My Stand-In Is Steve.

Let me evaluate this book, Invincible Infinite Streaming, which is disguised as a game system. I have read a lot of Invincible Infinite Streaming. The character creation of this book is very average, and there is almost no background introduction. Isn't it screening readers if you don't introduce the background? The protagonist's combat power is broken, and the rest can only be filled with useless plots. In short, it's just average.

After reading this book, let me talk about my feelings. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good, and the writing is smooth and interesting. The author Jun is also obviously an old MC player. Although, I still want to say it. The author's bacteria should pay attention to the issue of combat power (key point). The author's bacteria has not been released yet, but the protagonist's combat power is already visibly stronger (invincible). I know that maybe the author's bacteria wants to write about invincibility and daily flow. But the issue of combat power should be more or less paid attention to. (I think the author will write about Naruto later. Comparing the combat power of the protagonist, it is obvious that he is stronger than the six levels. In the end, no matter what he encounters, Steve will just cut through it like a vegetable. This may cause a loss of senses) Well, that's it for now. The author's writing is very good and there aren't many problems. As far as I can tell, there are only problems with combat power. If there are more words, "ahem", I'd better write more (who would think that a novel he likes to read has too many words?

Personally, I think it's pretty good, and the author is reading more and learning more. I still have a few suggestions for the protagonist in the Minecraft world: I think we can add an anthropomorphic module to Minecraft (the main world) or open another integration package dimension. After all, the protagonist is inevitably a bit boring and lonely alone. Whether it is a loyal wolf or a clingy cat, at least there is someone who can accompany the protagonist in the main world, right? Then talking about other worlds, it is still not good to reveal the original plot to the aboriginal world to a large extent. Let's not talk about the butterfly effect, but you should have been discovered by Ancient One when you entered the Marvel world. At least you were invited to have tea, right? As for the subsequent plot, I still have some expectations.

The first book I subscribed to from the browser to Qidian. It is also the first book I fully subscribed to. It's not that I don't read a lot of books, it's just that I can't afford to subscribe to them all, so I can only read them through the browser. But I started reading this book from a young age. I have subscribed to every chapter. Little by little, the book is really good. I look forward to Fang Mo's future travels. Also, the author, please update more, please improve it.

The protagonist can be crazy and perverted no matter how crazy he is. The more perverted he is, the more he likes to let his soul loose in the world of books. However, the role of a passer-by must be ruined. He must be slowly changed by the protagonist. What he said is awkward and normal for passers-by to understand, because the protagonist can no longer go back. This is nostalgia, and the words are meant for himself. I have heard that everyone is drunk and I am alone, just like Gintama, without Ginsang everyone is reliable. The style of painting is realistic, sad and painful. After the protagonist is present, everyone breathed a sigh of relief. The style of painting is funny. Hell, no matter how powerful the enemy and difficulties are on the other side, you are not afraid of it, because, Captain, I'm fucking here (Fang Mo)

If you really want to have fun and are a fun person, then this book is most likely suitable. After all, there are many jokes and the protagonist's behavioral and thinking patterns are quite neurotic But if you are a normal person, I actually don't recommend it. This book is about the settings of my world (abilities, items or things) It is very difficult to break down the relationship between reality and the world, and it is very broken. It cannot be thought through. Some of the things the protagonist does cannot be thought through. In fact, a lot of the content will appear boring and monotonous if you watch it too much. (To be honest, I feel that the setting of the stand-in is very strange. The sense of existence is too low and too low. It feels like it is better to be the protagonist Steve through the soul. , After coming to reality, after being realized, he will be a normal person) There is also the problem of time flow speed between the game world and other worlds. The author's explanation is that if you directly locate through some major events, there will be no problem of time flow speed difference. Although this may not be a problem, it feels like it is purely traveling through the past, and then Then there are some big events, which seem boring to write about. There is nothing new and there are quite a lot of shortcomings, but if you are a fun person, it is acceptable. I am not, so I gave up (I don't know if the author has actually played Minecraft or just wrote Minecraft purely to cater to the setting of this novel).

I feel like the back is not as beautiful as the front, and it feels like there is nothing new😨

Seriously, if you write less about Marvel, your results will be much better

Extras • JOJO, transcending fate [The steamroller of fate (crossed out), the torrent of steel slowly rolling over...] Jonathan: DIO, it is indeed as you said, the two of us may be one, I even feel a wonderful friendship, and now the two of us are a community of destiny; Then the ship will disappear when it explodes. Jonathan: You want to be happy, Elena. DIO: Let me go, JOJO! Let me go, reconsider, I will let you get eternal life, heal the wound, and then you can live with Elena forever, JOJO; Well! JOJO! ! This, this guy; is dead (At this moment, DIO looked at this man in disbelief, this man, his lifelong enemy, the opponent who had pushed him into danger many times, just... Dead...​) Damn, damn, damn, damn, I, DIO, I, DIO, will never... Ah——! (Crack, click, click...) ...(Silence) Farewell, JOJO; I, DIO, will not stop here, I must— (Smash Varudo, stop time!) Fang Mo, dressed in a black school uniform, poses behind the DIO stand and makes a low-key appearance Fang Mo (sighs): Yeah, yeah, this is a classic scene like a world-famous painting, I really can't stand it ... ... JOJO! This... This guy... Is dead... February 7, 1889 Jonathan Joestar "Death" Extra 2•JOJO, the trajectory of fate [The track of fate is buried in the past, chasing the train to the future] Name: Air Conditioner • Xu Lun, right? Let's go, the warden wants to see you ... As the door slowly opens, A fresh breath of ocean came to his face; Xu Lun looked around and saw that the room was very open and decorated with blue as the main color. There was an oversized obsidian desk in front of two rows of bookshelves. On the leopard-print leather chair behind the desk, there was a A two-meter-five-meter tall man, he was wearing a navy blue suit and had a pair of blue eyes as deep as the sea. He looked at Xu Lun with a kind of tenderness, but his resolute face made him calm and dignified. "Hello, Air Conditioner Xu Lun, I am the warden of the Green Dolphin Prison, 'Jostar Jonas', you can also call me JOJO." ... Okay, please look forward to the next chapter, JOJO·Destiny Confrontation (Love Train Chapter) Finally, the old woman Hurry up and improve the fan creation, my power of complaining and creativity can no longer be tolerated.

