Xian Gong Kaiwu

When I first read Gu, I was first attracted by the words "dark flow", but when I started to watch it, I had a different feeling. Even just a few dozen pictures in the early stage can quickly catch people's attention. Fang Yuan has his own understanding of everything, such as his calmness about testing out C-level qualifications, his views on his younger brother who stabbed him in the back in his previous life, his contempt and indifference towards the maid Shen Cui, and his uncle and aunt's repeated repayments. Attack, the response to the school elders, clan leaders and others... There is also "The Biography of the Ancestor" that surprised me the most. The first story "The Three Gus of the Ancestor" appeared first in the fifth chapter. When I first read it, it simply brought me an unprecedented surprise. Not to mention dozens of pictures, Gu attracted me in just a few chapters, making me realize that Gu is a unique book, and it also made me feel the unique charm of Gu. What's even more valuable is that Gu showed logical but amazing wits at the beginning. Fang Yuan has always been confident and calm, dealing with crisis after crisis with amazing wisdom, methods or acting skills. This stunning opening made me naturally able to calm down and read, and the fuller images of Fang Yuan and even the supporting characters gradually appeared in front of me as the plot unfolded. Either he easily sees through Jiao San's evil intentions, or he shows his extraordinary abilities calmly, or he hides in the belly of the Wild Boar King with decisiveness and ruthlessness, as well as various understanding and utilization of rules, or he does not hesitate to create the "little bear cake" in order to improve his cultivation and solve the enemy. "Do it"... I saw Fang Yuan's persistence for eternal life, his tenacity in the face of difficulties, setbacks and even failures, his extraordinary wisdom and rare sobriety, and his ruthless behavior... These descriptions are gradually increasing Gu's charm. Fang Yuan can always make different but free choices. This choice may not be the most correct, but it is always charming and the most exciting. But what surprised me even more was that these charming plots were just the foreshadowing before the climax. To this day, I still can't forget the shock when Fang Yuan captured the "Blood Skull Gu", the sophistication when he controlled and used Bai Ningbing, the decisiveness when he gave up the soon-to-be-formed "Second Sky Aperture Gu" and the amazingness when he changed to practice Dingxianyou, the various choices when he captured and managed the Fox Immortal Paradise... There are many unforgettable plots later, but I won't go into details here. In addition to the plot, the creation of the supporting characters in Gu also surprised me. Fang Yuan's many opponents and even more of his defeated generals also have their own charms. Gu is like a real world, where everyone is their own protagonist. Even for a scheming and wise person like Fang Yuan, things may not always develop as he wishes. But every failure of Fang Yuan does not make people feel useless. Whether it is "This sword guard against arrogance and impetuosity" when an important supporting character like Bai Ningbing backstabs, or the collapse of the plan caused by a small person who was once ignored by Fang Yuan, it makes people feel that the world of Gu is more real, and these supporting characters are more vivid. Compared with Gu, Ning Zhuo in this book lacks a lot of charm, and the supporting characters in the book seem to have become tool men who blindly set off Ning Zhuo. It was as if they were not living people in the first place, but just "human life threads" hanging down one by one by the real person, and mechanically controlled puppets to cooperate with Ning Zhuo. Ning Zhuo is not as sophisticated, alert, and ruthless as Fang Yuan... But Ning Zhuo is always successful, and I can often foresee his success, because the enemies in the book cannot even give Ning Zhuo any sense of oppression at all. When I read Gu, I can often put myself in Fang Yuan's perspective and think about how to break through the situation in front of me, but I often find it extremely difficult and unable to start. This also means that when Fang Yuan or the real person gives this answer, I always feel surprised and excited, but I don't feel the same, or even just similar feelings in Ning Zhuo. I don't know if it's because the real person's level has declined, or because he's unable to perform to his true level due to various restrictions. It has been pointed out many times in this book that "Ning Zhuo is not clumsy", but in my opinion, compared with Fang Yuan, Ning Zhuo is too "clumsy". At this time, many book friends may come out to refute me, telling me that Ning Zhuo is just a precocious child. He does not have Fang Yuan's five hundred years of experience, and does not have the sophistication and ruthlessness of Fang Yuan's reincarnation... But I want to say, no matter what the setting of the protagonist is, isn't writing a charming protagonist what really attracts readers? Perhaps limited by today's increasingly harsh network environment, Ning Zhuo really has no way to be as ruthless and determined as Fang Yuan. But aren't Fang Yuan's qualities such as calmness, sobriety, calmness, wisdom, etc. Also very charming and fascinating? Not to mention that Fang Yuan had revealed his ambition and determination early on, which was to pursue "eternal life". It was this goal, determination and will that ran from beginning to end that later created the shock of "The Immortal regrets but I don't". But for Ning Zhuo, I still don't know what his goal is? What is his lifelong pursuit? It seems that there is only one goal left to him by his mother - "Asgard". This is really far from Fang Yuan's firm will to live forever. If Fang Yuan is a fish swimming against the sky in the upstream river, every time he swims, he will create magnificent splashes on the water, and every time he jumps, he will bloom with dazzling colors under the sunlight. Now Ning Zhuo is just like a small fry that has just hatched from a fish egg, swirling around a relatively bright shell next to him in confusion. The daily plot is nothing more than A practicing, A makes progress, then A beats B, and then B also makes progress, and finally everyone explores the Immortal Palace together, and ultimately returns without success... Similar to Fang Yuan's emotions , there is no way to find the understanding of every thing, every move, every difficulty and obstacle. The feeling of making little plans, accumulating advantages step by step, and finally defeating the powerful enemy at the current stage with a "snake swallowing the elephant" attitude has disappeared without a trace. All of the above really make me feel somewhat disappointed and regretful. I even feel that even if I rewatch Gu, whose plot I already know well, I have more expectations than watching Ning Zhuo now. It can bring me the surprise and amazement of the past, and it can also make the smile of the past appear on my face unconsciously.

I had a very bad time in junior high school, and even wanted to die, all spent watching Gu Zhenren I can't remember which character said it, no one around you thinks highly of you, you have to think highly of yourself, and you must love yourself This sentence still shines like a light to me today It has supported me through many difficult roads Thank you, Zhenren! 😡😡😡

