Lone Wanderer in the Abyss

To be honest, the recent plot is ugly, dragging and lengthy, with neither explosions nor tears, and it is not even a transitional chapter. It is like an old donkey pulling a heavy load, walking on the path at noon, surrounded by the cries of cicadas, making people worry about when it will be tired enough to be exposed in the poisonous sun. The first ten chapters of this book gave me a wonderful and dazzling sense of beauty. He really has a "leopard head" aura that grabs the attention. It has a full sense of science fiction, and I always smile when I read other science fiction allusions. Foundation, Dune, Asimov, Mass Effect, Star Wars, Star Trek. He reminded me of my junior high school life. Every Wednesday afternoon, after physical education class, I would return to the empty classroom covered in sweat, and pull out the "Science Fiction World" I borrowed early from the desk. Surrounded by squeaking fans, the black and white articles contained a colorful world. After reading the whole book heartily, on the way home from school, I and a few good friends opened their minds, discussed the plot freely, and imagined the world of science fiction. It is logically rigorous and fast-paced. It is both unexpected and reasonable in the game "Hitman"; It has fierce and evenly matched battles, and has the thrill of "Borderlands" and "APEX" with punches and gun fire; its life hangs on a thread, the atmosphere is tense, and it has the brain-burning game of "House of Cards" and a desperate comeback. But! Now, I don't see anything new, and now it seems that I have entered a black hole. All the previous highlights have been swept away and entered into domestic TV series wrapped in science fiction, just like Shen Teng's "Walking Alone on the Moon", which has everything, but all the crotches. I look forward to you, the author, regaining your rhythm and finding a state where every chapter is refreshing to the readers. To be honest, in the past few dozen chapters, it can be seen that it is perfunctory, the word count is just enough, and the plot can be carried out. Finally, Space, the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. It's five-year mission, to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and civilisations.

Now that I have subscribed to it, I would also like to comment on this book. The first book I read back to the subject was Big Brother. I witnessed the author's step-by-step rise to the top during that period. Gou Daoliu became a trend even at the starting point at that time. With the end of Big Brother, this carnival period also ended. After waiting for a while, the author published the next book, which was similar to Resurrection of Spiritual Energy, but I found that I could not read it no matter what, because the similar protagonist, similar supporting roles, similar female characters, and the writing style were similar to the previous book. In the final analysis, Senior Brother was already at the top, and I didn't want to read the next book, so in the end I silently gave up the book and stopped pursuing it. The book "Alone in the Abyss" has a really amazing beginning. The protagonist is on a scientific research ship in the dark deep space far away from civilization. His life counts down as time goes by, just like watching Alien 1. Then the protagonist struggles to his death and watches him use all his strength to finally escape from the ship. I can't help but breathe a sigh of relief for him. The prison chapter is also very good. The reference to the court in the Star Wars Council Chamber made me very happy. The strict prison set up by the Space Humane Organization also made me marvel at the author's creativity. Then to escaping from the prison planet through the old pirate's channel and escaping from the dead. Up to this point, this book makes me feel that the author has been reborn and transcended his past self. The story he wrote has finally escaped the shadow of Li Changshou. The plot has reached the Fallen Wind Empire chapter. Taking a look at the book review section, it seems that many book friends have similar feelings. The feeling of the protagonist has changed. It seems that because of the failure, the protagonist is no longer brave and resourceful. It seems that he no longer racks his brains and does his best to survive, and no longer fully develops his potential. From my point of view, I think the above is wrong. The protagonist is still the same person who is struggling between life and death, but he faces life with a more elegant and abundant attitude, or in other words, he manages himself with a Li Changshou attitude. But this is not a good thing. This is obviously not a good thing. I feel that the author is about to be caught up with his past self. The protagonist is not that the character image has become blurred, but that he is about to be transformed back into the senior brother due to inertia. In fact, it is no problem to replace the protagonist's name with Taibai Xingjun. The old pirate is the master, the second prince is the Jade Emperor, and Ritsu looks a bit like a junior sister. In order to cope with the protagonist's multi-wisdom and near-demon, the other supporting characters automatically have their IQs lowered, and the characters are modularized. I have to say, this is a bit disappointing. Back to the topic, what attracted me to this book? Broadly speaking, it is science fiction. I want to see interstellar navigation, spaceships, giant ships and cannons, planetary transformation, omnic crisis, subspace navigation, and Dyson spheres. I want to read some practical information, and I want to see those romantic or amazing creations and giant structures that only exist in human theory or imagination appear in the book, instead of just mentioning them as background, and then still reigning kings and ministers in the feudal empire of the interstellar era. To put it in a narrow sense, the book is called Alone in the Abyss, so naturally what I expect is not that the protagonist wanders in politics, strives to manage power, and plots strategies for others thousands of miles away. I don't want to read the interstellar version of Taibai Xingjun and the interstellar version of Heaven. Maybe the protagonist should take the path of Dark Star from the beginning, build his own omnic empire from scratch, and personally transform a planet into his own shape, instead of just mentioning the setting in the plot. I think the plot of Dark Star will be more interesting. If you lack resources, you go to those big countries to steal, rob, plunder, and negotiate. Being an interstellar pirate across the starry sky, using a spaceship that crushes other countries' differences, and the body of a secondary ancient god that crushes human bodies, walking alone in the abyss. Isn't this better than being sandwiched between two big countries, and being flamed by the New Federation every day?

