A Certain Magical Hogwarts

Finished spreading flowers! My two favorite HP fics, Bloodline and this book, are both finished one after the other, ah——! I stayed at home during the Chinese New Year this year and finished the HP movies in one go. I was deeply attracted by this fantasy world, so I have been reading HP fanfiction crazily since the Spring Festival. I have memorized many of the plots by heart, and I have also read many interesting stories and second stories, but only these two are the most suitable for me. The author's creativity is very suitable. Reasonable, there is no stiff feeling of forced stitching, and there is no setting that goes against the world view. It is very comfortable to watch. I feel reluctant to let go and look forward to it when it is about to end. I bought Lego Harry Potter in July and read it for a while, but the game did not bring me much joy. Gradually, many fans started to look down on it. There are not many surprises, because most of the books basically overlap with the original story line to a large extent, and the ending can be seen at a glance. This is also where many fan authors are conflicted. If they don't copy, they are afraid that readers will be dissatisfied, and if they create their own, they will be afraid of poor writing. If they copy, many people will dislike it. Many fans are stuck in the fourth or fifth grade or the Goblet of Fire. It's a eunuch, but this book adds many of its own stories to the original story line, such as going to destroy the city (crossed out) to save the world during the summer vacation. Many of them are the protagonist's own stories, which makes people sure that this is another person's story and not a re-read of the original work. This is a highlight of this work and one of the reasons why I recommend it. With the completion of this book, I think my HP craze will have cooled down. There is indeed no interesting work that attracts me now. I also understand what I really want to find in fan works. The story of Harry Potter has been completed. No one wants to read a story over and over again. Readers want to pursue their own stories, the wizarding world in everyone's heart, where they make whatever changes they want and write their own legends. I wish the author's next book will be a hit, and I wish you flowers when it's finished!

， I've read 90% of Qidian's Harry Potter fics, and this book ranks among the top three.       ，，       ，，，， I am a legend, it is very amazing at first glance, it is very awesome that a new author can write like this. It's a pity that Wen Qing started to play in the middle period, and the heroine died. It was so sad that I didn't dare to read further. Although it is not true that literary youth cannot write, I still want to relax when reading online articles, so I stopped reading them after putting them on the bookshelf. The alchemist's daily style is a bit slow, the blood wizard is a bit watery, the poisoned egg is a bit exaggerated, and the school beats the second-year Slytherin students until they don't know whether they are alive or dead. I didn't finish it until I drank black tea, but it's still a good book. These are the ones I have read and am currently reading, and I have not read the others. These are all good books, but I still think this book can be ranked in the top three. The plot is reasonable, the characters are a breakthrough based on the original work, and it follows current events. There are not too many bad jokes. It is funny and not too sensational. It is really great. Believe in yourself, and even your colleagues can become great gods. In a word, the author is awesome! !

It's obviously well written, but there's always something wrong when reading it that makes me unable to read on. The emotional scenes in other books always make me smile unknowingly, but the emotional scenes in this book always make me frown, and I can't find the reason yet, so it's strange. Or maybe even though I don't like Ron very much, it's not true that Ron is so guilty. . . . .

I feel like Ron and Harry are a bit too dark and miserable, and Malfoy is a bit too much. Also, although the male protagonist is a time traveler, he has spent many years with his Muggle parents. I only give gifts on holidays every year. Is it really okay to travel around the world with my girlfriend during holidays and my sister doesn't stay at her parents' house? Don't their parents feel that their children have been raised in vain? Although the plot of the male and female protagonists going around saving the world (and causing destruction) is very exciting, it is also appropriate for a little wizard to stay with his parents during the winter and summer vacations to show filial piety and bring family companionship. In the original work, Harry and Hermione went to their respective homes during the winter and summer vacations, which did not affect saving the world (although Harry had to protect the magic because of Lily).

