The Last Big Boss in Heaven

I am very optimistic about Guigui, but unfortunately this book made too many mistakes. I also abandoned it in Chapter 230. I hope Guigui can learn from the experience. As my last comment on this book, I will also talk about what I think are the shortcomings of this book, hoping it can be a reference for Guigui. Various problems are actually coupled, so I can only try my best to break them down and explain them. Overall: The general background, the protagonist team is at a great disadvantage, and the world is in danger. However, the tone of the story is still light and lively, which weakens the contradictions. The protagonist's journey was too smooth, he climbed up the level in a cheating way, and also used the confusing cheating method of "watching movies", with a boss covering his head. As a result, there was a sense of fragmentation. I didn't feel that the protagonist group had experienced anything or had grown up, but he was the only one who could push the main line and save the world. Although there is "world view puzzle solving" that Guigui is good at, the stories filled in it are as bland as water. Style: Gui Gui talks about "Xianxia light comedy", but both keywords are completely off track. He is said to be an "immortal", but he is far from the immortal spirit of "Steady". He is worldly and focuses on the struggle for power. There is no trace of the Xianxia's carefreeness left. It is said to be a "light comedy", but it uses a story background that is not suitable for comedy, and because it is limited to the story background, it does not produce many plot points that can make readers find interesting and funny. It is still a "light" word. Character design: The protagonist's character is too weak, the second male character takes over the main role, and the supporting character is a tool. The result is that except for the second male character who gets the Gou Sheng bonus, the other character designs are basically weak, and it is difficult for readers to have a real feeling that "he is a living person." Interpersonal relationships: This is my personal opinion. I prefer to see a "peer" relationship rather than a "superior-subordinate" relationship. I think the protagonist group of this book is essentially the latter. It is true that they get along with each other as companions and friends, but in fact, the other members of the protagonist group are not in a relatively equal position with the protagonist at all. In fact, they only follow the protagonist through the main line as subordinates, and rarely have relatively independent behaviors dominated by their own will. Emotional line: The male protagonist's affection for Dragon Girl and Baihua is quite reasonable; Baihua's past life is okay, but I don't know what will happen when they meet in this life; I feel that Dragon Girl's feelings for the male protagonist are a bit untenable and only exist in the story. I don't know if there are other harems in the future, so I'll just talk about these two. Other ideas: Storytelling must focus on "specific people." No matter how grand the story is, it still needs to focus on a specific person and provide readers with a perspective from which to take in the story. "Power" cannot support the story, only "people" can. The villains and big bosses in this book rarely appear, and other enemies have a weak sense of existence. Just relying on these supporting characters really cannot create enough plot conflicts to tell the story well. Finally, you cannot write a book without listening to readers' feedback, nor can you accept all readers' opinions. I hope Guigui can figure out what he needs to persist in and what needs to be improved, and take a further step in the online literary world. Above.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​I like his senior brother very much, and I have also followed Wu Wang's book and the detective novel. After reading the first 60 chapters of this book, I sincerely want to give some advice to Guigui. I hope Guigui can read it. I can see the ambition of this book, and I want to superimpose the cultivation of immortality with modern technology. It is also very interesting, but why do I suddenly think of writing this book review? It is because after reading more and more "decent" descriptions of Zhou Zheng, I was scared. It may be a bit subjective to state the conclusion directly, but most of the protagonists who have no characteristics but are decent are a bit lame. What's great about this book is that it's funny and funny, and there are many flesh-and-blood characters that we can empathize with. Li Changshou, who suffered from paranoia, Qi Yuan, who was arranged by his apprentice but taught him the most important principles, the God of Wealth, the disco fairy, etc. Can make people happy and sympathetic. However, from the time I read Wuwu to the present, I can see that there has been progress in plot planning, but I feel that it is very difficult to mobilize emotions. Many characters are becoming more and more decent, and Dede has become a tool to promote the plot. When it is time to be enthusiastic, Dete will be passionate, and when it is time to be cowardly, it will be humorous. It feels like the characters are not alive. What I saw in the Decent series collapsed was Mao Ni's road to the sky. The protagonist of this book is not human at all, and has no human emotions. I wanted to write him in a very lofty and elegant way, but I couldn't see him in the first few posts. When I saw the rest of the book, I really didn't know why I wanted to pursue it other than the author Mao Ni. After giving up the book, I thought about it and found that he actually had this tendency in the last book. The plot seems to be easy to advance, but the characters are not likable. If you don't like it, why read it? The second one that made me heartbroken was No. 13 Mink Street. The plot at the beginning when Grandpa might kill him was really interesting. Later on, he fell into the trap of being decent and couldn't get out. I really had no desire to watch it. He was just a pretentious criminal cheating on his family. There was nothing worth liking about it. You may have a family and background, but don't you have something that is somewhat lovable? In addition to these two, there are many discarded decent books that I can't remember. Anyway, if this thing doesn't work well, it's a big pitfall. Because "appropriate" itself means that people can't see your emotional fluctuations. What's the point of being detached even if nothing happens. Suppose Li Changshou appears next to me now. I have a strong sense of what this person will do. I will probably find a way out immediately and cover up all the key people. Wuwang is a little worse, but it should be expected that this person will start to enjoy himself as a rich man, and after enjoying himself, he will also take on the responsibilities that he should bear. As for Zhou Zheng, after reading so many chapters, I feel that he is just a plot tool, not as lively as Xiaoshuan and his friends. If Li Zhiyong's highlight hadn't come out, I wouldn't have had the motivation to catch up halfway through. I think we must pay attention to this point. One or two protagonists who lack charm can be fine. If you write too many characters and lose the feeling, you will never be able to get them back. There is a very good saying in Grenade's novel, everything must have a beginning. No matter it is any character, his actions must have an inner primary motivation. This motivation is not necessarily a good thing, but as long as it comes from life and makes us people feel familiar and transcends some patterns of life, I am willing to be a fan of this kind of protagonist. This is the pure charm of the character. The senior brother's is the desire to survive, while Wuwu is the sense of responsibility and enjoyment. The plot of the detective book is very good, but the protagonist is a bit of a tool except for the rich second generation. By this time, I no longer know what Zhou Zheng would be doing in his life without Er Ying's interaction. Occasionally, there will be a wave of emotional fluctuations and it will feel very bland. The character design of Senior Brother was far better than other novels at the time, but now it is a bit mediocre. I think Gui Gui deserves more attention! In terms of character charm, I personally feel that the most popular characters are Hu Guiyang, who talks about cheating, and Li Changshou, who is tied for first place in Brother. No matter what the plot is, when I see such a protagonist, I feel the urge to watch it. Liu Chang, who is currently in the history department and has outstanding academic performance, is a very charming character. This kind of character can really attract fans if it is well written. What we write is not an assembly-line novel. As long as the plot planning is not stretched, the most important thing is that the characters can drive the audience's emotions! I hope Guigui will not give up on his strengths. There are not many authors who write light comedies, and there are not many authors who can write good light comedies seriously. I hope Guigui can work hard and continue to improve!

