Apprentice to Uncle Jiu

I am getting more and more disappointed after reading this book, and I have something to say. See Chapter One Thousand Two Hundred and Seventy. Personally, I guess that the subsequent plot may be about the awakening and upgrading of the way of heaven. The early part of the novel was well written, and I liked it a lot. Later on, the novel became more and more like a stud. After going to another world, it has already broken through the boundaries of a stud. It really lowered the grade of this novel all of a sudden. Suddenly I felt that this novel had become very low-level. I don't know whether the author's intention is to just go down and eat the book's foundation, or whether he really wants to write this book well. As an old reader who has been reading this book for more than a year, I personally suggest that I finish this book as soon as possible and start a new book. If you continue writing this book like this and you still want to write a novel, your next book will probably be scrapped. The first novel I read was from San Shao. Third Young Master abandoned him after he became a stallion, but now Third Young Master doesn't stall anymore. Personally, I prefer reading Tomato books. From Tomato's Star Peak to Cang Yuan Tu, I have always been following the original version. The single heroine looks the most comfortable

In harem stories, you meet someone who either has a beautiful granddaughter or a beautiful daughter. If he is a boy, he is a wretched villain with no brains. It is set as a rural girl who has grown up in a feudal environment. The description is that she blushes at every turn and goes to the main character's room to fuck him in front of him. She also says, "I can do it if you want." The description of Uncle Nine is not consistent with the character of the TV series. There are many poisonous points, but I still read it for free. I can still read it if I throw away my brain. After all, there are really no good books on the Internet.

After reading Chapter 48, I couldn't bear it anymore and decided to quit. I think the most important character is dismissed. In the previous part about the female ghost, the protagonist had to be cowardly and afraid of death. Did you know that different descriptions of escape produce different characters? Later, when the protagonist encounters someone much weaker than himself, he has to be careful and calculating, which is not fun at all. This is 48

The background and plot of this novel are pretty good. Although it is similar to the Yakuza Demon in some aspects from Golden Finger, it is generally good to read. However, there are too many women. It may be to show the charm and good looks of the male protagonist. Although it does not mean that there should be only one female protagonist after all, we all know the beauty. But two or three are enough. Too many will seem to change the taste and give people a feeling of lowering the IQ. It would be better if there were fewer women. All in all, the biggest flaw of this book is that there are too many women.

I just saw that the protagonist went to a martial arts gym to study for a breakthrough in martial arts. I saw the description of the gym owner's daughter and decisively gave up. So far, except for the two female ghosts and Naijie, there are at least 3-4 girls who like or fall in love with the protagonist. I can't stand it anymore. The first part is good, but the second part is not good.

There are too many female supporting characters in this book. Every time Pigfoot goes out to do errands, he will meet several female supporting characters, and they are the ones who admire Pigfoot. I am simply speechless.

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. It's like a lower-body animal, a big stallion, super narcissistic, and he likes you even if you're a woman. You damn person. Mom is inlaid with gold, and you are still talking about it. What era is it? Not to mention these, you are a monk, you are systematic, and you want immortality. Why are you marrying so many mortal women? After a few decades, they will all become old women, and you are still young. Have you considered their feelings, or are you planning to take them with you? Eternal life together. You have your own system and plug-ins, but you can't use them for them. Can you live forever? What do you want to do for you? What benefits can they bring to you? 🤫 Mom is a woman. She is having ambiguities everywhere. It's disgusting.

If the protagonist descends into the world of immortals, I can still have the patience to continue reading. The author allows the protagonist to descend into a world of fighting spirit and magic, or a Western family and identity. It really makes people feel that there is no sense of substitution. From here on, I decided not to continue reading.

The creative idea of ​​the novel is very good, but can it be a little less watery? Occasionally watery is acceptable, but too much water would be a bit disappointing for everyone's subscription.