Let me comment briefly. I couldn't stand it when I saw Paris. Overall, this book has its highlights, and there is a novel plot extended from the original work. Personally, I think the biggest flaw is the dialogue and wording. The Western novel has Chinese dialogue, and some parts are really awkward to read. The emotional scenes are good. I haven't eaten much recently, so I feel so full. It's okay to play jokes, but if you play too much, it feels like water. Dialogue really persuades people to quit

This is purely a personal opinion, there are more comments you can make, but please don't criticize and communicate in a friendly manner. The author relied on this restoration of the original work and only added the protagonist to write a new work. It is not a restoration, but more like our regrets about the original work, our disapproval of Harry, Ron's dislike, regret for Hermione's choice (you all have the ABC number in your mind about this), and a little bit of displeasure towards Dumbledore. Everyone has more or less a few days, which is of course Rowling's fault. There is no excitement, only bright spots. (Of course, the original work must have some excitement before it collapses.) The author has a small group, and he ingeniously formed a new small group with Cedric and Cho Chang (and it is a couple plus one, and Dreams and Feelings is somewhat similar to a trio). Using a new adventure method to create a new legendary story, coupled with the protagonist's ignorance, the author did not use the control or cheating of traditional online novels to crush it, but changed the plot again and again by coincidence. The biggest highlight so far is in the first grade. This is really a brand new creation! There is no sense of foresight here, nor is there a God-like overlook, which gives people the impression that this is the way of life for a normal person. It also makes up for the pitfalls of the original work, such as Luna's sensibility. As long as the level is grasped, this work is definitely a new masterpiece. Compared with the writing style of Secret Treasure, this one has a stronger control over emotions. HDZ makes people want to laugh. The daily life of my sister also makes people feel full of warmth. This is not a fan work, it is more like borrowing the setting to give HP a brand new opportunity, one that meets everything we expect in our hearts. I wonder if I can add some details😁😁

This book is very well written. The protagonist's growth in strength is reasonable and well-founded, unlike some books that directly add an inexplicable genius setting to the protagonist. The original plot is very original, not just copying the original text after Harry. The protagonist is not a "mom" type protagonist who worries about everything, and has little interaction with Harry and Ron (this is simply rare). The author controls the plot very well, and the updates are stable and guaranteed compared to other HP fics. The emotional line is well written, and the more I write it, the better it becomes. Unlike many HP fans, Hermione plays the role of an assistant, partner and even a leader in the protagonist's adventures, rather than a vase (this is also rare, in many HP fans Hermione only acts coquettishly and cutely). The most amazing thing is that the protagonist does not remember the HP plot. This setting seems a bit uncomfortable at first glance. However, this setting makes the protagonist's influence on the HP world more subtle and natural, making the development of the world line of this book completely different from the original work but intertwined with each other. The protagonist cannot break the game forcibly because he does not remember the HP content (for example, he killed all the Horcruxes at the beginning...), Which makes the plot of this book full of tension. I have always believed that a vibrant HP world can only be recreated by going deep into the love-hate entanglements and intrigues of the original work (the setting that the protagonist of this book does not remember the plot just provides the cornerstone for this). Relying on the time traveler's foresight to brutally murder the Dark Lord at the beginning, or relying on the foresight to arrange a perfect ending for everyone and being a mother-in-law throughout the whole process, it's cool, but it also feels boring after watching too much. Among all HP fans in Qidian, taking into account the characters, plot and writing style, this book should be in the top three. Considering that the updates are so stable, it may even be in the top two.

Maybe it's just a matter of personal taste, but there's something really bad about it, that is, the endless popular yellow stalks and gay stalks, which are so dense and eye-catching that they often make me laugh out loud. In this regard, you can see the big-eyed Anomaly and Dawn. He also likes to be a bit unserious, shaking off his baggage and amusing people, but he never goes out of play without going down the third route, which is relatively soft. Moreover, let's not say that the third route is unscrupulous. After all, people have different opinions. If you drive too much and get blocked, it will not be good for the work, the readers, or yourself. If you don't mention the above, this is one of the best Harry novels I have ever seen. If you add in the condition that there is no eunuch, it is the only one. From a personal point of view, I can say that it will absolutely crush the ones like the poisonous egg, secret treasure, and the likes next door. I have read all the others without even reading a few chapters. The author is very particular about the original work, the writing clues are carefully arranged, the characters are vividly portrayed, and the emotional lines are natural and smooth without being awkward (this is a great praise). Moreover, he does not copy the book, and the writing style is stable and soft. I hope the author Jun Yue can write better, please work hard.

I have never read the basic HP fanfic, but from a purely novel perspective, this one is a rare and good book. Although it is a fan-written book, the author's ability to fill in the gaps is rare among all current authors. It's entirely possible to treat it as a completely original novel. It is undeniable that the author's ability to describe and design some subplots is still slightly lacking, but it is already the first glimpse of a big boss. Although the author has been writing fan fiction, it is not clear how capable he is of constructing the overall world framework, but at least his ability to write stories is obvious to all. Looking forward to the author's original novel.