From a personal point of view, I would like to talk about why this book, "Human Immortal", is always said to lack the flavor of "Senior Brother". There are two important forces to which Gou Sheng belongs, the Human Religion and the Heavenly Court. There are only a few people in the human sect, with strong backgrounds and aloofness. The Heavenly Court is not strong in the early stage, and is driven by the protagonist, but it is destined to prosper with the help of Heavenly Dao and Dao Ancestor. Although each religion does not want to sell the face of Heavenly Court, it does not dare to openly be an enemy of Heavenly Court. The protagonist does not need to worry too much about the battle between the forces. But "Human Immortal" is different from this book. The protagonist's force is not strong, and there are hostile forces that are not weaker than or even much stronger than his own force. This leads to the main event that the protagonist needs to participate in is the battle between the forces. But it is this part that seems too worldly and lacks the fairy spirit of the fairy, which drags down the positioning of the "fairy light comedy" expected by the author.

Let me think about it... Beyond the Five Emperors are the Three Emperors, then Tunhuang belongs to fire, Shennong belongs to wood, and Fuxi belongs to water... Could it be? Then Qinghuang in Taoism is located above Qingdi, and Qingdi belongs to one of the nine sects of Qinghuang. Also, it is mentioned in the book that the Five Emperors are missing four, so the protagonist is either the Five Emperors or the Three Emperors. Then Zhou Zheng had the intention of saving. According to the previous book, it was indeed Shennong who saved mankind.

Well done, gained a loyal fan. Always fully booked, come here to observe the character.

Why only four chapters?

First of all, "Longchen City" where the protagonist is located is one of the "Twelve Cities of the East China Sea". As the name suggests, it is either to defend against the East China Sea, or to fight against foreign enemies with the Dragon Clan next to the East China Sea. Then it introduces the concept of "Thirty-six Immortals in the World". Currently, it is known that there are Phoenix Eyes, Roaring Moon, Bing Ning, and Long Chen. In Chen City F3, Xiaoyue is the hope of the Tengu clan. From this, it is inferred that something happened to the Xiaotian Dog and even Erlang Shen. An important event is introduced, the change in the Heavenly Court, and the battle with the Holy Buddha to level the Great Leiyin Temple, and the Erlang God to split the Lingxiao Temple. Can it refer to Wukong's break with Buddhism, Erlang and the Heavenly Court? Break up, and then introduce an important organization. The currently known members of the "Futian League" include Fu Bo (a hidden boss of the Heavenly Court + a registered senior executive of the Futian League). From the name of the organization, it can be seen that it may restore the Heavenly Court. The protagonist built a Lingxiao Palace in "our world", so the protagonist is (the reincarnated Emperor of Heaven) ? ), And finally introduced the concepts of "Three True Dragons", "Dragon Girl of the East China Sea Dragon Palace", "Three Highnesses of the Blue Star Dragon Palace Power" and "Reincarnation". Yes, she is the golden carp girl, the heroine Ao Ying (Three True Dragons, Three Highnesses, Zhou Zheng's marriage is far away) (ps, just speculation, don't comment if you don't like it)

I will analyze the past life identity of the protagonist Zhou Zhen, and everyone will write down their guesses below. 1: The only difference between the protagonist's speed of practicing and driving a rocket is that he has an extra engine. The author said this is to develop the plot, but I think this point still implies that he was a big boss (a very big one, no lower than Da Luo). Oh my god, this status is definitely a big shot. 2: The introduction says (childhood sweetheart descended from heaven), so he had a daughter-in-law in his previous life. Hehe, the Jade Emperor comes standard with the Queen Mother. 3: Uncle Fu has a little respect for him. He knows who he is, and he didn't say to guide him in practice in advance. He just followed the trend. Maybe Pig's Foot's predecessor had an explanation, and Uncle Fu himself is a big boss. This Erha has said. Well, a former right-hand man, or an old friend, this old Heavenly Emperor also fits the bill. 4: The surname is Zhou. This mediocre personality is very consistent with the personality of big guys, like Yang Jian, Sun Wukong, Taibai Jinxing (Xing Li), Taishang Laojun (Xing Li). Hey, the Jade Emperor (Xing Zhang) 5: He himself dreamed that Heaven had failed him. Was it because Heaven was about to unleash a catastrophe and that he, as a worker under Heaven, was let down? Not sure about that. 6: He repeatedly mentioned that when he was fighting or practicing, others felt very majestic. This definitely meant that he was in a high position. God added one point. 7: Reincarnation practice, this was something that the Emperor of Heaven had practiced before he came to power. It is recognized by many fellow immortals that he practiced for 12 or 9 epochs. On the contrary, if the earth exploded, he would still be reincarnated for that long. Add one point. In short, I think he is very suitable for the reincarnation of the Emperor of Heaven. What do you think?

