I Was a Swordsman in the Ming Dynasty

There are too many contradictions in the first chapter. Either write a fiction and don't add any Ming Dynasty background. If you look at it with your brain, there are many details wrong. Don't say that it is different from cultivating immortals. The social structure of the world background is there, which is generally unchanged. There is also a county that averages more than 50 death sentences a year. Good guy, your county is really simple and simple. Even Gotham City has to bow down and the emperor has to pay attention.

I don't understand that when the protagonist's father dies, something evil immediately comes, and the villain can seek revenge from the protagonist after he is beheaded. This is a bit bloody.

Chapter 26: If someone scolds you, just kill them. And the reasons written later are too far-fetched. The person who was killed was neither a criminal nor a serious crime. It was not legal at all to kill him like this. Isn't it enough to kill a chicken to scare a monkey and put him in jail? Can't we give him some punishment? It feels like the protagonist killed people because of a court eagle dog, and is really narrow-minded.

If it really doesn't work, you can continue writing about The Dead Lord, that one is quite good.

Don't be an eunuch again, I've been short and weak since the end of Uncle Nine 😒

After seeing Forty-Seven, the three views are really incompatible. Let's not say that we need the Holy Mother to save us. At least we are always friendly with the protagonist on the road to the Lu family, but the protagonist ignores him. Didn't I talk about divine consciousness before, but now I'm blind. You were so excited to hear about monsters in the previous chapters, but now you just leave decisively? And forget it if you don't come back. Since you came back to kill monsters, you just happened to appear at the point when the Lu family was destroyed. It doesn't make sense whether it was intentional or not. Regardless of other things, can you live with such a conscience? Don't you feel guilty? That's why I can't read the author's portrait like this!

More than a thousand people have been killed in twenty years. There is a high probability that all the people in this county are evil. The executioner actually took the imperial examination, which is even more outrageous.

In the scene between Zhong Kui's sister and the protagonist, the author forced his wits down. I'm really speechless.

It is enough for a scholar to become an executioner, but who can be brought to death in a different place? The key point of becoming an executioner is to kill for the sake of killing. This mentality is no different from the devil.

I have only read a few chapters, and I just want to say that there is a contradiction in the setting. When the protagonist's father died, there was a conspiracy to capture the soul. As a result, those criminals who were executed were still able to take revenge after being dead for so long? Is this the end of the dynasty? Or are demons rampant like Liaozhai?

I'm going, this king of eunuchs is running away, I can't afford to be hurt.

How should I put it, it's very awkward. Obviously it can be made up, but the author had to choose the Ming Dynasty as the background, and the result was a completely different story. Just like the imperial examination, military households (who do not inherit their positions) can do it, but civil servants cannot. Yamen servants, gangsters, executioners and the like were not allowed to take the imperial examination, nor were they allowed to be promoted to officials. In the Ming Dynasty, officials and officials were at odds with each other, but the household registrations of officials and officials were parallel. The executioner taking the imperial examination is just like the county magistrate taking the imperial examination again. It is not allowed by the court regulations at all. In addition, the master can do it, because the master is not an official, he is still a citizen in the household registration, he is a personal helper found by the county magistrate, and he does not receive money from the county government.

The protagonist this time is a villain. . .

People who were beheaded by the court turned into ghosts and came back to take revenge. The court had no way to prevent them from turning into ghosts. Those executioners were so awesome that they dared to kill these people?

You slipped away, you don't have a long memory, sister Zhong Kui, I'm sorry you figured it out.

I don't dare to read this author's books. If my grades are a little bit poor, I won't have the patience. If I'm either a syllabus escaper or a direct eunuch, I've blocked this author and won't read his books.

I hope I won't accept all the women this time. I stopped reading the last one after seeing that Ying Zheng's mother was included in it. The stallion novel doesn't accept the harem so casually.

You are a talented scholar and you are going to be an executioner. You think others can think highly of you. You are not going to pass the exam. When the examiner sees your profession, he will immediately let you fail. This profession is a dirty job.

I feel like Sister Zhong Kui is the one who specializes in poisoning. Wuyu really feels like she's opening the harem in advance, right? , Opening a harem without writing style is like a sand sculpture, and there is no blood relationship in ancient times, I really don't understand what the author is thinking.

The protagonist is a scholar. His father has just passed away. If he fails to keep his filial piety, he will become an executioner and kill people the next day? Do you really think that the world in the book is fake?

A good book, but it was ruined by the comment section. The main character is a bit ruthless and has no other obvious shortcomings. Moreover, this book can greatly satisfy the readers' imagination of the main character's strength. Other books either have a fun start, a crappy start, or start from scratch, which makes people excited. The real Goldfinger should be like this, instead of a system that upgrades to a level after 200 chapters, and everyone who reads it is old.

Not only does it get worse and worse, it also gets shorter and shorter. I admire it.

I have a suggestion. You can write a horror movie about traveling around the world, one adventure at a time. Maybe it suits you.

If you are still writing a book, learn to be a human being first

You can see it from the dead master. If you don't get good grades, you'll be cut off.

Are you keeping it or not? I won't believe you anymore. Goodbye.

Should I finish reading this book? Cut off if your grades are poor? Not even drifting alone.

It's okay. It's one of the few novels that I can finish reading. The only shortcoming is that I feel like he makes the same mistakes as all men.

It is best not to write about dynasties in novels about cultivating immortals. A retreat can last for several years or even more than ten years! In the later stages, it may take hundreds of years, so writing about dynasties is of no use!

The so-called spirit-turning beads that the author cheats don't understand that everything in the world is energy, and the main plot of yours must kill people and collect evil spirits to convert energy. It's far-fetched. For example, why you must use evil spirits to convert energy, and there is no clear explanation of where and what you are doing.