Hospital No. 444

I think most readers want to read horror novels and don't want to read faction fights. They can accept it occasionally, but the whole novel is full of factions and they really can't stand it. Every character and the protagonist in it are extremely pretentious, especially the protagonist, who has to be a virgin even if he has no strength. He makes up his mind at every turn. He really doesn't look like someone who often experiences life and death. The relationships between the characters are so intricate and bloody that it's really outrageous to find a horror novel full of romantic ideas. Moreover, it is filled with medical skills and ethics at every turn, which looks very dramatic. This is a horror novel, dear. The doctors here are just wearing the skin of a doctor. They are actually cursed by the hospital. Imagine that you are in a supernatural hospital and your life is precarious. Do you think about medical ethics every day? It is obviously a curse and the ability to use curses, but you have to repeatedly say that you have superb medical skills. I really can't bear it. There are too many flaws. I have read Hell Apartment since high school. I really liked it at the time, but now I can't stand Tinder's books at all. I really hope that Tinder can understand what most readers like to read and abandon those inexplicable things. Otherwise, it will be difficult to get good results even if I open a new book.

Speechless, what a piece of writing, I thought it was some big deal after reading the comments, but it turns out it's just selling feelings.

To be honest, if it wasn't recommended by the author of Mysterious Resurrection, I wouldn't have come in. Mysterious Resurrection updates are slower than a snail. Although the author of this book is a senior author with more qualifications than the author of Resurrection, it doesn't quite meet my expectations. I have never read the author's works before. Looking at the author's works, there is no title that I want to read at first glance. First of all, the title of the book should be attractive and grand. The author's title is too limited, such as hospitals and apartments. These names are not nice to say, and they are not very classy. Back to this book, the protagonist is a serious doctor, and he is a Western medicine, not a traditional Chinese medicine. For Western medicine, no matter how strange and difficult diseases are, they are actually science. So the protagonist comes into contact with a mysterious curse or even a ghost for the first time. The transformation of the protagonist is very blunt. Although the protagonist is said to be very accepting, it still feels very blunt. Another point is that most people will not easily accept others using orders, blackmail, and coercion to threaten their lives. The most annoying thing is that the protagonist is treated as God by others. Observe the test from the perspective [personal preference], but the protagonist accepted everything very calmly, without any resentment. The recruitment was a curse of hospital treatment, and the conversation was against ghosts. I feel that this hospital is just a peddler, so I personally feel that the setting is very problematic. If you don't like it, don't comment.

The setting is interesting, but there are too many irrelevant things and the plot progress is too slow. To be honest, it feels like the author's focus is on factional warfare rather than horror rendering.