First of all, Uncle Fu's status should be ridiculously high, he can control Xiao Yue at will, and he said that the dragon of Blue Star Dragon Palace is a minor god (a bold prediction, it is the god of fortune, Fu Manduo should be the god of fortune), and the protagonist has a very high status in Fu Bo's heart, and the protagonist's background is not small, so Xiao Yue, the "light messenger of justice", can be given priority to protect Protect the protagonist, and be a "nephew" (again, based on the title of the novel, the protagonist is Emperor Ziwei), combined with the secret code of joining the group to revive the heaven, so this may be the main line, the protagonist may join the Futian Society, and introduce a prop "big array" which should be to prevent foreign enemies or viruses (don't comment if you don't like it, it's just an inference)

Never have a harem, just want to have a female protagonist

"I just want to create a three realms where living beings and heaven and earth can live in harmony." That faint voice sounded, touching everyone's heart. His voice contained no violence, no hatred, gentle and indifferent. Even though nothing happened, the immortals and Buddhas present seemed to see a pair of emotionless eyes in front of them, staring at everyone present. The Jade Emperor stood in front of everyone, and with the four emperors and five elders, they faced the way of heaven outside the Nantian Gate. This is exactly what it is: The emperor guards the gate of the country, and the king dies in the country! "Where is Dong Gong?" Tiandao's invisible eyes swept across everyone present, and he spoke quietly, unhurriedly. "Where is that Dong Gong who I once placed high hopes on, hoping that he could restrain the imperial power and become a sharp sword over the head of the emperor's head, but gave up on this because of ridiculous personal affairs?" The Great Heavenly Lord said solemnly: "This has nothing to do with you, Dong Gong naturally has what he should do, and now, it is our battle." He took a step forward, "If you can change your mind today and disperse your spiritual consciousness, I will give you a way to live for the sake of Father God Kaitian and protecting the three realms for thousands of years. Otherwise..." The co-master of the three realms had a smile on his face. He held the long sword in his hand and his eyes were blazing. The grace of that moment shocked the immortals and Buddhas present. They, they, they, they all took a step forward and caught the words of the Great Heavenly Lord. "Until death!" "Oh? All living beings in the three realms unite to resist the evil-doing Heaven? What an excellent story in a picture book." His voice is still so calm, but mixed with a hint of softness. This is from the standpoint of Heaven, feeling sincere regret for the dying creatures. "But you seem to have misunderstood something." A ray of light suddenly appeared outside the sky that even the immortals and Buddhas present could not react to. The faint light went straight into the body of a general beside the Great Heavenly Lord. He is... Yang Jian, the great emperor of Sichuan and Shu who protects the country with the wonderful way of Qingyuan and Chongning. A red light flashed in Yang Jian's eyes, and he was successfully snatched away by Tiandao without any struggle. He raised the three-pointed two-edged gun in his hand and pointed it at the Great Heavenly Lord. "I don't argue with you because I care about Father God's face, not because I am afraid of you." He rose into the sky, his immortal energy billowing, and the former God of War merged with the way of heaven. "I can't bear to scrape my bones, and it's hard to calm down Shen Ke. Today, I will cure the chronic disease of the three realms." The Great Heavenly Lord smiled in relief, as if he had let go of something, and seemed to have decided on something. "Then, on behalf of the Three Realms, I ask Heaven to teach me!" As soon as he finished speaking, he rushed towards Yang Jian with his sword, taking the lead! Let the fight begin! The sword technique of the Great Heavenly Lord is very simple. This co-master of the three realms who is almost as old as the heaven and the earth, his sword returns to its original nature, and every move is only aimed at killing with one blow. But Yang Jian did not fall behind. With the help of Heavenly Dao, his already perfect tactics became even more terrifying. The two weapons connected, erupting into a wave that destroyed the world. The heavenly soldiers and generals all retreated three feet, but the monks from the three realms did not retreat even half an inch. They rushed forward with their weapons. When life and death are at stake, there is no morality at all! The hall was in chaos, with the immortals, Buddhas and demons from the three realms fighting crazily. At this moment, their wills were activated and they were fearless. This time is a real battle to the death. Countless novices have fallen, countless heavenly soldiers have died, and the whole world has fallen into the apocalypse. Yang Jian was able to do it with ease, but the Great Heavenly Lord was at the end of his strength in just a few minutes and could not sustain the battle. His clothes have become dripping with blood, and he is no longer as graceful as before. A smile appeared on Yang Jian's face: "As expected of the Great Heavenly Lord, if the Heavenly Lord can go on the right path, he will surely benefit the three realms for thousands of years." The Great Heavenly Lord shook his head. He knew that he had nothing to say to Heavenly Dao. This was a dispute of ideas. He has been cultivating so far and has gone through countless kalpas and no longer knows how many primordial societies. However, the way of heaven resides outside the sky and his eyes are watching the world for a longer time than him. Under such a large time span, their ideas have long been established and cannot be shaken by a few words. Therefore, the only solution for now is to fight! The Great Heavenly Lord wiped the blood from the corner of his mouth, looked at the flawless Yang Jian, and bowed. "I know how powerful the way of heaven is!" He stepped back without any pressure in his heart. "Now, please come and test whether we have the qualifications to protect all living beings." Tiandao accepted the gift from the Great Heavenly Lord calmly. He looked at the people in his eyes and watched them cautiously retreat into the Tianmen. He watched the Great Heavenly Lord walk step by step to the Lingxiao Hall, sit on his throne, and watched the Immortal Buddha return to his throne and stand at the place where they went to court. In the eyes of Yang Jian, who was possessed by Heaven, the Great Heavenly Lord closed his eyes, and a ripple started from his throne and spread out to all sides. This is another reason why they retreated to the Lingxiao Palace. This is a formation, a formation where the gods can enjoy blessings and the enemies will be weakened. Immortal energy circulates in the Great Heavenly Lord, "Listen to my will: fight!" The war breaks out again, and countless heavenly soldiers and generals who are already ready to move rush out from all directions and jointly attack the figure holding a three-pointed two-edged gun. A smile appeared on Yang Jian's face. He held a gun with one hand and waved it casually, and a group of heavenly soldiers were knocked away. He exudes an aura that looks down on the world and is invincible. The three-pointed and two-edged spear was swung like a tiger with wings. One spear pierced the sky, pierced the body-protecting immortal steel on the heavenly generals, and pierced into their chests. Then with a shake of the gun body, a golden immortal general was wiped out in ashes. The army of Heavenly Court was defeated by Yang Jian. Both the Heavenly soldiers and the Heavenly generals seemed to have lost their ability to resist. His combat power was too strong! This is the first time in the history of Heaven that such a situation has been encountered. Even hundreds of years ago, Sun Wukong, who was known to cause havoc in Heaven and had hundreds of thousands of heavenly soldiers and generals, did not have such a record. In the blink of an eye, the front of Lingxiao Palace was already covered with armored weapons and ruins. "Alas..." A strong man over three meters tall walked out. He exuded a faint Buddha light, and the Buddha light complemented the seventeen people behind him. The strong men are Buddhist Arhats - subduing the dragon. The formation they step on is called the Eighteen Arhat Formation. "The young monk has come to learn from me." Yang Jian had no expression on his face. He shook the gun, shook out a gun flower, and walked into the formation with the gun. "I think we can speed up." On the throne, the Great Heavenly Lord did not seem to see the dead heavenly soldiers and generals, nor did he hear Yang Jian's words. He was immersed in his own world. Yang Jian didn't say anything when he saw this, but the aura on his body became stronger and stronger. With every step he took, a deep ravine appeared on the ground under his feet. After taking the first step, the originally perfect and self-contained formation went into chaos, and blood overflowed from the corner of the mouth of the Eighteen Arhats. Taking the second step, cracks appeared at the joints of the formation, and the same wounds burst out on the Eighteen Arhats. Taking the third step, Yang Jian raised his gun and stabbed Jianglong straight into the chest. Seventeen other figures were lying in a mess in front of the stone pillar. Jianglong looked down at the big hole in his chest, bowed his head and performed a Buddhist salute, with a bitter smile on his lips. After casually killing the Eighteen Arhats, Yang Jian walked inside. A Bodhisattva with a five-bundled bun on his head and a sword in his hand came towards him. Next to him was a good-looking young man holding a sword. "Are Manjusri and Ananda also in a hurry to die?" Yang Jian said in a gentle tone. He swung his gun at Manjusri. Wenshu was shocked and subconsciously raised his sword to block his chest. Yang Jian continued to walk forward. Behind him, Manjushri Bodhisattva was holding a long sword full of cracks. There was a deep scar on his chest. His face was full of unwillingness, and his hair was covered with blood mist.       ，，， Yang Jian continued to go inward, and no one survived where he passed. The barefoot immortal held his chest and his feet were broken. The forehead of the Antarctic Immortal was broken. There are still tiny electric arcs left on the corpses of the Leibu gods, which were blown to pieces by thunder. The faces of the four heavenly kings are extremely majestic, but their death conditions are very miserable. Several old dragon kings of the dragon clan have lost their heads, and their scales are all broken. … The corpse of the spiritual official filled a corner of the hall. The weapons of the heavenly generals were scattered all over the hall. Yang Jian walked to the middle of the hall, he looked up at the Great Heavenly Lord who still had his eyes closed, "Now may I ask again, where is Dong Gong?" The Great Heavenly Lord opened his eyes, and he said warmly: "I want to escape." In the main hall, one of the few people still standing came out. He looked at the Great Heavenly Lord with a smile, "I will die for you." This is the Antarctic Immortal Emperor, the Nine Heavens Yingyuan Thunder Universal Transformation Heavenly Lord. He knew that he was no match for Yang Jian, but he still had no hesitation. He threw himself in front of the throne, and before his death, he was still desperately protecting the Great Heavenly Lord on the throne. Yang Jian shot him, his forehead was cracked, his eyes were bulging, and most of his immortal body was broken! With the second shot, the Great Heavenly Lord's immortal body also collapsed, with only a little bit of his true spirit still remaining. At this moment, the Great Heavenly Lord activated the formation that he had been preparing for a long time, wrapped a bit of his true spirit and rushed out of the Lingxiao Palace and towards the Western Spiritual Mountain. There, a monkey wearing golden armor raised its head. The Great Heavenly Lord's voice rang in Yang Jian's ears, "Dong Gong, he will come when he should come." Hehe... He closed his eyes.

