A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Taking Over Mo Juren from the Start

You already have a system and you have an intersection with the male protagonist. You still have to write at a slow pace like a mortal. You compare yourself to the male protagonist in everything. You might as well watch Xian Ni.

A very impressive bragging, driving high and moving low. The one that fits is the best! I've been messing around for so long and it's nothing, and I can't even use a system panel. Just a talisman for a fight? Blow up an intermediate talisman to the sky. Funny. Watching it means not watching it. The price is not worse than that of Yuanying, but what's the result? Why haven't we collected all the information? I don't even understand the center of cultivation. Hammer east and west.

Finished reading. Generally. The pace is too slow. Is there something wrong with a mother when she sees one person touching another? No matter where you go, you have to drag your family and dozens of people with you, and you really work hard to make up the word count. What's the point of having people or spiritual beasts around you who are all pampered and arrogant and come out from time to time to chat with the protagonist? All of them are of no use at all. The only useful one, Han Li, only knows how to play magic grass and has too many scenes to die for.

What the hell? Are you breeding horses here? See no one.

The whole story is about a nice girl who saw the main character asking me to give birth to a monkey. The main character looked disgusted, then gave in half-heartedly, and finally lay down on the bed and called her darling. Forehead

In terms of character design, I inherited the original owner's three wives, four concubines, and several daughters after traveling through time. It feels like most of them are bound together for the sake of profit. Except for Murong's master and apprentice, it was an accident. They are merciful in every way. It's a harem novel about mortals cultivating immortals. In other aspects, it is different from the original version. It is recommended to add some dungeons that are not in the original version. The dungeons in Chaos Star Sea are quite good.

It feels like it's just imitating Han Li's experience, with nothing special about it.

More than a thousand chapters have not left Tiannan! Reading a cool article can give me kidney stones. It can be read before a hundred chapters, but after a hundred chapters it is just a running story. The protagonist relies on Tianhua Tower and Fulu for everything, and there is nothing new at all. The relationship with Han Li has also changed. If you don't know how to write about master and apprentice, don't write about it. Han Li will directly become the protagonist's spiritual grass quickener. Let's briefly summarize the methods for the protagonist to become stronger: for the spiritual grass, rely on Han Li, for the spiritual stone, rely on opening a shop by yourself as a shopkeeper, for monster materials, relying on fighting monsters in the chaotic sea of ​​stars, and then using cheating devices to increase bloodline. Fighting relies on the physical body and talismans. Fighting a humanoid monster with too many talismans depends entirely on the achievements of the spiritual stone pile.

Hey, typical hydrology, like flowing water, the details are very rough, very rough, the plot is only a rough outline, and many plots are not very clear to mortals, and they always ask "Is that what happened", and there is no explanation later, which is a bit disgusting. And there are many unreasonable things. For example, for him who is just in the early stage of foundation building, the fourth-level monster material is a very precious weapon refining material in Tiannan, but the protagonist actually thinks it doesn't matter and just throws it away and just sells it. Compared with the various details of Han Laomo, there is really no harm without comparison. I am also chasing another mortal derivative novel, which is far behind.

The writing is quite good, but the update is a bit slow. I hope it won't be too eunuch.