Maoshan World: Young Marshal Starts!

The protagonist is quite disgusting. His lust for his uncle's daughter is equivalent to his lust for his own sister, who is not a distant relative. It's so shameless. If he were a normal brother, he would never see his sister exposed. It's hard to judge this kind of character.

You're kidding about selling clothes. At that time, you probably used cloth to make your own clothes. The rich people went to custom-made clothes or had tailors at home.

Author, your writing is bad. In Chapter 4, a thirteen Taibao practiced the Kung Fu method and the first level cost 10,000! Do you think it's realistic?

At the beginning of the game, the young commander doesn't want to develop his troops and strive for world supremacy. He goes to practice some Maoshan technique. There is something wrong with his head.

Yes, you should write about Uncle Jiu. This time, don't let it go like last time. Go through all the plots to be written. Movies related to Uncle Jiu and Maoshan related movies are enough for you to write more than a thousand chapters. They must be smooth! ! !

Chapter 111 is too poisonous, I suggest the author change it to I will give you a subordinate, even a military uniform, for free for the first time, and then charge money for the second time. Why don't you go to heaven, work for you, but also suck your blood and give you money, right? You also need to charge money for school uniforms for comparison. How come these two are the same concept? Then the author said that the protagonist will lead soldiers to fight in the future. The first time the soldier is injured, he will be treated for free, and the second time he will be injured, he will start to collect money? I am really convinced after reading this. Has the author changed? Isn't it pretty good even if I don't write under Uncle Jiu? How come the more I write, the worse it becomes? Please be less poisonous. 🤫🤫🤫

Are you planning to accept Tingting? ? Marriage between close relatives is very punishing!

The routine is too old. The protagonist of the setting is the young commander. Then what kind of immortal should you strive for hegemony in the world? There are too many people who travel through Uncle Jiu's world to cultivate immortality. You have set the protagonist to be a young commander. Is it appropriate to leave hundreds of thousands of troops to cultivate immortality? Uncle Jiu's world should have dragon energy and not play with luck. Run to cultivate immortality. There are too many such themes and nothing new. It's better to play with luck, after all, the world of Uncle Jiu has not appeared yet.

The unit price is high, but how many people can buy it? From ancient times to the present, no one has been able to support an army with luxury goods, and clothes are durable consumer goods. There is also whether others recognize you or not, and whether they want to buy from you.

Become a disciple or worship Taoist Master Four Eyes, watch movies and enjoy yourself. In reality, meeting a senior brother like Qiu Sheng Wencai is really a blessing gained in nine lifetimes.

The writing is terrible, the common sense is terrible, and the characters are portrayed like elementary school students

Really, can a level 5 author write this? ?

You know clearly that the prescription is jealous of domestic and foreign forces, but you still publish it, just to attack those who are jealous behind you? I wonder how confident a provincial warlord is that he can suppress domestic and foreign forces? Let's not talk about the inland, can the Manchus and the Qing Dynasty + the Eight-Power Allied Forces withstand it? Don't say it's impossible to send troops. If the profits are big enough, you can send hundreds of thousands to fight. How many people can a province recruit?

A warlord leader makes a point of merit, such a brainless outline.

What is written about it is like kicking in the sky and kicking on the ground, and the data is also wrong. The first level of a basic horizontal training kung fu costs 10,000? A perfect low-end mobile game, with billions of combat power at every turn 😒

It seems that the commander-in-chief at that time was not worth much. Only those with a few soldiers dared to call themselves commander-in-chief.

I'm still here at Soul Transmutation. Now it's considered poisonous. I used to be a disciple of Uncle Ninth, and I thought it was pretty good. But the white chicken at the beginning looked a bit awkward, and I couldn't understand how to recruit women. Just like your corpse exorcist, Dongjun Yanfei, if you don't accept the popular female protagonist, why don't you treat the Zhao chicken? Not as good as that little suckling pig who married Zhou Yi, you have a lot of problems with your writing style and so on.

It's okay up front, but the charge for military uniforms is too much. Taking military orders does not mean that you need to collect money from soldiers, but that you need to take your money. Let the money flow from left hand to right hand. I have to buy military uniforms for you because I have to work hard for you. School uniforms have been called motherfuckers. Think about whether you should accept the soldiers who work hard for you, or you should pay to go to work again! Ask the soldiers to give you money or they will be fired😔

Shennong: The pattern must be large, and the balance of power of the hostile forces must be balanced. It must be explained that the great fortune lies in the west and the ghosts and evil spirits reside in the east. The protagonist must militarize, develop and prepare for the war against Japan, while establishing a future supernatural bureau, practicing immortality on his own, and waiting until Mr. Zi Ren appears. Come, a born saint, help sweep away all the demons and monsters, and then use your own body to suppress the Nine Provinces, subdue the great evil, practice yourself as a pillar of mountains and rivers, nail into the source of evil, perform meritorious deeds, establish virtue, and then the true spirit travels through time and space, and starts a new game. Doesn't this look very cool?

Forcibly suppressing intelligence🌚If you can prevent the demon from coming out, you won't stop it😓

Ning Caichen, Master Jiu Shu and Liaozhai Swordsman are all good, and their practice at least has a step-by-step process. Then your later books will be overloaded, which will affect the experience too much. I think your Liaozhai is indeed well written, and there should be some drama, but try to have more back-and-forth fights or fights in the dark, and the timeline can be longer. Don't be too over-the-top. It's too over-the-top and there's no sense of experience.

Don't read this book, it's disgusting. You become a commander and you still become a disciple. You're like a loser.

For example, Liaozhai is mostly integrated with tomato series. Previous books were all based on Liaozhai and Chendong series. Also, don't be too aggressive when it comes to really stepping up. Although the writing is cool, it's weird to be invincible at the beginning.

It's a real hammer, and the harem wenjian collects them one by one.

This guy also likes to write about his parents, isn't he? The key point is that he still seems to understand some common usage from modern times to ancient times. It's so speechless.

I'm still looking forward to the next book. This one has a bad start. Ren Tingting is the cousin of the protagonist, so I just don't want to read it.

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There is less fighting in the novel. The fighting I am talking about is a back-and-forth fight. There will be at least a few rounds of fighting. For example, your Ning Caichen and his opponent will have at least dozens of chapters of dispute. Now I can basically finish one in two chapters, and it doesn't have the same feeling as before. Just like I eat tomatoes. In fact, as the author gets older, the fighting spirit among us normal people becomes smaller and smaller. This is not only reflected in life, but also in novels. My heart is old, I no longer have the passion I had before, I am more worldly, I am thinking about reducing my dimension to attack others, and I no longer have the courage to fight with a bayonet. Compared to time, everyone is quite sad.

First, I don't want to have it. Second, if you are old, you can kill your opponent by cheating, so there is no need to fight. Third, we are really not the passionate age we used to be.

This book is not good-looking, but your Liaozhai is still good-looking, so you can't write another Liaozhai and change the characters, etc.