plug-in spends all day researching miscellaneous things! There is no research on the technique at all! Is the plug-in disconnected?

I can't stand it after reading the first few chapters. The Fu Bao Immortal Order was given to Han Li. He also said that he should not practice for fear of affecting his relationship with Han Li. How long will it be before the Immortal Assembly after killing Jin Guang? If you don't have the Immortal Ascension Order, you don't have a cultivation competition, and you have three spiritual roots, you just do some casual cultivation. Then when you practice the tenth level of Qi, the Blood Trial is probably over, and Han Li has already established the foundation. Then it's even harder to get the Foundation Establishment Pill. You don't have to continue to lick Han Li, but what's the use? Han Li can give once or twice, but can he continue to give? The most popular fanfic