It doesn't even constitute a science fiction opera. The science fiction elements are just bad and don't occupy an important position. There are no interesting and innovative science fiction ideas. The plot feels like a traditional cool novel without enough characteristics.

The early stage was very good, but about halfway through it felt wrong. The background of the story is quite grand, but halfway through it was still about politics? Looking through the follow-up, sure enough, the story ended before even half of it was told...

This book now feels like it is no longer the hard science fiction that Hui Gui said he wanted to write. . . Perhaps it is the subject matter of online writing that limits Guigui's performance. The article has been written around Yang Ming's perspective, but in fact this approach has limitations. In fact, there are many backgrounds, and there is no way to expand on what this universe and this era are like. If I want to write about Yang Ming entering the aristocratic circle through his identity as a detective, why not start from the perspective of the policeman? Starting from the perspective of an ordinary police chief on a star with depleted resources, write about his life, his daily repetitive and boring life, how he can quickly solve cases with daily instruments, but one day a mysterious case comes up, and then write about him meeting a detective, going through a series of stories, and then slowly revealing that the detective is our protagonist. Wouldn't it be better to introduce the protagonist in this way? Why not write about Mimili? I think the growth story of the female pirate will definitely be much more exciting than the current agent with a plug-in. You've finished writing the story of Mimi's growth, and want to switch back to Yang Ming. You can write about Mimi's robbery of a ship, and happen to rob some upstart in the empire, and this upstart is Yang Ming. Then briefly introduce how the protagonist got to a certain status step by step, and tell it in the form of a chat. For example, the chat with Mimi after the human-machine battle. Isn't this a good way to write it? Compared with the vast universe, individuals are small. It is really difficult to try to show the entire universe from one person's perspective. For group portraits, the article can be better presented. Although there are not many science fiction novels I have read, they should all be considered relatively famous ones, such as the Galactic Empire series, the Three-Body Problem series, Ender's Game series, The Obelisk, etc. Although in these books, it is said that in a certain book, there will be a relatively obvious protagonist, but they do not mean that , except for the protagonist, other characters will not be written. On the contrary, for some less important plots, they will replace them with plots of other small characters, providing readers with another perspective and showing more valuable things. This is where Guigui is inferior compared to them. This is probably what I want to express. This is my first time writing a book review. Please forgive me for any shortcomings.