A very good work. If I were to evaluate it in one sentence, I would say this: After reading this book, I will never read any HP fanfics again. That was when I was in primary school. I had finished reading Aunt Rowling's book. The main plot of it didn't leave a deep impression on me, to be honest, but there was one thing that lingered in my heart - Hermione. I liked Hermione very much, especially Hermione who later came into contact with Emma, ​​and I couldn't accept the pairing in the original book. So when I was a child, I wanted to construct a different story in my dreams countless times. Looking back now, my liking for Hermione was probably the reason why I started reading light novels, and it was also the reason why I accidentally fell in love with her once I met her 🤭. Later, even though I grew older, she was still my childhood dream. Thanks to Crow Crow's book for helping me realize this dream. I really like the CP of William and Hermione! It's really comfortable to watch the love between the two. Although Crow Crow didn't write any extras and couldn't see more stories about William and Hermione, I remembered that Conan Doyle once wrote in the last detective story that there must be a world where all the story characters continue their stories. And, I still have dreams. Others This is the only HP fanfic I have read, but I will not read anything else in the future, because I also love God of War purely. William and Hermione have become the only couple that exists in my heart. Ah, I like you so much! Thank you for fulfilling my childhood dream, I love you!

I finished reading this book completely at 2:14 on June 3. To be honest, I have read a lot of fanfiction (I think). This book ranks among the top three in my mind. I stayed up for several days and nights to read it. In the last chapter, I saw that the author needs to write a thesis. Maybe because the thesis requires homework, I don't want to write words recently. This is all understandable, or because of the epidemic, or because of some miscellaneous things, I have not continued to write extras and new books in the past ten months. To be honest, I don't want anything else. I just hope that I can write part of the extras and new books this year. I am looking forward to it (๑˙ー˙๑). I also hope that the author's life will get better and better, and I hope it will be in my lifetime. Come on author, I hope you will be at your peak when you come back and continue to do so.

It's so funny, it's so crazy, it makes my head laugh.

To be honest, I have been reading a lot of fan fiction in the past year or two, and I have read a lot of anime from various novels. This is one of the few HP fan fictions that I feel should be made a god. Come on! Support you! Just don't mess up 😅

It must be said that the author can always find some interesting jokes in his articles, such as "thinly cut into pieces." I guess it was Lu Zhishen who punched Guan Xili, right?

So this novel may still follow the same old path of CP between the protagonist and Hao Min.

This is a sign that the flowers will be finished.

This Hogwarts book can be said to be one of the rare masterpieces, highly recommended! 🌹

As for the picture of the magic wand, the author came out and I flipped it from top to bottom, but I didn't find it! ! You liar! ! 😢😢😢

The fluorescent flicker spell is really interesting.

This male protagonist is much happier than Harry Potter

First-year Ravenclaw wizard turns into Gryffindor hero instantly

Naruto fanfics are basically finished, while HP fanfics are basically unfinished. After reading a lot of fan works, I found this very interesting thing. After thinking about it carefully, I think the key point is that HP is a fairy tale with few characters and a boss fight from the beginning to the end. As a fan creator, you must create your own creation to expand the world view and find the meaning of the existence of the fan hero, and you must not ignore the role of the trio. Nowadays, some books with less poisonous points adopt the method of staggering the time period of the protagonist and the trio to avoid the poisonous points. Although there will be some die-hard fans of the trio, the world view can be less constrained, which is also a good method. There are also many poisonous points in the construction of the world view. Many books in Naruto fandom that allow the protagonist to have other Japanese comic abilities have survived because they are all passionate anime with the same cultural background and similar styles. Those authors who added Chinese Taoism to HP, have you seriously added them? Are you sure you are not adding the upgrade monster-killing flow in fantasy novels? Magic in General HP is just an element of life, playing the same role as electric coal. The real highlight is never the fighting, but the stories and emotions between people under the strong sense of immersion in living in a magical world. Fighting is just lubricant, you cannot put the cart before the horse. Therefore, I think a good fan work should be as close to the original work as possible in terms of the power system. The storyline of a good HP fan should be able to show more details of life in the British wizarding world, or build a reasonable humanistic outlook on the wizarding world in other parts of the world. The Fantastic Beasts movie is actually a good example. Don't write the protagonist as one who is overwhelmed by strength and destined to be his destiny, because it is a low-demon world, and it is difficult to guarantee that it will not collapse, with different enemies popping up all the time. Moreover, HP is really not suitable for writing conventional white articles. I have seen many good ideas being wasted. In short, I hope that all authors who are willing to spend time writing HP fan fiction can focus more on the plot, and use writing techniques that are stronger than HP fairy tales to show us a more magnificent or vivid HP world view. There should be a masterpiece about this.