"Let's drink and sing!" Zhou Zheng laughed loudly. He was lying on the rooftop blowing the cold night wind, holding a thin can in his hand. The jar contained beer that he had never touched since he became an immortal. He opened the ring, raised his head, and smiled wantonly. The sparkling wine spurted out from the mouth of the jar, splashing on his face and neck. Under the shroud of alcohol, the world in front of Zhou Zheng's eyes rippled. At this time, this big world, which is also ranked among the three thousand worlds, actually felt illusory in his eyes. Zhou Zheng knew that he was drunk, and he also knew that he was drunk because he wanted to be drunk. He let his mind go, letting the beautiful and unpleasant scenes reflect on his retinas under the refraction of light, letting important and unimportant information shuttle between his neurons, and then letting them be swallowed up by time. Zhou Zheng didn't think about anything, he just wanted to get drunk. Sing and have fun, and drink to soothe your sorrows. At some point, a fairy in a white dress stood quietly beside him. Zhou Zheng raised his head and met that gentle smile. "Tomorrow we are going to the universe, far away from home, why don't we take another look at this world?" "Isn't Teacher Bing Ning going too?" Bing Ning shook her head, "I am Yaochi Immortal. I am not from this world. If I have to talk about a hometown, Yaochi is the place where I grew up. Now that the heaven has been destroyed, Blue Star is just a journey in my life. It is not much different from other big worlds." She squatted down, reached out and grabbed the can from Zhou Zheng's hand, and looked at Zhou Zheng, "But you are different." Zhou Zheng rolled up from the ground. He grabbed the railing and looked at the world outside the rooftop and the lights of thousands of houses in the city. "Teacher Bing, I should be me, but I always feel that I am not me." His right index finger and middle finger unconsciously clasped the iron railing, making a "ping ping pong" sound on it. The drunkenness had not faded, and Zhou Zheng's eyes were still hazy. Bing Ning squatted next to him, looking at the stars in the distance with him, and listened to him telling stories about his past. Kid Zhou Zheng, what kind of person do you want to be in the future? Those were the days when he first arrived at the orphanage. The fat dean was amiable and always had a smile on her face. In her gentle voice, she asked little Zhou Zheng about his vision for the future. The little figure raised his head, raised his little fist, and made a wish in a childish voice: "I will be a hero in the future!" [What kind of person will Xiao Zheng be in the future? At the corner of the street, Zhou Zheng squatted with his friends from the orphanage. The thin but fierce, self-prepared and powerful Sister Yaner looked at Zhou Zheng with pity. She applied the medicine she had stolen to Zhou Zheng from nowhere, and touched Zhou Zheng's wound with her skinny fingertips. She couldn't help but ask Zhou Zheng. Zhou Zheng lowered his head, gritted his teeth and stood up, walking towards the underground boxing ring, "I may not be a hero anymore, but I will still work hard. I want to protect Sister Yaner, protect Xiaoli, and protect the dean." [Zhou Zheng, tell your uncle, what kind of person do you want to be in the future? At the gate of the school, the chubby Uncle Fu held Zhou Zheng's hand. The young man looked at the parents and children walking around, saw the teachers in the school chatting with the security guards, and looked at the kind people around him who smiled innocently and helped him to go to school. He let out a sigh of relief. Zhou Zheng put on his schoolbag, closed his eyes, and whispered softly with a smile on his face, "Uncle, from now on, I just want to live in peace and stability. I want to be kind to others, work hard, and strive to be an excellent person. Then I will use my life's struggle to provide a relatively relaxed environment for my future children, and just enjoy my old age." [What kind of person should your husband be in the future? It was after he had conceived his life, convinced himself, and hid the knife in his flesh that everything changed. The dragon girl who repaid her kindness brought him into another world. In her small rental house where she had always lived alone, the dragon princess from the East China Sea smiled and smiled. With love in her eyes and a smile on her face, she cooked delicious meals for herself and asked questions that others had asked her a long time ago. She turned around and did not wait for Zhou Zheng to answer. Her beautiful almond eyes were full of determination. She said: "My husband is a great hero, a hero who saves lives and heals the wounded. I will definitely save more and more poor people and do more kind things in the future." [What kind of person is the emperor planning to be in this life? That was when he entered the spiritual practice, after he knew that he might have been a big shot in his previous life, and after countless legendary gods, Buddhas and demons came to his home one after another, the Bodhisattva who rescued people from suffering stepped on the lotus platform. She fell from the sky, and the lotus platform under her feet emitted soft light. There was an inexplicable smile on Guanyin's face in the light. She looked at Zhou Zheng. Her eyes seemed to be able to see through Zhou Zheng's past. She asked Zhou Zheng. She asked: "Emperor, in this life, will you still be like Chunyangzi, picking flowers and drinking longevity wine, with swords and halberds all over Jiugai?" [Emperor, I asked me to ask you on his behalf, have you already thought about what kind of person you want to be? That was when he experienced a dream in his life, and after he passed the first level set by Laojun, two little children ran up to him laughing and joking. The two fire-slapping children who acted as comedians in TV series seemed to always be so heartless. They asked themselves in an innocent tone. They asked: "This time, the emperor will definitely wield his sword for thousands of miles as he did when the heaven was founded. He will definitely be able to mediate the heaven and earth and reverse the world. He will definitely kill evil spirits and eradicate evil spirits. He will definitely be able to reorganize the three realms, right?"                                                                              Zhou Zheng's eyes were filled with confusion. He touched his chest, feeling the strong heartbeat one after another, and asked himself: "Zhou Zheng, do you still remember that you once said that you wanted to be a hero?" He asked himself again: "When you were young, did you want to be a hero because of ignorance or a dream? "You want to be a hero now, is it because of yourself or others? "Are you really willing to be a hero, not just a martial artist? "Do you really understand what kind of person you want to be? " It's raining. Zhou Zheng stared blankly at the world in the rain. He could feel that Bing Ning beside him had cast a water-avoiding spell on himself. The raindrops fell softly around the invisible cover and formed a stream on the ground. People say he is Donghua, people say he is the hope of heaven, people say he should be the savior, so he is carried along the path prescribed by people. Even his name is salvation, salvation. However, he is obviously just an ordinary person, if he goes to save the world. Who will save him? The phone in his pocket suddenly vibrated. Zhou Zheng picked up the phone and swiped to answer the call. Jiang Li, a friend from the orphanage and a support partner in the underground boxing ring. "Why, cough, why did you call me suddenly? " Zhou Zheng cleared his throat and was a little hoarse when he spoke. "It's nothing, I just missed you, Brother Zhou... How have you been recently? " …… "Stop talking nonsense, I'm still busy, so I'll hang up before I'm serious. " "Okay brother, you and Sister Yan'er should also be good. " "Well, live a good life. " "Brother, come on. " Beet. A brief busy tone came from Zhou Zheng's headset. He forgot to put down his arms and stood there quietly. He suddenly smiled. He turned his head and looked at Bing Ning, his eyes gradually brightening. "Teacher, I figured it out. "       ，，，，       ，       ，      Zhou Zheng wants to know what kind of person he wants to be. - He can't be a hero, he can only be a knight who is happy with his grudges and never forgets his original intention, but does good deeds without asking about his future. He smiled and winked at Bing Ning, "Let's go, come with me and save the world. " The two of them turned into clouds and left, with Zhou Zheng's hearty laughter still lingering on the rooftop. "I'll take a boat and travel around the rivers and lakes! " {"TopicId":"790532439700275200","TopicName":"Doujin Jianghu Zone"}