The post is too long. The full text is about 3,500 words. I will attach a picture version. You can save and view it if necessary. Please don't quarrel. The book friend circle is a circle where readers can have friendly discussions around books. No need to make noise, no need. This is my first time to write such a long book review. I have been writing it on and off for several days. I have read the book circles for a few days, and during this period I have made some deletions and deletions. I have decided to publish it. I hope that the posts will not be deleted and the posts will not be deleted. Book friends who are discussing it, please also read these more than 3,000 words. If you can provide valuable opinions and check for any omissions, I will be very grateful. Many people in the book club seem to be confused by his cultivation, and they always think that he is practicing Qi. So it feels like it hasn't been touched, and compared with the protagonist of the previous book, he looks immature, not smooth and decisive enough, and sometimes hesitant, so it looks a bit stretched in comparison. So I try to analyze one or two from the following aspects. If there are any differences, please point out. 1. Protagonist comparison First of all, the previous protagonist was exciting because he had five hundred years of experience in the magic world, which was equivalent to the big boss returning to the novice village. There was a self-destruction of the copycat beasts and the pursuit of the gods, and there were many unfavorable factors such as internal suppression of other families within the family. Therefore, he was forced to make dangerous moves, leaving traces, and most of his actions seemed to be based on luck (it did turn out well later, that is, with God's blessing), so it was obvious Being stimulated seems to be a strong sense of oppression (here is the oppression of his peers and the oppression of others), and he will lose if he gambles for a long time. Luck will not always favor an individual, so he is always practicing and gaining benefits, even if he doesn't need to be shy, because these are indifferent to him. This is just a temporary stronghold, as mentioned before (Newcomer Village), he will go out sooner or later, so it doesn't matter, he can do whatever he wants. And because he is a big boss, his perspective will have a God's perspective feeling, making people feel that he is omnipotent, because he has really done it, just like if you say you can do it, you can do it, but in the end, he can do it. It is true that he is a new born Ning Zhuo is different. He is a native and a young man. He does not have that much experience. Even if he is joined by the boss, it will not work. After all, the boss is only building the foundation (although he is an elder disciple of a large sect, his master is dissatisfied and has been missing for a long time, so he does not have much help compared to other people with long-term masters) And the real person also knows what we want to see, that is, the protagonist dances on the tip of a knife and travels among all parties to gain benefits. Therefore, the setting of Ning Zhuo's parents' death in this book is also to deal with the strife within the family and the oppression of masters outside the family. Therefore, he must find a way to survive first. Only alive can he have a chance to make a comeback. In this world, good people will not die, and bad people will not die. Only one kind of person will die, and that is a fool! But for now, despite his outstanding combat power and the urgency of the situation, as a reader, I can't feel or see his nervousness. There is always a solution to a crisis. Therefore, this kind of contradiction between a young man who is obviously a qi practitioner, but who behaves seasoned but is prone to overturning, is really difficult to deal with. Please see the analysis below for details 2. Plug-in analysis So the first plug-in is intelligence, but intelligence is not equal to wisdom. Wisdom is the experience of life gained after long-term practice. Therefore, wise people often appear to others as farsighted and bold. Intelligence, on the other hand, is to explore the situation step by step when facing an unknown situation, and then make a decision before taking action. Many times, taking a wrong step is irreversible, and you may even have no right to take it in the first place. If you act decisively at this time, it is not bold but reckless. (So some people said before that the positioning of early wisdom talent is low, but in fact it is not low. In the final analysis, it is just wisdom, and you still need to study and practice to transform it into wisdom. There are so many smart people in the world, but there are always times when the opportunities are not what you want, so Most of them are like mud and sand, so there are actually not many bugs in developing intelligence, because many people are already smart enough) The second link is the organ seal, which is a fairy palace treasure. It actually consumes a lot of spiritual energy. It just so happens that the early wisdom pill in front is made by Bodhisattva. Refining the Wisdom Root is also helpful for spiritual consciousness, so Ning Zhuo supplemented it with spiritual food cultivation to be able to use Qi training as a catalyst. After changing to the practice method, it is precisely because the Early Wisdom Pill contains wisdom root, so he has made rapid progress in practicing Buddhism and powerful spiritual consciousness, and can further develop Yin Zi. Function Plug-in source Let's talk about Ning Zhuo's family first. The Ning family is a big country in the North Wind Kingdom. Before leaving, the ancestor of the North Wind Kingdom talked with the leader of the North Wind Kingdom and presented a magic weapon, but he was still hunted down by the royal family. This shows that the family is indeed well-founded. And Ning Zhuo's father is a middle-grade talent (extra story, written by Ning Zhuo's Early Wisdom). He helped the strong boxing monk [whose name means a master who convinces people with (physics)] in exchange for the Early Wisdom Pill to help Ning Zhuo gain wisdom. He had the Early Wisdom talent and when the family moved and was attacked, Ning Xiaoren, who was already the young master, came directly to Ning Zhong's car, which shows that he also knew that Ning Zhong was indeed a good player. Ning Zhuo's mother, Meng Yaoyin, is also a foundation builder. She was born in Feiyun Kingdom and has outstanding mechanical skills. She was able to enter the Immortal Palace many years ago. (As for why his mother knew the existence of the Immortal Palace, it was because the Fire Persimmon Immortal City was built near the volcano. It was the Masters of the Three Sects who built the palace to suppress the volcano. As for why it was built here, but Read Chapter 133 of the book in detail. Fire Persimmon City is located in the hinterland of Nandou Kingdom. If there is an active volcano erupting in the center, causing instability in the ground, the people of this country will not be able to live. Therefore, the relationship between the three sect masters and the late Emperor Nandou established the Immortal Palace to suppress the volcano, and he has built a total of twelve palaces, so it is not a very secret thing) to seize the seal. Zi (according to later information, the Fire Spirit actually intended to damage the foundation of the Immortal Palace to facilitate its escape, so it may have let Meng Yaoyin in, but she did not expect that she would draw out the SSR. By the time she realized something was wrong, it was already too late. After all, as a palace spirit, it could not directly attack the intruders, and the trump card of the Immortal Palace was also deliberately consumed by him, so it was powerless. Take action) and pay the price of his life because of the gains from exploring the Immortal Palace, leaving Ning Zhuo alone (if there is a foundation-building mother, he does not have to be so frightened and cautious at every step). He left his last words to let Ning Zhuo hide his clumsiness, act according to the situation, and blow up the Immortal Palace at the right time, so that the Immortal Palace can be born in advance, and the standard for the soul to enter the Immortal Palace is lowered to Qi training. And without a mother, although early intelligence and talent can match Yinzi, he is still a child after all, with no intelligence and little experience, so he needs a guide. So Boss Sun came. In fact, I felt something was wrong when they called each other intimate when we first met. But after thinking about it, Ning Zhuo had been buying fire spirits on the black market for more than ten years. It was strange that he, the leader of the black market, didn't know Ning Zhuo's identity and personality. So I just thought the two were close friends, but I didn't expect it to be Jin Lan directly. With the help of Sun's black market resources, Zhuo can eat spiritual food with peace of mind to increase his spiritual consciousness. At the same time, under Sun's guidance, he can also turn his intelligence into wisdom. As mentioned earlier, Sun's situation is actually not very good. He can basically take care of himself. Therefore, it is inevitable that there will be omissions or even mistakes in teaching Ning Zhuo. This is also the reason why Ning Zhuo acts too safely and is constantly self-effacing to the point of self-deprecation. And because of the influence of other members of the family, he has been exposed to the righteous way more, and found that the righteous way can also do things that are difficult to do, and obtain resources, so he still wants to follow the righteous path, and there may be a psychological factor, which is to rectify the names of his parents, so that their parents' names can be honored by him, so that people in the family who despised him and even his parents because of his hidden clumsiness can basically re-examine their family. This is the power that the devil cannot give Ning Zhuo, to walk in the sun and enjoy the recognition of everyone. If it were another person, he would not hesitate at all, because he is a real devil and will sacrifice everything for his goal. After all, Zhuo Zhuo is just a young man. He has not experienced enough trials and hardships, and the current crisis is not urgent enough 3. Ning Zhuo's strength The beginning of the book has already mentioned that he pretended to be a machine master to build the foundation, which means that he is recognized as a foundation-building combat power. The three ghosts of the Huang family arranged by Ning Zhuo all built the foundation, and they had the God-suppressing Talisman to press the formation and the pet green knife mantis to cut the machine hanging threads. It can be said that the start is great, and there are double debuffs on the three-on-one opponent. In this case, we lose. This combat power is indeed a strong opponent in the base building (by the way, the mechanism used here is the popular mechanism of Thunder Silence Bird, which will appear again when fighting Zhou Zeshen later). That is to say, he can be regarded as building a foundation from the beginning, so he faces seniors such as family elders, not his peers. The only threats among his peers are the progress of the level, and now they are also blocked. Therefore, his peers basically have no pressure on him, and there is still some pressure from the previous ones, but after sealing the second Buddhist and Demonic Gate, even if they find out later and practice the Buddhist and Demonic Gate techniques, they will not be as smooth as the protagonist who cultivated all three gates from the beginning. The senior members of the family and the seniors outside the family basically regarded him as a junior and did not regard him as an opponent. Otherwise, with their strength, they would just ride a flying dragon in the face, and Ning Zhuo would not be able to escape. The Ning family's vitality was severely damaged when they moved away from the Beifeng Kingdom, and a guy like Ning Xiaoren could have been the young clan leader many years ago, so there was really nothing to worry about. The Zhou family, the Zheng family, and the Meng family were all in the dark under the lamp, and had no closer contact (the only contact was the observation of their own people in the renovation team, and most of his peers were played by him, so how could you tell anything). He had never seen Ning Zhuo, so he couldn't tell his true story. Zhu Shenqi was overwhelmed by tasks again and could not investigate in detail. He also had to battle wits with Lord Meng and had no time to take care of Ning Zhuo. After harvesting the Great Victory Technique, which has been revised and progressing ahead of schedule, the boss was rescued and gained a half-step golden elixir mechanism, and this station showed the strength of a one-man mechanism master. Most of the mechanisms were cut down, forcing him to refine new mechanisms and comprehend the magical power of the three sects and the thread of human life. The signature magical power can be killed by the royal family (which suppresses Nascent Soul-level forces like the Meng family and possesses absolutely violent armed forces) once discovered. Even if it is a weakened version mastered by Qi training, it cannot be concealed against the golden elixir. It is really not worthy of such a big name. In addition, the new golden elixir mechanism is about to be successfully refined, and the surge of spiritual consciousness in the later stage of Qi training with him can leverage more Yinzi abilities. It definitely cannot be regarded as standing still 4. Ending Speaking of this, you may think that I think this book is written quite well, so I am dissatisfied. No, that's actually wrong. I also think the pace is slow, which is normal, but compared to the explosive plot of classic novels, it does seem unusual. So I understand if some people are dissatisfied. The real person just writes too slowly. Although a stable update of five or six thousand a day is definitely hard work, the preparation is really too long. As mentioned in the previous analysis, So Zhuo wants to take the right path, but seizing the Immortal Palace and mastering magical powers will make it impossible for him to coexist peacefully with the Nandou royal family. But he doesn't know, He still wants to follow the right path, so now the plot of the right path, even for Xiao Hui, a clown like Hong Wen, must be described more and more profoundly. It will be more painful for him to take the devil's path later, and the growth he will experience will be more thorough. If he doesn't take the devil's path in the future, all book friends are welcome to come back and slap him in the face. For me, it's okay. I will review the plot from time to time. Many people read the most famous work of the same name by the real person first, but the first one I read was Demon Control. I didn't find it boring to read the zombie article that was widely criticized before. The management article is really long, but I am the audience for this kind of business article, so it is very receptive. To borrow a word, misplaced expectations. The real person is foreshadowing and advancing the plot, but due to the technique, it is not obvious to people. Therefore, there is still a lack of a real big explosion point, which can detonate all the emotions, so as to bring Ning Zhuo and others back to form. Off topic, so far, apart from the scene where the victorious spirit appears and saves the boss, what I feel the most about is the scene when the name is revealed on the list, the mood changes from panic to anger to calm self-deprecation. The mood of a young man is brought to life. It takes a few more such emotional changes, instead of always strategizing but still looking "unremarkable" in front of others. Maybe it would be better, if you can, share the little details that moved you. Finally, I wish you a happy reading

I don't know if I can grab this number.

