The Immortal Dao of Tianyun

It's pretty well written in the family stream, but I feel like I have three small suggestions. 1. The protagonist doesn't have any killer skills. He knows a little bit of everything, but nothing particularly powerful. He can add magical powers to kill with one hit or escape, even if there are sequelae; 2. There is also the trap of the soul-eating insect. It's been too long. At the very least, you need to know what your opponent's cultivation level is and what his power is. It's been like this for 200 chapters, like a knife hanging over your head. It's very awkward and depressing to watch. Let's get to the bottom of it first. 3. It feels like you're fighting all the time and it's a plot that can be cultivated for many years. Otherwise, it's too compact and a bit aesthetically tired;

Of the author's three fairy tale books, Tianshi Xundao is the best. Doppo's work is outrageous, plagiarism is serious, and the quality is relatively poor. Now this book is a little better than Doppo, but the writing and plot are much worse than Tianshi, especially the battle description is a bit eye-catching.

Heavenly Master Seeking the Way, why don't you write about it? It's very interesting, but it's a pity.

Why did the author write about family history? Isn't it great that the mortal stream in the previous book was good? Although the character of the protagonist in the previous book was a bit unflattering, but I could barely read it, this one is really unbearable. If the author could rewrite a mortal-style novel, the character of the protagonist should not be the same as the previous book. With your previous book's level, it should be popular. Why would you follow the trend and write a family-style book?

It turns out that Celestial Master Xun Dao was written by you. I have been chasing him to become an immortal all by himself, but I didn't realize it was your new vest. But why did Celestial Master Xun Dao enter the palace? I think it was well written. It's a pity, it's really a pity 😐

The writing is a bit messy, sometimes Zhao Guo, sometimes Yan Guo, the male protagonist's name alone is wrong in several chapters, give it a try and read the chapters you bought, and I won't follow it in the future.

The author is also an experienced writer. This family novel is much better than the family novels written by many new authors. The results are a bit behind. I hope the author can continue going

I have written almost 100 chapters, but the spiritual root problem has not been solved yet, and I am still in the Qi refining period.

This book is about to poison people even when Shen Nong comes... No wonder there are only over 100 comments for more than 600 chapters...

As a bookworm for 20 years, I can give this book 90 points. There is a little less human connection than ordinary people, the fighting is absolutely wonderful, the training system is not clear enough, after all, it is still in the foundation building stage. There are not many adventures, but there are many things... It is recommended to write more about daily life, cultivation, and system thinking. Too many things are the same and have no focus. Ordinary people write about ordinary things. Hold on and don't collapse! Don't be too fast! He has the potential to become a god, just change his name back