Heaven, Lingxiao Palace. As the immortal energy spread, the Great Heavenly Lord sat in the high hall, and the immortals in the audience fell silent under the intimidation of Tian Tiao. The Great Heavenly Lord wore a crown, looked at the immortals in the hall, and decreed: "Yunhua violated the laws of heaven, and I ordered her to be sunbaked to death." At this time, a young immortal walked out from the immortals in the audience, with a faint vertical line closing on his forehead. "Great Heavenly Lord, why are you doing this? My mother's crime is not worthy of death." Great Heavenly Lord smiled coldly, "Yang Jian, Yunhua must die today." "Confront me. If you are not qualified yet, go back to Jiangkou and practice for another five hundred years." Yang Jian walked to the gate of Lingxiao Palace. He turned back and took a deep look at the Great Heavenly Lord sitting in the high hall, as if to remember his appearance firmly. Guanjiang Estuary. The sound of the flowing river surrounded Yang Jian's ears. He sat under a willow tree by the river for today's practice. Yang Jian slowly let out a breath of turbid air from his chest and ended today's practice. Things that happened a hundred years ago have been weighing on his mind like a dark cloud. It suddenly became dark in front of Yang Jian. He looked up and saw a monkey with a sharp mouth and monkey cheeks in front of him. The monkey suddenly uttered human words and said: "Zhenjun Erlang, my king wants to rebel against Lingshan someday. He asked me to ask you: 'Has the fire in your heart been extinguished? Back then, Lingxiao Palace Have you forgotten what happened? ', The gods have been suffering from the law of heaven for a long time." "If you agree to crush Lingxiao, then go to the Huaguo Mountain to find my king. We have the advantage here." Yang Jian chuckled and replied to the monkey: "How could I forget that I have been wanting to crush Ling Xiao and kill the Great Heavenly Lord all the time for a hundred years." "Go back and send a message to your king. When the moon is full, we will step on Lingxiao and Broken Spirit Mountain. The decayed rule of heaven will eventually be shattered." In the darkness, there are several figures plotting. "Erlang Xiansheng Zhenjun has also been persuaded, so the shattering of the rule of heaven is a foregone conclusion." One of the black figures said. "They agreed that when the moon is full, they will crush the sky." This is an old voice. "After they finish fighting, it's time for us to come out and receive the results of our victory." A young man said excitedly. "Don't get too carried away, everything has not come to an end yet, so let's disperse first." The old man sitting in the main seat sighed and shook his head. In front of Lingxiao Palace. In the air of immortality, Yang Jian was dressed in golden armor, holding a three-pointed two-edged halberd, and standing at his feet was a heavenly dog. "Tianzun, I am here to take your dog's life to sacrifice my mother Yunhua's spirit in the sky." The figure of the Great Tianzun appeared in front of the Lingxiao Palace, he sneered, and bounded away to Yang Jian with a series of heavenly strips. Tian Tiao turned into golden words, in which the power of incense and wish was condensed, but there was a faint black air coming out. "Tianzun, do you still think I am the Yang Jian from before? I am now Erlang Xiansheng True Monarch." The gap in Yang Jian's forehead suddenly opened, and an eye full of divinity looked at the Great Tianzun. He broke free from the shackles of Tian Tiao, roared, raised the halberd in his hand and struck towards Lingxiao Palace. The figure of the Great Heavenly Lord turned into ashes under the halberd, and the heaven was shattered. "The rules of heaven should be abolished and free for all living beings." A golden flame ignited in the ruins of heaven, seeming to burn out this decadent era. "Mother, I avenged you."

