The Aloof Dragon at Hogwarts

Finally the heroine is not Hermione! I'm moved to tears! Here's a story. It's pretty good. You can try it. It's my favorite HP novel recently.

The reviews for this book are average. The content is very good, the number of updates is too high, and the average is just average ()

The author should try his best to keep dialogues and descriptions closer to the original work, and use less words like "you, he, mua, stupid", etc. It is quite funny to read, and it is still necessary to maintain proper literary seriousness (don't criticize if you don't like it)

As far as I know, anyone who dares to put a lot of effort into writing emotional dramas will fail.

What does the author want to do? I picked Boruto at the climax of Shippuden. The protagonist fell under an illusion and entered the world of illusion, right?

From the current point of view, the protagonist is a realist, and the power is attributed to oneself, so the shaping of the heroine is very important. In my opinion, the best one is a kind-hearted but smart person like Lily, who can act as an anchor for the protagonist and knows who is good to him. After all, we readers do not want to see a virgin heroine who has double standards for the protagonist and the opponent. I hope the author can work harder. Please vote first to respect me.

What are you writing about? Is John's storyline over? Or write another sequel? To be honest, you wrote the Goblin War very hastily and the story line jumped too fast. And with this character creation, can Jack be blackmailed even though his last name is Safit? No matter what, John would never raise his son like this, even if he is not his biological son. The Jack you wrote is like a Muggle wizard who has just entered the magical world and is bullied by a pureblood without any magic skills. Again, John is the best, and Jack can teach him even a troll with his father's ability, and his father is also a Slytherin. The background and setting of this character are very contradictory. But if this character is someone you designed for other purposes, such as having his memory tampered with and his life fabricated, just pretend I didn't say anything about it.

The original novel doesn't like the four Predator kids. School bullying is a disgusting thing in every country.

I just wanted to say that this one is better than your previous two. Is this gone?

Should we really change the heroine? Silly Baitian is really silly Baitian. The heroine was still a bit charming before, but now, she is not as good as Alice. His arm was broken by a goblin, his lover was chased by the goblin and kicked out of school, and almost died. However, the heroine pretended that this had never happened and continued to be stupid and sweet? Not to mention how much it helps the male protagonist, but at least support the male protagonist, right? As a result, the heroine couldn't even do the most basic things, and she still doubted whether the hero who wanted to wage war against goblins was bad, and even wanted to fight. Dumbledore had to come out to persuade, "Sister, you are so entangled, why not just go neutral and leave it alone." Comparing the dedication of the male protagonist to the female protagonist, I am really speechless.

? ? ? The protagonist just reached his peak and jumped to his son? Doesn't the author only write stories about children? The storyline behind this is completely uninnovative... I'm really speechless. There isn't much content in each chapter. I've been holding back for a long time. Three chapters is equal to one chapter for others, and it's poorly written. It's a waste of my money. 😅

Will the heroine give it to Hermione?

I blindly guessed that the author wanted to write about each of the five schools, one book for each school. Ah? Five colleges? Yes, is it normal for there to be five of the top four?

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I'm about to ask why there is a female protagonist... It's fine to be alone. As long as it's not Alice, I'm annoyed

Warning for ruining the character⚠️ That is, I tried to draw John, Just don't complain about comparisons (tears * (The following spoiler warning!! Is the content explanation) ps: The upper left is from John's escape from St. Brelade, the lower left is from the first time he "accidentally drank" the hair growth potion in Potions class, the upper right is the patron saint of pythons, and the lower right is the first time to use the Unforgivable Curse [Cruciatus]

I don't like Alice. If I could only say that I was indifferent before, now I hate it, because now she always gives me the feeling that it will distance Michelle from the male protagonist. It is very uncomfortable. After she said that she likes the male protagonist, I feel even more uncomfortable. It's like the male protagonist who wants to steal Michelle. I really can't accept that the female protagonist is not Michelle, and I can't accept that someone steals the male protagonist. Michelle happily calls that person sister-in-law. I can curse... There shouldn't be anyone between Michelle and the male protagonist, otherwise it will really make people... I can only say that I love this book so much, and I don't want the characters I love to be wronged, even if the character itself doesn't feel wronged when describing it

The heroine?

Name: Charmander Gender: Male Race: Dragon Attribute: Dragon Dark Fire Pedage: Subspecies Heritage: Dragon Evolution: Charmander Drawing Route One Flame Dragon One Magma Dragon One Lava Dragon One Flame Dragon Level: Law Treasure: Dragon Blood Vase (drinking the purified blood enhances various attributes) Talent: Flame King (commands all fire-attribute pets to fight for it) Product: Dragon Blood Stone (wear it on fire-attribute pets to enhance fire-attribute attacks) ) Special Skills: Swallowing (can eat all living creatures) Skills: Dragon Power, Jetting Magma, Fire Poison, Sea of Magma and Fire, Summoning Fire Elements Introduction: The offspring of the Eastern Dragon Clan traveled through dinosaur time and space one day and combined with a Tyrannosaurus when they were still eggs and were signed by the male protagonist to become war pets Brother, if you saw it, please reply to me and see if this character can appear? Thank you The following are the treasures and evolved images of the supporting characters{"NickName":"Hoseear_","UserId":214376986}

Changed the protagonist? It's over, it's no longer interesting

Around Chapter 20, the image creation of Dumbledore and Teacher McGonagall deviated too much from the original work.

The writing is really great! The writing is silky smooth, and the author is very diligent in correcting typos. The most important thing is that the plot is perfect. Originally I wanted to vote three cards. It's a pity that I can only vote two. Please give me more!

What's the point of descendants, and the protagonist's son has this kind of virtue? With this character, I might as well read the original work

Why does it feel like someone else wrote it after it was put on the shelves? ? ?

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Good guy, I've run out of books

In fact, I really want to see the author write a novel where Harry Potter doesn't go crazy for once.

To be honest, the author wrote quite well.

Cry and keep writing

Good guy, I suddenly remembered this book. When I came back to read it, I found that it was too late.