Ten Thousand Hills of Mortals

The author, hurry up and get involved with Dong Xuan'er. This group of immortal cultivators who fight for their lives and dominate by strength have no delicate sense of life. For a big girl like Dong Xuan'er who loves beauty, under the colorful clouds on the mountain top in the evening, she said, "If you want to compare the colorful clouds to fairies, it's better to wear light makeup and heavy makeup." Dong Xuan'er didn't obediently bow down to the protagonist's crotch.

Author, you shouldn't let Dong Xuan'er enter the Bloody Forbidden Land. This impossible Master Hong Fu will not let Dong Xuan'er enter. In terms of emotions and resources, Master Hong Fu will not let Dong Xuan'er enter. Otherwise, Senior Brother Lu will never give up on Chen Qiaoqian and hook up with Dong Xuan'er. Moreover, it's too tacky for Dong Xuan'er to go into the forbidden area to reverse the protagonist's reasoning.

After reading it for three days, I finally persisted in reading it. Just a rant, hope it helps. The protagonist is a time traveler or a drug police officer. I want to ask the author, do you know the police? If the anti-narcotics police want to go undercover and obtain intelligence, they must first undergo strict training and protect themselves first. I don't understand. The protagonist traveled to a more dangerous world of cultivating immortals, but forgot how to protect himself. To be honest, I was very embarrassed. He was so cruel! There is nothing wrong with hugging Han Tianzun's thigh wholeheartedly! The problem is that you have to live until Han Tianzun ascends! Protect yourself always first! I hope I can write better and better!

Take a look at the heroine Dong Xuan'er! I can't read this book. Han Li picked up all the tattered shoes he didn't want.

Another mortal cuts the cock, little eunuch.

It is recommended that the author read Mortal novels several times. If you have not read a novel to death, it is not recommended to write a fanfic of the novel. You can also learn the special effects of animation, but it is best not to use anime plots. The plots of anime are adapted, and the rationality and logic are not correct. Your readers are all bookworms, and they must have read Mortal novels.

How obsessed are you with Qingyuan Sword Technique! ! I have been thinking about the Qingyuan Sword Jue all the time. Just leave it alone. You can add to it at will on this basis. You can add as much as you want. As long as it is reasonable, no one will say anything about you. Why do you care about the Qingyuan Sword Jue? There is still a problem with the sword technique. You are not a model worker and have the strength to get 72 golden thunder bamboos. When you reach the spiritual world, you will have to plant 72 more.

The author is still writing nonsense. Do you think the Foundation Building Pill is a bad pill on the street? You can take it out casually during a few short Qi training periods. Go and see how rare this elixir is in the original book? Just one pill is enough to kill countless casual cultivators. Moreover, the seven sects of the Yue Kingdom can only train a little bit every 10 years.

Damn it, you disappeared for three years in 22 years and came back in 25 years. Is this a three-year appointment? The three-year period has come and we welcome the return of the Dragon King!

Are you a eunuch? No updates for three days

Another book is finished. You, the author, are so unreliable.

😁😁😁Family members? If you have nothing to do, you can invest and don't need to follow up. The last one, 100, can be promoted on a small scale, thank you all! !

I am very grateful to the family members who can send me recommendations every day. Thank you for your support! ! 🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝

Nowadays, books are basically written according to the one that became popular. Either time travel to this or time travel to that, there are several books written in this way, and I haven't seen one that is well written. Either it has entered the palace or it cannot be continued.

The first order has been made, come on. I wish you better and better as you write!

Can't even find it? Play with a hammer

There are no cheats for mortals to cultivate immortality, so why do you get the upper hand?

The author should have only seen the anime version of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality! I think people who have read the original novel will not choose Dong Xuan'er as the heroine.

I don't know what fellow Taoists like 🤭🤭🤭

Awesome It's been three years

The protagonist's surname is Xu, who belongs to a mortal family with a wealthy background as a local landowner. There was an elder cultivator, Old Man Xu, who was refining weapons in Tianxing Zongfang City during his Qi training period. He had a second-level Fire Crow. It's the one that appeared in the original work. I don't remember the title of the book. The writing is okay and there are no obvious logical problems. The plot is based on the original book as the background, and the reading experience is not bad.

However, in the early stage, one was that there was too much "hand-slapping storage bag", especially the battle scenes. The second is "Essence and Blood Feeding". I remember that in the anime, the essence and blood are drawn from the forehead. I haven't read the novel. Here it is always "beat the chest hard and spit out a mouthful of blood", which looks weird. After reading it for a long time, I found out that the free chapter was written in 2022. I guess it has been discontinued for too long and there is little traffic.

Let me ask you something, what route did you take?

Taking Foundation Building Pills on the 11th floor? You're right, what I wrote in the early stage is really a bit poisonous.