Suppress the Devil

Don't write weirdness as the main world line. If it doesn't meet the criteria, no matter how weird it is, it is nothing more than a manifestation of power and laws, and it still can't escape the scope of immortality, a round of evil heretics.

After reading the introduction, I felt embarrassed. It can be said, as the saying goes, that spending a lot of money to make a sword, and cutting off the injustice where there is injustice, even a limerick is better than this. What do you want to express? I will say it according to your meaning. The gold and silver are scattered to cast the cold light, and the injustice in the world is cut away. I graduated from elementary school and wrote blindly.

It can be seen that the author regarded this relic as an important copy. Unfortunately, I am very annoyed by this weird style.

After thinking about it for a while, I still want to make it clear to prevent readers from misunderstanding. In my outline, there are some sects whose practices are a bit weird. They are usually demon sects, and their ultimate goal is immortality. But the mainstream of the monks is still the traditional martial arts, and the story is also about the protagonist fighting against demons and monsters. He will not really go to a place where he can cultivate immortality. The protagonist will always be a human being.

I've read nine chapters. The writing is pretty good and the plot is okay. The protagonist seems to be a bit of a genius. So far, it seems to be quite interesting as long as it's not too real.

The writing is good and the plot is attractive. I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. Moreover, the protagonist has very upright views. He is the image of a true king who is compassionate and saves people. It can be similar to Journey to the West.

There are some logical flaws, such as the statement that Golden Finger does not increase comprehension, but the protagonist is very easy to practice and can change the exercises easily. If he has accumulated a lot, it is acceptable, but he has only practiced one bad exercise before, so there is so much experience to talk about! Moreover, the section of the second copy of Bones does not fully explain that the protagonist has to wait for the villain. Why wait when you can obviously leave directly? It would be understandable if the plot said that the protagonist had been marked with a tracking mark, but it was not reflected. Summary: The character image is not established enough, there are many minor problems, the plot is just okay, it is solid food

To be honest, after reading the introduction, I have no desire to read the book.

Ah, this... I was so miserable and gave me a guide for 12 days, so my book is not good.

If you practice traditional immortality, the Lingbao Sutra must also have this, which is the strongest bug 😃

By the way, the character dialogue is a bit awkward and difficult to read. It's best to practice this.

The writing is too dry, the author could use a little more water.

The plots of these two chapters are coherent, and it might be more enjoyable to read them together. I can also save manuscripts to prepare for regular updates in the future.

It looks good, but I also suggest that the author not write too much about the golden finger, and not let the golden finger occupy the main position.

I feel that the rhythm is not very good. It is the only sect that is easy to get started in this place. There is too little writing about getting started. It is too simple. Han Zhongli also tried Lu Dongbin ten times and got into the current copy inexplicably. The delay is too long. The writing is still okay. In terms of rhythm, I feel that there are too few plot conflicts.