Reincarnation Paradise: The Furnace

What's so cool about creating your own career? Is your writing out of touch with the times? How will you fight Bai Ye later? It's boring to be defeated, and it's pointless to be defeated. A group of exterminators are trying to clear the way, but they can't compare to you, an ordinary person?

I said in Samsara Paradise that my combat performance in the early stage was as good as that of a martial arts warrior, but in the later stage, my performance was at planet level and I was still like a martial arts warrior, so I was banned.

After reading Chapter 40, I finally understood the weird point. Samsara Paradise is a Western fantasy world, but many of the words and dialogues in the book are oriental or even biased towards the style of cultivating immortals. They seem a bit nondescript. I hope the author can pay attention to this issue.

I remember that in the Paradise of Reincarnation, no matter how strong you are, you cannot fly through the air. As soon as someone mentions this, loyal fans will immediately gag. If you fly in the air, you will be sniped, and you will be targeted. If you don't like it, just get out... Also, can you breathe in the universe in the later stage?

Samsara Paradise is really not suitable for writing fan stories. There are too many of them. From level 1 to level 9, to the strongest, to the strongest, and then to the supreme. There are about 5 to 8 worlds in one level. Su Xiao only used 7 worlds in the first level. This kind of fan fiction is very outrageous. It can't speed up, and you have to make up equipment, skills, and other things. This stuff is simply torture for the fan author. It's a pity for this author. His writing skills are really good. It is very good. As for the derivative world, I feel that this book is already better than the original work. The original derivative world is only average. The real world is the original world. The book has already reached 1.8 Million. The results have just been rolled out. Goldfinger has just started to be developed. It is about 2,000 words a day. How long will it take to write this? It is a pity. This author's writing skills feel that he will be better at writing other things than now. I feel The author can try writing about Super Mechanic. There is no good fanfic for that book. Generally speaking, it is difficult to write a fanfic for that book. It requires too many things. But according to the way the author writes this book, the author is definitely capable of writing it. The book does not need so many words. It can be completed in about 2 million. The system of the book is also very good. The plot does not need to be like Samsara Paradise. The copy is just Like the original, that book mainly contains descriptions of panels and skills, expertise, machinery, martial arts, telekinesis, magic, superpowers, and the original machinery. The other books are also very well-written, such as superpowers and replicas. There have been several books about this, but the result is all G. I feel that the author can give it a try. This book is also very good. There are definitely many people who support it for its good writing. I feel that it is a pity for this author to have such good results now.

In fact, many people don't really like dark novels. They just hate the Madonna and the licking dog. However, except for the dark novels, most novels like to write the protagonists are the Madonna and the licking dog. In the same way, Most people don't like the Madonna protagonist, not because they hate the Madonna, but because they don't have a sense of substitution. You asked me to devote my heart and soul to strangers and risk my life to save strangers.

You make everyone feel uncomfortable when you write like this. You write a chapter in four or five days, and each chapter has three to four thousand words. It's obvious that you have to complete the rhythm. Who dares to support you? In fact, I think what you wrote is really good, and I hope you can stick to it. And I remember that your grades and monthly passes were pretty good in the beginning. If you are restricted by practical reasons, readers will be willing to wait for you. But if you can't persist on your own, I won't force you. There were so many eunuchs at the starting point that they all became numb. If you can update every day, see how many people will read your book. Nowadays, reading books actually depends on either quality or quantity. I think your quality is the best among the reincarnation fandoms, and it best matches my imagination of the taste of White Night Walk. You can go to the reincarnation post to promote yourself, or you can ask book friends to help. There should be many people coming to see it. All that's left is the quantity problem you have to solve. If I really don't want to write it, let me know. I can just open a new book. Now I come here every day to see if you have written or not. It's also annoying.

Suddenly, I felt that the protagonist, the blacksmith, was not in conflict with Reed. The protagonist was the one who was created in the world, not to mention that Reed was doing repair work for Su Xiao most of the time. (Protagonist: What, it's broken, how about I make a new one.)

I see people in the book club circle always talking about being sloppy, but I feel like the writing is very good and there is no sloppiness in it. The only thing is that some plots are a bit redundant, such as plots describing the advantages and disadvantages of mutants and humans or who should replace whom. If you are writing a Marvel fan, then these plots are not redundant but well written. But what you are writing is about Samsara Paradise Infinite Flow fandom. The protagonist is just a passer-by in this world. The love and hatred between humans and mutants has nothing to do with the protagonist. The purpose of the protagonist coming to this world is only to collect resources for completing tasks, so these plots are a bit redundant. I think you should focus on describing the protagonist, centering on the protagonist instead of the relationship between mutants and humans.

Flesh, Fang Tian painted halberd, heavy hammer! I have to say that the design of this protagonist is completely in my heart. It has been greatly updated!