This article is about Ning Zhuo from the main perspective. It was conceived in 1.5 And finalized in 1.20. It is relatively objective, but the main criticism is that it does not talk about the advantages, not the absence, but the uselessness. What is the position of a researcher, a pioneer, a scholar, or something else in the art of mechanism? Academic Pirates can only say ③Contradictory personality (pretends to be profound but has no desire to study, identified as a wild machine; introspection on the surface is actually unruly on the inside, identified as the "most" cautious; although there is wisdom but no matching wisdom, identified as a brat) without wisdom, low desire to explore Current situation: ①Twisted concept, profit-only theory: A little thief, a squirrel who loves to hide, he has to reflect on himself when he makes any mistakes, a back wave, the ideal self, junior students, and peers in the eyes of every acquaintance monk. But think about it from another angle, as of Chapter 170 of the second volume, the only people he has met are those of the same level and higher cultivators. He cannot be said to be bullying. There are no mortals and lower cultivators in his eyes. He cannot be said to be indifferent. In his eyes, there is no relationship with him. People who have nothing to do with him, on the one hand, why the bottom layer of the world of immortality and the setting of the prosperous age of cultivating immortals are not well developed. It is for this reason that Zhuozi does not look and cannot see these people; on the other hand, it reflects that Zhuozi's spiritual roots are only "manipulating emotions and reason". In his eyes, there is no essential difference between people and institutions, and there is no difference between dead people and dead institutions (also confirmed by Zhuozi's Art of War). The origin of such a character is understandable. It stems from the environment in which he grew up, family oppression, parents who died young, and top secrets. In addition, the only one who can control him is the little brat (boss) who is not a good person. The others have status but no weight. Mr. Li Leifeng cannot persuade him, Zhu Xuanji cannot save him, and Linghujiu is in trouble. Boss Niang, it can be said that so far, no one can make Zhuozi take the initiative to help. Heclearly senses the kindness of others, but he is a "righteous man" who never wants to repay (The ancestor also made suggestions for freedom, didn't he?). As for others, if the wild cultivator wants to give the mountain god news, just throw him one or two spiritual stones. To consolidate his own image, send tens of thousands of low-grade spiritual stones to the medicine dealer, and the monks who separate the families are like puppets. Without benefits, the suffering of others suddenly disappears. The clumsy man likes to eat the decapitation rice given to others, and he also wants cakes. Emotions are like jelly beans, which can be used as seasoning, but they cannot fill his stomach. To put it bluntly, why do Zhuozi and his parents have such a good relationship? Why do you have a good relationship with the boss? Blood relationship breeds common interests with parents, and the boss, haha, does a thief have his own interests? The boss's interests are to steal other people's interests, where do emotions sprout? Benefit. (Bad argument (●'◡'●), Xiao Ning Zhuo has not yet twisted into the appearance of Ning Zhuo now, these relationships were all concluded when he was a child) ② Role positioning: The so-called immortal work, what is Ning Zhuo's position in the mechanical arts? Applicator, pioneer, scholar? No matter what it is, Zhuozi does not have good compatibility with these three. Why? Because Zhuozi's low desire for exploration shows that he has no intelligence and can only recite poems and applications. Zhuozi only designs according to his own needs. This is no problem, but as ① said, Zhuozi's design was not for lower cultivators and mortals from the beginning. If you want to see the impact of institutions on them, you can only see when Zhuozi needs them to improve their productivity. Here are a few examples for founders and students - combined with "Original text: Mechanism classics are a miscellaneous subject. Except for Mechanism, all other cultivation skills can be reflected in the mechanism" and the description of the design mechanism (Old Monster in the Stone, Meng Yehu, the idea of ​​creating the Holy Grail of Yin and Yang),Creating a mechanism design and parts design requires understanding of skills, attainments in various arts, Material properties, massive reference samples(Other excellent designs, if it is to imitate, you need to carefully study the imitation objects), and what Clumsy has in hand now, (a sign of low desire to explore) Only mother's excellent mechanism classics and a small amount of practice techniques. The novel mechanism designs that emerged in the prosperous age of cultivating immortals have not been involved, and the techniques have not been fully understood, and they have not even been collected. Collection, there is no systematic study of Baiyi, only the special level of the school, outstanding research subjects do not study (the Golden Blood Battle Monkey, the Judge have not understood, and the magic circle on the Milk Butterfly Mother has not been studied). There are especially shortcomings in making the mechanisms he needs (such as Meng Yehu). It can only be expected to be achieved by luck alone. This is just a mechanism designed based on talent. It is difficult to do, and it is impossible to create. Not to mention that when designing the old monster in the stone, the physical cultivation and magic skills were half-understood. The spiritual and magical skills of the Five Zang Temple were all based on initiation. It can be explained that the spiritual and magical skills of the Five Zang Temple accounted for the majority. The materials themselves have not been polished, and the result of creating the mechanism is the cultivation method, which cannot be called immortal work. Therefore, the current position of the old monster is awkward. It is not the mechanism or the original cultivation method. Reviewing a few examples, it is not difficult to find that the so-called immortal craftsmanship is currently unworthy of a clumsy person, with no ingenuity, lack of literacy, lack of wisdom in long-term investment, no desire to learn, no desire to explore, no desire to apply for others, no desire to create, and no exploration methods. (Speaking of this, are there very few means of obtaining information in the golden age of cultivating immortals? Liu Er almost sucked himself to death with a yin-yang pot, saying it was an elite golden elixir, without any means or consciousness). ③ There are contradictions in the character (intertwined to achieve the current status quo): Pretending to be sophisticated but not interested in studying, identified as Gunye Luzi//The Ning family is the heirloom of Fulu, and the fire persimmon is the new one. The city, and the institutions were declining. In the environment where he grew up, Zhuozi could only read the high-end institution classics left by his mother. There was no explanation of the other classics, and there was no systematic institution teaching. It can be said that Zhuozi's accomplishments in institutions were pureYe Luzi is a practical person, not an academic one. He mostly designs institutions according to his own needs, which also means that he pays insufficient attention to the design of institutions other than his own needs (It is not that Zhuozi is poor in level, it must be combined with the key points of personality, and the core of the elements of the institution will be discussed below) - Self-examination on the surface is actually unruly on the inside, and he is judged to be the "most" cautious // What image does Zhuozi currently display? A little thief, a squirrel who loves to hide, he has to reflect on himself when he makes any mistakes, a Houlang, the ideal self, junior, and peer in the eyes of every monk he knows, and, in my opinion, the most unruly person on the inside. Aren't Zhuozi always introspective and cautious? Why do I say that Ning Zhuo is unruly? You can think about how Ning Zhuo climbed up, hiding his clumsiness all the way, and finally the ant bit the elephant. As of Wuyin Mountain, he was still doing well. This was also because there might be opponents with golden elixirs, and he was able to use probing and leveraging strategies properly. The Valley of Ten Thousand Medicines has weakened a bit in the future. Knowing that something is going to happen, he shakes people off in advance (only remembers the people who take care of him when something happens, and forgets about the benefits when nothing happens), looking for allies for the Ning family, actually taking risks all the way, betting that Lin Bufan will let him go Communicate with Lin Shanshan, Bet that Lin Bufan can't see the thread of life, Bet that Lin Bufan can't survive before taking down Lin Shanshan (I don't know the bottom line, the ancestor can't hold it off, I can only see that Lao Lin is not willing to physically travel through the void to fuck him, and forcefully resorts to acupuncture points, I don't explain the technique at this point, and I don't explain whether I have tested it in sparring before. What if the Wan Yao Gu Kung Fu has resistance on those acupoints? Clumsy person can't grasp it.) Bet that Lao Zhu can arrive in time (How long can Wanli Wandering Dragon last? How can Clumsy person be sure that Lao Zhu will Come on, this is different from the situation in Wuyin Mountain. What should I say if Lao Zhu outsources someone who can't suppress the field? The physical body can resist the void? Is it because Zhuozi's hidden clouds can resist detection, because the quality of the old monster in the stone's materials has improved, and because the old monster in the stone has become "aware", his ability to resist detection has increased? There is no description, and there is no ideal design effect of Zhuozi. The master of Moyuan Cave can't see it, and the other Yuanying can't see it. How many people are on the battlefield, who are not afraid of any magical power or talent? At least, after the design is completed, it is not necessary to explore it with Wanli Wandering Dragon. Although it is not strong, but I have more confidence. I don't know what the level of Mo Yuan Cave Master's detection method is, and whether it will be useful at the beginning. It is all a gamble. You, Ning Zhuo, are so confident in your own luck. Why I say Ning Zhuo is unruly? The reason is as above. The so-called battle of wits and coolness cannot withstand scrutiny. It all depends on Ning Zhuo's luck. There is no trace of caution or introspection. Have you, Ning Zhuo, ever suffered from bad luck? There are many. In Chapter 111 of the first volume, you were also overturned by the luck of three families, and you were almost overturned. You were almost beaten to death several times by the two countries. It is because your luck is so strong that others can't beat it. At first, your family luck could, but now Wang Ming, Yuan Ying Alliance, and Huashen can't. Or are you determined and value you, someone is planning on you, and you can't die? If you are prosperous, you will surely perish. If you are not cautious and introspective at this time, you have suffered losses many times and you still cannot notice that there is a problem with your luck. With the wisdom shown in the first volume, you should have thought of it long ago. It is either a problem of luck or someone else's plan. From the first time you were almost beaten to death by a bloody light, you should have thought of it. Realize that luck is against you, and you have been lucky enough to survive again and again. (In Chapter 179, it has been discovered that someone has arranged for funding. As for the compensation, I just know that it is a higher cultivator. I just talk about it. Thinking of the three seals mentioned by Lao Zhu, I am worried that luck will be connected after the debt. I didn't predict it after the payment, but there are still problems), And now that my Buddha's Heart Demonic Seal is yours, and I am giving you elixirs in your mind, why does Brother Zheng remind you not to die? My Buddha's Heart Demonic Seal no longer suppresses your luck, and there is no record of reminding you. You have good reason to guess that it is either the masters of the three sects who planned it, or that the person who arranged it has the ability to control the two countries and guide my Buddha's Heart Demonic Seal, what kind of advanced cultivation is that? You are so cautious. You should have realized this a long time ago. You should have thought about this journey long ago. Do you want to go back? Do you dare to go back? The higher cultivation level asked you to come and fed you delicious bait, Yuan Ying mechanism pedestal, countless spiritual stones, treasures, magical powers, and even a wife. How dare you run away, how dare you continue to eat carelessly? Of course, you can also apply God's Will patch in the later stage, but, haha, you Ning Zhuo are a joke like this. As for the matter of luck, saying that Zhuo Zi has no wisdom is his previous view of history (Chapter 179) since he knew that luck can cause people to make erroneous decisions. Do you want to examine whether, in addition to resources and human limitations, you should also look at how luck changes, what direction leads to the result, and what kind of luck direction it corresponds to. Although luck cannot be controlled, it is not a mess. You can also try to adjust luck with behavior. With the wisdom shown in the first volume, he can do it, but now, there is no wisdom! Jumping into a pit repeatedly is a sign of hiding clumsiness and being cautious, right? If you don't jump, you won't be hiding it, or in other words, you jumped and I didn't remind you of the devil's seal of Buddha's heart. Can it help you realize that someone must be seducing you and making a plan? Cultivation to the top! (The mechanism part has been discussed in detail above, and the rest is not wisdom. There are more examples in the next article. The post has a limit of 5,000 words, so I will not go into details here.) The root cause of a stupid person's lack of wisdom is that he does not know how to form cognition, adjust cognition, and then use cognition to guide practice. What is the so-called cultivation? For the following content, please move to the book circle and search for "The So-called Immortal Work - Character Design ②", group portrait chapter, which mainly criticizes real people's design issues related to important figures and supporting characters. The content is subjective. In addition to combining existing content, most of them express concerns about future trends. If you think I am a future warrior, come and argue! Come and see! Give it time.

Actually, I was very confused when it first came out? The Fire Persimmon Mountain, the Fire Persimmon Forest, the Fire Persimmon City, and the Immortal City Formation are the resource points that Nandou Kingdom has spent hundreds of years operating, and a Nascent Soul was specially sent to guard them. But you told me that a pheasant golden elixir that appeared out of nowhere can break into this big formation, break into the fire persimmon forest, and do evil, and then you still have no way to deal with it and still have to drag it 🤔 Then if there is an enemy team, If a force or a hostile country directly sends a golden elixir dead soldier over, will it directly destroy one of your resource points 🤔 A Yuanying has no way to get a golden elixir in his home field. What is the Immortal City Formation used for? Decoration? What I first thought was that Faith might be alarmist and not trying too hard, and the city lord might also have his own interests to consider. Later I saw the Black Shadow Demonic Cultivator retreating completely, which made me laugh 😄 A golden elixir can detonate a forest of fire persimmons to make life difficult for you, but if you retreat, you can run away unscathed 😄 It may also be my problem, book friends are welcome to correct me 🙏

The sense of separation is really too strong. The author seems to be a completely different person than before. There is no problem in writing a new system, but the problem is that your writing is so boring! ! ! It's really not even as good as Xiaobai's book, it doesn't feel good, and it can't be replaced by others. Aren't everyone supporting you because of a person who can write a work like Gu Zhenren? I want to ask, was that book really written by you? Ah? ? ?