I like this book very much. It is my favorite among the MC books. Recently, I have seen many people complaining that the current chapters are not good. I personally feel that it is very good. I just have fun and relax. There is no need to worry so much. Just write more and follow your own ideas. Come on, author, I will give you the monthly ticket this month!

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I have read Chapter 155 so far, but I don't see any main plot. It is entirely supported by various jokes and fun. I can't say it's not good. On the contrary, it is quite well written. However, it is impossible for a book to continue relying on jokes and fun. I would like to give the author some suggestions. First, you can try to make going home the protagonist's goal. For example, if you meet another time traveler in the next world, and then hear him say that you can go home, you need to try it world by world, and then you can write about that person in the next book. In this way, the linkage between the two books will come out. Second point, although there is no wave of political correctness in our country, racial discrimination is still not allowed. Lezi writes it in a subtle way. You don't want to suddenly become popular one day and be reported to you by jealous people. The third point is to try to write other jokes and fun, and link them with other books, such as historical jokes, prehistoric stories, etc. The fourth and most important point is, don't cut the book casually. Don't cut the book casually. Don't cut the book casually. This is quite demoralizing. When you really can't write anymore or really don't want to write, you can give a smooth ending and then consider the problems of this book before writing the next book. These are just my personal opinions. Brothers, if you have any comments and suggestions, please write them down below. Can the author add some comments after seeing this?ヾ(´∀｀．ヾ)

After saving for half a month, now that I have seen the world of Chainsaw Man, I feel that my previous writing style has returned, and the familiar fun has returned, but it is very short 🤔

After reading your book, Satan packed up his clothes all night and prepared to seek scriptures.

This style really has the flavor of End of the World. I suggest the author increase his efforts. It's been a long time since I've seen such a purely entertaining novel 😌

The writing is very nice, and the content of many jokes is quite substantial. It has brought great fun to my high school life. Now that I have graduated, I must support it. The MC content is also very suitable to my appetite. I really like this kind of fun book. Your book allows me to temporarily not face the pressure and allows me to laugh out of a lot of jokes, hell jokes and the feeling of not having to consider the rules. After reading this, I feel less stressed. I will probably never forget you in this life, author. For me, this book has completely touched my reading experience. Thank you to the author for helping me complete part of my fantasy. I hope you will continue to work hard.

The world calls me the Demon of Joy, the Hungry Ghost of Sex, the Destroyer of the Great Plane, and the Controller of the Power of Death. If there are people who hope that my coming will bring about a change in their destiny of happiness, then worship me, pray, put your monthly ticket on the altar, and shout my true name, Le~Sex~Da~Death~

I remember some mods such as Najie and Chenge Pot were made. Every time I played Minecraft, I would add these mods. When I was tired, I would use them to teleport to a small latitude, set up a full set of kitchen utensils, barbecue grills, tables, chairs, etc., Wear a magician's hat on my head, wear a Taoist robe, and step on a bunch of golden soul rings to cook there. , There are a bunch of high-end delicacies in the box, Buddha jumps over the wall, etc. Use alchemy bombs to blow up the dimensional gap and add another large room. One is changed to Chinese style, with immortal cultivation modules and Chinese modules such as alchemy furnaces and Taoist sets. The other large room is equipped with Western magician modules such as enchanting tables and magic books. There is a mecha Gundam parked in the garage. Although it cannot open dimensions, it is still a good decoration. When I am tired, I will specially enter the room with glowing mushrooms. There will be a big hammock above your head, and you will have a good sleep. When you get up, you will go out of the dimension, pick up the Geed sublimation device, the belt of the Time King, and monsters such as Titans to join the dance of demons in the main world. Although the style of the painting is very,,, well, weird, I had fun playing it, but it was a pain in my computer

With this endless amount of fun, as well as the well-controlled plot and characters, the author! I approve of you! All tickets are for you!

I saw Chapter 514, overall it's okay, the rest is a bit boring, 886

They personally selected Fang Mo, who would not get angry, and handed over the time stone Oh, when you are gentle to the world (when)

No indication?

The best fan fiction I have ever read. The elements are well combined and the characters are very novel. I won't get tired of reading it. I support it!

The writing is very good, why don't you update it? Please update it quickly! ! That's gone. What did I see?

When can we update more than once a day?🤔

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