I Achieved Immortality at Hogwarts

I have always felt that if you want to write fantasy, you must first write a Harry Potter fanfic. Think about it, various characters with outstanding characteristics, a logical and self-consistent magic system, there are exactly seven stages in the book every year, and the villains are distinct. It's perfect for practicing fantasy writing.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit twisted, has the rationality of an adult, and sometimes is suddenly very childish.

When I read your book, I don't want to read the heroine Hermione again, and I hope to keep it.

Without memory, why was the protagonist assigned to Gryffindor? The little lions of Gryffindor are reckless and noisy. In this case, can the protagonist have a quiet place to study? You are still childish and can argue with children, and you think Ron is humorous. Is this the way an adult thinks and handles things?

I read a few chapters and it made me feel sick. The author set Pig's Foot up as a time traveler who had watched Harry Potter. As a result, he was deliberately ignorant of certain things, such as buying a second-hand wand when buying a wand. He walked through a wall in a station thinking that others were harming him... Anyone who has read Harry Potter knows what's going on, but the author, you are disgusting because of the word count.

What are you writing? Author, the three golden chapters you wrote successfully helped you drive away half of the readers.

The writing is too stream-of-consciousness, and deleting all the original pictures in the front will not affect the reading at all. What are you doing writing these pictures?

Only by truly finishing a book can you write better and better. Every book is a eunuch, and by the end of the writing his character is completely ruined. Not only will no one read it, but the writing will get worse and worse.

The author, I would like to take the liberty to ask, have you confirmed who the heroine is? Don't be Hermione! No matter how beautiful she looks in the movie, she can't hold her head down in the latest chapter! It's like being poisoned by Lockhart! When Lockhart was in trouble in class, William and Hermione offered to help with a ladder! Then Lockhart mocked the male protagonist and the class laughed. She knew clearly that the protagonist was so embarrassed that Miss Snake wanted to bite someone, but what Hermione did was to write down Lockhart's words like famous aphorisms. Some time ago, she showed jealousy by caring about the protagonist's ring, but she forgot everything when she saw her idol! Even an ordinary person wouldn't be so heartless if he saw the teacher using him to mock his friends in class, right? You don't even offer any comfort? Hermione happily answered the question and indirectly helped Lockhart humiliate the male protagonist, and then almost fainted with joy! It's just that William has a big heart, and a normal person would never have a deep friendship with such a person! If it was really a child, the two of them would have broken up long ago! Later, Lockhart was incompetent and put the students in danger. William protected the students, and even Slytherin was embarrassed to laugh at William. Then, Hermione kept recommending Lockhart to him and asked the male protagonist to apologize to Lockhart! I'm surprised. Didn't Lockhart take the initiative to humiliate the male protagonist and cause trouble for him? Doesn't she have eyes? It's not like you showed a crush on the male protagonist some time ago! Is your love so short? Even if you don't love him, is he your good friend? Is your friendship so cheap? In front of your idol, you don't have to hesitate, right? Ordinary friends also have a comforting behavior! I know that Hermione was like this when she met Lockhart in the original book. At this time in the original book, Hermione neither fell in love with Harry Ron, nor did Lockhart humiliate Harry Ron. She was crazy about chasing stars, but here Lockhart not only humiliated her friend (see the part about the ring in the previous article, she seemed to have a crush on the protagonist) but also caused trouble for William. As a result, she became more addicted than in the original book? The original Hermione is not as humble as she is shown in this article! And this is a fan! Why is it more serious? After her friend was picked on by the teacher for no reason, she didn't say that she should recognize Lockhart's true face as soon as possible. She couldn't be so smart when she saw him, right? And it seems that he doesn't understand the protagonist at all, and there is a gap between him and his friends, but Ron can appreciate it and even calls the protagonist his best friend! As a result, Hermione actually thought that the protagonist was cheating on Ron? I've always been a fan of protagonists. As long as the protagonist doesn't give in and loses his wits, I like the author to give all the good things to the protagonist! So if there must be a female protagonist, I hope that the female protagonist is the most like-minded with the male protagonist (unless each female protagonist is very well written, otherwise I don't like to read harem novels)! At least the heroine should be able to stand by the hero when things happen, and should the heroine be able to stand up and refute when someone humiliates the hero? But Hermione did worse than ordinary friends! Respect the fate of others and put aside the plot to help others. I think Hermione should be assigned to Lockhart! She is definitely willing now! Give the protagonist a better one, William is the author's son! Miss Snake is very good. She has full loyalty, completely understands the protagonist, and can complement the protagonist. She can be more beautiful in human form. Isn't she better than Hermione?

The protagonist doesn't know the plot at all, and has never watched HP Traveler? Then why not just write about an aborigine?

It is relatively average. The description of the characters is not profound. The protagonist has no extraordinary personality, will, or execution ability. He is just an ordinary person. The protagonist is a time traveler, but he forcibly forgets all the plot. The processing is very blunt. If you want to use scientific analysis, it can be treated as an aboriginal reincarnation. It can't escape the original plot at all. What's the point of adults playing with primary school students? There is no need to waste time in school. Since you must have enough resources to analyze magic, it is more reliable to find a way to cooperate with scientific research institutions or build your own talents As a productive force, magic has great benefits, with tens of billions of dollars. Even for children, you can use age-increasing agents to talk about it. Some careerist capitalists are willing to cooperate with you.

First of all, where did the idea for the Hogwarts death name come from? Also, I actually saw the word "mana exhausted"...

What is going on in the first six chapters? Why am I so confused? Can anyone tell me briefly what the first six chapters are trying to show?

Does the author want to change the heroine? Hermione's latest chapters are so disgusting that she almost knelt down and licked Lockhart's dick. Don't tell me that you still want to create her as the heroine?

Since he was thinking about eternal life at a young age, Old Deng had no choice but to torture the protagonist severely.

What the hell are the first six chapters? Don't put the big Riddler at the beginning. I hope you can stay away from the author's perspective and look at what you wrote from the perspective of a reader without any setting/framework/plot impression...

Woc, what does eternity know o.0

All four books are level 1. After all, I have written nearly 10 million words of novels. How can I make no progress at all? Forget it, change my career.

I have been writing HP for so long. . . . Why is the author's update still so awkward?

Chapter 18: Is the Gryffindor password wrong🤔? Why do you remember it is dragon scum?

It's been a long time since I've read Qidian. The author has been resurrected, but why isn't the title of the book the same as before? I'm so unhappy.

It's been a long time since I've read Qidian. The author has been resurrected, but why isn't the title of the book the same as before? I'm so unhappy.

Finally resurrected, come on! ! ! !

Your previous writings were still good, but this one is really not good.

In fact, I feel like there is still a lot more that could be written, but it was a pity that I ended it because of poor results.

A running account, I don't know what the author wants to write, and neither does the protagonist

Very well written. The author is very good. It is rare to write Hermione so well. He took into account the unlikable character of Hermione in the early stage of the original work and deepened it, which highlighted Hermione's cuteness.