A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting with Possessing Qu Hun

Well written, don't write like that next time 😂

It's already chapter 18 and you still haven't started cultivating. I thought you were writing One-Punch Man! You're already in the cultivation world, why are you still bothering with those low-level kung fu techniques?

Well written. There are a lot of trolls in the comments. The protagonist's cheat ability is the Taixu Realm, which allows him to quickly master cultivation techniques and spells, and to deduce and fuse them, though it takes a long time. It feels like this aspect wasn't fully utilized; the number of spells he deduced was too small, thus missing a significant advantage.

Why spend so much time mastering the Seven Ghosts Devouring Soul Technique? To allow mortals to possess cultivators? Isn't there something you desperately need?

This protagonist is Han Li's nanny. She gives him everything good, saying she'll repay him in the future, but she just keeps giving him even more. She even gets a cultivation technique but doesn't stop, saying she's afraid it will affect her relationship with Han Li. If you don't even stop cultivating, what kind of cultivation novel are you writing?

How can the protagonist's personality be so trashy? The protagonist isn't Han Li; as a true disciple of the Divine Weapons, the sect hasn't mistreated him, but what has he done? He takes in disciples outside but doesn't bring them back to the sect, then turns around and establishes an organization similar to a sect, using his disciples as tools. Is that something a human would do?

In the fanfiction of *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*, not a single character develops within a single sect or thinks of their own. They're all traitors, taking advantage and then running away, expecting gratitude from others.

Hahaha, you don't dare take the little bottle, but instead turn around and steal the spiritual herbs from Han Li's cave. Unless you plan to kill off the protagonist, otherwise, when Han Li becomes the Time Dao Ancestor and time travels back...

I initially thought the protagonist had a plan and strategy at the beginning, but what happened? How is his relationship with Han Li any different from that of strangers? He changes his identity and sneaks around stealing the medicinal herbs? Where is the protagonist's supposed intelligence from the beginning?

I couldn't continue reading after the first few chapters. He gave the Ascension Token and the Ascension Talisman to Han Li, and then talked about whether he should cultivate or not because he was worried about affecting his relationship with Han Li. Please, how long until the Ascension Conference after killing Jin Guang?