I Really Have the Appearance of an Immortal

I feel like the writing is very good, I hope to keep it up

Let me teach you a little anti-virus trick. In any novel where the character appears to be the protagonist, the heroine in the back, and a bunch of supporting girls at the end, if he runs as far as he can, he may not only become a eunuch, but also have a highly toxic content that can kill him.

The Daluo Immortal is the immortal who is under the Sanqing sect, such as Zhu Bajie. The immortal who is not under the Sanqing sect is the Taiyi Immortal, such as Sun Wukong.

This kind of book title is also called so-and-so. Believe me, it is absolutely a bad book and I can't even put it down!

The second chapter was written too eccentrically. After all, he was also the master who led you to the path of immortality. He came back to explain your funeral arrangements with all his strength, but ended up with all kinds of messy jokes. He really didn't deserve to be a son of a man.

It's a good book, eunuch?

I don't understand the meaning of the author's setting. The protagonist is set to be a genius stream + casual cultivator. Shouldn't he practice and develop in the early stage? It's not like ordinary people, the protagonist has ordinary talents and wants to fight for opportunities! The protagonist is a casual cultivator with no background and no ability! Kill the disciples of the top demonic sect, and then there will probably be a supporting role to take revenge. The protagonist will leapfrog and kill him, and the routine will continue! I have no desire to continue watching!

I think the nicknames under the introduction should be removed, they are stupid. I almost missed something good because of this, silly author, so stupid (ｰ̀εｰ́)

After reading Chapter 15, I just ran away. It's no big deal that the great supernatural power was swallowed up by a little demon. No matter how fierce it is in the front, it will be too much in the back.

There are five kinds of immortals, gods, humans and ghosts in heaven and earth. The most superior ones are the immortals, which refer to the immortals who have ascended to the Great Luotian. The immortals are the highest.

The true fire of the sun, the true water of taiyin, all together can't defeat a little snake demon in the foundation-building stage. No wonder he rushed to grandma's house!

There are three books, two of which have more than 10,000 words, and they are all test articles. Where do you fall short? Are you confused? Can't you even refine your own words?

Seeing that the true fire of the sun cannot deal with an ordinary snake demon should be a poisonous point for many people, but each book has its own setting. The settings of other books are substituted into this novel. . . Very outrageous. . . . But just look at this book's setting of the True Fire of the Sun. . This great magical power is a relatively powerful skill in the Huang Ting stage. . . Then the golden elixir is a pure waste skill, or it can be strengthened later. After all, in my opinion, the true sun fire in the book is not obtained through cultivation, but a magical power that is born with it. How do you strengthen it? The strength is shown here, it is really overwhelming. For me, the poisonous point is the expressiveness. The benchmark for great supernatural powers is Huang Ting. . . And Huang Ting is only on the second level. He has cheated but not fully opened.,,,, It is most difficult to not go up or down.

Chapter 1: Extremely poisonous and disgusting in appearance

The magical power of hanging a sheep's head and selling dog meat. . .

Don't just use the framework of novels such as Journey to the West when writing immortals. Use the framework of novels such as Journey to the West to write the beginning of the mortal style. Especially the protagonist starts with the magical magic weapon spirit root of the Journey to the West style. After being able to become a fairy, he is a boss who is very good at fighting against the five scum. It is like holding a nuclear bomb launcher to attack Japan and having to fire hundreds of rounds to defeat it. After one shot, he should basically surrender.

Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?

I regret not opening the comment section before reading...

Genius flow, no plug-ins, invincible appearance, relying on his own physique and magical powers, which can be regarded as a golden finger. Compared with the same old waste + plug-ins, it looks much more comfortable. The writing is steady and playful, and the plot advances slowly, but it is not as brainless as the invincible novel.

I almost gave up the book when I saw the appearance, but the genius stream follows, so I can accept it. The trash stream plus the appearance has high requirements for writing. You can look at it later. It is quite good. I think it is the female character who doesn't know how to handle it. She still hesitates or talks about being honest about her body. Come on, author... Add a comment...

Good books are rare, support

The author is a trumpet. Does anyone know what the old book is called?