The plot explodes! (The original text needs to be significantly revised due to the Four Seasons Natural Qin and Yun Hidden Buds) The original version of the article believed that The Nascent Soul-level female ape who forced the ancestors of the Ning family to submit = the Three Sect Masters The spiritual stage mechanism dolls of Butterfly Wings Hongguang and Yinguan Xiapei = the daughter of the Three Sect Masters = Butterfly Dream Fairy Lady, the Lord of Ten Thousand Gardens Some criticisms believe that there is no basis. Suddenly I realized that the Four Seasons Natural Qin was related to Meng Yaoyin, Yun Hidden Bao, and nursery rhymes. Yun Hidden Bao could interpret the four seasons of flowers. So the last paragraph of the nursery rhyme was about Ning Zhuo's mother, Meng Yaoyin. Master Xu Wuyan has not changed The four-leaf ghost gate escape grass, three drops of the Supreme Good as Water, and three directional escape talismans should also be changed accordingly Also, use Ning Zhuo to take three liang of ice jade wine to replenish Qi with the spirit, to move to the stage of dealing with Xu Wuyan. After all, foundation building is relatively normal for golden elixirs. [Text] According to the known reasoning, the following plot can be summarized into ten sentences The Zheng family's golden elixir: "I only took away the Night Rain Demon Soldier. The Black Shadow Demon Cultivator is a Buddhist doctor. What does it have to do with me?" The mantis stalks the cicada, and the oriole follows behind. Master Three Sects: "The flesh and blood are weak, but the machine is soaring!" Dieyi Hongguang, Silver Crown Xiapei's spiritual intelligence stage machine doll: "I am the palace master!" Master Three Sects returned to the Fire Persimmon Mountain where she was loyal. Song Fuli: "I remembered it, I remembered it all!" Meng Yaoyin: "It's very simple, my cloud beast has the strength of the Nascent Soul." Flowers bloom all four seasons, clouds roll and relax! Dragon Fire Spirit: "Repay the other with his own way!" Ning Zhuo grabbed the masters of the three sects and refined them instantly! Specifically, the first volume adopted "one light and three darkness" The bright line is to fight for the inheritance of the Lava Immortal Palace The reason why the bright line is so cumbersome is for the souls of the five geniuses to enter the heavenly palace, to block Yinguan Xiapei's spiritual stage machine doll, and to gather the luck of the five geniuses to snipe the three masters. The hidden clues are: the soul and body of the three sect masters, the whereabouts of Sun Lingtong's master Xu Wuyan, and the identity of Ning Zhuo's mother Meng Yaoyin [Secret clue 1] The souls of the three sect masters = The Nascent Soul-level female ape that forced the ancestor of the Ning family to submit The corpse of the three masters = the spiritual intelligence stage machine doll of Silver Crown Xiapei Purely guessing: The corpse of the three masters = Fairy Diemeng, the master of Wanhua Garden? In the meaning of the butterfly dream, the three masters turned themselves into butterfly-winged machine dolls The reason why the Lava Immortal Palace is divided into two routes: the soul entering the fairy palace and the body entering the fairy palace is to ensure that the three masters can become the master of the lava fairy palace again no matter whether the soul or the body survives the next life. The Lava Fairy Palace should not have been born at this time. It should have been born only when the mechanism doll met the conditions. As a result, it was exploded by Ning Zhuo in advance. The soul of Master Three Sects knows all the skills and spells of Master Three Sects, so there are no reward skills and spells for entering the Immortal Palace. The corpse of Master Three Sects does not know all the skills and spells of Master Three Sects so there are reward skills and spells for entering the Immortal Palace as a soul. If the Supreme Emperor is a male, it would be normal for the three masters to be female. Her soul should seek rebirth through soul-eating. Obviously, the digestion was incomplete, the soul was deformed, and she had the same ape-like habits as Han Ming. The reason why I wrote about Han Ming in the previous article is to hint at this point. The leader of the Soul-Eating Sect said that the three masters "had an unlucky old age, seemed to have gone crazy, and committed suicide." Strictly speaking, she is no longer a master of the Three Sects, but a madman who has gone crazy. I am afraid that she has no sanity left. It is not the Nascent Soul-level female ape who wants to retake the Immortal Palace, but the silver-crowned Xiapei spiritual stage machine doll who wants to retake the Immortal Palace. The Yuanying level fire-melting demon ape bursts out the blood energy and touched the red mole on Ning Jianfan's eyebrows, using the demon-stained blood tendon skill. The souls of the three masters are hanging on by human lives. The inheritance of the Lava Immortal Palace is to attract geniuses to serve as raw materials for refining spiritual devices. [Dark Line 2] Sun Lingtong's master Xu Wuyan = White Scale Layman = Night Rain Demon Soldier Xu Wuyan fell in the Lava Immortal Palace, and the Night Rain Demon Soldier was also broken. (The Night Rain Demon Soldier is very different from today's practice, and it is difficult to defend against it) Xu Wuyan's soul is attached to the Night Rain Demon Soldier. (Just like in "Yun Luo Tian Ya Ji", the ghost cultivator Ning Xie is entrusted in Ning Xiaohui's soul body) Due to the murderous nature of the Ye Yu Demon Soldier, Xu Wuyan did not dare to go to Sun Lingtong, but changed his name to White Lin Lay. He arranged a mobile formation to repair the Night Rain Demon Soldier, (Zheng Shuangou later asked Zhou Nongying to arrange a mobile formation for the Night Rain Demon Soldier) Five years ago, a Jindan monk from the Holy Ape Sect went crazy after practicing the three sect master techniques. Xu Wuyan was infected with the poison of anger or heart-burning fire, and the Night Rain Demon Soldier also turned from white to black. Chen Cha obtained Xu Wuyan's lost "Snake Bounce Formation Collection" and developed the Half-Dead and Half-Live Bead. Xu Wuyan steals the mechanism warrior Buddhist doctor again and plays the role of the black shadow demon cultivator (Just like the demon cultivator Liu Ying used shadows instead of strings to control the mechanism creation) In order to "digest" the spirituality of the Yeyu Demon Soldier, he can only adapt to it The Night Rain Demon Soldiers are murderous The Night Rain Demon Soldiers naturally do not know how to "clean the battlefield", "gnaw corpses" or "eat fire essences", and the formation formation is also very crude The Black Shadow Demon Cultivator waved his hand and instantly defeated the defensive formation of the Ning family monks. The Ning family monks who practiced the "Snowy Talisman Illustrated Code" were physically unscathed, but no longer alive. This is the use of the Five Elements Chaos Qi Technique. The Five Elements Chaos Qi Technique can disrupt and disperse the Five Elements mana. The interruption of the spell causes backlash, and the Ning family monk died as a result. After escaping into the Fire Persimmon Forest, Xu Wuyan used the teleportation aperture transport mechanism to fight against the Buddhist doctor. Zheng Jian, the main genius of the Zheng family, was spirited into the palace. Zheng Jian is the most outstanding person of this generation of the Zheng family. He has a talent that can penetrate the heart and penetrate the heart and cannot be missed. The Zheng family's double golden elixirs were eager to save people. They manipulated the magic circle and entered the century-old fire persimmon forest with a heavenly lamp in hand. They wanted to take the elixir package that Sun Lingtong had thrown in the fire persimmon forest and obtain the resurrecting pill from it. However, the Zheng family's Jindan accidentally discovered the Night Rain Demon Soldier and trapped it with a Tiangong lamp and took it away. The Tiangong lamp was pushed to its limit and the heat leaked out, so Ning Zhuo felt that the temperature in the century-old persimmon forest seemed to be higher than in previous years. Xu Wuyan also took the opportunity to lodge his soul in Zheng Danqian's soul. (Just like the story in "Yunluo Tianya Ji") Therefore, neither the elixir package nor the black shadow demon cultivator was seen on the Fire Persimmon Festival. The Zheng family's golden elixir only took away the elixir package and the Night Rain Demon Soldier, and had nothing to do with the Black Shadow Demon Cultivator (Buddhist Cultivator), so the oath was established. Xu Wuyan destroyed the Fire Persimmon Mountain Immortal City Formation by stealing the formation In order to deal with the Five Elements spell, Ning Zhuo took three taels of ice jade wine to replenish Qi with the spirit, let the cultivation of Shenhai drive the cultivation of Qihai , Then use the tornado car, the Qingyuan Mirror, and the Xuanbing Snow Purifying Talisman to purify the mana. Use the Zhou Family Foundation Level Spirit Gathering Array Disk to reduce the cost of casting. Expand the Five Elements Spirit Turning Disk to perform the Five Elements Mutual Generation and Reduction Technique. Ning Zhuo has studied the "Curving Snake Movement Formation Collection" and can use steal formations to steal energy to affect the moving formations. The Night Rain Demon Soldiers pose no threat to him. Ning Zhuo chose the Point Commander at the last gate on the Demon Gate path, which allowed him to use the quasi-jindan combat power of the Lava Immortal Palace, Thermal Phoenix. Faced with the thermal phoenix that can absorb and release massive amounts of light and heat, the shadows or shadows that control the Buddhist doctors and the Night Rain Demon Soldiers can only melt like snow; The Five Elements Chaos Qi Technique can disrupt and break up the hanging threads of the five elements; Leng Xueyun and the weather ball ice crystal snow can freeze the battlefield, and use the Mirror Stage Psychic Technique to communicate with the pet green knife mantis to cut the hanging threads. In this way, the mechanism will lose control; next, deal with the host soul. With the help of Netherworld Envoy Qi Bai's Nine Nether Formation, Ning Zhuo can use the Seal of Ghosts and Gods in the Underworld to ask ghosts and gods to help him fight; With the help of Netherworld Envoy Qi Bai's superior talent Through the dead eyes of the underworld, you can see ghosts, gods and souls; Use the human life thread to control Ning Xiaohui to use her gift of ice-fat jade hands to repair the eye structure accessories of the underworld envoy Qi Bai; With the help of the underworld envoy Qi Bai's psychic array, Ning Zhuo can communicate with ghosts and gods. After extracting Xu Wuyan's soul, he used the Netherworld Envoy Qi Bai's spell to burn his body with dark fire to save Xu Wuyan. [Dark Line 3] The masters of the three sects returned to the loyal Fire Persimmon Mountain and began to kill everyone. Meng Kui suffered a backlash, and Yun Jing died... The Jindan monks left the palace to fight, and the Zhou family's Jindan arranged the Night Star Sky Silk Formation Yinguan Xiapei's spiritual stage machine puppet suddenly attacked, Butterfly Wings launched a seven-color radiance, killing, and then soul entered the fairy palace. Ning Zhuo used the amulet borrowed by the ancestor of the Ning family to resist the attack of the golden elixir. The ancestor of the Ning family fell into fear and dared not speak out... At this time, the battlefield was divided into four parts Fire Persimmon Mountain, the Night Star Silk Formation above Fire Persimmon Mountain, the route to enter the Immortal Palace, and the route to enter the Immortal Palace The following is purely speculation: Ning Zhuo's mother Meng Yaoyin is actually a competitor of Tianyin Sect's Lingbao Four Seasons Natural Qin. She uses cloud seeds to interpret the four seasons, so the dormant cloud seeds become cloud hidden buds. Competitors need strong cultivation to pluck the strings of the natural harp. In order to compete for the Lava Immortal Palace, Meng Yaoyin was demoted to a foundation-building monk, so Song Fuli's name sounded a bit familiar, so Yun Xianyinbao could resist Zhu Xuanji's golden eyes. Similar to Zhou Zhu's gathering and dispersing Ruyi Lingtide Formation, and Zheng's arrow refining a deadly flying hook. When she was dying, she said, "Mother is here, mother, mother will protect you underground." In fact, it means that the soul is lodged in the hidden bud of the cloud After the sudden change, Ning Zhuo Use the four-leaf ghost gate escape grass to treat Sun Lingtong, Zhou Zeshen, Zhou Zhu, and Zheng Jian Ning Zhuo uses the mirror channeling technique to contact the dragon fire spirit and Zhu Xuanji, Ning Jiufan, Ning Xiaohui, Meng Chong Meng Chong, Zhou Ze Shen, Zhou Zhu, Zheng Jian and Yuan Dasheng, Their souls entered the Immortal Palace to stop Yinguan Xiapei's spiritual stage machine puppet Zhou Zeshen has a superior talent and is not afraid of the ice holding technique; Golden Blood Battle Ape Super Immortal talent, righteous bones and strong gold, no fear of the art of holding fire Meng Chong has super immortal talent of rushing towards thunder, and is not afraid of the art of picking up gold; Zhou Zhu has a body of resting vitality, and is not afraid of the art of catching wood; Zheng Jian has superior talent, and is not afraid of a burst of energy. The main plot is complicated, just for this moment Sun Lingtong's soul entered the fairy palace and set up the directional escape talisman. Ning Zhuo used a directional escape talisman to leave the Lava Immortal Palace and came to the sky above the Fire Persimmon Mountain. Ning Zhuo used mist orchids to make talismans to disguise himself, and used heavy thunder beetle carapace to make magic weapons to defend against thunder and lightning. Drank special cloud tea and flew on the clouds. Use a drop of good water to make the clouds bud and end their dormancy Use the cloud flowing water talisman to let the clouds swallow the cloud smoke, (or let the cloud beast cover the billowing cloud smoke arranged by Kui, or even swallow the cloud whale), use the fire aura as food, absorb the fire of the red flames of the Fire Persimmon Mountain, and the starlight of the night star silk array, the higher the strength of the cloud beast, the shorter its life span. The Nascent Soul-level female ape broke out of the Night Star Sky Silk Array Ning Zhuo used a drop of the Supreme Good Ruoshui to remove the red mole left on Ning Jiufan's body by the three masters, in exchange for the fire core pomegranate and the Nascent Soul-level earth evil fire in Ning Jiufan's storage belt. At the same time, he collected and refined the blood essence of the three masters. Ning Zhuo obtained the mechanism, general and demon general from Zhu Xuanji; Ning Zhuo used a directional escape talisman to enter the "Soul into the Immortal Palace" route, built the foundation, cleared the magic gate, sucked blood, and obtained the golden elixir level blood path board; Ning Zhuo has the position of director of the medical center, which allows Ning Xiaohui to repair the mechanism, general, and demon general. Ning Zhuo has the position of Director of the Point General Station, and can dispatch the machine war generals Daojun, Demon General, White Porcelain Wandering Dragon, and Spiral Dragon Earthworm The drop of blood energy is attached to the three masters, and the machine war generals, demon generals, and golden elixir-level demons are dyed with blood tendons, infiltrating and affecting the three masters. Daojun used the technique of mutual generation and restraint of the Five Elements, The white porcelain dragon entangled the silver-crowned Xiapei's spiritual stage mechanism doll. The dragon fire spirit used the lava fairy palace to suppress it. The three masters showed flaws and were photographed into the Fire Persimmon Mountain. Using a drop of the Supreme Good Like Water to help the Dragon Fire Spirit gain freedom, Ning Zhuo and Sun Lingtong each used a directional escape talisman to leave the Lava Fairy Palace. The spiral earthworm dug the passage, Ning Zhuo used the earth evil fire as the fire, the fire core pomegranate seeds as the fire core, the fire persimmon as the fuel, and the fire persimmon mountain as the furnace. After the fuel is exhausted, fall down to the sky, extinguish the earth fire, and take away the mechanism. How can the mechanisms inherited by the masters of the three sects be like the mechanisms refined by the masters of the three sects? Finally, Feiyun returned home, and Ning Zhuo returned to the sea of ​​clouds. The metaphor and symbolism of the nursery rhyme "Clouds Flying" It is actually a prophetic nursery rhyme The clouds fly, the clouds fly, Flying over the mountains and rivers and green hills The gurgling stream winds around the big trees The sun fills the green grass Heap Metaphor: The green formations of the Immortal City Formation in Fire Persimmon Mountain were activated; The magma rolled and hit the walls of the Fire Persimmon Forest Formation like a stream; In the end, the green formations of the Immortal City Formation lived up to expectations and blocked the red flames of Fire Persimmon Mountain. The clouds fly, the wind chases Flying over the rivers and stars The sky and the high ground are far more gorgeous The clouds roll and the clouds are comfortable and let the wind blow Metaphor: Meng Kui uses the Yunyang Talisman and the strong wind Talisman, use your magical power to sit on the mountain and watch; Lava and monsters are flooding like rivers, and the Zhou family's golden elixir arranges the night star sky silk array; (Rush to the sky) The sky is high and high, the light is gorgeous, Even if it is swaying in the strong wind, even if the clouds roll and relax. The clouds are flying, and the heart is tired Flying over the rainbow and the clouds The glow in the sky is gradually fading The shadow of the moon quietly reflects the dark sky Metaphor: The machine puppet in the spiritual stage, Butterfly wings flicker Shining with iridescent light, the silver crown is rosy; (Butterfly wings flash with colorful iridescent light) (Wearing a butterfly-shaped silver crown, decorated with fine pearls and jade, light and elegant) The firelight reflected on the clouds and smoke gradually fades, The night starry sky The silk formation unfolds The light golden spherical formation shield of the Lava Fairy Palace is just like the bright moon, The clouds fly, and the dream returns Flying through the longing and sadness My mother takes you home in my dream Back to my hometown to sleep quietly Metaphor: Ning Zhuo's mother once participated in the selection of the Four Seasons Natural Piano Master. The cloud seeds sleep in the form of cloud hidden buds. Her soul may reside on the hidden cloud buds, guarding Ning Zhuo. After Fei Yun returns home, she can truly rest in peace.