It is difficult to write science fiction… Because there will be many emperors digging soil with golden hoes In the future... Many plots will not be possible at all, and many needs will disappear directly... The more advanced the technology, the harder it is to have conflicts and plots… In order to advance the plot, in most cases the author can only forcibly reduce the dimensionality (such as Life that can span the galaxy can easily live forever and satisfy all desires, and AI automation is extremely advanced But at this time, there will be almost no conflict, so where is the plot? In fact, I want to write a science fiction novel from the modern era of the earth 1. Urban era: the protagonist starts his own business to make money 2. The era of communism: Develop automation, continuously penetrate into various industries, reduce the dependence of productivity on manpower, and basic industries provide free services to everyone around the world (basic food, clothing, housing and transportation), providing a high starting point for everyone 3. The era of federation: Realize the federation of the earth and no longer fight on separate countries! In order to reduce the investment of each country in military/defense, liberate more productivity (people) 4. Scientific research era: Because automation/federalization has reduced the demand for manpower in various industries, there is no need for so many people to work, but other people always need to have something to do, so the length of study and education should be lengthened. For example, everyone must study for 25 years (30 years old), and add computers to the required learning Subjects (to further increase automation), at this time, people aged 5 to 30 receive basic living needs for free, but as long as they pass the examination, they can obtain more resources (equivalent to money), and scholars with excellent abilities can be exempted from participating in any productive labor for life (just engage in scientific research) 5. Pre-God Era: Due to the implementation of automation and everyone in the world learning computers, more people have contributed to the development of automation/AI, making automation/AI have developed to an extremely high level, but strong AI has not yet been successfully realized! At this time, because of more liberation of productivity, people's basic education can be delayed further: for example 40 years old (actually, the main idea of ​​this is that everyone may be able to make a lot of contributions to social development/scientific research promotion/technological development after studying for 20 years at the beginning) But after a while, after studying for 20 years, you may not even be qualified to participate in contributions (because studying for 20 years will know too little, and those simple problems have been solved by the predecessors) Then it will take 25 years or 30 years... 6. Age of Godhood: Strong AI appears, humans become gods in a short period of time, can operate the body at will, can ascend machines, etc. 7. Final Chapter: Give a reasonable explanation to the Fermi Paradox (of course, this development route has limited the scope of explanation), but you can write a few more different routes to speculate on all possible causes of the Fermi Paradox.

As an amateur science fiction fan, I have only read some long-form foreign science fiction novels, most of which were read in the library, such as Abyss, Fire in the Abyss, Fallen Angels, Ender series, and the Galactic Empire series. Really love it! ! Especially this kind of imperial element, or steampunk style. I have read more than 40 chapters in this book. I didn't expect it to be written like this in an online article. Maybe it's because I am ignorant. I think it's pretty good on a science fiction level, but it also has shortcomings. Let me first talk about the changes in my feelings from the first chapter to the middle of Chapter 40 - at the beginning I saw a familiar beginning of a web article going back to 30 years ago, but so far there is nothing the same. Overall, it feels like an orthodox science fiction novel to me, but when it comes to describing the Valkyries, some of the details of the clothes and the memories of the protagonist are really a bit off-grade. Some romance plots are okay. In my impression, those who write science fiction generally rarely write about the ambiguity between men and women. They usually have relatively straightforward characters, which is still acceptable. Then there is the setting of age. In my opinion, generally when technology development reaches this level, the guarantee of life span must be at least about 200 years old. And what I see now should be thirty or forty chapters, retrospective content. In my memory, there are several books in the Galaxy Empire series that are written specifically in this way. However, as a science fiction novel, I feel that the author's writing is not detailed enough, and I am too demanding () But this is an online novel after all, and it is very good that the author can write it like this. However, if it is adapted into a book, it may be necessary to delete some parts and modify some settings. I have been too busy recently and have not had time to read leisure books all the time. I find some time to write a book review in my busy schedule. It is inevitable that there will be mistakes. I will not hesitate to enlighten you.

