Peripheral Vision

Some thoughts on the "Ghost Case" volume: 1. Compared with the fantasy genre of "Senior Brother" and "Human Immortal" written before getting back to business, if I switch to the science fiction genre and the detective genre, the change may be a bit big. I felt that the description of the case was a bit "overwhelming" and the language was not clear and concise enough. It was very confusing. After reading it once, I found it quite difficult to understand. To understand some of the details and clues of the ghost case, I feel like I need to watch it twice. In fact, this is also related to the number of words in a single chapter. When the Chinese text and content are not simple enough, too many words in a single chapter can easily cause mental stress during reading. It is recommended to divide it into chapters 2. Regarding the world framework, human beings have entered the interstellar and complete virtual reality stages. Let's not talk about a "brain-like ghost" that can cut off the network of any city on the home planet at will, even the power grid. A fleet capable of interstellar travel, facing a planet Euler whose technology is even one generation behind that of 2022. Due to "a certain declaration of abandoning the army", it has to clear out the indigenous people on Euler through the "Titan" game in virtual reality. Isn't this nonsense? The fleet can be wiped out by firing a pulse cannon, or the Self-Defense Forces on the fleet can clear it. Still need to clear it through "player"? Isn't this equivalent to remote virtual control of mechas? This can be directly controlled by a program or controlled by a single person and multiple lines. Does it still require players? 3. In terms of characters, there may be a little more description of Wang Ze, the little secretary, and Lin Meizi. I feel that the characters of He Qiu are not established. The heroine plot has been buried. Whether a heroine is needed or not will probably depend on the plot and readers' reactions. The identity of the girl on the "blind date". There is a high probability that Sister Lin will not be the murderer. 4. The subsequent plot uses Wang Ze's cases in each star cluster to show the struggle between the major star clusters. The third star cluster is an evil force, and the sixth star cluster is most likely a lawful camp. The final boss of this book: either the civilization of other galaxies, the third star cluster, or artificial intelligence. If Pig's Feet wants to play a role in the war between star clusters, it must have its own forces and fleet. Otherwise, personal power is really weak, and personal life is also very fragile, and there are too many ways to assassinate you. So the general plot of this book: the ghost case in the prologue, the cases between various star clusters in the middle period to show the ugliness between star clusters, and the inheritance of Tianze Group and personal fleet in the later period. Finally: boss battle, ending: the technology and hope of human civilization continue to develop deeper into the universe

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Provincial flow: The world view is grand and the details are insufficient. The plot is slightly inferior to "Foundation" in the early stage, but better than "Beijing Fold" in the later stage. The sci-fi aspect is stronger than "Xiling Empire" and weaker than "Cyber ​​Heroes". —————————————— The world view is very rigorous, and some assumptions are very reasonable, but there are almost no details. The impact of thousands of years of changes on human society is not reflected at all, giving people the feeling that it is not thousands of years but decades later. When I introduced the setting in the early stage, it felt like "Foundation" and "Cyber ​​Heroes", which were profound, concise and powerful; but when the plot advanced in the later stage and entered the social level, the details of social life (perhaps because of the fear of discovering loopholes) were not as unexpected and natural as those in "Foundation" and "Sword of the Dawn". I can only say that the ending is more reasonable and profound than "Beijing Fold". If "Walking Alone in the Abyss" does well, it may become a "return science fiction"; if it does not do well, it may just be "return disguised as science fiction"

La la la new book Yu Guang! Rush, rush, rush

Can't even quasi-platinum save science fiction?

School starts tomorrow, I'll try my best. I hope I can see 20+ unreads during the holidays. Love is gone (｀ω´)

I feel a bit reluctant to finish the story. This story is really great and shocking. I have to say that Guigui's writing style is very good and the plot pattern is great. However, Guigui only wrote this case story. The people in the story are still continuing and will meet again. They are all alive and well. The characters in the whole story are vivid and flesh-and-blood. Although some character descriptions are only a few words, they express extraordinary charm. There are no heinous bad guys, only the greed and interests of the human heart. The story is very real and has a strong sense of substitution. For those of you who are still writing articles, you can start reading. It's a story worth reading. See you next time for the next book! Also, wow wow, I like our ghost so much, this image is not like our boy "Jhin" hahaha, isn't it very handsome!

A mere 200,000 words, all must be ordered

Yu Guang currently has two chapters a day, updated at 12 noon and 8 pm~ Agui is writing science fiction for the first time, thank you all for supporting (bow down) If you have any comments and suggestions, you can leave a message in the chapter and book review, or you can directly poke Aguida~ Thank you again for your support and look forward to progress...

Leave note~ Sorry everyone, I have to ask for leave before it is put on the shelves 😭 But Agui had a physical examination this morning and caught a cold and felt dizzy in the afternoon. He tried again and again, but he still couldn't write tonight's update, so he can only ask for leave once~ The assistant will urge him to complete the next chapter at noon tomorrow and try to complete the update after it is put on the shelves~ Bow and slip away...

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Platinum feels stable this year. The popular candidates are Guigui and Xiaolong, the newspaper seller. It is possible that all three of them will get platinum 😂

The author has written so many books, why is he still a master? Why not platinum yet? I have written so many books, but none of them have become platinum yet.

Please take care of the book review section. There are a bunch of advertisements that involve obscenity and pornography. If you see this, don't show mercy. Report everything that should be reported. They are all fake.

I find that many people nowadays have begun to switch to writing science fiction.

I hope the author can read my comments and not delete them yet. Thank you. If the book you strongly recommend is someone else's book, I will feel very admired, even if it is written by my own trumpet. If what you highly recommend is your own, I think many people will ignore the quality of the book itself and feel uncomfortable and abandon the book simply because you wrote it yourself? So I think, just recommend, you don't have to specifically recommend a book you wrote, or you can just recommend all your books. If you have finished reading, thank you very much. It is just a suggestion. If you don't accept it, please delete it, otherwise it will affect the evaluation of other readers.

When will the new book be released? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

Let me tell you here, because some things have not been handled well, the new book has been delayed. The new book is probably scheduled to be released on May 1st. We will see you there during the May 1st holiday!

Is it true that no one believes that the author simply wants to write...

Guigui Yuguang's new book is released. Please support it by collecting it and voting for it. You have one vote and I have one vote. Guigui will make his debut tomorrow!

170,000 Words is theoretically a standard medium-length novel. . But, in the Internet literary circle. .

What's the meaning? ! Is this book a waste? !

... The daily introduction is really just a daily guide, Chapter 47, I have stopped everything, but I still come here, I have taken it.

Laughing to death, how can this kind of novel be worthy of science fiction?😆😆😆

A science fiction and supernatural novel, the plot is very good, la la la, has everyone read the book?

I just finished watching Senior Brother. It was relatively short, so I came to check it out first. I didn't expect it to be more to my taste than Senior Brother. I like it! It is said that there is going to be a series? I looked through the list of works. Is there anything there? So when will the sequel be released? Online reminder😁

Now that I think about it, this book is setting the stage for Walking Alone in the Abyss.

It's so short, although it's exciting, with a beginning and an end, ups and downs, but, it's so short, I've been reading online articles for a long time, but I'm still not used to short stories But I'm not afraid of dragging out the plot in order to make up the word count, but still, it's so short.

"Ender's Game" crime-solving version

My feeling is pretty good, I can't say it's excellent, but it's already pretty good.