Talking About Taoism

Yes, it's great to unexpectedly find an educated person in an environment full of rubbish and novice writing.

I can't figure out who is the protagonist, Chen Zhong or Su Yuanming? I feel that if Chen Zhong is the protagonist, there is almost no sense of substitution. This is not to say that the old man cannot be substituted. The main reason is that at the beginning, Chen Zhong is about to die and wants to recruit a disciple. It makes me feel that Su Yuanming is the protagonist. As a result, Su Yuanming's role is too small and he does not look like the protagonist at all. In summary, it is a bit tasteless, a pity to abandon, and tasteless!

This book is very well written, but the setting has a fatal flaw, that is, there is a contradiction between advocating the ancients and depreciating the ancients, especially the recent debate on form and name and the five elements. On the one hand, it talks about innovation, but it cannot escape from the cage of Confucius and Lao. From another perspective, Shezi's supreme wisdom has not been attained, and the methods of becoming immortals have been lost even more since the Middle Ages, which shows that Confucius, Mencius, and Lao Zhuang did not become immortals at all. Therefore, when these descendants talk about the expositions of the ancestors, they act as if they are so correct that they cannot match them. Because the Five Elements Theory cannot become an immortal, they will overthrow it. Then why not directly overthrow the teachings of Confucius, Mencius, Lao and Zhuang in a more thorough way? They haven't become immortals either! Their doctrine is also wrong.

An imaginary fairy tale written in the late Eastern Han Dynasty? However, it seems that the ancient style is quite strong now. The author probably did not check this information too much.

Let me ask you who the protagonist is. At the beginning, it says that Chen Zhong is looking for a successor and his life is short. Later, he writes about Su Yuanming. It seems that he doesn't want to be the protagonist and is a bit confused.

To put it bluntly, he is quite particular about his writing style. After checking the information, I can't explain it clearly. Ahem, the settings are complicated and contradictory. I can't go up or down. I'm stuck in the middle.

Coming from Red Ji, I haven't seen it yet. Looking forward to it

After reading Chapter 7, I realized that this book had potential for literary youth, so I abandoned it.

The author wanted to write something grand, but he couldn't. At some point, the protagonist's spirit would be suppressed, and the book seemed a little cramped. All in all, after reading it, I felt that the book had a good framework, but lacked content, making it feel empty.

As soon as I saw this name, I had to read it. I'm really tired of those books that start with so-and-so. I really don't know why people like to take such low names now.

It's a rare thing that a good fairy tale has entered the palace. It's a pity, it's a pity!

Although I can't read it and don't have the patience, I still hope that this book will continue to be written, although it seems impossible that it won't be updated for a month.

Why haven't you updated it yet? I'm so excited waiting for it! ! !

The writing style and the plot are both good, but for an online novel, the elderly natives really lack a sense of substitution. This setting will reject a large number of readers. If you add a little time-travel attribute, your performance and income will be much better than now.

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Writing Hole Filling Festival Wishing Season"} I want to see how Chen Zhong eradicates the Si family

When you put on the incense, the flowers fall away helplessly...

Kexiao, is there still hope for another update? 😭😭

Keep reading! Looking forward to reading more!