Weird Star Witch

The world view setting of this book is interesting, very much like last year's game "Wild West": it adds mysterious elements to the western world of Red Dead Redemption, which is relatively novel; but the writing has almost no descriptive techniques or writing techniques, and there are very few psychological renderings and ups and downs in the atmosphere. The narrative is straightforward and basically divided into sentences and paragraphs, which will give readers the impression of a running account. I hope the author can polish his writing more and work harder on the narrative. The above are some of my personal thoughts. Objective and friendly discussions are welcome.

I have only read 200 chapters so far, and I feel that the book is a little too fast. One or two chapters are just one event, which is too easy to fatigue. There are too few additional plots and descriptions. The reader just enters the event and understands it, and the event is over soon, especially the sexual intercourse episode🐶. The characters have distinct personalities but are not outstanding, including The same goes for the heroine. There is too little ink to describe the character. In other books, I hope it is less about the plot. In this book, I hope the author is more about the plot. In addition, the author's self-created system does not look very comfortable and the sense of substitution is poor. Maybe it is because I have not read many books like Crusu. , Except for these two points, this book is quite good. I like Rudolf's character very much. He has his own set of criteria for judging. He is truly decisive in killing, rather than just knowing threats and all enemies. He is a bit selfish but will boldly pursue fairness and justice within the scope of his own abilities. When encountering He doesn't panic at all when he encounters a strong enemy. When he encounters a much stronger enemy, he will immediately give in and retaliate later. Moreover, the protagonist is more controlling and likes to control the overall situation, whether in battle or in other places. The protagonist who is not always passive makes me very comfortable to watch. In fact, most of the poisonous points of a book are related to the shaping of the protagonist.

Disadvantages: The first worldview is unclear. How big the world is, such as the number of provinces in the country, is not stated. The strength of the city where the protagonist is located is not stated (although it feels like it is just a small county). The geographical conditions around the city are not clearly explained, so the level 3 guide who appears seems a bit weak. The number of people at each level can be explained, such as the mysterious low, middle and high sequences. There are also strengths and weaknesses of each approach. Secondly, too much description of the protagonist can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. You can add more psychological descriptions of other characters to increase the personality. For example, the wizard who is fleeced by the protagonist can add some guesses about the protagonist like the mysterious Alger. To be honest, I don't know what level he is. I also feel that the protagonist and his party level up a bit too quickly. Finally, the protagonist's map skills are too strong... Of course, I think this book is very good. The subject matter and writing style are all online. The last thing is that the monetary system must be stable!

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The pig's feet described by the author are incapable and do not try to improve themselves. The Holy Mother's heart is overflowing every day, and the result is the death of those close to oneself. After killing relatives and friends, Pig's Foot ran away like a dog. Afterwards, he fled all the way and was promoted. Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi, Pig's Foot was promoted to a high position and then he turned around to settle the score. (The Virgin bitch must die) (If you have the ability to call yourself the Virgin, but if you don't have the ability, you still show off that you are the Virgin bitch)

Can you save more manuscripts before sending them out? Why not update 50 chapters of the new book at once?

The plot and setting are top-notch, but the ability to mobilize readers' emotions is a bit lacking (the pretense scenes are average). More than a little bit better than the previous one. Sure enough, my taste is as good as ever

In the early stages, the writing, settings, and plot were all good, but in the later stages, it started to falter around chapter 280. First, the previous description of the power of the kingdom was seriously inconsistent with the plot, and then the career system completely collapsed. Can you imagine that a group of elite bosses in the protagonist group were defeated by a novice profession who is one level higher but has not changed in quality with basic skills? This is very speechless. It's like when the poor god was at the police station, and the witch who had just changed his gender killed the entire police station in half. A person who has just entered the mid-level witch profession can outsmart men of the same level and lower-level men by just relying on her charm ability? Then why is Silver Snake not one of the four top professions? Level 1, 2, and 3 people can only confuse the same level profession by having a relationship with a man for a long time. At the fourth level, one look can completely defeat the same level and the lower level. The other four top professions (Wizard, Church, Knight, Alchemist) have not changed so much at level four, right? This is what you described yourself.

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This is the wizard!

The author asks a question, must low-level werewolves win by hunting high-level werewolves? So there is a question. The death of high-level werewolves among low-level werewolves should not be higher than 50%. The rest should be killed by other apostles. Then the number of werewolves will be reduced by half with each change. Are there still werewolves after all these generations? Even if 100 level 6 werewolves are killed by level 5 werewolves, there will only be 50 level 6 werewolves in the next generation.

