Earth's First Sword

First of all, when these people proposed this idea, they had no experience of thinking. Even if they did, they were very few. Why do you say that? Because if you think about it a little carefully you can understand why the protagonist (the author) does what he does. First point, the lethality of early monks is roughly equivalent to more than controlled knives and less than firearms. Whether it is controlling knives or firearms, the state must strictly control them, and the same goes for Taoism. As for why supervision is necessary, normal people know it, so I won't elaborate on it here. (If you really don't understand, please consult the state) As for why the protagonist can practice Taoism, let's continue the first point. Soon after the spiritual energy was revived, the monastic community contacted the country and established the legal monastic status of the monastic community through negotiations. In layman's terms, the protagonist obtains a monastic license. The second point, which is also an issue that many people struggle with, is fairness. Many people think that it is selfish for the protagonist to practice Taoism by himself but not to let ordinary people practice. This idea shows that the way these people think about problems is quite immature - just like those extreme political organizations (such as extreme environmentalists, extreme feminism, extreme people of color rights protection associations, etc.), They only look at the appearance of one thing. What we should pay attention to is, where do these Taoist practices come from? In the final analysis, they were inherited by all the disciples after the spiritual energy was cut off, and they were passed down through countless hardships. And have ordinary people contributed to the inheritance of these exercises? Of course not. Then, when the spiritual energy comes to be revived, as ordinary people who have not made any contribution to the inheritance of Taoism, what qualifications do they have to practice Taoism? Similarly, the so-called "Holy Fire One" stole the Daozang of his master to allow ordinary people to practice Taoism. I dare to ask him if he has ever thought that no matter how hard you work, you will get something in return. Only those who pay will be rewarded. People in the Taoist sect have worked hard for thousands of years in exchange for spiritual energy to revive the world. How can ordinary people who have made no contribution enjoy the same treatment? Dare I ask, is this fair? The third point that needs to be corrected is that the country did not completely prohibit ordinary people from practicing. Later, it also promoted universal exercises for all people to practice. Therefore, the protagonist's approach is more like a kind of protection to prevent ordinary people from practicing the exercises indiscriminately due to lack of knowledge and going crazy and causing social instability. The fourth point,... The administrator can add some skills 😁

As an online reader of 15+ years, I think this book is quite interesting, written in the Reiki Resurrection stream. The author's writing and logic are very good. I especially like the character of the senior sister, and the occasional poems interspersed with it don't feel awkward. If you want to talk about flaws, I personally feel that the climax and passionate part may not be that exciting? It feels a little inconsistent when playing Monk Rufeng, maybe it's my feeling that's wrong. I finished it in one day, and I didn't find any overall problems. I hope the author's fundamentals won't collapse in the future. The chapter transitions in the plot are also quite good. Come on, author. (I personally started reading online articles when I was in elementary school. Now that I am a graduate student, I finally have the ability to support genuine versions. The hobby of online articles has been preserved. Friends are welcome to chat with me)