The first volume was just slow in pace and had no problem with the plot. The second volume started to use a lot of setting word count, which is called material inventory, and it takes half a chapter. There are also a lot of long-winded narrations, and the duplicate checking rate is very high. It can't be acted anymore, right? It's ugly. The protagonist is also unattractive, with no distinction between priorities, and his mother can't save him. He spends his days tinkering with national strength, and from time to time he says "I learned it, I'm still far behind." Time passes more slowly in the novel than in reality. It has only been a few months since Chapter 400 of foundation building. The main plot was forced to add a lot of branch plots. I must have learned from He Xiaofeng😅. Combat strength is also poor. Refining Qi and beating golden elixir depends on the right time, place and people. Even if you pass the test, building foundation and beating Nascent Soul will be against the sky. A small leapfrog is more fun, but excessive leapfrog will show that the cultivation level is empty, and all B-levels will be lost.

At the beginning of everything, I would like to ask a question to my book friends: does it make you feel more guilty to plot against a Bai Yueguang who only wants to do your best, or does it make you more worried to betray a true gentleman who wants you to go on the right path and has helped you more than once? Shanshan belongs to the former, and Zhu Shenqi belongs to the latter. For me, abandoning the latter will make me reluctant to see each other again in my life, but what about Ning Zhuo and Ning Datou? Is Shanshan his Bai Yueguang? Absolutely not, he approached her for the purpose of saving his mother. Is Zhu Shenqi a gentleman who supports him? Yes, if it were any other person, Zhuo Zi would have resorted to Buddhist medicine to fight in the first volume, while Ning Zhuo would have turned his back on Lao Zhu again and again. True gentleman, true villain, hypocrite, which one is Ning Zhuo? This is a moral judgment. Internally (parents, boss), he is a true gentleman; externally, he can be a true villain in front of the enemy, or a hypocrite and a true villain in the alliance. Is it morality that drives him to be this way? If it is driven by morality, then in him, such a separation will tear the heart of Zhuozi, a smart guy, but he does not. Every betrayal, calculation, and use have no moral considerations (not considering whether it violates his own moral values, only considering the reputation and morality of the right way). Therefore, when evaluating Ning Zhuo, pure moral judgment is not feasible, just like judging Cao Cao. Therefore, I adopt a rational judgment, which is also the interest that drives Ning Zhuo. The most intuitive thing in the book is whether it is "blocking the road" or not. I will post the corresponding chapter for each basis, and book friends can search based on it to criticize the rightness or wrongness of my remarks. ————Spoiler-proof—————— Let me start with a consensus. Zhuozi is very good at acting. The great acting masters all have one basic thing in common, that is, they are rich in emotions and have a fine perception of emotions. Therefore, Zhuozi is very aware of the inner activities of himself and the target of his calculations, and there is a thread of human life to reinforce it. He does it on the basis of grasping people's hearts. So far, there is no situation where the intention is good but the result is bad. The big thief's intention is bad. Don't associate the evaluation of a gentleman with him. He is a "thief", with the upright and majestic methods of an "official", and the guilt, humility and hypocrisy of a "prisoner", but in the final analysis, he is the same type of person as Boss Sun, that is, a thief, a thief in the world, a thief in heaven and earth. It is impossible to use a gentleman to cover him. After establishing a consensus, we can classify the objects encountered in Zhuozi's work according to the degree of interest integration - enemies, strangers, alliances, and communities with highly bound long-term interests. According to the interests of different periods, enemies and friends will transform, and there will be some special situations in this distinction. For example, Yang Chanyu, she is Zhuozi's ally, but on the other hand, she is the sister-in-law. This is due to the supplement of Ning Zhuo's personal relationship. The simple division of interests is not accurate enough. Therefore, such people will add a few lines to supplement the personal relationship (this is based on consensus, Zhuozi Many times, people will take risks out of personal feelings, such as saving the boss and burning the throne of Immortal Palace. The current two communities with highly bound long-term interests have been rescued by Zhuozi who risked his life. This is driven by anti-profit and also his affectionate side) Enemy - you blocked my way (no picture added here) There are two types of enemies, one is the explicit enemy with real weapons and real weapons, and the other is the hidden enemy who uses secret weapons in terms of politics and interests. The obvious enemy, represented by Qi Bai, in order to kill him, Ning Zhuo will use the hidden enemy and let Meng Kui's walnuts reverse the situation of the battle. At this time, Zhuozi's calculation is ruthless and leaves no room for anything. He knows it, so he doesn't explain it. It should be noted that Zhuozi is completely merciless and immoral towards her enemies. Even if it was Yang Chanyu, when she was about to destroy her boss (Chapter 199 Yin and Yang Dual Cultivation), Ning Zhuo immediately made the decision to take Yang Chanyu's life. No one will argue with the enemy, and even the future sister-in-law will not have any sympathy. Hidden enemies, represented by the City Lord's Mansion, have the widest scope, because even allies will compete for interests and are also potential enemies. However, in the early stage, the Zhou and Zheng families were still united, so they are not included in the hidden enemies. Faith is the most typical representative. In the past, you could borrow his tiger skin to sell secrets, kill big enemies, and control the black market. Later, you could rely on his vicious tricks to build a separate family. What's interesting is that these people can see the phantom of their expectations in Zhuozi. He is Faith from the past, he is the descendant that Zhu Xuanzhi longs for, he is an outstanding nephew in the eyes of the Zhou and Zheng families, and he is a reliable teammate beside Zheng Jian and Zhou Zeshen. Book friends, have you ever been angry at the big thief before meeting Shanshan? From now on, he has become a hypocrite. It is contradictory in itself to forget and deny this just because of the conflict of interests between the two parties. Everyone despises Zhuozi as a hypocrite, mostly because Shanshan has no desire for Zhuozi and even takes the initiative to cut off her flesh. This is normal. Who doesn't have Bai Yueguang and hasn't expected such pure love? But she is not Zhuozi's Bai Yueguang. I hope everyone will not put this filter on when evaluating Zhuozi. He has always been so ruthless to his enemies, and he will not allow anyone to block his way. What about people you've never met before? Shanshan's senior brothers just spread some rumors, and Clumsy took revenge. Is it too much? Zhuozi and Zhu Xuanji had a murderous intention before, and they just blocked the way Unknown friends - no psychological burden, no taboos Unknown people can be roughly divided into three situations, asking for something, not allowed to offend, and difficult to meet (innocent in this section is a moral judgment). Not allowed to offend means that others are not allowed to scheme. Such calculations will hinder Zhuozi's plan step by step. Therefore, the big thief must be richly rewarded. Book friends think Zhuozi has gone too far. Yes, before talking about Brother Shanshan, let's look at a person first, Ning Zhanji. How did he die? Because Ning Zuo and Tuo Ning's fighters locked Ning Zhuo in the demon hunting team, Zhuo Zi simply used Buddhist medicine to kill him (see Chapter 324 Mother and Son Dependence for details). Maybe he only took a few thousand spiritual stones from Ning Zui and then lost his life. Is it worth it? Not worth. All innocent? He is considered innocent, but he is in the way. If you don't kill him, how will the big thief join the training team, and how will he blow up the Immortal Palace without anyone noticing? Does anyone sympathize with him? On the other hand, Brother Shanshan is very likely to interfere with the big thief's approach to Shanshan in the future. He wants to save his mother and the fetus is dead. Don't worry, Zhuozi will definitely not kill them. However, he will punish them with small punishments, big warnings, or even use the Wan Yao Sect to punish them severely. This is a consideration of interests. No matter how innocent it is, when it comes to his mother and his own demands, the big thief is so ruthless and morally corrupt. I hope everyone understands. Those who don't stand in the way, just like Li Jingqing, if Boss Sun hadn't wanted revenge, he wouldn't have been bankrupted by the clumsy guy. Without them interfering, it's time for the big thief to show his integrity, and the gains in reputation will be more conducive to the next step. Decisive and decisive For Zhuozi, there is no difference from Ning Fighter To seek something is to seek this person's treasure and status. If it does not help his plan, Zhuozi will not steal everywhere like the boss, but he never stopped the boss when he stole. Song Fuli, everyone is familiar with him. He gives welfare. He was picked up twice, once for buying Xiangyun, and once for stealing treasures from the auction. The former was to take advantage (Chapter 238: Xingyun), and the latter was a plot against Shang Shan Ruo Shui. Song Fuli was not an innocent person, of course. So, is Clumsy always like this? On Wuyin Mountain, in the Valley of Ten Thousand Medicines, in order to obtain more information, Zhuozi can also pay a price to bribe his disciples. To him, Shanshan is just a more advanced disciple. She is easy to use, easy to control, and has long-term value. At this moment, why not steal a heart? Risking one's life to steal Song's welfare is as natural as breathing. The risk is much lower at this time. It is impossible to expect the big thief to feel psychological burden and moral guilt. At this moment, Zhuozi is also immoral. He is still following his own interests and taking advantage of the unspoken rules of society (Song Fuli's losses will be compensated by the City Lord's Palace, not a personal vendetta). He has only one bottom line, that is, he will not cause trouble beyond his ability, that's all. Difficult to meet, that is, there are no subsequent consequences. Such people will not interfere with Zhuozi's follow-up plans. He will not care. I believe everyone has less scruples about such people. Li Jingqing is the most typical stepping stone at present. He is a small person who is hard to see and has no means in this life. He doesn't care about him. Another example is Grandma Ning Xiaohui, Ning Ji, and Ning Cui. They jumped too much and annoyed the big-headed thief. They dared to attack. He killed them casually without any burden. However, if you think about it, book friends, grandma Ning Xiaohui is out of revenge. What is wrong with her? It was the big-headed thief who made the move first. She did not take the initiative to plot against the big-headed thief (it was just part of the collective will of the main line, but she already had the idea of ​​retaliating against the stupid boy later). Instead, she persuaded Xiaohui to give up the treasure (Chapter 207 Xiaohui gives up the treasure) It was Ning Xiaohui's own decision to let Ning Zhuo present the treasure), and he would not be a thorn in the side after the separation. For these people, Zhuo Zi did not care. For those disciples, Ning Zhuo just gave some spiritual stones and ignored them. If they did not interfere with the plan or have any interests, Ning Zhuo acted like an ordinary person. Alliance - a temporary community of interests, a long-term game opponent The alliance does not have so many names, only different strategies adopted based on the difficulty of controlling the other party and laying secrets. In this regard, it is difficult to talk about morality. A clumsy person can be a high-minded gentleman who cedes the interests of the medical clinic to the Zheng family at the funeral, or he can be a close friend who talks about institutions and strategies with Zhou Zeshen. He is the phantom that everyone expects and loves, and underneath it is a cold body that only considers his own interests. This is his strategy. He acts like everyone is optimistic about him, as if he can be seen through and grasped by the other party, and constantly exposes his weaknesses. In fact, he is setting up secrets step by step, causing the two parties to consume each other, and allowing the opponent to take the initiative to provide evidence. Even the righteous god of Jindan, with a piece of imperial edict, has no choice but to submit to colluding with Black Wind Tiger. There is a handle, there is a thread hanging over the head of the righteous god. The imperial court canonizes and protects the mountains and rivers, and is also restrained in this world. It is also held up by a thread called royal power. At this moment, the young man is a poisonous person. It is good to seek the best interests for himself. If he can solve the problem, morality is not his consideration. Hypocrite? To the Lord of Xuanci City and the Fox God, they are the most thieves. How can it be so hateful to hand over a soft knife when solving problems. (See Chapters 15~18 of Volume 2 for details) But what is the result? Regarding the Zhu family, weakening the Meng family, stabilizing the country, judging based solely on morality, doing good to the people's livelihood, not taking the people's anointing, but only taking greedy property, is this a gentleman? This is an easy alliance to make. The alliance of the three tribes, the peace with Feisi, the cooperation with Yang Chanyu and Boss Sun, the capture of Han Ming, and the surrender of the throne to Meng Kui. He may have difficulty in grasping it, or something may go wrong, but in the end it is just as Zhuozi thought. His final results are all good. He protects the fairy city, punishes the devil, obtains the true biography, and harms the people. The book does not mention it, and there are countless turbulences in the process (Chapter 242~243) Magma rushes into the city), but the city lord's palace is the backbone, and the Immortal Palace is the focus of the attack, so it should not hurt the bones. If we talk about morality, as Ning Jiefan said, the clumsy man is not bad in nature (Volume 2, Chapter 7), but his bottom line has not been truly tested. At least at this time, it will harm the people and not touch his bottom line. Perhaps when the results are tragic one day, this bottom line will be worthy of discussion. In addition to scheming alliances, Zhuozi still remembers human feelings and is not completely evil, otherwise he would not be able to reconcile himself A community with highly bound long-term interests - stemming from the innocent heart of nature, completely wanting nothing br> There are only two characters here, the mother and the boss. For the time being, Yuan Dasheng can also be counted as one. He has never known Zhuozi, but it is really difficult to put him in the three categories. Now that he has become an agency, his interests are bound. The Clumsy Man here is a true gentleman, morally blameless, a filial son and a wise brother, dedicated to saving his mother, and a respectful brother and friend. So what drives the Clumsy Man to be like this? What makes him so clearly divided internally and externally? It's not because of blood. So many relatives are treated as nothing by him. I think it's a response to his nature. As mentioned before, Zhuozi is a master of acting and full of emotions. The phantom he plays is actually part of his complex nature. He is a loyal man, so Yuan Dasheng calls him his lord. He is also a thief (the same as the "thief" in My Last Stubbornness), so he and Boss Sun are like brothers. He is a prisoner who longs for warmth, so he is willing to take more responsibility for saving his mother. For these people, he never considers interests. Part of the reason is that the interests of his brothers and mother are his interests. However, when the life and death of the boss conflicts with his interests (Chapter 132~137), he still enters the game and begs for the life of the boss. Here, he is just an innocent man, showing everything openly without any pretense. If judged by morality, the stupid people at this moment are the most moral ones. In summary, which category does Lin Shanshan belong to? They were strangers in the past, friends now, alliances in the future, and even long-term interests. To her, Zhuozi must be moral. But as mentioned above, the starting point of everything is strangers. What Zhuozi pursues is not her at all, but the hope of saving his mother. She is just a more useful disciple. Just like Shang Xinci, for Zhuozi, being a friend is the limit. A hypocrite can be evaluated like this, but for Ning Zhuo, this kind of moral evaluation is not so applicable, it is just easy. He is indeed hypocritical, because at this time he only has a thread to save his mother, and he will do anything for it. But what will become of the hypocrite before and after this thread is torn off? Where will this big thief go? Will there be room for him to be a true gentleman in the troubled times of the future? How does he play the role of a righteous gentleman? For me, this is the fun of this book. There will definitely be a gentleman, and there has already been a Zhu Xuanji, but what a carefully played hypocrite looks like in himself and in the world. It is interesting to have such a profound portrayal of such a gray character. I hope you will be more tolerant of such gray characters. Giving up too early is a loss. See what hypocrites are like and how to plan. I deliberately avoided the word friend in the above article, because the Clumsy Man really does not have a first friend. He has many subordinates, enemies, peers, and elders, but he does not have a true friend. When he shows himself to someone for the first time, there is no hypocrisy. It must be the first step for everyone, whether they are old friends or new friends, to start to like this big gray thief who walks in the light.

