Mortal: Start from Qixuanmen

Oh, you make your own weapons, rely on Han Li to make elixirs, you always want to rely on others, you always want to lick, and you still want to cultivate immortality, and Nangong Wan, someone else, ascended directly without waiting. Why do you think that you, a senior brother, are better than other people's couples? Are there two male protagonists here?

I clicked in just to see Zhang Tie, but you changed the name backhand. What should I say? I feel that there is absolutely no need to change it. I dare say that changing the name will definitely do no good to your book. On the contrary, it may reduce the number of readers.

There are only a few common people who read it, and there are only a few excellent ones (in my opinion) that I have read over and over again. I came across this book by chance, just out of interest, but I didn't expect it to be surprisingly good-looking. There are only a few reasons why it is so good-looking.                 1，，，，  2. The protagonist has a likable personality, clear grievances, decisive killings, and knows how to advance and retreat. I believe this is the mortal protagonist that many readers want to see 3. Regarding Han Li's stance, I believe readers who have read many mortal fics cannot avoid one problem, that is, Han Li's holding of the Sky Bottle is too baggy, so some readers think He had to get the vial because Han Li was too cautious and could not share the vial with others. As you can see from the title of this book, Pig's Feet had made friends with Han Li before he officially entered the Immortal Sect. At that time, Han Li was still very innocent. This solved the problem perfectly, that is, Han Li would share the elixir he refined with the protagonist. 4. A little suggestion. After reading so many fanfics, I was thinking that the biggest cheat of the protagonist is that he has read this novel. In order to avoid conflict with the original protagonist, you can take away those opportunities that have nothing to do with the original protagonist. Share what can be shared, such as the spiritual eye spring at the beginning, some exercises, etc. I think this is quite reasonable. The most important thing in writing fan fiction is two words, and that is reasonable. 5. A small shortcoming is that the author is too slow now. I know that the author needs to conceive when writing a novel, so I can sympathize with the author. I hope that the author will slowly improve in the process of writing the novel, and ensure the progress while ensuring the quality. Of course, as the number of words increases, more people will read it. I hope the author can work hard! Support the author.

It looks good, but updates are too slow.

There is no cost and you can copy anything. This plug-in is so awesome that I can't stand it anymore, so I removed it.

Why did he become a eunuch? This book is better than similar books.

On the first day after Dr. Mo's death, he visited his grave.

Unfortunately, it was too late. I originally wanted to write a book with Zhang Tie as the protagonist, and the outline was already written. After searching, I found that someone had already logged in first.

The writing is quite nice, but I'm afraid I won't be able to make a living with this update.

Never a bottle. It's just another Han Li, nothing new! Besides, if you ask for it, is this still the background of a mortal's journey to immortality?

Goldfinger is quite fun, but the updates are really weak, and the author probably doesn't have any manuscripts or outlines saved.

It's rare to have a protagonist in the weapon-refining style, come on! ! By the way, are there any novels about weapon refining that are very imaginative?

Judging from the update speed of this book, I think it is very slow.

It's well written, but it's a pity that the eunuch

It seems that I can't continue writing and have been reading other books all day long.

Is this the eunuch book that the editor highly recommends? The current contract signing is so shameless