The Immortal Dao of Tianyun

This is one of the better-written family-based stories, but I have three minor suggestions. 1. The protagonist doesn't have any trump cards. He knows a little bit of everything, but none of them are particularly powerful. He doesn't have any supernatural abilities or spells that can increase his ability to kill with one blow or escape, even if there are side effects.

Of the author's three Xianxia (fantasy/martial arts) novels, *The Celestial Master Seeks the Dao* is the best. *Peerless* has overpowered plot twists and is heavily plagiarized, resulting in poor quality. This new book is slightly better than *Peerless*, but the writing and plot are still significantly weaker than *The Celestial Master*, especially the battle descriptions, which are somewhat cringe-worthy.

The Celestial Master Seeks the Dao, is he no longer writing it? It was quite good, what a pity.

Why did the author choose to write a family-based novel? Wasn't the previous "Ordinary People" novel quite good? Although the protagonist's personality in the previous book was a bit questionable, it was still readable. This one is simply unreadable. If the author could rewrite an "Ordinary People" novel with a different protagonist, given the quality of the previous book, it should have been a hit. Why follow the trend and write a family-based novel?

So it was you who wrote "The Celestial Master Seeks the Dao"? I've been following "Walking Alone to Immortality" every day, I didn't realize it was your new pseudonym. But why did "The Celestial Master Seeks the Dao" get into the palace? I thought it was pretty good, what a pity, what a real shame. 😐

The writing is a bit messy, switching between Zhao and Yan states in a jumbled mess, and the male lead's name is wrong in several chapters. I'll test it out and finish reading the chapters I bought; I won't follow it anymore after that.

The author is a veteran writer, and this family-themed novel is much better than many newer authors' works in this genre. The sales figures are a bit low, but hopefully the author will persevere.

I've written almost 100 chapters, but the problem of my spiritual root is still unresolved; I'm still stuck in the Qi Refining stage.

This book is so bad, even Shennong (the legendary Chinese immortal) would poison people to death... No wonder it only has a little over a hundred comments after more than six hundred chapters...

As a 20-year avid reader, I'd give this book a 90 out of 100. It lacks the human touch and family drama of "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality," but the fight scenes are absolutely thrilling. The cultivation system isn't fully defined yet, as it's still in the Foundation Establishment stage. There aren't many fortuitous encounters, but plenty of events…