Reincarnation Paradise: The Furnace

What's so appealing about creating your own profession? Your writing is out of touch with the times! How are you going to fight Bai Ye? It's pointless if you can't beat him, and it's mindless if you can. A bunch of people who are willing to sacrifice themselves to clear the way are no match for an ordinary person like you.

I commented on the Samsara Paradise forum that the early combat animations were like those of a martial arts novel, and that was one thing, but later on, even at planetary levels, the animations were still like those of a martial arts novel, and they banned me.

The Cycle of Reincarnation is really unsuitable for fanfiction. There are just too many ridiculous things in it. From Tier 1 to Tier 9, then to Extreme Strength, then to Supreme Strength, and finally to Unrivaled Strength, each tier has about 5-8 worlds. Su Xiao used 7 worlds just for Tier 1. This kind of thing is ridiculously absurd for fanfiction, and there's no way to speed it up.

I remember in the Cycle of Reincarnation, no matter how strong you were, you couldn't fly. The moment someone mentioned this, loyal fans would immediately chime in, saying things like flying would get you sniped, you'd be targeted, and if you didn't like it, you could leave… Also, will we be able to breathe in space later on?

Your writing style is making everyone uncomfortable. You only write one chapter every four or five days, and each chapter is only three or four thousand words. This is clearly a recipe for disaster; who would dare support you? Actually, I think your writing is really good, and I hope you can keep it up. I remember your initial performance and monthly votes were quite good.

After reading forty chapters, I finally understand the oddity. The Paradise of Reincarnation is a Western fantasy world, but the book uses many Eastern, even cultivation-themed, terms in its language and dialogue, making it seem somewhat incongruous. I hope the author will address this issue.

In reality, many people who read dark fiction don't actually enjoy it that much. They simply dislike sanctimonious and sycophantic protagonists; however, aside from dark fiction, most novels like to portray protagonists as sanctimonious and sycophantic, for the same reason.

Suddenly, I feel that the protagonist's blacksmithing role and Reed's character don't conflict. The protagonist emphasizes creating things on the spot within the world, and besides, Reed spends most of his time doing repairs for Su Xiao. (Protagonist: What? It's broken? Should I make a new one?)

I've seen many people in the fan community saying it's padded, but I feel it's very well written and not padded at all. The only issue is that some plot points are a bit redundant, such as descriptions of the superiority or inferiority of mutants and humans, or who should replace whom.

Flesh, halberd, heavy hammer! I have to say, the main character design is exactly what I wanted, a huge update!