The Puppet Machine Technique is originally considered a niche, and with more than thirty chapters, there is a plot that most people think is a poisonous point: practicing three levels of qi training to reach the peak of foundation building, and there is no explanation that is accepted by most people immediately. It is difficult for this new book of real people to attract new readers, most of whom come from "Gu". Since you want to write a business article, if you write a plot of three levels of qi training to reach the peak of foundation building that does not conform to the common sense of most readers, you should immediately give a reasonable explanation to avoid losing new readers.

Because the infinite blood core is also fully ordered, I always feel a similar taste when watching the creation of immortal work. Let's talk about this first. 1. The dragon boy and Ning Zhuo are both people who claim to have a sense of justice or their views on themselves are still positive and rarely objective, and they have not yet fully accepted their true intentions. 2. The role of the boss is too similar to that of Zidi. He is thoughtful to outsiders but completely honest to Ning Zhuo. 3. There are too many supporting roles in the plot arrangement, but Infinite Blood Core undoubtedly does a better job. Each one has his own charm and story. 4. I won't go into details about the wait. Of course the above is not the point, I just want to express a point of view. Real person, are you writing about infinite blood core too high? I feel that it is my proud work, so I have a very big inertia and use this writing method to write about immortal craftsmanship and creation. Do you know what you are writing now? To be honest, you spend a lot of space on Cyanobacteria, a lot of space on Zidi, and a lot of space on Cangxu. I really don't hate it. I think it's really well written. Every character has flesh and blood, and everyone has their own activities. But you can't move this set to Xiangong Kaiwu! Do you know why? Because the creation of Xian Gong is not pure enough, if you want to write each supporting role well, you must sacrifice the fun. But you are not willing to sacrifice the fun, so the supporting characters save a lot of plot. What will result? The most intuitive thing is that there is a lot of fragmentation in the text. What will result? After pouring a lot of water on the supporting characters, there is no use for it. What will result? The arrangements you make may become unreasonable. What is the most important thing? It will make you unhappy with what you write, so how can readers enjoy your unhappy plot? So the real person should think about it for himself, look through his own books again, and see what the current readers want to see. Can't you just give it to them? Now is the review of this book. The main issues are as follows. 1. The main line of the questions starting from the second volume is unclear. 2. For laziness in character design details, I directly copied Swordsman and The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. 3. The current supporting characters have no charm at all, like the NPC next to the protagonist Ning Zhuo. 4. The supporting characters' similar feelings are described too much, such as Liu Er's disgust. 5. Some plots of the supporting characters seriously weaken their intelligence. There is no more than one way to deal with the protagonist. Yes, there is only one way. The battle of wits does not even come back and forth. Ning Zhuo can often crush him at will. 6. The update volume is too low. This old problem has happened again. If it doesn't work, just stop and release a large number of chapters at once. Of course, this suggestion is too immature. Real people should consider it themselves. The above is the question. Now is the time to complain 1. The plot design of the three characters of Liu, Guan, and Zhang. How could you make these three people have no charm at all? I was too obedient to Ning Zhuo. 2. The plot in Wanyaomen is too boring, just a journey of collecting treasures, adventures and cheating on feelings. You clearly wrote about the behind-the-scenes, but without the adventure of drinking, there is no way to take away the Fetal Breath Lingge. Can Ning Zhuo predict the future? 3. Ning Zhuo has not experienced a single failure so far, but his performance does not feel satisfying at all. It is obviously a refreshing article about defeating monsters and upgrading. When everyone sees a new treasure collecting link, they will just think, Oh, Ning Zhuo has another trick. Look at the realm, it's still building foundations and it hasn't improved. 4. The opponents are all newly created wild monster NPCs. Before the battle, there was no news about this person's reputation. Summary The current Xian Gong Kaiwu is too impure. I want to write a supporting role, but I can't write it in. There are a lot of plots. I wanted to write a good point, but because the plot of the supporting characters was not enough, the point was missing. The supporting characters are now too masky. There is too little ingenuity shown in the detailed settings. Ask yourself, are you really happy with what you are writing now? How about we just write from the heart, you are good at this, you just want to write what you want to write, and you can't change it. Why are you pressing yourself down? Now that you have made money, why not let yourself feel happy? No matter which book it is, it is a part of your artistic life. When you write Gu, isn't it just to make yourself happy? When you have infinite blood cores, you are just pursuing it, and it makes you feel good. But this time I feel like you are suppressing yourself. What you lack now is the magic. Because you lack it, both the supporting role and the protagonist are missing. Fang Yuan was the young man with stars in his eyes from the beginning to the end, and even after that, the eyes of Youyou Gutan were still shining. Then let me ask, real person. Are you still that young man?

