All Can Be Sewn

To be honest, this one is more stinky than the previous ones. Why? Because the protagonists in the previous books did not have omniscience and omnipotence at the beginning, this one does. It has omnipotence. The current universe is the protagonist's home base, and there is no interference from external forces at the same level. This means that everything happening currently is known and allowed by the protagonist. For the sake of the birth of the motherland in my heart, I let it go through the same tragedy and suffering again. Ha, this protagonist is a bit like an incompetent husband, and his almighty is like a decoration. A pure waste is worse than having no almighty. Secondly, Beng Tie was re-created. The characters in it were either clones of the protagonist or his creations. Those characters, especially the female characters, had no possibility of escaping the protagonist. What is the difference between the protagonist being in love with them and being in love with the doll Fiji Cup? The stench is so bad that the author's filter on Beng Tie's character is almost overflowing. To sum up, the protagonist's omniscience and omnipotence are a failure at the beginning, and this omnipotence is a bit low and low-level, and the mere problem of xinxing cannot be solved.

The biggest problem in the second volume is that Aying subconsciously thinks that everyone knows everyone when writing fan characters. In fact, just write them as original characters. The more you sew, the less inclusive readers will be and the more you have to write with the attitude of original novels.

The second volume is a bit unfriendly to people like me who don't play hardcore games.

I can only say that the writing style is very good, and the ideas and ideas are very interesting. I think the first volume is very good, and the second volume is also okay, and it is also quite good, but there is a certain threshold, that is, it is not very friendly to people who do not read Bengtie. And the most important thing is that even if you don't play Bengtie, your second volume has some problems, that is, there are too many characters. There are too many characters, and the names are all foreign names. As a result, most readers have two thresholds. You don't know the characters, but that's okay, you can search, but in your second volume, a large number of foreign names appear in a very short period of time. This is the second threshold. If you talk about the first threshold, you can search even if you don't know it. But in front of the second threshold, you have to search for a lot of names, and you have to write down the two thresholds, and you have screened out a lot of readers. The first threshold is acceptable, but the second threshold is difficult to accept. This is the problem of writing 😅

The first volume was okay, but the second volume was a mess.

The sewing of the second volume is too weird,,,

It's such a mess, how many people can see it? I just cut it off after being high for a while.

The second volume is too abstract. The style of painting changes.

Come on, author! , Cut it? Cut it? , I think it's pretty good-looking, the imagination is quite big, and the writing is good. Don't worry about the bad reviews.

. . How come one book is worse than the other?

The mess of second-game characters in the second volume gave me a headache, especially the fancy character names. I couldn't remember them at all. Can the author post some pictures?

It's been pretty good lately, and the second volume is getting better. The biggest obstacle in the second volume is the emergence of a bunch of golden people who don't know what they are doing. If you have time, you can consider repairing it.

I feel like the author could try a Western novel. I really like the plot of the barbarians in the Governor's novel. Now this article does have a lot of things stitched together as the title says, but to be honest, it's a bit tiring to read.

Is there anything else that needs to be corrected in this book?

I've opened a new book, it must be good

After the protagonist's main idea awakens, chaos emerges!

In addition to the official starting point, this is the 18th post. I want to be a real veteran and follow the author. Liu Ming is not a good person.

It's good to read, but the volume is too small. I caught up with the latest chapter in one day. The author should hurry up and update it.

I hope that I can write about the character of an omniscient and omnipotent person, and defeat all foreign gods.