Flow-saving: From the beginning to the time when you escape by pretending to die, it's brilliant. After that, it's a long boring passage, and the ending is a novel twist written in a bad narrative way. There are excellent ideas but not many, not enough to support a complete work. It's a pity to open high and go low. To be honest, it was very amazing at the beginning. The escape from the Valkyrie, the multiple calculations and frame-ups in the prison, and the final escape by faking death, the thrills, complications, and the protagonist's superb strategy are all exciting. Such an excellent plot must have been conceived by the author who spent a lot of effort. Unfortunately, this highlight episode ended soon. Since the protagonist got help from Lu, the whole story has entered a cliché plot. The protagonist relies on golden fingers to continuously gain political status and personal reputation in Luofeng, without any challenge at all. The already boring plot becomes even more boring once Sherman is introduced. At this stage, the battle of wits basically only involves the manipulation of public opinion. Except for Huisaka's escape and the incident of humiliating the emperor, the rest of it is really meaningless. Such a cliché plot is not that bad, but it occupies a huge and coherent space. For a long period of time, the plot basically has no ups and downs and no sense of purpose. To put it bluntly, it's just a piece of cake. I don't think most of the political plots in it play an indispensable role in the main story line. It's just politics for the sake of politics. This may be an inevitable conflict between the terrifying power of the empire and the thin background setting required by the author: the plot requires the empire to be extremely powerful, and the corresponding protagonists must take a long time to reach the peak of power. However, at the same time, the author only has the settings of Li and Levi that have not been revealed. There is not enough setting to fill in the lengthy section between the two key climaxes, leaving only a large section of boring political battles. Levi and Li are indeed an interesting setting, but the foreshadowing in this part is completely insufficient! Such a dense reversal was accompanied by very few foreshadowings in the early stage. There was clearly a chance to set up suspense early on, connect dozens of chapters together, construct a grand puzzle, and reveal the answer in one last breath. However, in the end, the protagonist suddenly screamed, "Qing couldn't have been born by the collision of two sets of data. There must be a secret in Qing." Then the crazy reversal started. It can only be said to be a pity. Finally, let's talk about something other than the plot. Even though the author calls this book science fiction, the ship combat part is filled with endless unscientific descriptions, which is really embarrassing. Even if we hold our noses and lie to ourselves, "This is just a space opera, just a fantasy set in space" and ignore these unscientific aspects, the entire description of the battle scene can only be called shit. Except for the huge number of battle losses, there is nothing to tell people that the battle was fierce. The above is my personal opinion. There may be inaccuracies or there may be problems that I have not been able to point out here. I sincerely hope that the next one can be written better. The beginning of this book convinced me that the author has this ability. Above

Closer to home, author Dada Hello In fact, your works are very good, Don't deny yourself I am Li Changshou who fell into the trap After reading Changshou, it was Wang Sheng and then Yang Jian Then it was Wu Wan First of all, don't be led astray by others Author What is displayed is the author's work Others give opinions and suggestions after all I am a patient with depression Of course the symptoms are very mild Hmph I had your Wu Wang when I was in the hospital That's why I persisted (I stayed there for two months, that feeling of isolation It's really It must be able to drive people crazy) A good author can bring warmth to everyone Whether it is the physics, language, culture, time and space theory in your longevity Wang Sheng's persistence, and the dedication of old aunt Wu Wali all gave me hope of life I stayed in the hospital for too long at that time That period was really difficult At the beginning I would still miss home I would cry Later I would close my heart My heart would be calm Hey, just stay in the hospital day after day Eat and play with mobile phones and sleep like a machine Day after day But Wu Wan spent last summer with me but it was the time when I wanted to commit suicide the most Ha It is so normal for a person treated in the hospital to want to commit suicide Are you right Shijiazhuang First Medical University Hospital Until I read your work day by day That heart-warming feeling The characteristics of your works Don't worry about what other people think of you The stench of capitalism The louder the curse, it means that your work has hurt someone's feet... In each of your works Each of your protagonists is a a person with a warm heart gentle People will always be treated tenderly by the world Maybe this Cao Dan world has less good and more evil But a single spark can start a prairie fire We must be armed with Mao Zedong Thought... The living, the last big boss in heaven In fact, it is not too failed Every day I look forward to it Waiting for your work to be updated Because of the eclectic nature of your work Some inherent routines should be broken Just like some of the king ups I follow There are always some operations that the king plans to make the eyes dark The king's programmers' hairline is always pushed upwards crazily This! That's the meaning of life Because it's challenging! The summary is just one sentence You are impressed and you write well So have you had a good rest? Hurry up and update The donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

