A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Taking Over Mo Juren from the Start

After reading the latest chapter, let me give a brief summary. The novel is good. The main highlights and advantages are the combination of the transmigration of Mo Juren, the advancement of a mortal with the bloodline of a demon beast, and the creative management style of talismans. However, it has several major flaws: 1. The combat system and combat descriptions are inadequate.

Wow, this protagonist is so cunning! He's got a master-disciple relationship, a father-in-law/son-in-law relationship, and he keeps showering Xiao Han with favors while he's still single, completely manipulating him. With Xiao Han's personality, he's probably fallen into a trap and won't be able to climb out. Will he eventually become nothing more than a tool for the protagonist? 😍

This is just my personal opinion; please don't criticize if you disagree. If it's a world with a closed time loop, then you can't change any events. Because your existence is in the past, while Han Li's time after becoming a Celestial Venerable is the present. Your anomaly could very well be corrected by Han Li. Therefore, it's better to modify the setting and ignore the Immortal Realm arc; that way, many things are easier to explain.

The beginning was good, with some highlights. However, I've reached chapter 500 and really can't continue reading. Maybe the author has something going on in real life; it feels so different from the earlier chapters. 1. The cultivation technique is just for show. 2. The concept of spirit stones is not defined.

It's over a thousand chapters and it's still dragging on in the human realm!

Is he planning to take several tons of his wife with him to heaven?

When Han Li was practicing Qi Refining, his disciple slept with Nangong Wan, a Core Formation cultivator. So, you're going to write a story where Mo Juren, a Foundation Establishment cultivator, sleeps with a Nascent Soul cultivator? You're making the protagonist seem like a Casanova. Since it's a story about mortals, don't write too many emotional entanglements.

Everything else is still there, but there's a problem: there are too many female supporting characters. It's really uncomfortable to watch. It's like they have completely unrelated relationships, but they're forced to be together. It's like other women can't find men... Every time I see a romance scene, I want to give up on the book.

I'll never see the Spirit World arc in my lifetime.

I think it's a bit strange that there's no demon blood for sale in the cultivation world, because demon blood is needed when drawing talismans. Where there's demand, there's market. How could there be no one selling it? If no one is selling them, how were so many talismans drawn?