Explain the next little question. I don't know if it's for the sake of blackmail or something, but a few readers said they plagiarized another novel. (To avoid offending the author, I won't mention the title of the book, and please don't discuss it to avoid having a negative impact on the author.) I personally hate plagiarism, so I went to read this book and decided to make this meaningless clarification. Actually, it can be explained clearly in one sentence - except that the material is a reference to the myth of the snail girl, is there anything else that is the same? Then let's talk about the early creation process of the book Heavenly Court. The main story of this book was conceived before the senior brother finished the book. At that time, the submission was rejected by the editorial department because a suitable entry point was not found. After the end of Immortality and recovery from my back injury, my desire to create has never been greater. I planned to write about Yu Guang at the time, but I was afraid that Qidian would not let me write it, so I decided to play it safe - I would write the beginning of the new book on Xianxia first, and then start serializing Yu Guang. I started writing in early February and soon published the first manuscript. In early March, my grandma became seriously ill and I rushed back to my hometown. I asked for leave during the Yu Guang series. As readers of Yu Guang know, I stayed with my grandma for half a month. During the tasting, I took out two stories. One was that Zhou Zheng (called Zhou Mo at that time) had the spirit of a general behind him, and he could see an illusion. Because the pace was too slow, I kept revising it, and then extended it to this version of three dishes and one soup with small fish repaying the favor. Readers who participated in the new book tasting at that time can attest. The book I was accused of plagiarizing was released on February 28th; My story was formed on February 11th. I will put a few screenshots below, which is the end of this topic The modification date is the date when the document was last modified. ...... Yes, before publishing the book, I had thrown away more than 100,000 words of manuscript. How could an author who didn't even publish Robust 2 and tried hard to avoid repeating himself do such a thing as plagiarism?

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As of Chapter 83 (2022.06.10) Return to the shelves, updated The font seems a bit small, if you can't see it clearly, save it to your mobile phone to read Overview Character-Futian League Character-Blue Star Dragon Palace&Blue Star Monster Tribe&Cut Tianjiao Character - Monk from the Twelve Cities of the East China Sea Character - Buddhism - Mount Luojia Character - Other Setting Magical power Organizational force Zhou Zheng's practice record

The silence of the Dragon Palace locks the autumn

Zhou Zheng doesn't know what he was like in his last life. But there is a high probability that Uncle Fu is Zhu Bajie, the messenger of the altar. First, he has a wide network of people, and has deep connections with Heaven, Lingshan, and the Monster Clan. Second, he has good fortune, which is also one of the meanings of Zhu Bajie. Bring good luck. The three greedy eaters said they would stew Xiao Yue and Xiao Yue was immediately frightened, indicating that Uncle Fu could indeed do or have done such a thing. Fourth, in this book, Wukong and Yang Jian must have some kind of relationship, and they both did similar things. And Zhou Zheng is considered Uncle Fu's nephew, so he is at least Zhou Zheng's same generation in his previous life.