I have read more than a dozen chapters so far. Let me share my thoughts after reading it. Since I was a child, I have loved watching some supernatural and horror movies, animations, games, novels, etc. It can be said to be a special hobby. The most popular novel is Hell Apartment, which was recommended by a friend. It can be said to be one of the most appetizing supernatural horror novels I have ever read. The setting of ghosts in it can be said to be completely consistent with the ghosts in my imagination, so it feels particularly immersive when I read it. As for the Hell Cinema at the back, I could barely watch the Alien Classroom before I couldn't stand it. Then I couldn't stand the Devil Exam Paper and Devil's Apartment at the end of the movie. I completely lost the feeling of watching Hell Apartment. I haven't read novels for a long time. Recently, I saw the news of Huo Da's new book in the forum, so I read it immediately. Now I have read Chapter 26 of the second volume. Let me briefly talk about my personal feelings. First of all: 1. The novel is still the infinite horror style that Huo Da is good at. The opening chapter of the novel is very immersive. The setting of ghosts cannot be killed. They can only be resisted through the curse of curses, which imprison the ghosts and then send them to hell. 2. The levels of ghosts are also very clear, ghosts < resentful spirits (those above resentful spirits are also collectively called evil spirits) < fierce ghosts (evil ghosts) < devils < demons <? The corresponding objects here may be different, because the time it takes for a devil to kill a ghost doctor is much less than the time it takes to kill a human being, but ordinary people will definitely die if they are not treated by a ghost doctor. The ghost doctor himself can fight against it through curses, and there is a certain chance of survival. 3. Regarding the setting of the generation of ghosts, part of them are ghosts or resentful spirits generated by obsessions, resentments, and evil thoughts after death (divided according to the intensity of the thoughts, the weak ones are ghosts, and the strong ones are resentful spirits). Ghost spirits with extremely strong resentment may produce karma and turn into evil ghosts. The devil is an evil spirit born from the curse of the devil. As for the origin of the devil, the chapters I have read so far have not explained it. 4. I personally think that the explanation of ghosts and the distinction between levels are very good settings, but the problem lies in the generation of ghosts. In Huo Da's new work, the generation of ghosts is said to exist in the underworld and the underworld, which means that some ghosts are created after death. They can even communicate and express emotions. I personally think this It is a failure. I personally think that ghosts should be completely independent of human beings. It can be said to be another species. It is just a human-like existence in reality, and cannot communicate or understand. Even if it can be communicated, the purpose of communication is to kill people as the first premise. Ghosts are a pure evil to humans. I couldn't stand it when I saw Chapter 26 of the second volume. This chapter tells the story of Qu Meizhen, Tang Li and the pig's feet coming to Haishan Cemetery to help Lin Sen fight against the curse that predicts the time of death. Qu Mei really wants to use the ghosts in the cemetery to... To strengthen the spell to fight against the ghost who killed Lin Sen, the specific operation was to take the blood from the blood bottle in Qu Meizhen's bag and sprinkle it on the tombstone. When we sprinkled pig's feet on a child's tombstone, the little boy's ghost actually cried and asked the pig's feet to help him find his mother? It's like a horror house. It's understandable that Pig's Knuckle sympathizes with the young boy's early death, and it's understandable that he saves the patient, but what do you do when you sympathize with a ghost who may kill people? To be honest, the setting of the creation of ghosts in the new work can be said to have greatly reduced the mystery and terror of ghosts. The key is that ghosts still have emotions and can cry. I really can't accept it. I don't know if Huo Da can read the comments I wrote, but I hope Huo Da can read my comments. As for whether it can be redefined, I don't ask for it, because it is impossible for any author to change the established settings for the sake of a reader's ideas. Finally, let me make it clear that the above content is my personal opinion. I just don't feel comfortable with it. Please just treat it as a joke and don't take it seriously.