Author, you write a poisonous witch in a weird way, but a good guy, an assassin, makes you a barbarian. Secondly, it's so easy for someone as brainless and self-righteous as the protagonist to level up. Can you believe that those people who have the brains to talk about interests and know how to cooperate just can't get promoted? ! ! Third, author, do you have any misunderstanding about the national critical attack agency? If you can't reach level 2 divination, switch to level 3 divination. If you can't reach level 3 divination, switch to level 5. There will always be someone who can beat you. Who is playing tricks with you here? What the country is playing is an upright crushing game. Finally, I believe everyone can see what you want to express, the author. But you can't write a novel with this as the core. I believe that a good novel must first be a good story, and secondly we are talking about ideas.

White Wolf-Yvonne

How to say it? The genre of this book is very good, I think the content is acceptable, I can read it, and I quite like this kind of subject matter. It is indeed acceptable. But I'm really speechless. For a profession as powerful as a wizard, why does it feel so poorly written? I feel like I'm restricted in every aspect. Not to mention getting a sickberry and naturally restraining the protagonist. This is still a profession. If you can't beat the monster, can't you find a profession that can suppress the disease and make it a puppet? I felt a little better when I upgraded to level 4. I felt quite satisfied with it. It was very good. It was really good. Then suddenly a level 4 Silver Snake came to me and told me that she was too powerful and couldn't be defeated. I really couldn't understand it. I really couldn't get any pleasure at all. And then, can't there be innovation in the production of magic weapons? Do you have to wait until new pictures are posted before you can do it? Combining the witchcraft you already know, you can be innovative. You can also make up your own attack methods. I really like this book. I hope the author will read the suggestions and I still hope this book will continue. This is my first time commenting. I really like this book

Although the flaws are not concealed, there are still some poisonous points. The plot is often promoted through the protagonist's stupidity, such as falsely using the name of a wanted criminal in the city.

It's so frustrating. The protagonist is always attacked by surprise, and the setting of this silver snake is too much. Why can she charm wizards? Her setting should be to charm those who are brainless and then drive them to fight.

There's nothing but abuse of the protagonist. A level 5 speech spirit of the opponent can curse the protagonist before death. Isn't this nonsense?

After reading the previous article, I felt that the book was quite good. The writing style and setting killed a lot of books at the top of the rankings... It's a pity that the book is not popular. Good luck to the author. I hope he can continue to persevere.

No wonder it's limited, the plot advancement is a little bad, the fighting scenes are a little bad, the foreshadowing is a little bad, everything is a little bad.

The writing is actually quite good, but now that I see it, it doesn't feel weird or wizardy at all.

It's so frustrating to write about abuse here.

In a world with the power of apostles, mortals have no resistance at all. In the second half, the protagonist can still see the problem from a mortal perspective, and still adheres to his own principles when encountering difficulties, without weighing the pros and cons. The protagonist is good news to ordinary people. This is very good, it suits my taste, and I have ordered it all!

Obsessive-compulsive disorder after the completion: 11 immortals, how to divide 12 professions? 4 Level 11, the moon, the sun and what else. Just want to know the settings

I read the book two years after it was finished. There are many points to complain about. For example, the author always prevents readers from having a good time for group portraits, and the climax always leaves the protagonist short of breath; for example, there are so many women around the protagonist, and everyone around him is upgraded to the sky. In the later stage, I thought the upgrade system did not exist; for example, in terms of professions, except for wizards, the promotion system for werewolves, giants, silver snakes, etc. Is very imperfect and lacks the mystery of the "sequence" type. But I also want to introduce it to readers who are short of books and like Western fantasy. This is a novel with a full plot. Although the map is small, the forces in the book can feel "alive". There are no brainless villains. The character creation is lackluster, but the protagonist has a positive image that is rare and not annoying. The idea is that those who wield power should control the exercise of power.

The author hasn't caught his breath yet. . . When will the new book be released?

I've given you a monthly ticket. Let's see if you can reach 1,000 votes this month. Let's give it a try.

Could you please include extras such as Silver Snake Girl, Miss Knight, and the epilogue in the new book? Maybe it can also help divert traffic from old books to new books

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I feel like it's well written! Flawed but acceptable.

The writing and plot surpassed 80% of the novels, so the author had to withdraw. It's a pity that this book didn't become popular.