This Human Immortal Is Far Too Proper

I have read four of Gui Gui's books. The beginning is always a bit inexplicable but it is eye-catching. It is obviously the framework of the traditional fairy tale, but it seems to follow the line of light comedy style. But almost every ending made me feel too hasty and unfocused. Although I could see that Guigui had taken great pains and was even proud of the design of each ending, this slightly weird sci-fi ending couldn't complement the magnificent epic fairy tale, and even seemed a little out of place. There is no foreshadowing, but the foreshadowing is too weak, and the sense of separation between the grandeur of the story and the hasty ending is too strong. Although, I haven't liked an online writer so much in a long time. He has his own thoughts. He reads obscure ancient myths and builds a little-known Chinese mythology system. He always hopes to perfectly combine mythology and science fiction - although I feel it is too stiff every time. But the writing is brisk enough and the story is interesting enough. When I was in the worst mood, reading an updated chapter every day became a source of happiness in my life. Actually, the first movie I read about Gui Gui was "The First Sword on Earth". Gui Gui was not famous at that time, the book was not very popular, and the plot was relatively old. It was about time travel and spiritual energy recovery, and finally there was the reincarnation of an ancient power - I forgot how I continued reading it at the time. But "My Senior Brother is Too Stable" is a phenomenal hit, with 8.05 Million fans on the fan list. It may be the first "Gou Feng" novel. The protagonist in other people's homes takes pleasure in being slapped in the face. Wen Changshou always just wants to be a little transparent without anyone paying attention. He only takes one step at a time. He has no intention of saving the world and saves people. His only wish is to live longer. Every time I see Changshou being slapped in the face and not being able to get what he wanted, I smile knowingly - everyone else is torturing the supporting cast, only Guigui keeps torturing the protagonist. After finishing these two novels, I read out Gui Gui's first novel "The Legend of Erlang in the Wilderness". I read half of the main plot and skipped directly to the end. A classic fairy tale novel, too conventional, but the writing is too mature to sound like a newcomer. As for today, "This Immortal Is Too Serious" has finally come to an end. This book disappointed Guigui. It's not as good as Stable Changshouhuo, but it's actually not bad. It can be seen that Guigui has made some frame designs, such as the goddess of luck who cursed Wu Wan at the beginning and the Donghuang Bell that traveled from the future. It is obvious that it is imitating the routine of "Creed". Time and space are reversed, but fortunately, time and space can be reversed countless times - this is a bit like traveling to the future to defeat Bai Lan in "Tutor". Only one time and space is successful. In my opinion, the design of Guigui is that the candidates for the Goddess of Luck and Donghuang Bell can be adjusted. When fans voted the old aunt Lin Suqing as the protagonist, Suqing was shaped into the character formed by Donghuang Bell going upstream - I mean, Donghuang Bell could have been someone else. As for whether Guigui really thought so, I'm not sure. Wu Wang actually failed three thousand times. This book only describes the one time he succeeded, so the ending of the story is generally satisfactory. But some of the images that left a deep impression on me seem to have been forgotten, such as Dongfang Mumu. In fact, I think she has many similarities with the villain Golden God. I once thought she could inherit the way of the Golden God - but the position of the Golden God was vacant until the finale. The role of Jingwei is a bit thin. Even with the addition of the plot outside the wilderness, this character has never been able to stand up in my heart. She is just a simple and cute little girl. It seems that I have never realized her rebellion and stubbornness when she was swallowed by the sea and vowed to fill the mountains and seas. Ling Xiaoran also has a lot of fans. I think this character has a lot of similarities with Youqin Xuanya in Wen Changshou. They are both straight and stubborn. And the biggest characteristic of Ling Xiaoran is that she is overly mysophobic. This character is somewhat pitiful because she ended up being alone in the long river of time for too long. Then comes my favorite Shao Siming, who doesn't love the gentle and powerful goddess? Compared with the Yunxiao in the other movie, who always makes people "kneel down", Shao Siming is less majestic and not good at fighting, but he is an innate creature who only thinks about the weak human race. He is too muddy to be unstained - but the foodie and silly down-to-earth atmosphere at least make me feel that this character is very coherent and not inconsistent. Moreover, Shao Siming's position at the beginning was still that of a villain, and he almost killed the male protagonist, but fans couldn't hate this character. I have said so much, just because I still have a lot of regrets in my heart. For these characters who have been watching along the way, the story suddenly comes to an end. Moreover, at the end, Gui Gui did not say what happened to these people in the end. Although they were most likely happy, I don't know how they were happy - because everyone was forced to leave their original environment and even lost their power and came to a new starry sky - but the story ended abruptly. After Xiao Yan became emperor, he would come to sit in the valley of the Little Medical Fairy. So what happened to Wu Wan and the others in the end?