The more you go to the end, the more brainless and reckless it feels. The plot is getting more and more boring. The golden finger is the biggest failure. Getting stronger depends entirely on the golden finger. Brainless upgrades and brainless synthesis are no longer interesting. It can be seen that the author did not do any data research or the like in this aspect, nor did he put any thought into the design. The protagonist is purely a tool for collecting human flesh, and has a vague sense of schizophrenia. This is reflected in the plot point of fighting in the Japanese ring. It can be seen that the author is not very good at shaping the character, or has not thought about what kind of protagonist he wants to create at all. Take it one step at a time.

I stopped reading the chapters after seeing the assessment. I looked through the table of contents and gave up if the rest of the book was still so watery.

Chapter 24 is a little bit hard for me to stand. During the Republic of China, a female ghost called her parents daddy? Mom? Not my parents. Every time the female ghost screams in this chapter, she tries to persuade me to give up. It's really a bit unbearable. I've read the previous chapters just fine, but this is where I started to doubt this book. I'll continue reading, hoping there won't be any serious anachronisms later on.

It's boring. It's just a retelling of the movie. This isn't time travel. It's just a movie experience center.

I think it was well written and enjoyable to read. I agree with it and give it a thumbs up.

After raising it for a few days, there are many chapters, but they are all short and weak.

I admit that the author is good at showing off, but is it really okay to be like this?

Can the update be faster? Anyway, I stay at home every day. What else can I do if I don't update a few chapters every day?

I am born in the 1990s and like this subject. I will watch Uncle Ying's movies again and again when I have time. When I was a kid, I watched horror movies, but now I watch comedy movies. I really miss them. There are several books on this subject, and this one is definitely my favorite. It is unconventional and divergent in thinking. It was also because of this book that I became a member. The author will update it quickly. (During the epidemic, everyone is stuck at home and does not go out. The author has not updated it. This is unscientific 😰)

Although the writing is very detailed in some places, it always feels like it is a bit scratchy. Maybe the author has already guessed some of the plot later, so some of the plot can be speeded up appropriately; and the protagonist is already so powerful, and it feels boring to meet those mysterious little ghosts again. I hope the author will continue to innovate on the original plot and increase the pleasure of reading, such as establishing a powerful force, acquiring new skills, getting new equipment, or fighting bosses that are different from ghosts. Finally, if you learn to disguise yourself, you can go to Japan to play.

Cheers, author. The writing is very good. The main character is not the Virgin. I really like this kind of book.

To be honest, this is the most special supernatural story I have ever read. The writing style is different from other supernatural stories. It feels great!!!

Ula

There will be no update today. You don't have to wait. It will be restored when the limited time limit ends tomorrow.

Haha, luckily I made up my mind to read it all in one go. It's really satisfying. It's worthy of being a god-level book. It's a real source of food 👍👍

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Nothing much to say, just 14 monthly passes given

According to incomplete statistics from the Time Travel Administration, the busiest life coaches are as follows. Uncle Jiu, the head of the novice village in the Taoism department Yongchun Ye Wen, the village chief of the novice village in the martial arts department, and Huang Feihong, the deputy village chief of Foshan Wuyingjiao Hell's Kitchen in the novice village in the Western World, the mayor of the novice village is Shi Dake, the deputy village chief is the reptile spider, and the director Cole Mori Martial arts Santa Claus, Shaolin traitor, Jiuyang Shen Gong Huo Gong Tutuo This does not include those peerless beauties whose husbands are all over the endless planes And the mysterious little pill in Never Ending makes countless protagonists smile confidently.

Paralysis. It's finally free. I have been saving it for a long time. Hahaha. . Start reading when you are 200,000 words long. Until it hits the shelves. It has always been stored. Ha ha. It's limited to free. I have to finish it quickly.

I finally got it for the first time, so I'd better save it and take a look first, come on!

If it weren't for the large harem, the author's work would be better than that of many great writers! It's a pity that the author is reluctant to give up the harem, which is exactly what many readers are disgusted with now.