Don't be fooled just by looking at the title of the book. This is definitely not a science fiction novel, but a novel about modern immortality. There are not many novels about modern immortality, but it is even more difficult to write well. I first learned about this book three months ago when I was doing the daily book data report. I saw on the new book potential list that "The First Sword on Earth" had a potential value of more than 4,000, ranking first. From 17 fans at the time to 390,000 now, it was a complete leap, which shows that this book is extraordinary. What is this book mainly about? In fact, the priorities of this book are very clear, and there is basically no obstacle in reading. Although the plot of the article is relatively slow, it is "what it says and what it says makes sense!" It provides more foreshadowing in the early plot and the color of the rounded characters. First of all, this novel begins to tell the story of a reborn person who returned from the future to his 17-year-old age. He foresaw that the spiritual energy of the future world would be revived, so our protagonist Wang Sheng embarked on a journey to become a disciple and become an immortal, and set foot on Wudang Mountain... Why Wudang Mountain? Okay, in response to this question, let's think about it first. Which places in our real life do you think are more famous for these debuts? "Wudang, Shaolin". To become a Buddhist in Shaolin, you need to be tonsured, and in Wudang, you need to become a Taoist to cleanse yourself from the dust. If it were me, and I chose one of the two, I would definitely practice Taoism, and I would definitely not be able to lose my hair in this life. This apprenticeship is very powerful. I worshiped a "big monster" who ranked among the top five in the protagonist Wang Sheng's previous life. With such a powerful master, why wouldn't the future of the protagonist Wang Sheng be bright? In fact, when talking about this, you may say: "This kind of routine is very common, what is so interesting about this article?" Indeed, if it were just these simple contents, Shinya I would definitely not read it in detail. After grinding for about two hours, Shinya pushed the reading progress of this book to twenty chapters, and suddenly discovered that in addition to the delicate portrayal of the characters, there is another key point in the article, senior sister? ? ? The protagonist Wang Sheng's senior sister is also among the top ten in the memory of the protagonist's previous life. The title of "Speechless Fairy" must have aroused the interest of male readers in reading. Even Shinya's remarks and comments about this chapter in the article In the forum, I saw a series of speeches that would be unbearable without the role of senior sister. Indeed, the author's portrayal of the heroine "Mu Wanxuan" is completely realistic, just like having such a senior sister next to you. Although she is not good at expressing, she can send emoticons! ! ! Three consecutive exclamation marks, what is the meaning of posting emoticons? It is not a cultivator Maybe the senior sister will post this emoticon when she is happy When she is sad, she will post this It's really hard to imagine that the cultivators we traditionally know are playing with mobile phones. In fact, this is also a major feature of the work. On the one hand, it is close to our world. It feels like there is a group of immortal cultivators in reality. They can use it in our daily life but focus more on cultivating immortals. So, after reading this, you will find that the work has a great sense of substitution, and suddenly you have the urge to cultivate immortality. Talking about the senior sister, and although the senior sister Mu Wanxuan was not outstanding in the early stage, in the later stage, after the spiritual energy was revived, the fairy temperament was added, the pure original intention was added, and the image of a true fairy was portrayed, and the main character was always the backbone. Although it was still a blank slate in terms of emotions, readers could no longer hold it. This can be regarded as the author's success in characterization, and the senior sister can also send emoticons, which is very interesting to think about. Character analysis is like this. This is considered the core of the work. It requires a certain amount of writing power to portray the characters. Otherwise, it is usually substituted from the plot. However, the author's senior sister Mu Wanxuan's approachable fairy spirit, the protagonist Wang Sheng's mature setting, and the master Qing Yanzi's understanding master feel like an ideal character, which perfectly penetrates the whole text. The biggest highlight of this article is the character design. The plot is also refreshing, but more importantly, the plot is reasonable and reasonable. Therefore, the vivid and vivid picture embellishes the perfect character, and it is a masterpiece. If you want to read a work with rich characters, this novel is definitely worth a try. It also comes with a senior sister who can send emojis.

In the early stage, I spent a lot of space describing the senior sister's excellence, high talent, and ranking in the top ten. However, a random second-hand character with neither name was worthy of the title and was as high as the senior sister. During the battle, he forcibly subdued the senior sister's intelligence and let the enemy run away, leaving behind troubles in the future. He did not know how to correct the losses he had suffered, and he was poisoned.

After reading Chapter 80, I felt that the plot logic was too poor. Or the author didn't think deeply about the worldview in the book at all, so I gave up on the book. A few questions 1. It has only been 3 years since Reiki returned. How did the evil cultivator manage to be integrated already? You can even send two Dao Fei Realm powerhouses to grab books from other cults. 2. The whole country is too stable, with no turmoil at all. The cults have all been integrated, but the state still leads the team to investigate the practitioners with ordinary people? Aren't the higher-ups curious about cultivation? Is there no need for immortality? There are so many uncontrolled cultivators that no regulations have been issued for three years? Not a single cultivator under my command can do it. Combined with the first question, do cults only play by themselves? They are all trying to seize the property of the businessmen below. Considering that the top government officials have no control over the power of cultivation, why is there no turmoil at all? Or why is the cult incapable of taking the upper-level route? 3 Still regarding policy issues, Reiki has been back for three years, and all kinds of small organizations know how to use Qigong to make money. Even if they feel that advanced cultivation ability is like controlling firearms, why is the country not utilizing Reiki at all? Even if it is just to strengthen the body and improve the basic quality of the people. At least it's impossible for someone with a little bit of inheritance to come out and stir up trouble, right? 4. Regarding the issue of monsters in the book, at least I saw chapter 80. The ghosts have come out, but where are the monsters? Never appeared at all