William Stark Wand

Create a post, create a post, Raise your hands if you support Hermione being the heroine! ! ! 😍😍😍

In fact, I quite like Hermione. As a wizard who came from an ordinary family, not only did she not give up on herself, but she worked harder to strengthen her beliefs and never gave up. Moreover, the way Hermione, who had just arrived in the magical world, protected her little hedgehog, was like a little wolf cub that had only left the group. Even if she showed her teeth and grinned, she would not be scary, but rather cute. Moreover, she is a serious and cute-looking little girl holding a big book and looking for the truth seriously. She is really cute and adorable.

I'm halfway through the book, and overall it's a good book. The only drawback is that the character of the sister is too contrived and unlikable. It reminded me of the book "Hogwarts on the Tip of the Tongue". The heroine was so capable of acting like a monster, as abnormal as a mental illness. I gave up after reading a few chapters.

I feel like the main character is a little too naive. People who are not my kind must have different minds. Humans will never be able to get along with house elves as equals. After servility was eradicated and their minds were liberated, the house elves would only breed deep-seated hatred when faced with the differential treatment by humans.

In France, Hermione pretends to be William, kisses and seduces other women, and deliberately ruins William's reputation to prevent other women from approaching. This plot is really a bit poisonous. From another perspective, it is equivalent to kissing other men in front of your wife's face, making her have the reputation of a slut and a scumbag to prevent other men from grabbing her. Your wife, don't you feel bad? Even if Hermione apologized to the male protagonist in private later (not even afterwards but only after the male protagonist expressed her love), it was still disgusting. It's really a bad taste 😐 Looking at other comments, it seems that the male protagonist's sister also did this kind of thing.

I regret that I spent 200 subscription points in the early stage just to be able to comment on the chapters. The results became more and more ugly as I read them, and I had to give up before I could even subscribe. He is honey, I am arsenic, the following is my demining, you can judge for yourself: 1. Excessive jokes, three sentences and one joke, many obviously inappropriate Internet memes have to be stuffed into it. It can be seen that the author is very self-motivated when writing, but it is not certain whether others will be happy or not. 2. It is full of uncomfortable pornographic jokes and inexplicable plots. How should I put it, it is not smelly, but you can clearly feel that the author is like a boy in a university dormitory. (For example, the frequent "milky white liquid splashed on the face" (not necessarily a woman's face) is actually milk/porridge or something) 3. Professors are too useless and have no crisis response ability at all. Anyone can cause a teaching accident that requires the professor to be hospitalized. Such a person should just be a professor and go back to farming. 4. The hang-up is too great. Even if it is an adult's learning ability, he almost completed the second-year course by himself in the half summer before entering school without any magic foundation. In the original work, no matter whether it is Hermione, a top student with strong learning ability, or a pureblood from an aristocratic family, no one can say that they can speed up to this level in half a summer without formal teaching, but this is still bearable. Later, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I thought I would at least look at the few pictures I subscribed to, so I turned to the back - although I don't know what happened, in just one year, our first-year protagonist has already won the Order of Merlin, and completed all the courses of Potions and Defense Against the Dark Arts in the time loop. What's the point of looking at such a big score? Forget it, Voldemort is even A in the third grade. 5. The original character is ooc, but this matter is a matter of opinion, so I put it in the last one. But at least I can't accept it. When I first saw Qiu, I thought, "If I do what I want to her, I will be sent to Azkaban." ? Above. New users are asked to make their own judgment.

When Lucius claimed 20,000 Galleons earlier, I just took it as a big deal. But when I saw Tonks buying snacks, I couldn't stand it anymore. Fifty-eight Galleons for a big bag of snacks was outrageous, right? The author didn't understand their prices or something. I searched on Baidu and found out that one Galleons is seventeen siekos and one sieko is twenty-nine kats, and then I accidentally saw a post from a big guy. I couldn't stand it anymore. As I read on, I can only ignore the funny jokes about prices.