It's said to be a cool business writing, what's your favorite? What are you writing about? Can you please stop doing your July 8th activities? Can we polish the plot and write it well?

The writing is too long-winded, the pace is too slow, and the viewers are unhappy. There are too many psychological descriptions, and the key points cannot be grasped. It is not exciting at all, and if it is a bit exciting, it will fall off the cliff the next second. When it comes to playing, are you making money or having fun? Written like this, the content is procrastinating. I kept writing, and after reading 200 chapters I was about to give up the book, but I gritted my teeth and persisted until 400 chapters. Unexpectedly, it got even more disgusting, and I had no desire to read anymore. For the starting point of saving my mother, I kept traveling around the world, constantly adding different characters and psychological descriptions, just to make the protagonist smart from the side? But unlike Gu, these characters are not exciting either, except for Zhu and his boss! After writing so many words, I am still building a foundation. How many volumes do I plan to write before I can get out of Novice Village? I want to write about everything, I want to add everything to the book, and I repeatedly describe the protagonist who wants to learn everything, is the right way, is humble... I want to vomit, the world view is too big, and I still have all kinds of skills, when will it end next, ten million words?

I dare to say that most of the monks appearing now are primitive people. If they survive, they will be greatly strengthened. As for why, please see below. This article is "The So-called Immortal Work - Supplementary Recording Settings". It mainly contains some interesting ideas when reviewing settings, and, hey, you may want to hammer me for reminding the real person of the watercraft. For the last three articles, please search for the keyword "so-called immortal work" in the book circle, thank you (づ￣ 3￣)づ ——————Dividing line—————— 4. The settings are not up to par with the performance, or in other words, the settings need to be modified in some aspects: I object to the view of some book friends that wisdom battles should not be mixed with magical powers. Why do you say that? We say that we need to have a perfect combat system, then in terms of intellectual combat we should also cultivate a perfect intellectual combat system, gathering intelligence, resisting and counterattacking mental attacks, concealing and other magic and magical powers, which are themselves preliminary preparations for intellectual combat</ b>, at present, the monks of the Yuanying royal family are talking about double purity and sincerity. They don't even have any hidden techniques to detect the mind of a fool (there must be military regulations, but firstly, there is no explanation, and secondly, they can't control it. The recruitment is a private occasion), and they have the intention Go check it out. I don't know what information Zhuozi has. A Ning family, Shuangjing still doesn't take it lightly. Not talking about Yuan Ying's luck in person, it's equivalent to a bright card. Shuangjing only eats three birds in a battle of wits. I have to say, The country of two bets is really primitive. The human version is too warm and simple. If anyone (Nascent Soul Golden Pill, because Yun Xiangbao did not explain that it has the function of automatically protecting the Lord) has the spells I mentioned for fighting of wits, I will not be able to play the role of the old monster in the stone. When it comes to a battle of wits, it depends on acting. One person is acting, but the other person is seeing all his thoughts. How can this be a battle of wits? Is this the truth? How to structure the wits fighting system is the most critical preliminary preparation for the wits fighting. This is where the setting fails to match the performance. Everyone is a clan royal monk. The setting is prestigious, and the performance is not oppressive. Currently, only Meng Kui, Lao Zhu, Lin Bufan, and Liu Er are equipped with wits spells (Lin Bufan put a locator on Zhuozi, and no one noticed). Otherwise, if the setting is clear, there are few such spells spread, or else Zhuozi is stupid and arrogant, and Yun Hidden Bao is omnipotent? You don't even know how useful it is? When Lin Bufan uses the locator, is Yun Xiubao useful? Have you ever reflected on it, right? Zhuozi's cautious and cautious character is also falling apart. As for the settings that need to be modified, such as punching and drinking orders, these realistic things can also be modified and modified to add some monk flavor. For example, you can use spells to interfere with the opponent's thinking, and you can also practice spells. I think it is what a fool likes. Things; practicing skills, stuck in realms and skills, different skills all rely on understanding the method diagram, it is a bit like looking at the picture to speak, you can set the image of wits and luck, which is extremely difficult to draw, at least the master of painting (this knowledge, the stupid person should have said it long ago);Another example is military strength , national strength and other spiritual energy, I can understand that the real person wants to improve the status of Baiyi. This setting should be blurred to help the real person grasp the right to speak in combat power, just like the realm. However, this kind of thing should be roughly divided. It is always incomprehensible from the perspective of the clumsy and the boss. This is a negative narrative of failure. Sub-perspectives must be used in time to allow readers to receive useful information and reduce reading and writing costs. This is a good opportunity to adjust the rhythm! How many chapters does the real person owe? Be smart and write it like this. It has a lot of writing and can complete the setting. Isn't it easier than writing a battle of wits and a climax? The whole story ends here, with a total of more than 12,000 words. I have already conceived a follow-up story about Lin Shanshan, Linghujiu, and Lin Bufan, the trio of Ten Thousand Medicine Valley. It may be very stomach-ache. It will be between 30,000 and 40,000 words and will be published in the near future. I hope everyone likes my story, and more importantly, I hope everyone likes my own story 🙏. Happy New Year! Happy New Year ❤️ Thank you, I've been bothering you for a long time, I'm waiting for you to see me (づ￣ 3￣)づ PS: Actually, this book review is for in-depth reading groups, there are too many spoilers, and due to space constraints, I cannot quote all the arguments. Please forgive me, in the short term, you will not be able to read such a noisy book review from me.

Thanks to the kindhearted people😚

I feel like there are some issues with the recent plot. The more I read, the more inappropriate it becomes, which makes me unhappy. First, in order to treat his mother, Ning Zhuo adopts this method of doing everything possible to catch up with the future and not wanting to change. It is very wrong, which makes people anxious and helpless; secondly, Sun Ning, the two rookies, do not improve their strength and take risks everywhere, always putting themselves in dangerous situations that they cannot control. In order to advance the plot, , it can only give the villain various adaptability, intelligence, and various chess moves, which makes the villain lose a sense of freshness in reading. Sometimes the protagonist often relies not on hard power but luck to solve problems and get through. Although it fits the situation, it makes people feel uncomfortable to read; in the second consecutive reading of the plot from the time he ran away to the present day, Emotionally, I feel that Ning Zhuo has a kind of mysterious self-confidence, but he does not have the corresponding trump cards and strength to support it. If this kind of mentality is thrown into the Gu world... There is another point. This book writes about the right way, but the right way should not be the same as the rules of female videos. In the world of high martial arts, others can reason with you if you have equivalent strength. The plot In the situation, Ning Zhuo feels that something is wrong when he relies too much on the rules of the righteous way compared to those who are stronger than him when he knows that he is helpless without strength. Of course, as a long-time reader, I may have the intention to compare Tiangong and Gu everywhere, and my remarks may be inappropriate. I hope someone can correct me, and those who criticize without thinking will get twice the rebound.

To be honest, this book is okay overall, but the plot rhythm is very strange, I don't see the commercialization at all, and the reading experience is extremely poor. This book is actually very good in terms of settings. Whether it is cultivation of various arts or power disputes, including the settings of talent and king's destiny, it is actually quite good. The two countries of Nandou Kingdom and Feiyun Kingdom should have been carefully crafted by real people as the story stages. I can give it an 8 out of 10 for the story background. In terms of characters, Ning Zhuo is still too awkward. The real person seems to want to create a growth-oriented protagonist, but he can't help but turn into a seasoned Machiavellian, resulting in a serious conflict between the core and the external performance. The previous book actually had this problem, and it looked very comical. The real person tried to reconcile this contradiction with a distorted concept of justice. I think it is not impossible. A hypocritical hero like Qin Shihuang Cao Cao who thinks he is righteous is also charming. But I suggest you let Ning Zhuo mature as soon as possible. A real person is really not suitable for the juvenile look. I can only give the character a five-point rating, just to see the effects. Then comes the plot rhythm, which is the biggest problem in this book. You could say it's fast-paced, but after a thousand chapters it's still foundation building. You could say it's slow-paced, hard to build the foundation and become the god. I can understand that if the level of cultivation is too high, it will be difficult to write the plot of the real person's favorite layout. But this method is really a bit excessive in the fairy tales. In the same chapter of The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality, Han Li was almost the Yuan Dynasty. I read it for a while at first, but I couldn't stand it anymore so I gave up the book. Later, I picked it up until the end of the first volume and read it in one sitting. I felt it was okay, but I gave up after catching up with the two countries. Looking at it now, I think the plots of Lava Immortal Palace and Wanxiang Sect are pretty good, but the transition plot in the middle is really too slow. I hope that real people will stop talking about it in the future, and don't write too much about it. I can only give it two points for following the plot, but I think it can get a seven points for raising the book. To be honest, Qidian's anti-theft protection is currently limited, and there is no guarantee that the reading experience will definitely have an impact on subscriptions. The overall rating is 5.5 To 6. I think it's hay.

I can't stand it anymore. It's a good book, but now I feel like there are too many things crammed into it. One setting per day, which is really off-putting.

I really can't read the first volume. I think the writing is really good. I really can't read the second volume. After subscribing for several chapters, I don't want to read it at all. My wife is too traditional fairy tale and I don't feel comfortable anymore. I also want to continue reading to see if there is some interesting twist and foreshadowing in the back. But I really feel that the second volume is too long and smelly and I have no desire to read it. I have stopped subscribing for more than half a year. I was three years old when I first started reading it. I have read 500 chapters in one day, I don't play games, I don't watch short videos, I stayed up all night to read them, and now in the past six months, I have repeatedly read these chapters that I ordered more than half a year ago. It's really boring Some people used to say that the fairy zombie chapter is smelly and long. I don't think so. I think the protagonist grows up too fast and needs to settle down to adapt to the new environment. After all, the achievements in the previous life are only a little famous at most. Now I have seen what it means to be smelly and long.

This sword will not kill the body, nor damage the soul. I just ask you... Do you regret this life? " I saw him activate the immortal killer move "Floating Life Like a Dream, Fate-Resisting Sword". When the sword light started, time seemed to freeze. What was reflected in the enemy's pupils was not the cold blade, but the most cherished but regretful scene in his life. He saw the love he missed when he was young, and the best friend who fell due to a difference of thought on the path of cultivation... These "causes" that were deeply buried in his heart turned into a sharp sword that struck at today's "results". The sword fell, bloodless. He just stood there, tears falling from his eyes, and all his fighting spirit disappeared. Because he suddenly forgot why he was standing here today, fighting with the person in front of him, and the "meaning" that supported his Taoist heart was quietly cut away. . Immortal ultimate move "Floating Life-Resisting Dream Sword" Construction: Core seventh-level Gu insect "Floating Life Gu", seventh-level Gu insect "Fate-reverseing Gu" Auxiliary: Dream Order Gu, Jinghong Gu, Cause and Effect Silk Gu, Shadow Gu, etc. Effect: After activation, the sword light is like a dream, ignoring most physical and energy defenses, and cuts the opponent's head directly. "Thread of fate" and "sense of existence". The victim's body will not be destroyed immediately, but his "luck" will decline sharply and become extremely unlucky. Natural disasters will occur in the blessed land, and things will always go wrong at critical moments. At the same time, an important "memory node" in his past life will be distorted or erased, causing his Taoist heart to be dusted and his combat power to be greatly reduced. If the opponent's realm is insufficient or there is a gap in his mind, this technique can forcibly peel off part of his "life trajectory" and refine it into a "dream trace" that can be absorbed by the caster. The caster can use this to experience a period of the opponent's life, or use it as a source of nourishment for his own soul and improvement of his realm.

Always remember Mr. Ning that the jelly melts in the mouth but has to pass through the intestines to reach the stomach.