It's well written, but don't read it without opening this chapter. There are a lot of nonsense in it, and there are always some nonsense that uses their narrow vision to define the state's control over the early exercises, and then gradually popularize them later. Isn't it better to stabilize society slowly? The country must be in chaos and people's lives are like grass to meet their psychological expectations. Why, are they all anti-human? The idiots always use their narrow vision to define everyone's behavior, and it must be based on what they think. If the force is high, it must be against the country. If it is not, it will be useless. Doing good to the country means licking it? I think the country has not failed you, allowing you to grow up to this size safely, with enough food, warm clothes, and education. It's not like in war-torn areas where people may be gone at any time. Isn't a peaceful country bad? How did the nine-year compulsory education teach those things?

I'm really sick. I can't stand it for more than 60 chapters. Why should I design such a disgusting plot? It only makes me feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's outlook on life

This book can be summed up in eight words: it is poisonous to read, but it is a pity to discard. The first half of the book is quite good, but towards the end it becomes more and more forced to create a blunt plot. It gives people a set outline, and then continues to piece together the plot to achieve the development of the story. After entering the infinite starry sky, many logics are sometimes difficult to justify or very far-fetched. If you look at it with your brain, there are still many loopholes. It's really a pity😅

A very good book. I have forgotten when I started reading it. Anyway, I have been reading it. We all like to scroll down from the ranking list when reading books. IMHO, if this is the case, this book is seriously underestimated. I hope for better 🙂

The writing is okay, but the storyline is hamstrung and full of flaws. If old book friends read this, they will become more and more angry. There are all kinds of unreasonable things. For example, the rebirth of a pig's trotters and the practice of training a few years in advance are actually a 50-50 ratio! ! ! ! There are many other things, I really want to complain about them

Wherever I read this book, I felt it was average and there were a lot of places that were a bit funny. First, you can cultivate immortality, but you still don't believe in luck. Second, in terms of realm, everything can be related to the Tao realm. Doing this will disturb your own Tao realm, and doing that will also disturb the Tao realm. Then just stop practicing and just sit at home and sleep every day. Third, the sword intention to kill all living beings is still not dared to be used. The reason is that it will disturb one's own Taoist realm, the world of cultivation, where the strong live and the weak die. You do these things. Why, I insist on creating a good-natured male protagonist. If nothing else, let's just use an analogy. If we, the post-90s generation, can become immortals, I dare say that they will also be decisive and killing people. Something with a slightly more murderous aura, eh, it has to do with the state of mind, and it can't be used. If you are responsible, you will go crazy. I want to laugh when I look at it. There is also the emotional drama in this book, which I have always felt was not very good. The male and female protagonists have been practicing together, and in the end, they inexplicably have to protect the female protagonist's relationship, which is the kind of love at first sight. Anyway, I don't believe that there are men who remain the same for hundreds or even thousands of years.

A few words of small talk The spiritual energy recovery at the beginning has gone a bit wrong and now it has turned into urban immortality But it may be that the author just wants to write about urban immortality But urban immortality often has a very cliched plot Kicking the American emperor on the left and beating Japan on the right Almost every book has this routine It's really very boring You can also see the signs from the author's first volume The next volume will definitely be It's not impossible to go after your heart and fight against Japan But it starts from too many clichéd and standardized novels In my opinion, the rise of a great power should be political and economic grinding and competent diplomacy rather than just talking about Japanese with crappy lines all day long Looking at the protagonist with a livid face, and then the protagonist is arrogant and one-man enemy country This kind of routine is not perfect. There are also thousands of books If you really want to be an enemy of ten thousand people The theme of city seems to be dispensable Now it has brought out the concept of earth shelter and aliens coming Nothing new The author's writing style and wording are very complete Many chapters are fascinating The interaction with the senior sister often makes people smile It is not bad to open a harem without brains It can be read I really want to write a more original Cultivation of Immortality The previous protagonist's hard work in cultivation will not level up too quickly Overall, it is very comfortable to watch But it is best to reduce the weight of the novice routines The overlord in Xiaobai's novel is still Xiaobai's novel But this is really my favorite Cultivation of Immortality in recent times The monthly votes have been filled in these two months Come on, author

