Extraordinary Pedigree

I came across the daily guide again. I clicked in and saw at first glance the description of the appearance of the dwarf god. I thought it was pretty good, quite vivid? Has the author changed his gender? Not abstract anymore? I've ordered two chapters and I can't stand it anymore. It's all rambling narration, and it takes three or four pages to introduce the dwarf god? Another page of the Legion of Heroes There is also the next chapter to promote Horus to fight. At a glance, the whole chapter is full of skill names! It reads like "Dala Akka... Two thousand words". The character uses the skill "Dala Benba... Three thousand words". There is no "what to do", only "what to do". It's purely expository, has no real sense, and is boring. Considering my previous feelings, even the "what it is" part is not very good. It is either repeated over and over again (appearance), or abrupt and fragmented (no connection between before and after), or it is just a joke (MC block). There is no attractive core feature. Is the stitching just carried out from beginning to end without prioritizing details? Philosophy and sociology are also the same. They are long talks but very confusing reasoning (Nietzsche talks about the will to power over and over again but it seems to be no different from the law of the jungle) (The ABC of passers-by talks a lot about it in Flower of Blood and Bone) (The setting chapter of the Kingdom of Heaven is very long, but if you don't read it carefully and understand, you will forget the difference between several factions). It feels like a sponge has filled itself up by absorbing water, pretending to be an abalone. I originally thought it was a setting article, but the setting is neither particularly novel (such as the Destiny Magic Dice book and the Ming Zun book), nor does it highlight the setting well.

This book is ridiculous! I just saw Chapter 25 and immediately subscribed to the paid chapters. Wouldn't today's guide only recommend poisonous weeds to me? How come there is such a good book that I haven't seen before. If you like novels like Harry Potter, you will love this book. The author really set up a very real magical world There is no violence. Although the story development has a bit of fantasy fairy tale style, the exquisite desserts that appear in the multi-flavor cuisine are also great The writing is good, the plot content is also good, and the structure I think is just right It feels like picking up pearls and jade in the poisonous weeds. I will always support the original version I am happy to read this book

Epic grand narrative, interesting setting, story and protagonist. I also read Tomato's book before. It's a great book. The author must not be a eunuch.

I'm getting better too, and I'm actually on my daily guide🤣🤣🤣

I just read the Red Branch chapter and it exceeded my expectations. Highlight 1: The system is orderly As a strong setting text, it nests multiple systems and can be included in a large framework. As long as you get through the early noun recognition, you can feel the charm of the system described by the author Highlight 2: Literary accumulation References are more classics, myths, and some animation work settings. For example, the setting of the Holy Sun has an obvious relationship with the Yanyan Fire Brigade, which is not a simple white text Write it down and add it as you read.

It's all a bunch of adjectives, it's so watery, and the plot is also raking here and there, and I personally don't like the farming plot, so I want to skip it. Please update it quickly and finish this part so that I can continue to follow your books.

This is a very good game about another world, and the setting of the power system also has a certain degree of novelty and innovation. I haven't liked this type of book for a long time. The last one was The Sword of Youqing Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง Hmm. By the way, the protagonist's body was pinched by the initial female boss, right? Why not take the opportunity to pinch someone again yourself? There will probably be many repetitions of this appearance, because didn't it say at the beginning that this woman often sells clones, or sells clones to others at high prices? It's just like that instant noodles advertising slogan, someone imitated my face. If you walk around the street, you will encounter more than one identical face.

I hope that like the PC game Warhammer, the elements can be diversified, and the plot can be described in more detail and rationally. On the basis of it, some loopholes can be filled. I hope the author can grasp it and don't collapse! ! ! Highly Recommended High-Quality Western Magical Literature! ! !