How can I put it, I have read 500 chapters now, and subscribed to 400 chapters. My senses are very average, and the golden finger of the protagonist is too strong. Only the first volume is good, and the later ones are very weak. I thought the golden egg was very powerful in the early stage, but when I looked at it, I found that it was nothing. The foundation building and Yuan Ying, especially the war in the Twin Pillar Kingdom, made all the high-level cultivators look like fools. The main thing is, can you stop being so brainless about your welfare? You treat every Nascent Soul like a fool. It's so ridiculous, okay?

The following are all personal opinions. If you have any objections, please guide or forgive~ I have been reading novels late at night or in my spare time. I started reading novels after Qin De was lucky enough to save his life from Wang Yu. I recently read 600 chapters in one go. This is the first chapter I updated after reading it. It really is like this: the sword is sheathed at the bottom, the moon is full on the skirt of the clothes, drink three more cups and look at the old situation. Today I will also take advantage of the opportunity to talk about my recent reading experience, and also comment on the bottlenecks and conflicts that real people may encounter. The first is the failed assassination of Qin De. On the surface, Song Taosheng killed Chengren, but Qin De was unwilling to lead the way. In the end, both achieved their own goals and suffered both losses; but the deeper level is the collision of fortunes between the cultivation country and the super sect. Among them, the demonic path was involved, which confirmed the possibility of annexing Confucianism and Taoism and gave the results to the most suitable candidate, that is, the big-headed boy. The territory of Huazhang has not been shown yet, but the destruction of precious materials and the turmoil in the Wanxiang Sect are the aftermath of this collision of fortunes, and the Nanming stove trial also coincides with the opportunity to achieve success. The plot begins with a certain hero successfully debating scriptures and ends with the big-headed boy giving away his head. The mother wakes up again and leads to the next chapter. Regarding the performance of all parties in the confrontation, the performance between the country and the sect was reasonable but step-by-step, and it overly underestimated the performance of Confucianism and Taoism and the value of Qin De, so it was slightly rigid; several cameras from the Ban family were responsible for explaining the performance of luck implied by the big head in the confrontation, and at the same time responsible for a little entertainment atmosphere; and Ning Zhuo's response and actions caused me to think about divination and calculation. According to the description in the plot, this hidden science is tacitly related to the way of heaven, and what it conveys is the guidance and guessing of your personal fortune and misfortune by the way of heaven; Therefore, according to the logic of the way of heaven, "make up for the deficiency if there is more damage", it is impossible for people who are cautious by nature and calculate every step to obtain this knowledge; because unless it is really necessary, the way of heaven cannot allow too many people who pursue perfect gains to appear, otherwise who will "make up for the deficiency"? Based on this, we make a bold guess:Either Datou cannot get any serious divination inheritance in the plot, and can only rely on others to help him choose the path that best suits Datou's interests; On the day when the Way of Heaven appears We need a tool that can cope with disasters and is perfect and error-freePeople, such as the main line "Fourth Dynasty". The more you look forward to, the less you will get. This can be regarded as a peck and a drink. Then there was a trial of the Nanming stove. Before the official start, two things were explained. The first was how the stove exploded and what were the difficulties in repairing it. The second was how the talented people who were expected to compete for the stove needed this thing and what difficulties they were in. The plot layout conforms to the basic trial structure, and the suspense is basically solved in the story. It is inconvenient and unnecessary for me to summarize it again. There are probably only two special plots in this plot, which I find quite interesting: Firstly, a lot of space is spent describing the main characters of the plot in advance, so as to smooth the writing later. This does not fit the rhythm of the current novel, but it achieves the purpose; secondly, the very distinct "lottery" nature of the Nanming stove test may be a bit visual for you readers, but I can definitely understand it. The biggest problem in describing characters in advance is to let readers watch content that they don't care much about at the moment. For a person who has not yet appeared, in an environment that readers are completely unfamiliar with, what happens and what decisions are made, it is difficult for readers to relate to and like it at the beginning; even if the subsequent behavior is fanatical but can be explained, the follow-up data and feedback of those days are already unchangeable. This is actually something that most mature writers will avoid. A common solution is: Wait until the character makes a special move, and then insert background description at the moment when the audience cares. For example, "Shen Hongyao performed secret skills on the spot, blasted the furnace to practice the elixir, and then repaired it later. Why did she act like this? It turns out that she is so and so." This can make readers immerse themselves in the drama to the greatest extent. Of course, the price is that the writing structure is sparse, and there is a suspicion of trying to find ways to make up for it after the work is done, so the author needs better rhythm and skills. The real person's actions are contrary to the mainstream form. The carved words are indeed deeply rooted in people's hearts. The choices he made have achieved results, and they can only be sincerely wished. The next paragraph is very entertaining,because the entire Nanming Trial was like a large-scale lottery led by an authoritative organization. Danxia Peak provided gimmicks and rewards, and it was widely advertised without fear of being cheated; then heroes from all walks of life joined in the fun and paid principal worth far more than the final grand prize (the information cost of the Trial, the traffic of the Trade Hall, and the implicit increase in reputation), and even the most promising ones One person paid his capital and even took out a loan to repair the furnace (scratch-off was on his head), and the most interesting thing is that he also had to pay taxes (restrictions on recruitment, or the cost of repairing the remaining 20% of the furnace); there was even the most classic big-money part of the little people: the ordinary staff around us (little foundation-building genius), scratched twice (just had the "secret skill"), and unexpectedly won the first prize (recognized by the weapon spirit as the owner). Although a burnt-out stove still has great potential, it can produce such an effect and eat countless fish. Wang Yu is really an adult. We can't deny that they really provided a huge treasure, but you still have to join in the fun, or get close to the family to supplement it. Just like if they really gave you 5 million, then you would have to scratch at least five or six, or even five or six scratch-offs. The small tests in the book are full of black-box operations. After repairing the stove and achieving the goal, Wang Yu also directed the abacus to all the subjects; I won't mention the reality. The post will be gone later, so you can think about it for yourself~ In short, the latest chapter "Drunken Alone" is very good, the text is carefully crafted, and the reading experience is very comfortable; I will only highlight my feelings and share them with you to make you laugh. Finally, I wish the real person will get better and better, and the new book will become more and more popular! (However, it is still recommended not to rewrite the previous volume before finishing this book. Although readers of this book have complained a lot, many of them may not have experienced the test of blood core. Keep reading and hope to see good content every day!)

Let me talk about the feeling after seeing this place in the past three or four days. It's okay. It's the first time that I can follow it directly from the beginning to the present. It shows that the plot has no big poisonous points or flaws. It is relatively smooth. I can't imagine the subsequent development, so it can hook me. I really wanted to give up in the middle. The reason is the ending of Immortal Palace. It will feel like there is nothing interesting to watch, and there is no hook. Next time when the author ends a main line, it is best to throw in a hook that can echo the following. Simply saving the mother is not that attractive. It is better to have something exciting, such as if there are any good things, you, the author, have hidden it too deeply. There are no clues about the mother-killer enemy, and there is no desire to watch it at all. It feels like it can end here, and it doesn't matter whether you watch it or not. Also, when the fights continue, it is boring to watch. I don't like watching long-form fights at all. There is no plot advancement at all, and it is always the same. Is there anything else to introduce yourself? (Although there is foreshadowing, especially the last part of the altar fight with the blank sheets of paper. To be honest, it was very boring to read and not interesting. I skate very fast. Will there be many scenes for other supporting characters in the future? Why would you write so many scenes if they don't appear in many scenes? Please explain in detail. It's not appropriate enough, it's dead. I read a chapter of Infinite Blood Core. To be honest, I don't know what it's about. It's a weird book. I'll write a better introduction next time. I'll give it up. Maybe I'm not interested in this kind of writing. Also, the ranking of this book is indeed a bit low. It doesn't match the strength of this book, so I gave it all the monthly tickets. To be honest, I think this book can be ranked higher in the monthly ticket list. It's just that if you have less supporting actresses, don't add so many emotional scenes, it's like cheating on your feelings. This is also the reason why your grades can't improve. The protagonist's character is not well grasped, especially in the early stage, which gives people a somewhat contradictory feeling. In fact, it also exists in the later stage. It is the kind of contradiction caused by the plot, which turns other supporting characters into machine spirits. In fact, the background of the supporting characters is still there. It has a weird feeling and gives the protagonist a very evil feeling. , And the description of the protagonist is not miserable at all. The protagonist has a lot of tragic scenes, but the author also wants to portray the protagonist as a righteous and upright person, so it is a bit contradictory. However, the result is that the plot is relatively novel and the flaws are not hidden. Okay, I guess I will keep this book.

I feel good after reading the first volume, but after reading the 200th chapter of the second volume, I feel that the plot is very dragging. For example, in terms of introducing the material, no matter what it is, I have to introduce it (is it possible that the readers will remember it after the introduction? What is the benefit of promoting the plot?), It is very good, even if I am not a follower of the update (it is only updated at 700 chapters) (Lu saw this), I also felt that the plot was very slow, as well as the characters. Ning Zhuo's character traits had to be emphasized with ink from time to time. If he emphasized it too many times, it would gradually become toxic and stress the readers. In the first volume, readers already know Ning Zhuo's character, so there is no need to emphasize it repeatedly in subsequent plots. In many ways it is obvious that it was written to meet the target word count. It's really not a good read.

In terms of quality control, real people are still responsible, but this book is really not suitable for daily updates, and is more suitable for reading volume by volume. The picture created is quite vivid, and the world view will be gradually established. Once the world view is completely established, the book will come alive. It doesn't quite fit the rhythm of online novels. Since there is no shortage of money, it is better to ignore the noise and work slowly. Master Gu was also slow to write back then. Stable quality is the lower limit for an author to prevent readers from losing. At the starting point, survival has never depended on the speed of updates, but on the stickiness of readers created by word-of-mouth. Once the reputation for quality collapses, no matter how good the beginning is, all the previous efforts will be wasted. Gu Yue Fang Yuan also relied on his opponent's strength to lift him up. Although there are many stories in this book that are small and broad, they are basically for the purpose of making the plot reasonable and at the same time weakening the sense of excitement. This is more obvious in White Paper City and Liangzhu City. The big scenes marginalize the role of the protagonist on the frontal battlefield, and the role of the protagonist is not raised, and the settings of luck and destiny are pushed up, causing the role of the protagonist himself to be further reduced. This book has just established the foundation, and the protagonist's role in the mechanism technique has not been raised. Will there still be an army of mechanisms? I believe that when you stand up and take charge of yourself, your results will be better.

After reading Chapter 200 of the second volume, I really don't understand why foundation building and golden elixirs can compete with Yuanying. Even though this world is different from traditional immortal cultivation literature, Yuanying is as numerous as dogs and the gods are everywhere. There is no emphasis on the difference between the level of Yuanying and the Golden Elixir. It gives me the feeling that with the blessing of national power, a few more Golden Elixirs can change the reading experience of a Yuanying.

The title of the latest chapter "Sudden Crisis" is very good. Combined with the content of the article, it reminds people of the difficulties of the protagonist. The writing ability of a real person makes it difficult for me to find such a combination of chapter title and content in other books. It does not deviate and allows readers to feel the real situation of the protagonist. It is so well written. This is the first time I have read it in the starting point. Gu Zhenren wrote a review. I would like to respond to the previous comments on the Internet that Zhenzhen's book is not good-looking. I learned about this book from the Internet and friends before. I didn't have time to read it, but after reading it, I felt that the book is very good, but it requires careful reading, thinking, and patience. In short, this book is very good, and it deserves to be a real person.

I hope I can write well and find the feeling I had before. Don't write for the sake of writing.