Sorry everyone, this chapter is still being updated in the early morning. It will be a little later. It will be updated before 1 o'clock.

It's obviously a light-hearted novel. It was okay at first, but it became more and more depressing the more I read it.

After reading "Brother", I always wanted to say something, but the book review section was full of geniuses and their comments were original and novel, so I didn't dare to say anything easily. Watching "Human Immortal" again, the unfamiliar familiarity made me want to stop. Different stories, but the same meticulous craftsmanship. I couldn't bear to miss every word, and even had to go back and read it again. I have read many books, "Brother" is the only one that I can say I can't put down, and I feel "The Immortal" will be the only one. Come on, come home! All my books are subscriptions from Qidian. It is a sign of respect for the author and a reward for the author's hard work. I rarely participate in any activities. I just read books silently and cheer for the authors I like as always. All my emotions are a trace of satisfaction and a little peace of mind after subscribing. Guigui is a responsible writer. While I am deeply moved, I wish Guigui and his family a Happy New Year and good health! I wish all book friends who support Gui Gui that their wishes will come true and be happy!

Personal rating: 4.8 (Out of 5). Purely personal opinion about immortals: it needs to be carefully studied. The characters and conflicts in this book are not determined by personal personality. It is true that character creation needs some labels, but it is not handled well and it feels like the Riddler when expressed. But if placed in a social context, it feels reasonable to insinuate some things or people. This post was posted from the time I re-read it for the nth time until I saw the Liu family. The description of the rumor is a true portrayal of the modern network keyboard warrior. Then, considering the background of this story, it is impossible to have too high expectations for officials who are accustomed to the monarchy, especially in that era when whoever has the biggest fist has the right. Considering that the background is that before Wu Wan met Shen Nong, Shen Nong's life was short, and the human realm faced the dark background that the Heavenly Palace might attack at any time, and then Shennong's life extension was successful and the human realm rebounded, many things are actually understandable. As for Da Siming, there are already a lot of details, and I don't understand how the people who complained read the book. The framework of this book is great and continues the style of Guigui, but the shaping of the protagonist should actually be given more direct narration descriptions in the early stage, rather than a light touch, because the development of many plots depends on the character. If the key core character is not clearly explained, it will cause a sense of fragmentation. Judging from the book review area, there are quite a few readers who don't think well. There is a fine line between leaving space to invite imagination and the Riddler. This means that only those who have read it for the second time or re-read it after reading most of it can better understand the protagonist, and it is not friendly to readers who have read it for the first time. Of course, for readers with less social experience and less thinking about social issues, there is also the problem of seeing mountains as mountains. Finally, the reason why the senior brother is more addictive than the human immortal is because everyone basically knows about the story of the Gods, while the Classic of Mountains and Seas, Songs of Chu, and the myths of Chu are obviously niche. When the audience sees a refreshing story in a roughly familiar environment, it will make them more able to empathize, understand and imagine. Perhaps this book has tried its best to do a lot of addition and subtraction, but it is obviously not as good as the previous book. But I like this book very much because it is more realistic than the previous book. Finally, Guigui's Shenhui chapter is still so fresh in my memory. I hope that Guigui will get better and better, and the original intention of creating it will be fulfilled. It's good that you care about your readers' feelings, but you are a storyteller first. Once the story is told well, readers will naturally feel better.

As an old book friend, I still have different opinions and it depends on whether the book friend circle can be retained or not. The setting of Renxian——Wuwu, an astronaut from Blue Star, and an elite among astronauts. What are the characteristics of this kind of person? Decisive, bold and careful, with strong judgment, especially the ability to respond in times of crisis. Let's take a look at Wuwu... Everyone knows what's going on! Background - Classic of Mountains and Seas + Shangshu + Songs of Chu. In fact, this structure is much better than that of senior brother, but in fact I feel that senior brother has fully utilized the not very high-quality core - Fengshen. It is a great pity that the strange beasts in the Classic of Mountains and Seas end at the singing snake, and the famous allusions seem to be the same? Jingwei reclamation? Xihe bathing day? And the ugly one? It seems that the mastery of the Classic of Mountains and Seas series is not yet ready. Then we look at the rise of Donghuang, which makes me feel empty. Basically, I got married, and then realized the story of Suiren family, and then I reached the top... It was so unexpected. Then, once you reach the outer world, you will know nothing. The dignified Emperor of Heaven relies on his own bell... This Emperor of Heaven is really a fool. I will continue writing when I have time. I hope I can still read it when I want to continue writing.