Hell Apartment, a masterpiece I tasted when I was in junior high school. Its high-quality atmosphere makes people immerse themselves in it. I often fall asleep with the lights on in the middle of the night. In recent years, I have gone to a pit theater in my spare time. Death Note NG The actors and other relatively suitable settings laid the foundation for the description method in the early and middle stages, and the intensity of the cursed object was also well controlled. The protagonist group was not made into a routine of watching melons and vegetables. It was not until the middle stage that the demon points appeared. It was already a glance and it was really hard to swallow. Let's talk about the obvious shortcomings of various works of the author Tinder 1. "Cinema" - Transformed into a Demon Hunter I personally think that adding Western elements is a very abrupt thing. Although you personally want to transform, it is understandable that your theme is to add vampires/undead/zombies/demon to the cinema, but the key question is, is the transformation like this? At best, it is most reasonable for these things to appear in the form of unit dramas. You spent a lot of ink describing the Chinese wraiths in the first part, and in the middle period, you directly integrated the demon hunter, byd Cross Fire, right? Why don't you just grind the points in the ruins of giants? You spent a lot of pen and ink describing Chinese horror in the first part, but then a demon appears later, so what's the point of having so many plots in front of you 2. "Examination Paper" - a more eye-catching setting, a plot that goes back to the old path Following the same example, the movie picks up later, and it is still 340 chapters in the middle. It was only at this stage that the disease became apparent, and he started to suffer from severe illness after chapter 80 of the test paper. He repeated the old path of going to the movie theater, but he still couldn't escape the devil. It tasted the same as chewing wax. The terminal condition of immortality was difficult to empathize with. The protagonist was far less detailed than the previous movie. He became a character who existed for the sequel. In the author's pen, The next one will only use the slogan of eternal life, like a soulless robot, and the advantage setting is novel. It faces ghosts in the way of answering papers, but it is a pity that it starts high and goes low 3. I took a chance and took a look at "444" - there is no job I saw that something was wrong with the subscription, and after scanning it, it turned out to be the devil again, the fire Apart from demons and faction fights, I can't think of any other ideas. I haven't kept up with the times. Of course, no matter what era, there is a strong influence. I personally like to read Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio. This should be a good illustration. Even if you don't follow the times and write your own style, it is still a kind of talent. But obviously, the popularity The kind is that he has not grasped the right point, discarding the essence and picking up the dross Summary: To put it bluntly, Tinder is not suitable for long-form serialization and he cannot grasp it. On the contrary, medium-length or even short stories are more suitable for him to write, otherwise it will be a chaotic dance of demons. The outline of the novella is well thought out and completed in one go. The foundation is also a smooth landing. It will not end at an anticlimax, and Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba's Crocodile in the manga world is a very typical example. It has an ordinary setting, no grand world view, modern background, and a fight between humans and ghosts. It became popular with the 19th episode of the animation production team, but people were not blinded by the huge traffic. He knew that he was I don't have enough hard skills in all aspects to directly draw the final battle in one go. Overall, it's not that good, but it's definitely not bad. On the other hand, Tinder was pretty good at the beginning, but it took a sudden turn for the worse in the middle. There are only a few people who think it's okay using the filters of previous works. In the future, at least don't copy it mechanically when writing works. They are all demons every time, and you can't get over it, right? If you want to transform, no one will let you change. Within a reasonable range, the foreshadowing is reasonable. The Dragon Ball series from Dragon Ball to Dragon Ball Z is a successful example. From funny adventures to fighting and blood-soaking, but if you turn horror to Ragnarok, what is this? Is it reasonable within a work? Transformation must be carried out in a series rather than a work. For transformation in a work, not only must your writing be good, but the core framework of the plot must also be developed around this point, rather than jumping out and turning into an all-star brawl. If it is not handled well, the degree of explosion is no less than that of a work that was originally funny but turned dark and disabled after writing.

I just finished reading the free chapter, and I always feel like there's something wrong with it, like it's missing something that this type of novel should have. I just saw several readers commenting on this book in other novels. It makes sense. The screenshots are as follows. The protagonist enters this mysterious hospital. However, the people in the hospital are not mysterious. They are like ordinary doctors, giving me the look and feel of an ordinary hospital. The characters appear too fast, so some mystery should be maintained. An extra cold and indifferent mood may be more perfect. The following are some personal opinions This book has been exaggerating the mystery and horror of this hospital, but it mainly mentions the rules on paper. The protagonist is familiar with most of the rules at once, and then he can come and go freely. It does not well express the panic of ordinary people entering a new environment.       ：，，，，，， This book lacks a safe environment; judging from the free chapters, this is a rather scary world. The hospital may be a safe island for readers. The plot in the hospital can relieve readers' excessive tension to a certain extent and leave more readers. However, the hospital (base camp) is not safe. There is probably no place in the whole book where readers can breathe. Although creating a safe environment and then destroying it is a good way to create fearful creatures, this thing is a base camp. It would be too much to have monsters that can invade in the early stage... In the early stage, it should be used as a reliable existence. The protagonist can use its power to defeat monsters or avoid attacks. I think this kind of shaping of fear may be more suitable for novels similar to the Lord God Space. The Lord God Space is a place with an absolutely safe environment. There should be something similar in the past. The warm game I Can Fix Air Conditioners is also similar. It has a real world to relieve stress. Unfortunately, its plot is not terrible, not half as good as the author. I was actually discussing the impact of the plot and settings on the reader base. In fact, this book gives people a pretty good impression

The infighting is foreshadowing. I've seen many people give up when they see the infighting. I hope you don't mind spoilers.