All the gods in heaven

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​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: I just started reading it recently, and now I'm 65% through the chapter "This Outrageous Shortcut to Taoism". Currently, I am stuck in my own "knowledge barrier" which leads to difficulty in reading, and I am unable to understand the logic in Gui Gui's book. Specifically, in "Brother", Hongjun uses "tribulation" to weaken the power of living beings. However, this is a kind of oppression and exploitation, and all parties are opposed to varying degrees. At the same time, it is mixed with the game of various factions and the mediation of Chang Geng. This book is no longer the power to restrain living beings. It directly cuts off the roots and directly frees the way of heaven from the shackles of living beings. There is still the dream of the Jietian Sect as the only "privileged class". There are also dragons who are on the "winning" side. God's way wins, can the Dragon Clan, as the strongest "creatures", withstand this attack? Whether it's the Dragon Clan or the Jietian Sect, they all believe in the way of heaven and believe in the promise of the way of heaven. However, "political commitments" that are not immediately fulfilled are almost nothing. Not to mention that after victory, there will be no restrictions on the way of heaven. I really can't be logically consistent, which makes it extremely difficult for me to read this book. I'm really sorry to give up the book, but it doesn't matter, I ordered them all anyway. That's okay, don't be sorry!

It feels like this book is completely taking advantage of my senior brother's legacy, and it's really awkward to read.

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Yingying has been very troubled recently. Yingying is a little golden carp living in Longchen City, Blue Star, but Yingying has been a little troubled recently. My former friends don't even remember me! Unless you keep communicating with them! "Gululu." A string of bubbles emerged from the water! Yingying was talking to another little carp, but just when Yingying said hello to another old turtle. Yingying found that she had been forgotten again! "Gulu, Xiaojin, don't you recognize me?" "Mulu, who are you? I don't know you!" "Gulu, okay, I recognized the wrong person!" Yingying waved her fish tail and swam elsewhere. While wandering around, Yingying underestimated: "Why don't they remember me? I've obviously just met you!" Suddenly, a soft and harsh voice sounded from the sky above Yingying: "Because their memory is only seven seconds!" "Huh? Who is talking?" Yingying turned around but couldn't find the speaker. The voice continued, accompanied by a shadow: "Sister Ying, I'm up there, you can see it when you look up!" Yingying raised her head and saw a figure in the sky that covered the sky and the sun. To Yingying, this figure was at least bigger than hundreds of turtle uncles! Yingying was so shocked that she was speechless: "Ah! You... You... You are so big! I have never seen you before!" Yingying saw the figure in the sky turn into the same size as herself, and then dived into the water: "Sister Ying, don't be afraid, wait until I tell you in detail." "Sister Ying is curious about what I am. We are the true dragon clan! Hundreds of years ago, a war caused our dragon clan to disappear. Now with the recovery of Blue Star's spiritual power, our Dragon Palace has finally been reborn! When it comes to seniority, you should call me sister!" Yingying was simply stunned: "Wow, the dragon clan? Me too?" "Haha, I think Sister Laiying's memory has recovered a little! After all, the fish only has seven seconds of memory, but it can't remember its own name!" Zhenlong teased with a smile. "Gululu." Yingying smiled shyly: "I only remember that my name is Yingying, I don't remember the rest! No wonder they don't remember me! Then sister, are we the only two of us in the Dragon Clan?" "Of course not! The Dragon Clan has its own Dragon Palace on every planet. When my sister comes today, she senses that your memory has been revived and takes you to the Dragon Palace to restore all your memories!" "But I can't leave the water, sister." The dragon girl jumped out of the water and transformed into a giant dragon again: "Just let my sister come!" After that, a bubble covered Yingying, and then she was placed in the huge mouth. Then, the dragon's tail swung, and it traveled thousands of miles in an instant! East China Sea Yingying and Zhenlong have just entered the water. An old woman and a group of soldiers have been waiting underwater for a long time. The scene is a bit funny! Behind them is a road paved with gold and gems! There are many corals all around, and the pearls on them are shining brightly. The end is extremely beautiful! "Wow, so beautiful!" Yingying has lived in the river since she was a child. When has she ever seen such a battle? Immediately, my beautiful eyes looked forward, and my eyes were full of brilliance! Zhenlong, who claimed to be her sister, was not surprised at all, and pointed at the old lady: "Yingying, this is Prime Minister Turtle, you can come to her if you need anything." Prime Minister Turtle looked kind and bowed respectfully to Yingying: "Princess, if anything happens in the future, just ask me!" Yingying was a little at a loss: "Ah, Grandma Turtle, get up quickly! I... I'm fine!" The real dragon waved his hand, and after Prime Minister Turtle stood up, he took Yingying and went inside: "Yingying, there is your second brother in the Dragon Palace, but he is naughty by nature, and I don't know if he can see it!" But just these two glances made Yingying amazed! The road is already overflowing with light and splendid. The further inside, the more luxurious it becomes, with pure golden doors, luminous pearls for illumination, and various pearls and gems inlaid on the walls! The luxury of the Dragon Palace made Yingying stunned! The elder sister looked at Yingying with a face full of exclamation and smiled and said: "Yingying, don't worry about it. Everyone knows that our Dragon Palace is extremely luxurious, but they don't know that the luxury of my Dragon Palace is ten thousand times greater than what they know! You will get used to it from now on!" Yingying no longer knew how to evaluate it, so she had to agree oh oh oh. With endless shock, Yingying just lived in the Dragon Palace! There are people taking care of your daily life, and life is simply beautiful! We stayed in the Dragon Palace for a few more days. On this day, Sister Zhenlong came to Yingying again: "Yingying, today is an auspicious day, come with me to the ancestral temple to completely restore your memory!" As soon as she entered the ancestral temple, Yingying felt that something suddenly hit her heart, and something in her mind seemed to wake up! At this time, the voice of the real dragon sounded in Yingying's ears: "Report your mind! Relax yourself!" Yingying came back to her senses and followed her words. Soon she felt that she had entered a strange state. Pictures flashed before her eyes, and countless racial memories belonging to the dragon clan began to be remembered in her mind! Several hours passed, and Yingying finally woke up from her memories, muttering to herself: "It turns out my surname is Ao, my name is Ao Ying. I am from the Dragon Clan!" The real dragon beside him walked into the ancestral temple with a smile: "Congratulations to sister Ao Ying for awakening her memory. Our Dragon Palace will be much stronger from now on!"  Ao Ying turned back to look at her older cousin, with a face filled with gratitude: "I also want to thank you, sister, for bringing me back to the Dragon Palace! Ao Ying has not yet jumped over the dragon gate, so we can't meet her in person!" "It doesn't matter, Sister Ao Ying, you will be the little princess of the Dragon Palace from now on! But the situation in the sea is still a bit tense now. If the other demon clans hear that my sister has not transformed into a dragon, I am afraid there will be a lot of trouble! So I have to force my sister to stay in the original river for a while! When the situation in the sea stabilizes, my sister will take you back to the Dragon Palace!" "But it's up to my sister's arrangement." So, on an unknown night, a dragon and a fish left the Dragon Palace... {"TopicId":"764152952998002688","TopicName":"Under the Sea Wonderful Story"}

