Red Mansion: Lu Bu's Talent at the Beginning

This book's personal rating is 2 and a half stars or three stars (out of five stars). In my opinion, the biggest shortcoming is that the writing is not deep enough, the events are superficial and the logic is illogical. There are many other shortcomings in the comment section, so I won't list them here. The biggest advantage is that the theme of the novel has always been very clear and correct. It follows the male channel's struggle for career supremacy. There is no problem with the female channel. The basis for the birth of the antagonist is also reasonable, such as the suppression of Mrs. Wang and the fear of the new emperor, etc.

Come on

How to put it, if you use five stars to evaluate this book, this book will only get two stars at most. But there is one thing about the author of this book that is particularly worthy of evaluation. Let me add two stars, that is, he will not set a threshold to prevent others from evaluating him.

Good guy, you don't even have to click to read this book. Just read his introduction and you will know that the protagonist is Jia Zheng's concubine named "Jia Yan". I don't know how the author came up with this name. What are the names of this generation, Jia Lian, Jia Zhu, and Jia Huan? Can't you find the rules? Even if your name is Jia Li.

I can write my seniority name wrong, so how can I still read this book?

Lu Bu's talent - slaves of three families: You can recognize a character as your adoptive father and perform three real damage attacks on it 🙂

I just looked at the introduction. How could Jia Zheng's son be named Jia Yan? That generation was all about jade

The system is so awesome, but in the end, it just extracts Chinese historical figures. Damn it, is this useless? Both the return Lu Bu and the real Lu Bu were hung in the Baimen Tower and became the dolls of Sunny Day.

This name is full of deep malice! Not only for the readers, but also for the protagonist and the Jia family. Yan traditional style Yan, this is a hint (explicit) that this is not a concubine, but actually a concubine's brother!

If a modern person travels through time and becomes Jia Zheng's son, he can only marry Baochai, but not Daiyu, because Daiyu's biological mother is your biological father's biological sister. If your biological mother is Mrs. Wang, then Baochai cannot marry because Baochai's biological mother is your biological mother's biological sister.

Nima's 7800 against 30000 people annihilated them all without killing anyone, right? He treated the readers as fools, and made the court too weak. It seemed that the entire court only had such a few armies, and the Huns could easily bring in 100,000 reinforcements, and there were about 200,000 troops stationed locally (Even if he has 40,000 people on the west route, there must be at least 5,000 people stationed in the city. There can't be no one to guard the city. It is all the Han people who make the decision. Then there will be 60,000 troops. The west + middle is 120,000, and there is a big barrier. Let's count him 30,000. That's 150,000. The east road can withstand 1 For an army of 00,000, at least 60,000 would be required, so that would be 210,000) Then he also said that this is a place where the Huns are stationed with relatively few troops, and there is no heavy guard. He will send 100,000 + 10,000 + 5,000, a total of 115,000, and he will attack the Huns. After that, there are still 7 Wan directly gave away 50,000, 60,000 for 300,000, and there is Iron Buddha Tower opposite. How to fight against it? And it was said earlier that Iron Buddha Tower was built by the Xiongnu with all the strength of the country, and would not be easily moved. Later, he said that the army had been waiting on the east road for a long time. Isn't this contradictory? Gou Shi

The title of the book is Lu Bu. I thought it would be about a young general roaming the battlefield, getting promoted to a higher position, tearing apart the soil and becoming a king, or even competing in the world, but it turns out that you only entered the battlefield in Chapter 150...

This force can easily slaughter the Jia family, and no one in the chair dares to object.

Even the name is written incorrectly. Jia Baoyu was born next to the character "". A Dream of Red Mansions is also an ancient novel, and at least basic etiquette is still required. Is it written by a robot like you །

After reading a few chapters... I realized it was just a rag! Smelly and long...

Once you see the name of the protagonist, those who like Red Mansion will not read it. Jia Zheng's sons were all born next to Yuzi. Jia Lian, Jia Zhen, Jia Huan, etc. You are direct and nondescript.

You know it was written by Xia Jiba when the servant knocked the master unconscious at the beginning. He had no time to hide and still moved forward.

In fact, there is no need for Mrs. Wang to specifically target the concubine, because first of all, the concubine has to call her mother when he sees her, and he can only call his mother aunt. In theory, even Jia Baoyu has no share in the title and property of the Rong Mansion, so what if the concubine is outstanding? , The concubine is outstanding because of her good teaching, just let it go. If Jia Baoyu can attack the noble, the concubine is not qualified to snatch it. If he can't attack, there is no need to fight for it. If he insists on targeting a concubine, he feels that there is something wrong with his brain.

If you like beauty, you can just be a concubine for fun, but is she worthy of your wife? ? ?

Firstly, no one finds the protagonist's martial arts strange. Secondly, he has a system but has no ambition and it doesn't matter if others take advantage of him. Thirdly, when he leads troops to suppress bandits, he actually has more than 10 million silver trophies. The court only earns tens of millions in taxes a year. I only read dozens of chapters and these problems appeared. I don't know those people will spend money to read this thing.

I'm dying. I haven't finished writing 40 chapters of the martial arts exam. If I don't improve my strength quickly and get promoted and make a fortune, I am so active in men and women and have no plan. I don't know how to recruit people to find soldiers, study literary and military strategies, find backers and leave the Jia family quickly. You who are brothers and sisters every day are better off writing female videos. You still like to be frivolous without the support of power.

It's all excellent. The comment section was filled with so much criticism that I didn't even dare to watch it. Can anyone give me an objective review if I can watch it?

It should be called Yan Ge'er, not Yan'er directly. It doesn't fit the style of Red Mansion at all. Elementary school student composition

Jia Baoyu's generation is the jade-character generation, and most of their names have the radical "wang", Jia Zhu, Jia Huan, Jia Lian. The next generation, the grass-character generation, usually has the image of plants, such as Jia Lan (orchid) and Jia Rong. If you look back at the protagonist's name, it doesn't comply with the naming rules for everyone in the Jia family.

This writing is so bad! Why do you have the guts to write history-related fan fiction? Bye bye!

Where did the old lady come from in the Shi family? Shi Xiangyun's great-aunt is the old lady of the Jia family. When writing fan fiction, you must read the original work

The words of Red Mansion. What's the use of Lu Bu's talent? It's not as good as Lao Ai's talent 🙂

When I read the title, I thought it was a refreshing novel, but it turned out to be a frustrating novel.

Is this a new book? A new book with more than one million words?

After all this force, shouldn't I stop eating beef?