Hogwarts: Why Do You Call Me the Demon King?

The title of this book is not a good introduction. It's quite interesting. If I hadn't been unable to find the book, I wouldn't have noticed it.

The protagonist seems to enjoy being part of Grindelwald and Dumbledore's play. . . . Looking like an old lover to get close to an old gay man? To be honest, this kind of thinking is rare even in Britain.

Professor McGonagall knew about the gift of prophecy. She just thought that Trelawney did not inherit that gift, so it was impossible to say that the gift of prophecy was unheard of. Dumbledore and Grindelwald have broken up a long time ago. Every time I see fans talking about this, I feel very disconnected. The mistake that Dumbledore could not let go of in his later years was that he was blinded by his own ambition and neglected his family and love. It was not that he failed to make peace with Grindelwald. He didn't fight Grindelwald because he was afraid of facing the truth of the past, and he didn't have so much unrequited passion. Dumbledore realized his mistake and suffered from inner torture for many years. This is Rowling's important portrayal of Dumbledore's love. Writing about the nature of Dumbledore and Grindelwald's relationship is a blasphemy against this love.

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It was so painful to watch. There are very few effective and continuous lines and nutritious plot information, but it always insists on explaining and explaining. It seems that just a small character breathing, drinking water and wiping his butt have to be explained in a long paragraph.

At first, I focused on magic, and the writing was very good. Once it was released, I stopped talking about it, and became crazy about politics. Since it was released, I have written about Fudge and how much about politics. I am only in the first grade and I am writing like this. What happens next? ? ? What I want to see is a magic school, not a political school. Just keep it and check it out later.

There are a large number of "crooked buildings", unnecessary descriptions, and inexplicable expansion. . . .

Author, what's going on behind this? I'm so bored.

1/3 Of the main text and 2/3 of the side stories (gossip) are a bit watery, and some places introduce too much.

You never know whether the next chapter will be a water chapter😇 But Peter has been caught, so it's time to stop water injection, right?

It took thirteen chapters to capture a Wormtail. It is estimated that it will take another seven chapters to get the resettlement result, and another six chapters to rehabilitate Sirius (an optimistic estimate). This Wormtail is harder to kill than Voldemort.

It was pretty good before I entered the school. After I entered the school, there was only water and I just drifted with the tide. If the author sees this, please make a new outline and details.

The overall quality of the book is okay, and the writing is a bit slow, that is, wordy, but now there are more and more AI stool lines, which are not bad, but I still decided not to read it, just for my own reasons, because the author has been interacting with Grindelwald and Dumbledore, and his identity is deeply involved with the two, and ended up being branched to Hercules. Patch, just because old Deng's favorite student is Newt Scamander, who belongs to Hufflepuff. The plot is too separated from the previous one, without any foreshadowing. It's not very comfortable to watch, with a sense of tearing and a sense of hard play. I can only leave the show with regret. I wish the author will improve his writing and write better Goodbye.

Why do you still think that Potter is from a mixed-race family? They are descendants of the third son of Peverell, and they have passed down the Deathly Hallows from generation to generation. They are all pure-bloods all the way up to James. Why do you have a mixed-blood family?

Plot summary of the latest chapter: Snape is walking. It's getting more and more watery, so I can only say goodbye.

Indeed, they all told Lao Deng that it would be difficult to write after Voldemort was destroyed But they mentioned it and then hid it, it felt like it was mentioned in one breath and then swallowed, which was a bit unpleasant.

In the original books of "Harry Potter", Voldemort's soul cannot be killed if he has a Horcrux. You must follow the procedure of "destroy all the Horcruxes and then kill Voldemort" in order to kill him. This is explicitly mentioned in the conversation between Dumbledore and Harry. As a result, the author killed Voldemort's soul first. This bug is like a thorn. The author obviously writes well, but this thorn still pricks me from time to time while reading the book.

The writing is okay, but the main character is a Hufflepuff

Why are current Harry Potter fans so obsessed with starting out as a magician and giving fortunes to Hermione?

Chapter 1: Pretending to be pretentious, having no shortage of food and drink, how to conspicuously do fortune-telling on the street...

I feel that the content is really good. It is full of Dumbledore's Grindelwald meal replacement, prophecy, heterochromatic eyes, speech buffs and so on. I should consider changing the title and introduction of the book. The title of the book is about the devil. The introduction can say; if you see heterochromatic eyes at Hogwarts, the boy who can predict, please don't be afraid.

What did Grindelwald do that Dumbledore did? Is it gay?

Even if you watch the sixth film, when Harry suspected that James was a half-blood prince, he was clearly told that James was a pure blood.

The writing is decent and the plot is okay. But I won't decide if the water becomes this way.

The protagonist group is now an enhanced version of the three little ones, living the enhanced version of the original level is a bit boring.

It's just that he's too talkative (verbose?), And I get tired from watching it all the time, and I can't stand it anymore.

Author, I beg you, let me spend these ten cents worth something.

Yes, I'm looking forward to it now. I'm betting on the author's wonderful outline.

The writing at the back is really messy. Did you change the person or the AI?

Kreacher's plot is a blind change to the original plot. Why does Kreacher know everything in the note that Regulus left in the fake locket? Why was it that a few days after Kreacher ran back to his old house, he was taken back to the cave by Regulus and saw the whole process of Regulus from drinking medicine to lying by the water to drinking water to being pulled down by the Inferi and drowning, and then ran away again? Regulus can't help but think that the Voldemort bloodline is here. You're too serious about being self-indulgent.