The Goat in Volume 6 can be said to meet all my expectations, whether it is horror or other aspects.

Reading all night long is the most exciting thing, okay? థ౪థ

Xiaobai's article has a sense of sight, talking about ghost stories, and horror. I didn't see or feel it at all. Instead, I felt the constant flow of water and long-winded words. In the ghost hospital, the author wanted to express the doctor's light of humanity and professional ethics more than once. After a while, it turned into an upgrade to fight monsters. What about the ghost stories? Where did the strange story go? There are too many things that I want to express, but it becomes a mess. Nowadays, readers are no longer novices, but the author still thinks that everyone is a novice. I really can't stand it, so I will withdraw first out of respect.

This volume is really well written. Reading it in the middle of the night scared me to death 😭

Let me talk about my views on the supernatural horror category. The writing method of this category is actually very limited and tests the author's inspiration. In a long text, it is really impossible to maintain a sense of horror. Properly creating a sense of horror is necessary, but not sufficient. If you really want to write well in this category, you basically rely on high-quality unit stories, puzzles and reversals. When you think about it, it's a bit similar to a mystery novel in a sense (laughs). One thing that is different from other online articles is that "increasing combat power" in this category is not necessarily a good thing. "Fear comes from insufficient firepower", and "becoming stronger" can easily shake the two foundations of "terror" and "puzzle solving" at the same time. I have to complain about the book "Cinema" here. It is indeed good in the early stage, but in the later stage, the idea of ​​​​"combination of horror and fantasy", please think about the feasibility before writing it... To put it lightly, the success of "Apartment" was completely defeated by "Cinema" in the later stage. Now when it comes to supernatural horror in the online literary world, there are several works that are often mentioned: "Hell Apartment", "Horror Resurrection", and "I Have a House of Horrors". The path of the horror house is rather special, so I won't discuss it much. From the other two films, we can still extract some common features. So, I suggest that Huo Da broaden his horizons a little, and don't just lower his head to write down. He should raise his head and think carefully about why Apartment and Resurrection are popular, why his books collapsed, how to write in the category of supernatural horror, what are his strengths and weaknesses in writing, etc. If you don't want to understand this, you will most likely just repeat the previous mistakes. Above.

So far it's pretty good, and the heroine feels it's okay. There's no personal stuff, there's no bloody plot, just write it well.

I'm so angry, if you don't update, all the book friends will be gone 😭

I admit that the setting of the story is interesting, but it felt strange and awkward at first, and I couldn't explain it clearly, and then there were all kinds of wrong sentences and repeated conjunctions. Emmm, maybe the feeling of reading a book is not as strong as listening to a book. Listening to a book is really just one word playing back and forth for a while 😠😠😠😠 I used 1.4X speed. I continued to read, but it just sounded uncomfortable.

