
I Have a Moon Sun Orb
我有一颗月阳宝珠
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 39k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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19Chapters
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How to pronounce the protagonist's name... Why do you need to use uncommon characters?😰
Brother... Let's not mention your name. What's your profile? What about the introduction? There wasn't even an introduction, they were just taken away. There's no need to save anything here 😰😰😰
I haven't watched it yet, but I want to ask a few questions. Big Frame: Is there an upper plane? Are there multiple dimensions? If you are planning to ascend at what level? What is the currency and trade situation around the protagonist's initial place? (When it comes to resource allocation issues, the price of goods is a big drawback. Some readers simply abandon the book as soon as it seems unreasonable.) Are there any conflicts between humans, demons, devils, ghosts, and aliens? (For example, the kind of force in "Rebuilding the Immortal Clan" and "Qinghe Immortal Clan") Small frame: Does the protagonist start from the sect election and then extend his life to the casual cultivator, or does he first go from the ignorant casual cultivator to the sect? What type of "plug-in" does the protagonist have? Is he simply good at practicing qi, or is he using magic, physical and combat power, or is he a soul type? (Every aspect can be extended to more plots based on this aspect. To put it bluntly, it is the number of words) The important point is: it is inevitable that there will be pretending to be slapped in the face, being robbed and then killed back. In fact, they are almost the same. It is purely a horizontal comparison. It is better than some others who also write such plots, so there is no need to get entangled. For example, because I suffered a loss the first time I went out, I wrote it in just over 20 words the second time I went out. The operations of changing clothes, changing faces, and changing breaths were not abrupt and smooth. After reading so many novels, this one did a good job in this aspect. You should also pay attention to the names of the same realm. For example, in the Golden elixir realm, a certain person is called a certain real person uniformly. Some people who are very strong in the same realm have special titles (writing this way is actually very convenient for the readers to make comparisons and make it clear at a glance). "The plot, such as how to be a Taoist body (in fact, I have long had the idea that it is incidental to the achievement of becoming a god). In fact, the low level (below the transformation of the god) is a process of finding and understanding puzzles. Later, as the level gets higher and higher, you will learn to understand the puzzles, with some memories, friendships, and sect righteousness interspersed in the middle. The most special point is that there is a word "mortal" in the mortal stream. You must write down the experiences of certain people related to the protagonist. Time and time are not forgiving (usually it is a promotion to a large realm, or when you are stuck, you can write a transition like this, and write it at the beginning of the chapter, "poetic and picturesque" to show your writing skills and write some life insights you want to write)
Nothing? 😰
Just don't make it complicated.
The recent novels about cultivating immortals are all too complicated. Be pure. There are not many precious essences. A few books of secret techniques are enough, and the realm is as dark as heaven and earth. Even the equipment can be unified in level.
For those of you who come from Immortal Fate, please stock up more first and then take a look. The protagonist doesn't have abnormal fighting ability, leapfrogging and killing people, etc.