Douluo: My System is Unconvinced Again
斗罗之我的系统又不服气了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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In the third chapter of "How Poisonous", Xiantian is level 20 and still has to prove that he was not captured by Wuhun Palace, and he also went to some Noting Academy to forcefully insert the plot. It's too poisonous.
Fire Apricot Jiaoshu and Star Anise Black Ice Grass are actually used by three people. Does this still make sense? The chance was divided into three parts. One part was given to the soul beast for testing, and then one part was given to myself and one part to Xiao Wu. The effect of the medicine was only one-third... To be honest, there was no need to help the heroine too much, otherwise it would just be a nanny article, and the heroine was too strong, so was it still necessary for the protagonist to exist? How to highlight the strength of the protagonist? Xiao Wu's soul ring is configured with 1 yellow and 2 purple. The protagonist is yellow, yellow, purple and black... The system text can add attribute points. Aren't the attribute points useless? It's not as good as Xiao Wu. This plot is really depressing. Which system version can't surpass Tang San's now? As a result, Xiao Wu's previous spirit rings are higher than the protagonist's configuration.
Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life
The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. He refuses to be a master at the beginning, marries Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, joins Wuhun Palace, supports Wuhun Palace in unifying the two empires, and takes his wife Bibi Dong to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, captures Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, and brutally tortures Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look, just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life
Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life
The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. He refuses to be a master at the beginning, marries Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Bibi Dong to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, captures Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, and brutally tortures Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look, just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life
Qian Renxue
Xiao Wu
I don't understand, how can someone complain about it? Novels are usually written like this. I think it's pretty well written.
If you write a novel with the same idea, your grades will definitely be better. (That's it for a collection of 300,000 yuan?) Even though there are a lot of typos, many sentences are still very awkward to read. The relationship between the characters in the preceding and following chapters is also described inexplicably. Obviously, Ye Feng and Xiao Wu established a relationship when they first went to Shrek Academy, but later (Chapter 96) they became brother and sister again. The idea of paying someone to put it together.
The heroines of Shrek's Seven Monsters were all taken away, and even Liu Erlong got pregnant. Thinking about that scene is so irritating to the eyes. It was obvious that her relationship with Xiao Wu was confirmed, but she was still unclear about it with other people. This male protagonist is so shameless, so disgusting 😰😅 (I only saw Chapter 149, don't criticize me)
Good guy, so many heroines? Will Liu Erlong accept them all? That is indeed a bit disgusting. I don't hate harems, I hate bottomless stallion stories.