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{"TopicId":"764152952998002688","TopicName":"Wonderful Stories Under the Sea"} In the ancient and mysterious ocean of the East China Sea, various ancient mysterious legends have always been circulated. Today, legends have become myths. People will talk about them, but they will no longer believe in them as before. However, due to the persistence of these myths and legends, this small town on the coast of the East China Sea still has a lively and prosperous atmosphere. It was a beautiful sunny day with the sun shining brightly and no clouds in sight. In this small town on the east coast that is full of worldly fireworks and seems to be quite bustling, the merchants and hawkers in the market are shouting constantly, and all kinds of pedestrians are walking back and forth on the road. A young scholar wearing a blue-grey robe was walking in the market with a smile on his face. Pedestrians were coming and going, and the scholar was walking forward without knowing what he was looking at. He was wearing a shabby gray gown and looked poor. Suddenly, there was a commotion in the market, and the scholar couldn't help but cast his eyes on the crowd that quickly gathered together. Before leaving home, the young scholar's family often advised him to be careful when going out. If he encountered someone gathering around and arguing, he should avoid the dispute early and not join in the fun... But this was his first time traveling far away. After all, he was still a young man at heart. He stretched out his hand and scratched his head, took steps curiously, and walked towards the crowd that had gathered. Amidst the commotion, it turned out that the fisherman on the pier caught a beautiful golden carp. In order to sell the carp at a good price, he quickly ran to the market with the fish, hoping to attract more pedestrians' attention in the bustling market. At this moment, the fisherman is holding the golden carp in his hand, showing the beautiful scales of the carp to the onlookers. "Come and take a look. I have an extremely rare golden-scaled carp here. This is a rare creature in the sea... Don't miss it, I only want it for two taels of silver..." "I said, old fisherman, although this golden carp looks good, it may not taste much better than other carps. How dare you ask for such a high price?" At this time, a thin man in black among the crowd of onlookers said. "Hey, guest, you are just joking. Why did you buy this golden carp back to eat? This golden carp is said to be of the dragon species, the kind that can leap over the dragon gate!" The old fisherman held up the golden carp in his hand and said mysteriously: "If you buy such a carp back, it will be the best. What a great thing to buy! I'm asking for two taels of silver, but it's not expensive at all!" "Two taels of silver! Your carp just has golden scales, and it's not made of real gold. I can buy a hundred other carp for just two taels of silver!" Someone in the crowd immediately responded. "Yes, yes, old fisherman, don't fool us with any dragon species. This is just an ordinary carp. Don't kill regular customers... Let's do this. I'll take this carp for one tael of silver. How about it?" A voice raising the price suddenly sounded, and the man lowered the price to one tael of silver as soon as he opened his mouth. Listening to the guest's words, the old fisherman showed a look of hesitation on his face for a while. After all, one tael of silver for a carp is already an extraordinary price. He might only make one tael if he fishes for ten and a half days on weekdays. At this time, the young scholar mixed in the crowd of onlookers also saw the golden carp. In his eyes, what immediately attracted him to the carp was not its beautiful golden scales, but her agile gaze. He couldn't explain the reason, but in a daze, he actually read the meaning of pity and asking for help... And another different charm that he couldn't explain himself. The scholar touched the copper plate in his sleeve. He only had eight copper plates in his sleeve, but he needed one or two silver to buy this carp. He felt a little anxious, but there was a voice in the dark telling him that he must save this fish... Suddenly, the frowning scholar had an idea. He supported the bookcase on his back, stepped out from the crowd, clasped his hands and saluted, then smiled and said loudly to the old fisherman: "Old man, this fish is not an ordinary carp, this is an extremely rare golden-scaled fish, worth thousands of gold." As he said that, Zhou Zheng stepped towards the old fisherman, and then Then he stretched out his hand to the old fisherman, and then said: "Here, let Xiaosheng point out to my husband the preciousness of this fish..." The old fisherman looked suspiciously at the young scholar who came to him. Although he did not quite believe in the saying that it was worth thousands of gold, he still handed him the fish in his hand dubiously. Unexpectedly, the moment the young scholar took the golden carp, his expression changed, he suddenly put the fish into his arms, and then started to run away. In just a short moment, the scholar ran tens of meters away. Only then did the old fisherman react and began to shout loudly: "It's time to grab the fish! Someone is grabbing the fish!" Immediately, a group of people chased the scholar's running back. They were mighty but far out of reach. But in just a short moment, no one saw him anymore. After getting rid of the crowd, the scholar did not slow down. He ran far away with his rickety bookcase, then walked a long distance, and finally arrived at a small river outside the town. His pace was so fast that he was worried that the carp in his arms would die of thirst. Panting, he stood still and carefully took out the golden carp from his arms. He gently put the golden carp in his hand into the stream. The carp did not react after falling into the water, nor did it immediately escape into the water and leave. It just hovered quietly in the clear stream, and then stared at the thin-faced scholar steadily. The scholar also looked intently at this golden carp that seemed to be psychic. He unexpectedly saw a gentle and joyful expression in this carp's eyes for no reason... "Let's go... The end of this stream leads to the East China Sea. Leave here quickly and return to the sea. Don't be caught again..." He said to the golden carp in a warm voice. The golden carp seemed to understand his words. After staring at him for a long time, it finally moved and disappeared into the stream. This meeting ruined her life.

6. This is the first book besides The Dancing Eunuch that I have read about raising eunuchs...

Who can tell me who is the reincarnation of this protagonist?