
Mortals Cultivate Immortality, I Have a Cave with Me
凡人修仙,我有随身洞天
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- Cultivation
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- Cultivation Civilization
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- 2d ago
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The five spirit roots can run away
Chapter 1: Five Spiritual Roots join the seven major sects to screen readers. Nine out of ten common people have pseudo-spiritual roots. I just don't understand. Are the three spiritual roots really that difficult?
Did the author read the original work carefully? The refining of low-level elixirs during the Qi training period is the same as pills for ordinary people. They are rubbed by hand. As long as the formula is correct and the weighing is correct, there is no possibility of failure, such as Huanglong Dan, etc., And the higher-level elixirs have no problem with the ignition. The refining level of elixirs during the Qi training period is only tested when reaching the Foundation Establishment Dan. Even the Zhuanyan Dan is essentially a low-level elixir, but it lacks a thousand-year-old elixir!
Your plot is exactly the same as the original work, but you replaced Han Li's name with the protagonist. Why don't I read the original work?
There are more than fifty chapters. After reading the introduction and table of contents, I knew the content! Hahaha! Nothing new! The protagonist, Wulinggen, practices the top-notch Qingyuan Sword Technique! Can't you compile a book on the Five Spirits Pulse Forging Technique? What I want to see most now is the world-linked one. Douluo plus mortals, Dou Po plus mortals, Zhetian plus mortals, Siheyuan plus mortals.
Even though there are unlimited elixirs, you are still so stingy. Han Li even used century-old herbs to refine Huanglong Dan. The strong efficacy of the medicine is used until the later stage of Qi training, and the improvement is fast and stable. You, the protagonist, are still reluctant to use century-old elixirs. You only use decades-old elixirs, which are no longer effective. You would rather go to the market to risk buying new elixirs than use older elixirs to refine low-level elixirs. To be stingy like this is a genius.
When writing fan fiction, at least read the original work.
There are typos in the introduction. Is this editor a human?
Five Spiritual Roots, I can't complain. Author, can you write about the spiritual world? I guess it will be GG. Only the Five Spiritual Roots are required for the realm of returning to the virtual world.
Are you rewriting Mortal, just replacing the main character?
I thought it was well written, but I didn't expect to read it again later. Alas, I didn't read it. I thought I would encounter some invincible fan novels that plot against Han Laomo and suppress Han Laomo. I didn't expect that many of them were like this. They simply didn't take the readers seriously. I kept reading, but I still read the Xuan Gu one.
Brother, when you write a book, you should read the original work. Are you going to practice the fourth level of Qi to refine that kind of elixir? The one I am refining is Huanglong Dan, which can be refined by mortals. The original book has clearly told you that you cannot refine elixirs before foundation building, unless you can make Huanglong Dan Golden Marrow Pills by rolling balls. Of course, you can use earth fire. The best way to earn spiritual stones during the Qi training period is to make talismans.
The timeline cannot be changed at all. Dayan Jue and Yue Kingdom Palace are the two places where it is best to take the initiative. The protagonist has no idea at all. Not to mention that the protagonist has traveled through time and done so many things, but the plot has not changed at all. If you want to find Senior Brother Lin for Dayan Jue, stare at Han Li, but you only stare at the beginning and wait halfway. Doesn't the protagonist know that he is living in a real world and is not in an unchanging script? The Qingyuan Sword Art that I had worked so hard to obtain was just traded to Han Li. It could be said that it was put on Han Li's lips. The Royal Palace of Yue Kingdom is also the main character. First, he did not take action first. Second, he knew that there was an evil elixir, so he did not let him snatch it when it was in danger. He waited for the Emperor of Yue to come and fuse it. The protagonist has no initiative and no ideas of his own. He completely follows the plot and the plot cannot change at all.
Damn it, it's written! Clicking on the homepage, I just looked at the price of the magic weapon in the comments, and then looked at the first few chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. 😂😂😂
The context and context don't match. . Did the author write this in AI? .
Rubbish
Intermediate high-grade magic weapon, mid-level mid-grade magic weapon. I really believe that the author is using private goods, and it is so expensive, and the price is wrong. It feels inconsistent, like AI
The settings for writing fan fiction are so rough.
I can't stand it anymore. Doesn't the author read other people's novels? Don't you think it's very sloppy? Why don't you refer to other works? For example, building a safe house in science fiction or building a railway train for urban zombies. Collecting materials for development and construction feels very suitable for cultivating immortals. Evolving from a shack to a cave. Using this idea to write these development and construction contents when there is no contact with the main plot, the cultivation progress will not appear outrageous. And there is also a sense of harvest from upgrading, which does not affect cultivation, and at the same time it can ensure resource output. Although it is not as good as the small green bottle, it can speed up the production of spiritual plants. Have you heard of QQ Farm, Famine, and MC? There are so many places that can be explained, so many places that can be written, and there are so many videos that I am exposed to nowadays. There are also other things such as fruity imagery, visions of the sea of suffering, and spiritual Taoism. There is no shortage of inspiration and imagination. Why is the potential for immortality so low?
Don't write about Wulinggen waste. No one will accept such a person as a disciple. Such waste can be upgraded quickly. Isn't it just telling others that I have a treasure? Come and rob me and seize the opportunity.
Fell in Chapter 3
The writing is problematic and inconsistent.
