Douluo: My System Is Unconvinced Again

It's so awkward to write, but luckily I have high drug resistance

Why did you add "Fights Break the Sphere"? And he still abuses the protagonist? It always seems a bit strange. It looked good at first, but it changed after watching it.

I'm really impressed by this guy who listens to books and has such a big tongue, but he still stays dumbfounded when he doesn't talk.

The writing is very loose and casual, it just rubs your IQ on the ground.

I don't care if you write about Tang San. A god in the Douluo God Realm, even a God of Creation, is not on the same level. He can be perfect and invincible in battles. If you don't understand, don't write. If you write about Tang San, no one will say anything about you. If you write about Xiao Yan, Shi Hao is speechless. I hope you will stop wasting other people's time by writing novels. 😡

In the third chapter of "How Poisonous", Xiantian is level 20 and still has to prove that he was not captured by Wuhun Palace, and he also went to some Noting Academy to forcefully insert the plot. It's too poisonous.

Fire Apricot Jiaoshu and Star Anise Black Ice Grass are actually used by three people. Does this still make sense? The chance was divided into three parts. One part was given to the soul beast for testing, and then one part was given to myself and one part to Xiao Wu. The effect of the medicine was only one-third... To be honest, there was no need to help the heroine too much, otherwise it would just be a nanny article, and the heroine was too strong, so was it still necessary for the protagonist to exist? How to highlight the strength of the protagonist? Xiao Wu's soul ring is configured with 1 yellow and 2 purple. The protagonist is yellow, yellow, purple and black... The system text can add attribute points. Aren't the attribute points useless? It's not as good as Xiao Wu. This plot is really depressing. Which system version can't surpass Tang San's now? As a result, Xiao Wu's previous spirit rings are higher than the protagonist's configuration.

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. He refuses to be a master at the beginning, marries Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Bibi Dong to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, captures Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, and brutally tortures Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look, just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. He refuses to be a master at the beginning, marries Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, joins Wuhun Palace, supports Wuhun Palace in unifying the two empires, and takes his wife Bibi Dong to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, captures Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, and brutally tortures Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look, just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

Qian Renxue

Xiao Wu

I don't understand, how can someone complain about it? Novels are usually written like this. I think it's pretty well written.

If you write a novel with the same idea, your grades will definitely be better. (That's it for a collection of 300,000 yuan?) Even though there are a lot of typos, many sentences are still very awkward to read. The relationship between the characters in the preceding and following chapters is also described inexplicably. Obviously, Ye Feng and Xiao Wu established a relationship when they first went to Shrek Academy, but later (Chapter 96) they became brother and sister again. The idea of ​​paying someone to put it together.

Good guy, so many heroines? Will Liu Erlong accept them all? That is indeed a bit disgusting. I don't hate harems, I hate bottomless stallion stories.

The heroines of Shrek's Seven Monsters were all taken away, and even Liu Erlong got pregnant. Thinking about that scene is so irritating to the eyes. It was obvious that her relationship with Xiao Wu was confirmed, but she was still unclear about it with other people. This male protagonist is so shameless, so disgusting 😰😅 (I only saw Chapter 149, don't criticize me)

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It's poisoned to death, and there is a Contra experience card, so what a waste! What's the point of using experience cards whenever you encounter someone you can't beat? , It is also very poisonous in the early stage. The level 30 soul power flush only absorbs a 400-year-old soul ring?

I didn't think twice about inheriting the throne of the Creator God. I really couldn't stand it anymore. The rich and powerful Qibao Glazed Sect earned 6,800 gold soul coins in half a year. Hahaha, not to mention how many times I had eaten the settings before. Even the parents of a B Creator God who was resurrected couldn't survive, and I couldn't find anyone. This strength really made me laugh. You B Creator God is afraid of a dragon god who is on the throne of God. I can't watch it without thinking. I stopped watching it.

Innate level 30 soul power plus 90,000-year-old soul bones, the result is a first soul ring that lasts for more than 300 years

Innate level 30, after absorbing the soul ring level 34, refining the body with ice and fire, then + the fourth soul ring of ten thousand years + training for 6 years, and finally reaching level 48, training on a dog, innate level 30 + the qualification of fairy grass, the result is about 2 levels a year on average, really cheating, normally at least he should be a soul emperor, okay, even if he is not a soul emperor, I can accept it if you write a soul king, but the result is still a soul sect

I quite liked the setting at first, but this setting just made me stare and read for more than a hundred chapters with nausea. When the protagonist was changed to a spirit beast, I really couldn't stand it. The previous content was just a mess. Not only did the author write without any brains, but his views were also distorted. Yes, this kind of bottomless stallion story is a source of pollution to the eyes. The plot of Zhu Zhuqing, Dai Mubai and the master is really disgusting, and it really comes out as soon as it comes up, and I can write whatever I want. I envy Xiao Wu as a soul. The beast can condense the best-equipped soul ring and directly become a soul beast, right? And it changes in the elite soul master competition. I don't want to see how you come back later. It's a waste of time, a rubbish article among rubbish articles. I don't even know how Qidian included this kind of article 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

Everyone, please leave. The author likes to write green stories. Zhu Zhuqing was pinned down by Dai Mubai, and his clothes were torn open by the flower picker Bu Huo.

The protagonist of this book is just one character. He's so fucking cowardly. He has to follow the protagonist of the original book, otherwise he won't know the direction of the plot. Holy shit, how can he be so fucking cowardly? If you take a system and the plot goes astray, you can be crippled.

Awesome. Before I even clicked in, I saw that all the connections in the network were female leads.

I just read a few chapters and I won't say anything else, just a few words. When your configuration is full, there will be additional attribute bonuses. With just the innate physical fitness of a level 30 soul master, you still have a normal soul ring? , This is like the richest man in the country driving Lao Toou Le and eating at a roadside stall. Is this appropriate?

Did you pay for it? If you have a collection of ten thousand books like this, you have to have pica.

Damn it! 300,000 Collections! ! !

I have the nerve to open a subscription after answering a question

Use mine

It's really good. The original Douluo was so bad that I read a few chapters and removed it from the bookshelf out of pure disgust.