Reborn as Zhang Wenyuan in Water Margin, Now Song Jiang’s Colleague

When I hear the name Zhang Wenyuan, I think of Zhang Liao. 😁

If you're going to write a novel, then just write a novel. If you don't understand traditional Chinese medicine, then don't write it. Don't belittle one aspect of traditional Chinese medicine while praising another.

Either don't write about having an intimate relationship with Yan Xijiao, or if you do, go and save your own woman. What kind of idiot writing is this, having a relationship with her, her genuine affection, and then handing her over to Song Jiang to be killed? Is this some kind of angst?

After Song Jiang accepted the imperial pardon, you will still be colleagues.

Alright, we've finally left Yuncheng County. Looking forward to your triumph at Xiaoyaojin!

The characters' martial arts skills developed too quickly, losing that initial feeling of survival against all odds. Isn't this just another example of the same formula as other Water Margin fanfiction...?

I don't understand why the protagonist didn't find an opportunity to assassinate Song Jiang, but instead naively thought that Song Jiang would forgive him.

If you're going to time travel, do it sooner rather than later. The original owner ate the food of the previous incarnation before the protagonist had to come and take the fall.

The story is well-written, but your unconventional protagonist might affect the results, though I still have to support you. Keep it up—it's among the top three Water Margin fanfictions!

On the first page, you used the word "suddenly" four times, and "frozen" twice. Doesn't the author find that strange? I was stunned too, for once.