The magic weapon can only be made of pure gold and thunder bamboo. In this way, the sword spirit can be transformed into the void 🙂. The mixed things can only be used as waste. Han Li only refined the void and used the sword array a few times in the lower realm. Qing Yuanzi has only cleared away the impurities and achieved the transformation of the sword spirit into reality. Everyone knows that alone, the sword is purely awesome 🙂 or even not cultivated enough. If you have too many golden thunder bamboos, you can throw the sword into the golden thunder bamboo and cultivate it with the evil-proof divine thunder 🙂 or even It can even be sealed into the fairy vine to extract the laws inside. Even if the cultivation is successful, it will not be transferred to Xuantian Lingbao. After all, the sword only absorbs the laws. 🙂 Personal magic weapons will not be listed. These are all known to time travelers who have read the book. 🙂 Loot the human world in the early stage and replenish the human world before ascension, instead of squeezing the human world like Han Paopao and cutting off all the spiritual grass in the human world, so that there will be no more ascendants in the human world 🙂 A typical example of harming others and not benefiting oneself.
Go back and get the Heavenly Thunder Bamboo and plant a large area with its roots 😁. You can plant the elixir in batches, just like an orchard and vegetable garden. You can also plant the Spiritual Eye Tree and the Dragon Scale Fruit in batches over several days. You can eat them every day in the future, and you can also take a look at the planting. For swordsmanship, go back and strengthen the set of swords directly. Then, seal the Golden Thunder Bamboo, and the sword spirit can be transformed 🙂. I have read the novel "The Traveler". There must be some things that I can handle by myself. Is there nothing in Caixia Mountain? And Tiansha Continent? Han Li didn't go, right? 🙂 In this human world, there are people from the fairy world, a large group from the spirit world, a group from the demon world, and even the demon ancestors. Is there really no other story? So many people go to the lower world? Don't you even have a storage bracelet? Why don't so many people in the lower world have storage bracelets? There are no immortals in Caixia Mountain, so how come they come to the lower realm with true spirits to pursue the Heavenly Vase? Otherwise, how did Caixia Mountain come about? Why is the Heaven Palm Vase over there? If Han Li can't get the Sky Palm Bottle in time, there will be no time at all. Han Li 🙂 has time to get it. He can directly kill two people in the Bloody Forbidden Land during the human flesh PK with Nangongwan. You can get it in this time period.
There is really no need to read on about Wulinggen going to Yue Kingdom and entering the Yellow Maple Valley.
I have practiced dozens of low-level elixirs, so keep reading if you want to see them.
I just entered the world of immortality, soul penetration, and in the early stages of Qi training. Goldfinger is used to store medicinal materials. I prepared dozens of medicinal materials, then practiced dozens of furnaces and exploded dozens of furnaces. Keep reading if you want to see more. Anyway, I am sick to death.
Average look and feel
This one is not as good as the two new mortal books I have read recently. I pulled the table of contents and didn't see what I wanted to read. The latest chapters about Yuan Yao and the others were pretty good, but I have no interest in reading further.
I would like to take advantage of this new book and wish the author better and better!
All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!
Now that I have 5 spiritual roots, do I have to go to Yellow Maple Valley?
The only one who stands out is going to Yellow Wind Valley, especially Han Li. If you ask me, I'd better make the protagonist more handsome and go directly to the Hidden Moon Sect. After getting the powerful technique, he found the teleportation array and Xin Ruyin, tried to find a way to get rid of the spider, and escaped in advance. It's best to have a spirit body, otherwise it will be too difficult. If you have a spirit body, there is so much room for maneuver. You can go anywhere you want.
🙂 Directly split the Golden Thunder Bamboo into more than a hundred pieces, one sword and one sword to make 108. Han Li has only turned 2, so there is no backlash in the spirit world. You have 108 pieces in three turns, and there will be no backlash. It's okay not to use the Dageng Sword Array. There are too many impurities in the end. Go back and seal the sword to, On the soul-raising tree, cultivate the sword spirit, and then cultivate the magic attribute on the tree sealed to the spiritual eye. After using the golden thunder bamboo to restore the origin 🙂 and sealing it to the fairy vine, you can keep a few fire attribute birds to practice the Seven Flame Fan. After practicing the seven flame fan, you can slowly cultivate it when you are not using the sword for the time being.
If Han Laomo has Tianling roots, he is estimated to be able to form elixirs before he is 40 years old. Double spiritual roots are around 60, three spiritual roots are around 80, four spiritual roots are around 130, and five spiritual roots are around 180 for the best case, and everything up to 200 is normal. The bottleneck of Wulinggen is more terrifying than that of Old Demon Han. The pill utilization rate is lower and the drug resistance is stronger. Unless in the spirit world, a family ancestor gives you a Heaven-Building Pill and helps you refine it.
🙂 Finally, there is a big five-element sword formation, and finally the five-element thunder formation 🤭 The five sets of sword formations have been cultivated to achieve the law of thunder, plus the space cave, even the law of space and the law of chaos god thunder 🙂 These two beauties do not even have skills, so Yuan Yao Yanli also practices Qingyuan Sword Technique 🙂 Otherwise it will be very troublesome for them. Unless they practice Yin skills, they can only form pills after three turns.
The golden finger is not powerful. A hundred times is the same as nothing for the five spirit roots. You have to calculate Han Li's gold finger. Comparing 100÷7×365 is equal to 5215 times. Your hundred times five spirit roots are actually the same as nothing. Your only advantage is that you can batch it. The difference is more than fifty times, and your batch size can't match it. The five spiritual roots reach the spiritual world nearly 13,000 times. . . What are you looking at if you take 100 times it?
I would like to recommend new books and wish the author better and better.
All fellow Taoists are welcome to come and have a look.