A Dimensional Journey Beginning with Dragon Raja

The bet failed, what should I say? . I already knew this result after seeing no Xiami for such a long time. Maybe the author doesn't know what we want yet. Most of us who watch Dragon Clan fandom are hurt by the original work. What we want to watch most is not the protagonist showing off, but looking forward to the sweet plot. I hope the author's performance will get better and better 😐

When I saw Natsumi, I came in directly. Many authors like Eri to be the heroine. Personally, I don't like her too much. She's too innocent and is more suitable for a younger sister. Isn't my quirky Natsumi good?

The pig's feet hangs up for far more than half of the story, and a lot of space is spent describing the supporting characters. Can you change it? It's really boring to look at it this way. Do I read fanfics to see those people and things in the original works?

The protagonist gave the Wind King's Dragon Bone Cross to the academy and got a chance to work for free at the academy?

Xia Mi after transforming into a dragon

Now the content has become just a slight modification based on the original work, which is getting more and more boring.

I suggest readers who want to read Xia Mi's book later to stop reading Dragon Clan after finishing it. There will be no more Xia Mi in the future.

It seems okay at the beginning. Those who write fan fiction are all warriors. I hope you will continue writing in the future 😁

Author, I want to ask a question Do you think I want to watch the protagonist show off, or watch the plot of Death I want to watch Death, why should I come to your place to watch it? Wouldn't it be better if I just read the manga?

After reading it for so long, I still want to give the author some suggestions. . . The world view and audience of the Dragon Clan are actually more film- and television-oriented, and the world view and style are more realistic. Author, you have written many two-dimensional comic works after writing Dragon Clan, and either the audience is not wide, or it is too old, so it is not suitable for the current version. . . And regarding the issue of my sister's fragments, you may not have planned how many worlds you can write at the beginning, so the number of fragments and the size of the fragments are ambiguous. As a result, the plot is too fragmented, and readers may find it too tedious. And because of the setting of a little girl, some worlds cannot be included in the topic selection. Science fiction is basically out of the question, martial arts is basically out of the question, and the world view of works that can enhance the ability to face God directly is too grand and difficult to grasp. And because the world view you want to create is too grand, it makes it difficult to achieve your goal of improving yourself by experiencing the world, so that either your strength exceeds the world too much, or you need to weaken the protagonist to make up for it. As a result, you constantly jump between weakening the protagonist and strengthening the protagonist, and it is difficult to give the protagonist a smooth growth curve. In the current book writing environment, everyone hopes to see a protagonist who keeps getting stronger, so the best-selling books now either have a strong background and talent, or the boss is reincarnated and then reaches the top all the way. There is rarely a weakening of the protagonist in the middle, and the relevant plots rarely contain betrayal or a lot of depression. When you first started writing the Demon Slayer section, I wrote a paragraph and gave some suggestions. . . If you want more people to read your book, you must choose a world topic that most people like, but then you have a wave of death. . . I don't know if you, the author, have a complete outline and partial outline of the whole book, but this book probably cannot be saved. I can only give you some suggestions, hoping that it will be a little helpful for your next book.