Superstring Mage: the Mage Is Not Afraid of Gunfire

Our meeting was such a surprise, it was fate. Author Back then, I liked reading fan fiction, especially about Naruto, so I came across your book. Later, I gave up reading because of lack of financial resources (student party). Now I like reading Western fantasy, and I came across your book again! . . . . . . . Okay, after sighing, let me tell you my current opinion. Your rhythm is very good, and the old author's writing style is very good. However, the turning point is not very good. I can see that the parts of the watchtower supplement the character's personality, but they are not rounded enough. That's all, good night💤

This book is much better than the author's previous book. The previous book was filled with complaints and complaints, all filled with negative energy.

Very well written, creative and well written, keep up the good work!

This book is really one of the few good books currently available from Qidian

The writing is good, but the setting is unfortunately unattractive.

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Are all my readers this old?

The author has never studied physics, right? Even if you change the density of an object with the same mass, it will only change its volume! However, the goose does not make it lighter 🤫

The idealistic world pursues science. In the world of science, what else can I say besides saying that they are well fed when they pursue idealism?

If every promotion required a final payment ceremony, the Continuing Mage would have been killed by the Fallen Mage, and the Fallen Mage would advance. Just use the intimidation ritual once. The promotion of a lawful mage depends entirely on fate. I just saw Chapter 88 and it's not confirmed yet.

Um😓, was my comment deleted? ! As a time traveler, you should be born with a lot more knowledge than others, especially gunpowder, firearms, and various aspects of warfare. There are different things! New weapons can also be developed! Flintlock gun, increased rifling!

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In the first three chapters, I thought the book would start with "Every man has the courage to splash blood." The previous paragraphs about the protagonist's flaws and misery were to finally highlight the protagonist's "brave". But I didn't expect that the protagonist in this book was suffering, lonely and numb, and gave up when it was time to be brave. . . Still, Goldfinger pushed him forward forcefully. It's just a matter of pushing it forward. Then, for the revenge plot of the predecessor, in order to write the setting, I forced the protagonist to stop there in a daze, and then let the villain talk to himself for a long time. . . Is this a murder and revenge plot? This is basically an old lady's stage play, even if it is verbose, it still looks like playing house. Even after the villain finished setting up the protagonist, he forced the villain to find him before taking action. . . I know the author wants to write the protagonist to deal with the villain in a cool and comfortable manner, and let the protagonist pretend to be cool, but. . . Not written well. . . It only describes the protagonist's self-confidence and calmness, but does not describe the protagonist's crushing strength in the fight. Instead, the protagonist's various operations always make me worry that the protagonist will not be able to show off in the next second and will be cheated. . . Especially when the villain is pushed into the water, it stands to reason that the villain should be able to kill if he is not stupid. After all, he used water to kill his predecessor before, but the villain did nothing in the author's writing and did not resist at all. . . After reading the six chapters, the quality at the beginning is really poor... The author has time to fix it, otherwise the three chapters 4, 5 and 6 will have to dissuade a lot of readers.

I was immediately dissuaded by the mage's level name (what about E level, D level). Did the author seriously think about the sense of substitution before choosing the name?

A knight-style novel in the skin of a mage. The ability of the mage is seriously low, and it feels a bit like a chicken pecking at rice.

Can a lawful mage really defeat a disciple of desire? From the speed of growth in the system to the advantages and disadvantages of the application of the same system's abilities, no matter what I think, the lawful side is being hammered 😅. But the novel feels good, so I started subscribing.

Now that you are a fifth-line mage, can't you start physical transformation? Increase the density of the flesh, increase the blood flow rate, increase the body's toughness, increase the reaction speed, and increase the perception ability. Each transformation can make up for the side effects caused by other transformations, which directly leads to the development of think tanks.