The thirty-seventh book is fully ordered, and the second one is returned. What can I say, overall it's okay. When I read the last two volumes, I basically skipped them. It felt a bit fragmented and a bit boring. Finally, regarding the heroine, Su Qing, who has the highest appearance rate in the whole story, really fell in love with her. Unfortunately, I didn't like the ending very much.

Are there any boring people browsing the book club? Take a rest, take a rest. See you at six o'clock tonight✋

Can I say something? 🙂 I haven't read this book at all, but I subscribed to it because of the author's senior brother 🤓🤓. Let's slaughter it when it's fattened up! Put it in the corner and subscribe

Tu Yile

How can I put it, the previous plot is a bit bland, and it feels like the conflicts are forced in, and the dialogue is not handled very well. It feels like it is a one-man show of the protagonist, which is too smooth. Except for the "see", "only see that", "listen" and other connections, it is a bit stiff, and the "!" Is a bit out of the ordinary. There are also some character treatments, such as the old sect leader who cannot survive one chapter. Does it feel like the pace is too fast, forcing the protagonist to act? Also, there is no need to come back with a sentence every time he performs an action. Sometimes it is good to leave suspense. Maybe it can be regarded as a kind of narrative style, but overall it is very good. After all, the feature is not in the plot, but in the author's unique language style and lighthearted and funny daily life.

Dear author, I have some feelings after reading it, and I want to give you feedback. In fact, when Wuwu faces these big bosses, I think it is better to give him more of his own instinctive reaction, rather than something deliberately displayed. It is true that Wuwu is not an ordinary creature, and the era and experience of many innate gods may not be as much as what Wuwu experienced in his previous life. However, among the senior brothers, it is reasonable to show a similar behavior in front of the bosses because the bosses, such as Senior Brother Xuandu, did not understand the personality and habits of Changshou when they first came into contact with Changshou. However, Da Siming, Tu Shen, and Di Kui, no matter what, all more or less understand and even understand some of the depths of Wuwu. At this time, writing about Wuwu showed something like three parts fear and three parts anger, and Da Siming and the others still took it seriously, which made people feel a bit frivolous and hasty, which was not very reasonable. Of course, I don't know how to write it more appropriately, but after reading it, I feel that it's a little off-putting to be so out of the situation and lack some of my own reactions, but to be able to show some more obvious reactions that give the other party a huge hint. These are just some of my own feelings. I hope everyone will understand. If the majority of book friends have reasons for correction, I will be very happy to accept it. At the same time, if there are book friends who feel the same as me, I also hope that our joint efforts can help authors see our feedback and become better.

Although I don't have many monthly votes, I still want to make a difference

I feel like it's a bit tasteless recently, so I'll keep it for now.

Human Immortal, I have been listening to this book for a long time. Let me tell you my feelings. I also came from this book. The protagonist of this book gave me a very reluctant feeling. Whenever I use the modern value system to look at problems, I always feel so out of place. When dealing with the human realm, I basically look at it with modern people's thinking. Although there is a way of doing as the Romans do, I have never fully integrated into it. Let's talk about the heroine. Although she is a single heroine, she still has less scenes as usual. (Miao Miao, whose name is currently unknown, has more scenes 🙂.) Guigui also said that the subsequent scenes will gradually increase, and there will be more scenes. Limited to my own imagination, I really can't imagine from what aspect, can I come in, silently be by my side, and accompany the longest love confession? Parting in life or death? To predict what will happen next, it depends on how the turtle is written. At present, the book has a lot less humor. The book is indeed becoming more and more serious, but I personally feel that it has lost its original taste. The pig's feet seem to be stable, but in fact they are not. The book will still slowly follow. The styles of the immortals and the senior brothers may seem a bit similar, but in fact they are quite different. One has no general script framework, and uses modern thinking to build its own ideal system through self-expression. The other framework lays out the art of conferring gods, recruiting people, rewriting the script, and finally building a system of order. The same thing is that they all want to build a better order system.

It was well written, and I read dozens of chapters, but it somehow lacked a sense of immersion.

This immortal is too serious X There is something wrong with this Yellow Emperor√

A few small comments The plot transition is a bit stiff, between events and events, and between characters and characters.