The first point is the view of time: In fact, the view of time itself is based on the worldview. Different worldviews have different views of time. Some novels have dozens or hundreds of chapters, and only weeks or even days have passed. In some novels, thousands of years have passed after dozens of chapters. Like science fiction, I think it is very important to set a good time perspective, especially in this interstellar type. Liu Cixin once gave an example. I will shorten it, that is, some people write about the pursuit between space battleships. I use B battleship. Taking the pursuit of battleship A as an example, some people keep running away from battleship A and chasing battleship B, with words attacking each other in a certain place in the middle. This makes such a large universe small, just like a small town in an American police movie, just with a different skin! I quite agree with this point of view. I think online novels and online science fiction sometimes need a touch of such grandeur. A thousand years is just a snap of a finger, so the layout should be bigger. Of course, it is based on some considerations, such as the earth players thirty years from now. Their life span is very short, so it is difficult to say that the time span is too short and there is no sense of grandeur. Maybe after the players arrive, it will become a game article soon. One moment, they will conquer this, another, another, and the players will be outrageous everywhere in the galaxy for decades. The second point is the concept of science and technology:In fact, in the process of discussing the levels of civilization for so many years (from scientific magazines, novels, etc.), There are obvious scientific and technological gaps between different levels of civilization. The technology of higher civilizations almost completely crushes lower civilizations. Two The difference in productivity levels between civilizations is huge. I think that if there are civilizations in the universe, then the difference in the number of civilizations at different levels must be pyramid-like, with one or two top-level civilizations and as many low-level civilizations as sand. Dialogue between civilizations only exists between the same level. Of course, this is based on the world view. I have no objection, it is just an idea. The third point is cosmic species: There are actually many, many civilizations in the book. I don't understand that their life entities all appear in the form of humans, with various skin colors, giants, dwarves, silicon-based life forms, computer people, energy body individuals , and even weird shapes are acceptable to me. And why does the ancient god also appear in the form of a human? Shouldn't the cosmic life forms in science fiction novels be called star beasts or the like? Then the artificial intelligence actually gives me a strange feeling. It chatters like a human. Although it is given independent thinking, of course the chatter is not very stylistic, but I hope to give it (her) stronger execution capabilities, especially in network, technological research, shell trajectory calculation, enemy warship vulnerability analysis, rather than doing things that humans can do. This artificial intelligence is too much like the spirit of Xianxia. Then about the personal strength of the protagonist: I personally feel that it gives me a very vague feeling. It is difficult for me to imagine how strong the protagonist is, how powerful it is, and what level of technology the destructive power is equivalent to. During the current fight with the Valkyrie, I felt like a man fighting a woman. Another thing is the energy shield. This thing seems to offset the destructive power. It seems that any attack will be blocked as long as it is blocked. Although this is very sci-fi, it is too similar to the fantasy type of true energy and fighting spirit protection. It can be displayed in the form of destructive power. The energy shield should probably be restricted, as it is not intuitive enough. Of course, this is my personal experience. Most people will not pay attention to these small things, including the above points. I have a big problem with my own opinions! What I particularly like about this book: It is mainly about the penetration of civilization, with a plan and a development process. Another point is that many new things have appeared, which are refreshing to people's eyes. This is the charm of science fiction. In fact, the most important thing is that the characters are very three-dimensional, the plot is very vivid, and it is easy for people to immerse themselves in it. This is definitely not something that ordinary authors can do. Without years of accumulation, it is simply impossible to constantly think and summarize. I dare say that the author's writing level surpasses 99.99999% Of people. If I were to analyze what I like about it, it would definitely be a masterpiece of several thousand words!

This book should be called Rebirth: I Am a Big Stallion 😃. The part about Hera is really good, but the seamless connection with Mimili made me feel that the reading was very poor.

The protagonist has a personality, good The content of the story is not routine, good The background structure is a little weird, not good The supporting characters are clear and the story is interactive, great Promote the clue power system, weird, not very good The group portrait is okay, but the proportion is slightly unbalanced, average The plot structure connection is strong and malleable, okay In general, it is good, the weirdness is a fatal flaw, but the book is thick and can be endured

Finished spreading flowers! "Walking in the Abyss" is one of the few books that I can read from beginning to end. It also made me discover that I like space operas. I am looking forward to the second volume!

The author's courage, the courage to change his own style, and write in a different field, with one word, is an excellent one. It is much better than some authors who use one routine to the end... Come on, author! ! !

It's not a science fiction work. . . It's quite nice as a game article. . .

Authors don't actually have to worry too much about being eliminated by the market. Although relatively few online readers are interested in traditional science fiction writing techniques, online literature has been around for more than ten years, which is enough to cultivate some readers who have higher demands for quality. It may not be too much compared to the total, but it will not starve you to death. In fact, the overall level of books that have become popular in recent years has been continuously improving. I see that the main problem with this book is that there is too little description of the world view, which needs some improvement. Furthermore, this single-perspective writing method is still too restrictive for the world view of the universe, but this may also be the author's compromise for the online literature market.

