The Outcast: Life and Nature Made Whole

How can you sleep at your age? You came to Qidian to write a book! Not here to sleep!

The author can just write in the current style. Although it will take off slowly, it will be more profitable in the long run, and I think the current style is really good-looking. I don't think I need to pursue what many people say is cool writing. But I won't object. After all, eating is not shabby.

Sorry, I have to leave. I feel aggrieved. I am an impatient person to begin with. Maybe I am too young, too shallow in moral practice, and have insufficient xinxing. When I read Chapter 18, I felt like I was holding a ball of fire in my body. It was so uncomfortable! I think this book is quite good, but I can't stand it anymore. I don't have the money to reward it with two recommendation votes and 100 points, so don't blame me too much.

Look at Tang Muzhi and Guang Shao after the age of fifty (top and bottom order) 😆 It's just nonsense, just take a look

My personal feeling is that before I came into this world, I would have liked someone in it. But when I come to this world, then I have my pursuit. It's okay if you don't block my way, but if you block my way, I'll destroy you. Just like many people chasing stars, but you are an ordinary person, who will you like, but after you become a star yourself. Very few, very few, very few will still be as star-struck as they used to be. Because everyone has pursuits. When you say you want to pursue something, the roads on both sides are just scenery after all, and you can't stop. Will keep moving forward. So when I come to this place where I can become a strong person, I still talk about who I want to drink with and who I want to see. Actually. Unrealistic, impossible.

Since the protagonist does not seek immortality and practice Taoism, why should he practice? Isn't it good to use a gun? He practiced his spear skills hard and developed in the direction of Yan Shuangying. If you practice for fighting, the price/performance ratio is too low.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing more than 100 points. The plot is a bit too bland and has no goals. It's just hammering here and there. In terms of the plot, the protagonist has been practicing martial arts for half a year and fighting this and that. It seems very abrupt. There is no gradual process, and the cheating has not reached the point. , There is nothing exciting about it. The most obvious thing is that you get 7 secret books, even if they are fragments, there are some meanings in them. Combined with the characteristics of your own Qi or your innate Qi, you can research something. This is all exciting, but you don't have it. It's so bland that you have no desire to read it.

Everything else is fine, except for the fact that he did something wrong, changed his fate against the will of heaven, and then the protagonist was ruined. All I can say is that I can't accept it myself, right? So I gave up the book

It feels like a layer of alien skin has been approved. Other novels

Are there any limitations or flaws in the world of one person? It gives people the impression that the people inside are all heretics. They practice martial arts and are very powerful, but they have no realm, no enlightenment, and no concept of becoming an immortal through practice. Even the protagonist, who is a time traveler in his twenties and thirties and has reached the peak of his cultivation, has no idea of ​​becoming an immortal. He only knows how to practice martial arts and blindly cater to the plot. He has no own ideas and no concept of polishing his energy, enlightenment and cultivation of immortality. This is very unreasonable.