It seems that the author wanted to write this book in a humorous style? . Unfortunately, I feel that it is a bit inconsistent. The protagonist is reborn. In everyone's impression, this kind of protagonist is the kind of person who lives for himself. He dies once and comes back again. He will give up everything in order to survive. Moreover, the protagonist prepared for four months. In the early stage, he created a kind of person who does everything possible to become stronger in order not to be as mediocre as in his previous life. In this context, it is better to use a serious style. I said very seriously at the beginning that in order to become stronger, I would give up all female sex, but then the article turned around and became humorous again. I don't know if the author wanted to create a contrasting effect to create laughter, but unfortunately I couldn't laugh, I just felt weird. And about the parents, why do people always talk about Qidian Orphanage, but many people adopt this setting? It's because emotional drama is difficult to write and it's not flattering. It would be nice if the parents can really be dealt with in the early stage. Anyway, I don't see the role of parents at the moment. I came in because of the recommendation. To be honest, I was a little disappointed with what I wrote earlier. The character creation was not good. If the protagonist is the kind of character who has prepared for four months and gave up everything just for an opportunity to step into the extraordinary, the writing style should be very serious. Really, there is a great horror between life and death. After dying once, many things can be given up in order to survive.

Drive high and go low, there are no big poisons but a lot of small poisons. I am really drunk 🙂🙂🙂

The plot of "Master Wife" is quite disgusting and disgusting. A man abandons his wife and children after decades and now wants to get back together. I guess the protagonist just calls the scumbag a scumbag and then gets into a fight with him. Why does a woman run around and kneel down and lick her? Men and women are now equal, right? ! Moreover, it is annoying to make decisions on the master's personal feelings behind his back. Also, the daughter's sense of existence is too low, so what's the use? Is it used to compare with the protagonist how talented he is and how idiotic ordinary people are?

The first half is rich in content and interesting. The master, master's wife, and senior sister are all lively and have their own characteristics. The overall content can be rated 80+. Is it to catch up on the number of updates? The standard has really dropped sharply, and the sex has tended to turn into a clichéd and hot-blooded sex novel. The senior sister has transformed into a vase role, and the master has begun to become a background board. All of these are to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness, and the character characteristics are disappearing. Looking at the plot, there are always some unexpected little surprises in the front, and there are anecdotes in the back. You can guess the plot just by looking at the questions. In addition, the flower growers have a monopoly on Qi, and the master is still a genius. He cannot suppress the overall situation in the face of external provocations, which is inconsistent. The plot is for the sake of the plot.

After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the Holy Fireman is a selfish villain. He just wants to make big news before he dies so that the world will remember him. You also said that although I am an abandoned disciple of Longhu Mountain, I will not give the secrets to the cult. You don't even think about what you did. You asked hackers to spread the secrets to the outside world. Are you so sure that no one in the cult will get the secrets? For the sake of all sentient beings in the world, bah.

I thought it was very interesting from beginning to end. Although sometimes the twists are not as expected, but this is life. Good luck, author.

Steady, steady, it's okay to update the two books more or less, as long as they don't end badly. Chasing both books

I've only read a few chapters, and it's not mysterious enough. I've just briefly touched on the highlights. After learning from a great master, the heroine appeared, and it was as if the thigh structure was already in place in the middle and late stages. Is this called seizing the opportunity of rebirth? The parents also described the characteristics and were unable to complain. About the protagonist's temperament after rebirth. This point must be grasped well. Hatred, love, and family affection are not necessarily things that need to be explained clearly at the beginning of the book. Of course, it is this kind of innocence that makes it easier for the author to write plot routines that he is good at. It does not conform to the popular logic of readers of this age group. In just a few chapters, there are two women. Write less about these embarrassing affairs. It would be better to take readers into the novel and mysterious world of Xianxia. I feel like a 31-year-old who has experienced tragedy would be like this? Create some logic, but control it poorly. Let's not talk about how miserable the previous life was. In this life, we will seize opportunities, but we can't thrive in a messy environment, right? Whatever an author's early stage is, that's how it will be, finalized. Later growth will also be based on this kind of logical understanding. It is recommended to refer to it, (Tani Xianglan's character name, there is evil spirit here, I picked up a piece of wilderness, a seed of immortality...) Critical hit: Immortal cultivation name, strange rebirth, spiritual energy recovery, this life is suave, and thrives in the thighs. The first in cultivation, the weapon is the sword. The protagonist is too narcissistic. But I have to say that the author's detailed and real-time description of the characters is very good. 🤫