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Sir, I wonder if you have watched "The Extraordinary Genealogy"? Of course, it doesn't matter whether you have read it or not. This does not affect my continued recommendation of this rare masterpiece to you. "The Extraordinary Game" is a novel in the genre of "game alien world", that is, a story in which the protagonist travels to the world in the game. The game world involved in this book is completely original by the author, so there is no need to worry about the world view setting of this book. Let me tell you that the book I recommend to you is named - "The Extraordinary Genealogy" Introduction to the work: We create gods and establish beliefs to describe our salvation. We hold the genealogy and analyze the ether to become the omniscient one. Recommended factors: 1. The protagonist has a cautious personality and high IQ. He is a genius-like figure similar to "Genius on the left, madman on the right". From the perspective of the protagonist, we see a crazy but real fantasy world, an extraordinary and towering epic. 2. Original extraordinary system, "Extraordinary Genealogy" is the title of this book and the core extraordinary system of this book. This extraordinary system is complete and reasonable, with shadows of mystery and technology, but it is more of a human interpretation of "information". 3. A complete world view + a huge amount of detailed settings, which is undoubtedly comfortable for everyone, but people who like it like it very much, and people who don't like it find it verbose, so we will not go into detail about whether it is good or bad in this aspect, but simply say that this alone can show the author's hard work and effort on his work. It allows us to see an author who truly loves writing and regards writing as creating the world and writing epics. Conclusion—— A person who truly loves writing deserves respect from readers. He is immersed in his own fantasy and leads readers to travel in his world. I don't pursue achievements, I don't enjoy admiration, I am just doing the most important work of an author, and I devote myself to writing. Maybe you don't like the subject matter of this book, or maybe the author's writing style doesn't suit your ideas, but you can't deny the author's efforts and love, so please communicate with mutual respect. Finally, let's say our final farewell in the simple words of this book———— We create gods and establish beliefs to describe our salvation. We hold the genealogy and analyze the ether to become the omniscient one.

Who recommends the apocalypse forecast in the comment section? . . This one is at least a good read. The beginning of the Apocalypse book is essentially a sadistic one, but the author's writing style is good at covering it up, but the literary youthful flavor almost overflows from the lines.

The language proficiency of this book is simply the lowest point among all the novels I have read. There are all kinds of logical fallacies, grammatical errors, and random word combinations. It really gave me a brain hemorrhage.

I really can't stand it. Can the author stop being so irritating? An otherwise good novel has to be mixed with extremely repetitive descriptions. The appearance of the protagonist and the appearance of the stand-in must be described once every time he appears. Don't we know? When the avatar is activated and stopped once, there will be a scene description:. . . . Trapped in a gray world. It's outrageous that the description of repeated scenes takes up almost a third of a chapter of the novel.

There are too many settings and too many subplots, and the author's writing style and fan base simply cannot support it.

The writing in the early stage was okay, it can be said to be a small masterpiece, not so much water, the settings are gradually spread out, and the framework structure is still OK. But later on, it gradually started to be flooded with a large amount of insignificant data. A piece of data could only contain a few hundred words, or a piece of data could be condensed into one sentence. The rest is purely for setting and setting. I know that I am suitable for writing some descriptions and settings, and I use my strengths and avoid weaknesses. As a result, I only have a relatively grand framework, but there is no filling content in it. Later, I was more self-satisfied So now my grades are getting worse and worse, but the author doesn't care much. After all, I don't rely on this to make a living, so it doesn't matter. You can only read it after finishing this book.

I have been stuck on Flowers of Blood and Bone and just haven't read it. The brain has different frequencies. The description is too conceptual, and the plot is also fragmented. In the early stage, it was not so abstract and it was still readable. But now there is no picture in my head. Really, I feel like I am looking directly at an ancient god or observing high dimensions. You know, I feel dizzy after reading a few chapters, and I am really losing three.

Really... Let's not talk about whether it's toxic or not. The theme and content of this setting are very cool even if they are borrowed from some games. However, there is a saying that it is easy for authors of this type of style book to get started at the beginning. I have encountered many Western fantasy novels with new ideas because of the results! After all, in today's world, it's hard for Xiaobaiwen and Shuangwen to find a way out! It's difficult!