Thoughts on finishing the book The Immortal is finally finished. I have been following it for a long time. I have to say that compared to my senior brother, Gui Gui's writing skills have increased, and many of his expression techniques have become much more mature. However, I still feel that the book Gui Gui Renxian is not perfect enough. The whole story tells the story of Wu Wang entering and exiting the black hole. However, from living in the human realm to the Emperor of Heaven and then to the outer world, the framework feels a bit large and the sense of fragmentation is a bit strong. The idea of ​​a black hole is thrown out in the end, which is reasonable, but it is inevitable that there will be some illusions that the story has not been finished. After all, it is written by the same author, so it is inevitable that Renxian and Senior Brother will compare it. To be honest, as far as writing stories is concerned, the story about Senior Brother feels better. Renxian always feels that he has taken a step too far and is losing his temper. However, under overall control, it can actually be regarded as a good novel. I hope Guigui takes good care of his injuries and continues to work hard!

There is too much chatter, and most of the charter is boring topics, which feels very bad and the pace is dragging.

He is really the best starting point writer The writing style is gorgeous and simple, it seems to be straightforward but in fact it hides mysteries, it slowly deepens and is very contagious. No delays, no delays, Extremely friendly to readers, no airs at all This book is bound to be a hit, but the time has not come yet, so we need to work harder on the operation.

OK, it took me two and a half weeks to listen to him, alas (╥ω╥`)

Which boss has the cover of a fairy novel? Send it out and show it to me 🥺

"On top of the jade feet is a thin light green skirt. Because of the forward posture, the skirt of the skirt has not completely fallen down. The light green skirt fits the exquisite figure; the bright eyes are glowing with a faint light blue light, the tip of the nose is small, the lips are thin, and the eyelashes are glowing A shallow arc. " [Cangxue vs. Jingwei] You can only vote for one of them. Whoever leaves a message first will vote for him by default

I cried, my aunt is gone, wuwuwu

Dragon suite building! Write down what you want, the simpler it is, the higher the success rate of adoption! Name + nickname + gender + preference + age, etc.

"In the shade of a tree not far away, Lin Suqing was sitting on a lounge chair, holding a folding fan and shaking it gently. She seemed to have the attitude of a worldly rich lady. Unfortunately, her freshness and beauty made her somewhat indifferent to fireworks, and she always lacked a bit of worldly flavor." [Lang Guduo vs. Lin Suqing] You can only vote for one of them, and you will vote for whoever leaves a message first

My name is Lin Suqing, a girl who has experienced hardships since childhood but is always optimistic. I was born in an ordinary family. When I was six years old, there was a war in my hometown and I was forced to flee home with my parents. I often suffered from cold and hunger along the way until I met an ugly old man. The ugly grandfather said that I was spiritual and suitable for cultivating immortals, and asked me if I would like to become his teacher and cultivate immortality. I didn't know what cultivating immortals was, so I just asked, "Grandpa Ugly, can cultivating immortals eat enough for every meal?" I got a positive reply and happily agreed. Grandpa Chou gave my family some money, and we settled down nearby. The old Taoist said he would let me stay with my parents for another three years, and then he would take me to practice immortality after three years. Three years is really a short time. Until Grandpa Ugly arrived, all the laughter and laughter seemed like yesterday. My mother was very reluctant to leave and asked me if I must go to cultivate immortality? I answered "I must go". Because I know that people should repay kindness, Grandpa Chou helped me back then, and I will go to practice immortality to repay him. I followed Grandpa Chou to a mountain peak. Grandpa Chou said this would be my future home. Although the place is simple, I am very satisfied because I am such a person who is easily satisfied. The days of cultivating immortals are really boring, and every day is a repetitive life, but I don't complain, because I want to repay Master (Grandpa Ugly) in the future after cultivating immortals. Three years later, the master brought back a baby boy, saying that he was a poor boy who had been wiped out by his enemies. He asked me to take good care of him and become my junior brother in the future. Looking at the sleeping baby boy, I felt very sorry for him, so I took great care of him. When I was a baby, my junior brother was cute and annoying at the same time. He was very clingy to me, which made me very happy. But when one of them let him sit on my neck, he actually peed all over my neck. What was even more annoying was that he hiccupped and laughed. In this way, I have lived with my junior brother for more than ten years, and he has become more and more handsome as he grows older. I feel like I am raising a child and a husband. At the same time, it was with his company that my life was no longer boring, but full of happiness. I became more and more dependent on my junior brother. I thought that this kind of life could last forever, until my master brought another teenage girl.

Guigui spent a lot of effort to create a portrait of the protagonist~

"The little fairy opened his two chubby hands seriously, and soon fell into a tangle. Cold sweat broke out on his forehead, and the aura in his big eyes quickly faded. After a moment, the little fairy slowly turned around and looked at the elder, with no color in his eyes." [Dongfang Mumu vs. Ling Xiaolan] You can only vote for one of them. Whoever leaves a message first will be voted for by default