Thoughts after reading Chapter 2: Obscene job fair Continuing from the previous chapter, I saw the man ran away after shouting at the young man for not being morally responsible. When the male protagonist came back to his senses, the person was gone, leaving only a pair of pale hands holding the male protagonist's neck. The male protagonist follows the principle that if you are unkind, I cannot be unjust. Deciding to pick up the gold, I temporarily took the uncle's hand around my neck, kept it for him, and returned it to him next time I met. But suddenly the ghost hand merges into the right eye! The male protagonist exclaimed, uncle, you can't blame me, it ran away on its own and I didn't do anything! ! But obviously the uncle doesn't believe it! Observing secretly, I still can't catch you in this demo? After taking my hand, you still want to run away? He took the opportunity to stun the male protagonist and send him to a small white room! The male protagonist woke up and found that there were three more people, two dragons and one phoenix, looking directly at him and muttering about what a good young man, what a good young man. When the male protagonist saw that these three children were not serious people, he was a little panicked and quickly asked, "Where am I?" Who are you? What do you want to do? The three people obviously saw this young man who was recognized by the uncle as a good man and were very happy. Lian said: Hey, don't panic, you are the chosen child, hey, this is Death Death Hospital, hey, I am the vice president, and he is both a doctor! Hehe, I came here to ask you to be a doctor! The male protagonist was overjoyed upon hearing this, right? ! Poaching, right? ! Suddenly I feel confident! I lead the spirit. What storms and waves have I not seen in these years? What kind of surgery have you not done? What patients have you not seen? Just dig me and you'll be satisfied! ! You have a vision! If the family doesn't speak the same language, what position can you give me? When the three people heard this, they looked at each other and smiled, "Okay!" Good! Good! This hospital needs ambitious young people like you! ! Young people are energetic! No wonder the dean asked you to be interviewed by name. Don't worry, your job is not difficult. It's just like educating the uncles you met just now. You have to listen to the uncles and aunties and help them make suggestions. After hearing this, the male protagonist's hands and feet became cold and his body became paralyzed. He quickly said that I can't take on this job. That uncle is very sick. I have been practicing medicine for so many years. This uncle is the sickest one. Are you telling me that there will be someone more sick than him in the future? I can't cure this disease, can you please hire someone else? ? When the three of them saw this, they stopped pretending. You have to sign the employment contract today, whether you sign it or not! You are the only one of more than a dozen doctors interviewed! If you don't come, who will? The dean blamed me for failing to complete the recruitment task, but I cannot bear this responsibility! Do you still want to walk out of this door without signing this contract? ? Daydreaming! Someone come! Get on the contract!

You shouldn't read horror novels in the middle of the night,,,,,

It's pretty good, but updates are frequently interrupted.

You can talk here about the shortcomings of this book, your expectations for the future, and most importantly, whether you will subscribe to it after it is released. I will take everyone's opinions into consideration and make improvements in the future. The current plot trend will be that after the entrance to five hells is opened, the world will move towards an environment like the recovery of ghost energy (similar to the mysterious recovery).

My feelings after reading the first volume so far It felt right to cut into the theme with a small supernatural story at the beginning. However, the following 20 chapters spent too much energy on describing the setting and understanding the characters. On the contrary, the most important thing is the background, origin, and scary scenes of the ghosts. As a new book, it is the time when the audience is most fresh. When the audience needs the ghosts the most, there is less writing about the ghosts. Writing a bunch of settings will immediately make the readers' heads buzz. There are a lot of departments, characters, various spells, and ghost levels. It is really difficult to remember. There are several settings and departments that can be postponed. Writing them all at once not only destroys the mystery of the hospital, but also makes the readers unable to remember. The description of ghosts is too tool-like, and does not elaborate on the origins, abilities, and the most important rules of killing. The description of ghosts can be more specific. For example, what are the rules and restrictions of the old man's ghost hand, what are his specific abilities, and what are the murder rules of the female ghost in red. However, it was not written out in the early stage, as if a ghost came and the person disappeared. But why do people disappear? The reader doesn't know. This kind of writing is okay once or twice, but more often than not, it's just pretentious, and the readers have little sense of expectation. Anyway, when the ghost comes, the supporting character disappears, and the protagonist just fights the ghost and then absorbs it. It seems that the role of the ghost is to be absorbed by the protagonist, and then the ghost's mission is completed. In just twenty chapters, the protagonist has ghost eyes, ghost hands, and a devil in red. To be honest, the golden finger is too powerful. What will happen next? In fact, the devil in red can be used as a foreshadowing and then sucked later, which can not only increase the female ghost's character but also suppress the rhythm. According to the current rhythm, the protagonist is sucking one by one. This kind of absorbing writing method that treats ghosts like cabbage will greatly reduce the mystery and character of the ghost, causing the ghost to become a tool. There is also a big hidden problem. According to the setting, all patients are treated in the hospital, so there will be a problem when writing ghosts in the future. The ghosts will appear in a fixed place - the hospital. When all ghosts appear in a fixed place, subsequent ghost writing will lack very important environmental description. This problem needs to be solved. The protagonist can't always fight ghosts in the hospital, right? My current suggestion is that the treatment of ghosts can be turned into a small copy. The protagonist's soul enters the ghost or the patient's consciousness exorcises the ghost. This can supplement the description of the environment and also supplement the ghost story to make it fuller. Or make the protagonist an expatriate doctor, let the protagonist go out to exorcise ghosts, and experience all kinds of ghosts and customs. Also, the setting of the devil was released too early. The setting of the devil in the West is imbued with divinity. If you pull out any one, it will be a clone of an incredible existence in Western mythology. Based on the basic setting of the novel where the protagonists gradually become gods, the setting of the devil will not appear until later. Appearing in advance will destroy the terrifying atmosphere in the early part of the novel and turn the ghost into a god. People are afraid of ghosts, not God, but fear God. And generally when I watch Western demons and evil spirits, I treat them as science fiction movies, which have a very poor sense of horror. I really have no feeling for this kind of religious horror in the West, which is far less scary than Eastern ghosts like Sadako and Chu Renmei. Because the biggest difference between Eastern ghosts and Western ghosts is that Eastern ghosts have human nature, and there is a reason why Eastern ghosts become ghosts! If you don't complain, you won't become a ghost! Behind every ghost is a tragic story. Only by knowing its resentment can we understand its hatred and understand the horror.