I turned on the automatic subscription and became a master without realizing it (｡>ㅿ<｡). This is my first master at the beginning. Now I hope that the author can finish this book seriously and don't want it to be unfinished (the update speed is not important, I am also very Buddhist in reading books now). . . . After all, I still like this book very much. My senior brother also read it. It is very well written, but unfortunately it is not to my liking. . . Emmmm, the future is long, I wish the author a happy life 😁

Came here from senior brother. I feel that this book is not as robust and thorough as my senior brother's. . . I don't feel like a senior brother

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So-so. Some parts of the previous writing are confusing. I personally didn't like watching the later part. I thought the First Sword on Earth was always on Earth. Guys, you are out of the earth. I don't like reading this kind of story that only crams in words to upgrade the world.

This is from a senior brother and I think this book is also very exciting. This latest chapter feels like the story is almost over. The protagonist dies and the external demon dies, perfect.

I like the daily life between Wang Sheng and his senior sister. I don't like the younger junior sister who joined later because of the needs of the plot. But the plot is very good and the rhythm is not very tight. A good book.

The pace is too slow! I can't stand it anymore, it doesn't look like the protagonist at all.

I came from the comics, and the comics stopped updating after more than 260 chapters. Then I read the novels and wanted to compare which chapter the comics were, but I couldn't find it after checking for a long time. Then I compared them one by one, and I found that the pace of the comics is very fast. I complained at first about why the comic was so fast-paced. But after I came and read more than 60 pictures, I realized that the author wrote a lot of nonsense about the drama, and there was too much nonsense The first part was fine, but the comic omitted some details. Only later did I realize that the reason why the comic was so fast-paced was because the author was talking too much nonsense, not just about the drama. To be honest, when I read the comic, the style and plot were very good, but unfortunately the comic was discontinued after more than 260 chapters. The company went bankrupt. When I came back to read the novel, I found that there was too much nonsense. Some of the details that were omitted from the comics were also a wise move This is why so many people scolded abandoned them.

This book is well written. It is one of the few novels that can blend modernity and spiritual recovery well. However, in terms of character creation, especially the male protagonist, it is still very thorough. The character of the male protagonist is very simple, such as protecting his senior sister and protecting those around him, and taking revenge when he has a grudge. It's not that this kind of character is bad. This kind of character is necessary and correct, but it is very thin. When I see a beautiful senior sister who is not familiar with the world, and I have been with her for many years, and I am the only person of the same age who is with her, in the end, I just want to say that it is fine now, just let nature take its course? Of course, there is no problem in writing this way, and it is very consistent with the logic of the article. The protagonists in both lives are mature and devoted to the Tao, rejecting invitations from beautiful female classmates, etc. The foreshadowing before and after is sufficient and the logic is complete. But it's unreasonable and unreasonable. Is there really no male hormone left at all? The image of the senior sister is refreshing. Maybe the author is also thinking about how to advance the emotional line, so he wrote it like this. A reminder for latecomers, after reading more than a hundred chapters, the emotional line is basically not advanced. If you have requirements in this regard, please avoid it. Maybe this book review will change after I read it for a while. ------------------------------------------------- Update it, because I really want to see the daily life of Wang Sheng and senior sister, so I jumped to watch it. The novel is still treated as an article without emotional lines. The author probably has difficulty controlling the emotional plot in this book, so he uses a common technique: a short break is better than a newlywed (actually a long break). The previous Earth chapter was really exciting to watch and the writing was great. It can be said that it is one after another magnificent. The subsequent extraterrestrial chapter is also very well written. It breaks away from the routine of killing monsters and upgrading, and it can be regarded as the upper reaches of the Xiaobai novel.

After reading 200 chapters, I feel like I have no motivation to read except my senior sister. After reading through the comments, I almost feel sick. Well! ! Cute senior sister Could it be that the world view is too big and it will be difficult to control and write down later?