The author should check the information. Don't exaggerate the kinetic energy, distance and penetration of spherical lead bullets fired from 15th-18th century muskets. The kinetic energy of this matchlock can be 3000-5000J, and it has Brownian motion at a distance of 50m. The 5mm armor worn by the mage is definitely useful, The 2mm armor worn by the minions cannot stop it. Firearms, plate armor and cavalry have coexisted for a long time. "The Knight and the Windforge"

Stop writing about business wars. Go write about wars. You are really not suitable for that. I particularly like your imagination and descriptions of battles. Isn't that good? 😭😭😭 Leverage your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. I have saved it for a few days and feel like I haven't saved it. I feel like I've been in vain. Please update it quickly!

After reading about ten chapters, there are a lot of questions. The most obvious one is, in a world where artillery and magic coexist in the Middle Ages, you want to create a bunch of ABCDEF and digital magic? Don't you feel that the sense of separation is serious? Just put it in the urban supernatural genre. Have you read it yourself after writing the book?

The villain set by the protagonist is not good. In what age did we set Japanese devils as the biggest villain? Moreover, the fantasy world is just a fantasy world, and it has nothing to do with the modern world.

The writing is pretty good, but I still have to complain: If a modern person traveled through the past, he would be able to crush those scum in terms of knowledge and awareness of guns. In other words, only fools would resist artillery fire and shoot with muskets? And this is what our protagonist is like? Also speechless!

Let's write some words to the author and readers and talk about the advantages and disadvantages. There are many advantages. The character design of the protagonist is all right, most of the plot is acceptable, the setting of the power system is excellent, there is no problem with the world view, and most of the conflicts are understandable. There are also shortcomings. Many of the shortcomings here are the sacrifice of logic for the plot, and the setting of the hemp in the middle. 1. The author greatly exaggerates the power of the matchlock gun, but it is very strange for his own people. For example, the protagonist's team of 100 people killed 127 people in a fierce battle all morning. This is a musketeer team, high and low, and there are many mages. It doesn't make sense, right? In the battle to defend the city, the shape-curse mage can clearly kill the musketeers during street fighting, but he has to send them out of the city. 2. The mobility and containment capabilities of the troops were exaggerated. For example, in several sieges by the Assyrian Empire, it was clear that there were only a few million people on the entire continent, and the West Empire troops only had tens of thousands, but there were troops chasing them everywhere, and the enemy could always easily defeat them. Appearing in front of the protagonist is an ability that no one in the 21st century can do. We have to rely on aircraft surveillance 3. The previous part is actually okay, for the sake of plot, but it is not difficult for me to understand the maguit. So why is West so crazy that he wants to fight the coalition forces? Aren't we all pure clowns? So many people died, but you said it was just to regain the territory of the Kingdom of Assyria. I was speechless because so many people died. So many people died in the protagonist's territory, but the fight ended because of this rubbish reason? Are we going to live in harmony? 4. The most clownish person is the S-class mage from the Academy. What do I think he has? In the end, he really watched West invade the mainland without doing anything, right? What kind of legacy is it? No, bro, you can stop the war with your hand, and you can put aside the conflicts long ago. You don't care about anything. You just don't care. How can you have the nerve to say that your legacy is peace and the eradication of pot ghosts? Aren't you a pure clown? It really pissed me off. I described so many characters and so many people died, but you told me that it was avoidable and just for fun, then I really want to curse.

Why is the heroine who got married not Catherine? She is much better than Lydia. Wasn't the latter chased by his own men, and the men were dead? I don't want to watch her plot anymore, so I can only skip and watch.

Not to mention the firearms of the 17th century, even in the Napoleonic era of the 19th century, the cavalry was also the king of arms. It does not mean that the musketeers will withdraw from the stage of history.

Originally I said I should take good care of myself, but I was shocked when I saw the update "Final Remarks"

It's a pity that there is one less novel to read. I'd like to ask the author what the next one is about.

Si Taijian🔪

Why is it gone? It's the first complete book. 😭

I just read Chapter 81. Why does this awesome fallen mage show nothing on the battlefield?