Don't decide on a heroine so quickly for the next book. It would be better if it can be CP-free. Haha, if you really want a heroine, don't choose one right after the novel is written. Also, the heroine shouldn't have too many roles. She is already a bit of a group character. And Tinder also likes to write about weak protagonists when writing, and then there are a lot of people who are better than him, so many people can't see the highlight of the protagonist. This is a bit like the Japanese knotweed in the recent popular spell, which is also very popular. The supporting characters stole most people's attention, and then I read several popular supernatural thrillers recently. Everyone is familiar with the basics. It seems that basically the protagonists have a strong sense of presence. Of course, some start from weak, but they are getting stronger. There are many highlights, and the audience's attention will not be stolen by too outstanding supporting characters. Although I like some supporting characters, I still prefer the protagonist, so I hope you will read the next book no matter what. Whatever genre you write, you must think carefully about how to make the protagonist stand out. Although I like the previous protagonist's calm personality, I can't help but love to abuse the protagonist. The protagonist is always overwhelmed by a bunch of awesome supporting characters. The protagonist can't even lift his head. The only one who lifts his head is Li Yin. Ye Xiang, I liked him a lot at first, but every time I thought he was finally going to rise, and then suddenly you go to abuse the protagonist again. It's just abuse, and you have to form this with him. The male partner in the control group, I won't say who he is here, then tortured the male protagonist's family. It seems that you have tortured the protagonist's family in many books. It's so miserable. If it doesn't work, you can come to Qidian Orphanage. It's not easy to get rid of the protagonist and the protagonist's family. There is also Devil's Apartment. At the beginning, I actually hated the two protagonist brothers and sisters bragging about each other. After all, we haven't seen what the protagonist's two siblings are. They are old. Repeatedly bragging about each other's reputation, and then decided on the heroine at the beginning. The same thing happened in the last Devil's Examination Paper. The two protagonists, brother and sister, always stick together. I can't see any of their mutual achievements. I only see them holding each other back, and then they also disgust us, because the two people's inner monologues are always about feeling sorry for each other and worrying about each other. Of course, this is normal, but every time there is a long inner monologue, basically Originally, they had to come once for every mission, just like conjoined twins every day. Until the chapter before the paradise and the paradise chapter, you started to get bored and the two of them were in the same frame. Even if they were in the same frame, the two of them believed in each other and did what they were doing. After not being distracted, I suddenly felt that it would be okay if they were really together. If they keep this state, both of them have their own tasks, trust each other, and then complete it seriously. If you have this kind of attitude at hand, if you don't act like a conjoined twin all the time, when they are together, you write her to death, just because you said in the comment section that you don't like her, but in fact, you can not write her to death at all, just write a female protagonist, and don't let the protagonist confess to you. But you have to write to death again, and then you are criticized again for always liking to write the heroine to death. I haven't read many devil exam papers. Because I don't like dual protagonists, regardless of whether they are male or female, so I won't comment on the Devil's Examination Paper So I hope that the first point of your new book is not to decide on the heroine at the beginning of the book. You can just read the discussion in the comment area while writing and decide. If you really don't know how to write or you are really afraid that they won't like it and will give a bad review, just don't write it. Anyway, we read horror novels for the plot development. The second point is that there is no need to always be led by the comments section. Although some opinions are indeed listenable, such as whether the heroine can be written or not. If you are not sure, don't write it. For example, don't abuse the protagonist too much. For example, don't bring too much personal emotions into it. There are no other problems. There are only three points. First, don't abuse the protagonist too much. It's okay to abuse the protagonist a little and become stronger, but don't abuse the protagonist so miserably. Second, the heroine can be tortured so badly. You decide whether it is necessary or not, but don't introduce the heroine at the beginning. This will give us a stereotype of the first impression. The third is that the protagonist can start to have weaknesses, but you must remember that the protagonist must always be the protagonist, and don't always be overshadowed by a group of supporting characters. Just grasp the degree. Anyway, I don't know how to grasp it. It depends on how you write it. Small opinion, hope to see, sincere opinion