This book is the only novel that I have read from beginning to end in recent years, and it is also the first novel that I have read 90% of the original version on Qidian. The biggest feeling this book gives me is first of all comfort. To be honest, it is not easy to find something suitable for myself to relieve fatigue in today's busy life, but this novel For me, he managed to make me have a comfortable time every day in this short period of time. Maybe the type of this book is not a DC novel type, and maybe the book score is not very good for Guigui, but for me, this book can really be called spiritual food. Finally, I wish the results will get better and better in the future, and I will give you flowers! Looking forward to the second part!

The structure of the early stage is a little flat, but Turtle has done a good job as always in terms of gradually attracting attention. I hope you can read it carefully. The story is really good. I have read countless books on Xian Xia, but this is the first sci-fi online novel I have read. The first Zhu Xian at that time changed my preference to Xiao Ding. I hope this book can also become my standard for evaluating sci-fi online novels!

It looks like a person working in a sci-fi biological world, but there are also powerful people. There is no systematic review. You can check it out. It was very enjoyable to watch it in the past. I kept fighting.

I am a student who reads pirated copies, and I have always liked the works of the master of the True Story. I got into it from my senior brother, and later I read Erlang Zhuan, Renxian and Zhou Zheng, until I read "Walking in the Abyss Alone". When I heard the author said that this book was science fiction, I didn't have high hopes (I am not interested in science fiction themes). After reading it tentatively, I found that this book is actually stable and the writing is still to my liking. I've been saving a lot on living expenses recently, so Qian Chong will support the genuine version - this book is worth buying for me. I hope it can be used stably after I return home, and it won't collapse like Zhou Zheng's book.

The school kept on going, so I decided to blow myself up and give up on it. (Gitui is one of my favorite writers. I can only support him in this way. I hope it will be better.) I have already become ecstatic and numb.

I wish you all a happy New Year, In the new year, there will be endless money and rabbits~ You can write down your New Year blessings downstairs, Maybe they will come true, ding~

I was inexplicably banned in the new book comment section, just because I said something about the new book that is not as good as the Immortal Father, which made me sleepy. Just like that, you banned me? If I hadn't opened the book review section today, I wouldn't even know it. I spent money, so why can't I just say whether it's good or bad?

What, how do you know I won 6666 monthly tickets x1?

Popular science. This book belongs to the space opera genre of science fiction classification. Reference work "Star Wars". Some readers, don't always argue. It doesn't have to explore a physical problem to be called science fiction. It is usually popular science literature. This is a non-popular science novel. The focus is on the novel. I can only guarantee that the physical laws used are within the scope of current scientific and reasonable conceptions.

I heard that the author of this book is a newcomer. Can you perform the part that says "My account has been stolen? It's so annoying"...

I read the ending speech of the author, but as soon as I opened it, I saw someone criticizing the author for changing his writing style. As someone who has read novels for more than ten years, I was very surprised. Wouldn't it be fun to read the same type of books from the same author? Isn't it that I was attracted to it in the first place because the content of Senior Brother's book was very novel in the field of Xianxia? Why do you want to keep putting old wine in new bottles after reading a novel book? Personally, the first book I read was by San Shao, but later I really couldn't stand it. After all, as I grew up, I read more books, my appetite grew, and I couldn't stand eating the same dish all the time. Dancing, Wangyu, Ergen, Yueguan, Three Rings Master, and many more that I can't remember at once. I am intoxicated by these authors' books. But I never believe in a certain genre and only read books by a certain author. After all, you really can't eat the same dish over and over again. I particularly admire Cui Cui. He changes the style of almost every book. He alone allows me to broaden the boundaries of my reading field. So I think Guigui's style is really good. The style has changed, but what remains unchanged is the quality of the author, and the quality is getting better and better. In addition, this is my personal feeling. For those book friends who particularly like a certain type of book, really, you don't have to stick to one author. You should be a Neptune and favor all authors of this type 🙂

The story is well set up and unfolds well. The stronger the male protagonist is, the more vulgar his character becomes. The female characters are all sex slaves and have no character at all. I don't know what the author went through to write like this? ? ! ?

It is clearly claimed to focus on science fiction, but in the end, I wrote half a book about political battles. Forget it, the level is very low. Firstly, the pace is draggy. Secondly, I ask you, how can a smart plug-in native like Youlu fight with the male protagonist? How can such a political fight be good? The writing power of the first few chapters was really wasted. For the sake of this beginning, I will continue to pursue it, hoping to adjust quickly.

Rush! If you insist on compensation, let Koke compensate (dog head)