Personally, I feel that the Triple Crown is the climax of the book. It continued to decline. It feels like my strength jumped too fast. Jumping to the crown all at once, the next level is a miracle. Upgrading cannot be done, causing the next few hundred cards to be played slowly. The characters in the foreshadowing are of no use because of their sudden increase in strength. There is really no excitement in this plot right now, so just skip it. Hurry up and create a miracle, and then write about how the protagonist ascends to the kingdom of heaven, how he defeats the alien gods, and how he rules the world. I can write hundreds of pages just for this part. After finishing this book, it will be long enough and I can start a new novel. If your grades can be used as a minimum living standard, just pretend I didn't say so.

I can read novels without heroines, single heroines, and harems, but I found that people who like to read books without heroines are louder. Every book has people asking if it has no heroines. As for me, because I can read it, I won't give this opinion to the author. But the quality of a book has nothing to do with whether it has a heroine or not. The writing and plot are the most important.

Like the title, if the period before becoming a sword bearer were called "prologue" and then the "main text", the main text would be really hard to read. I have read the prologue twice. It is fast-paced and exciting, but I couldn't stand it after reading a paragraph of the main text both times.

What the author is writing now is more like a setting collection than a novel. If this was free content, I wouldn't say anything. Spending money to read the setting collection is really because the author wrote this book just for his own pleasure. He didn't consider the readers' feelings at all. The readers' money is not blown by the wind. Who can afford to spend a whole chapter to read the background introduction? Of course, I admit that the author's system setting is quite exciting. The settings of the kingdom of heaven are detailed. Although it is indeed amazing, the background setting is indeed the author's advantage, but the novel still has to come down to the plot after all. A whole chapter just talks about the setting, and there is nothing useful. If the results are good, it will be a ghost. In the case of the background setting, the author only needs to position each part and let the background serve the plot. The results are not bad. If it is like now, there will probably be fewer people in the future.

The further I read this book, the less I can stand it. It could have been described in simple and straightforward words, but the expression was unclear! Does the author think that his work will be different in this way?😥

Personal opinion, to be honest. I hate Lezi people because I believe that only those who never end up, never appear, and only exist from God's perspective are the real Lezi people. Of course, if you insult your parents, kill your relatives, friends and descendants, and destroy everything that you value and care about as cruelly as possible, if you ask him "Can he still be happy?" Based on these tableware, and he can still be happy and happy from the heart, then he may be a real happy person.

There is so much to write about in this book. We have not visited several countries in the world, not to mention there are so many big bosses. Can the author drain the water a little bit? One chapter of a college's construction materials is needed. If you don't read one chapter, it will have no impact on the plot. There are so many holes left unfilled, can't we advance the plot?

I have been reading this book for a long time. For the first time, I feel that reading a book is the same as reading a paper. Can you believe that I got sleepy while reading it? The author's writing is very exciting, combining science fiction and fantasy, but I think some terminology can be reduced appropriately, and fighting and show-off scenes can be added. I want to watch it now, but I feel sleepy after watching it for a while.

The beginning and middle part were quite interesting, but why did the plot become more and more complicated later on? I have no desire to continue watching until now.

It's hard to describe in one sentence, too watery, and hundreds of chapters have nothing to do with the main plot. But the biggest problem is that it's not very interesting, and it's not very cool, and anyone can lead the protagonist. The peak is probably the early and middle stages, and the rest is like a headless fly, flying wherever it goes. If I really can't write anymore, I will forcefully end it with Deus Ex Machina and open a new volume, and then I will fall into a vicious circle. I hope I can learn from the lesson and write a good outline next time, at least to have a hint of plot.

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This book felt a little tasteless after reading it, and it felt like a pity to abandon it. The setting is old, but it just feels very dry.

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