Please don't gain weight! If you want to fatten up, wait until it is put on the shelves before fattening up! In the current new book issue, the reading data is very important for my subsequent recommended resources! Don't fatten up! Don't fatten up! Don't fatten up!

Silver League report! I am an 11-year-old book fan! I started watching Hell Apartment in 2011 when I was in high school. It was so shocking at that time. Even now, I think it is the ceiling of supernatural online literature 😭😭😭 Now that I have the financial ability, I must make up for my youth and feelings 😳😳😳

It's a rare book that gets better and better with writing I came here for free, but suddenly I found that I had read it before and abandoned it. I wanted to leave, but I saw the wonderful comments behind it, so I started reading it from the fourth volume. It's really good. The fourth volume is just enough to keep me from giving up the book, but it doesn't get very good reviews. The author's writing power in this volume "Siren Island" suddenly feels soaring, and the sense of suspense is full. Unfortunately, the ending feels a little rushed. I feel like I'm making constant progress in the last few volumes, and Huo Da is finally back. To be honest, I am also a long-time fan of Huoda. I was amazed by it all the way from Hell Apartment. I followed it all the way. I followed it in the movie theater for most of it. Before the end of Devil's Apartment, I followed the beginning of this early book. It really became shorter and shorter as I followed it. I was a bit disappointed with Huoda. I didn't expect that this book would actually go higher in the future. Come on, this is the level you should have if you are hot.

I hope Huo Da will stop interspersing strange emotional lines and not include too many personal items. It is not difficult to maintain the level of the cinema. After all, he is also the originator of the escape flow and prop flow.

I compiled the current No. 444 Hospital rules myself, and may update or correct errors later

Come on, author, please stop writing about the relationship between men and women. What I dislike the most about the Devil's Apartment is the relationship line between men and women. Too much of it dilutes the tension of survival in blood. In addition, as long as you have a high IQ, you can use the apartment casually. These two points are the biggest failure. The other is just my personal opinion. Don't blame me if you don't like it. Finally, come on, author.

"Look at me, Dr. Gao, look at me"

Hey... Huo Da has an old problem. Except for the first Hell Apartment, the remaining four books were all half-finished and collapsed in the middle. The further I write, the more it falls apart... I don't know how to complain about it for a while. The cinema with the best setting and creativity is located behind the Xiuxian Film Studio next door. I don't know what's going on in the exam room that has the most initial reservations, and it's unfinished at the speed of light. The devil's apartment was so hot that he couldn't bear it at first. After Dong Mei sent it, the plot started to be deus ex machina... The hospital now seems to have followed the old path of the movie theater and started to look like the Daogui studio next door...