Hospital No. 444

You can talk here about the shortcomings of this book, your expectations for the future, and most importantly, whether you will subscribe to it after it is released. I will take everyone's opinions into consideration and make improvements in the future. The current plot trend will be that after the entrance to five hells is opened, the world will move towards an environment like the recovery of ghost energy (similar to the mysterious recovery).

My feelings after reading the first volume so far It felt right to cut into the theme with a small supernatural story at the beginning. However, the following 20 chapters spent too much energy on describing the setting and understanding the characters. On the contrary, the most important thing is the background, origin, and scary scenes of the ghosts. As a new book, it is the time when the audience is most fresh. When the audience needs the ghosts the most, there is less writing about the ghosts. Writing a bunch of settings will immediately make the readers' heads buzz. There are a lot of departments, characters, various spells, and ghost levels. It is really difficult to remember. There are several settings and departments that can be postponed. Writing them all at once not only destroys the mystery of the hospital, but also makes the readers unable to remember. The description of ghosts is too tool-like, and does not elaborate on the origins, abilities, and the most important rules of killing. The description of ghosts can be more specific. For example, what are the rules and restrictions of the old man's ghost hand, what are his specific abilities, and what are the murder rules of the female ghost in red. However, it was not written out in the early stage, as if a ghost came and the person disappeared. But why do people disappear? The reader doesn't know. This kind of writing is okay once or twice, but more often than not, it's just pretentious, and the readers have little sense of expectation. Anyway, when the ghost comes, the supporting character disappears, and the protagonist just fights the ghost and then absorbs it. It seems that the role of the ghost is to be absorbed by the protagonist, and then the ghost's mission is completed. In just twenty chapters, the protagonist has ghost eyes, ghost hands, and a devil in red. To be honest, the golden finger is too powerful. What will happen next? In fact, the devil in red can be used as a foreshadowing and then sucked later, which can not only increase the female ghost's character but also suppress the rhythm. According to the current rhythm, the protagonist is sucking one by one. This kind of absorbing writing method that treats ghosts like cabbage will greatly reduce the mystery and character of the ghost, causing the ghost to become a tool. There is also a big hidden problem. According to the setting, all patients are treated in the hospital, so there will be a problem when writing ghosts in the future. The ghosts will appear in a fixed place - the hospital. When all ghosts appear in a fixed place, subsequent ghost writing will lack very important environmental description. This problem needs to be solved. The protagonist can't always fight ghosts in the hospital, right? My current suggestion is that the treatment of ghosts can be turned into a small copy. The protagonist's soul enters the ghost or the patient's consciousness exorcises the ghost. This can supplement the description of the environment and also supplement the ghost story to make it fuller. Or make the protagonist an expatriate doctor, let the protagonist go out to exorcise ghosts, and experience all kinds of ghosts and customs. Also, the setting of the devil was released too early. The setting of the devil in the West is imbued with divinity. If you pull out any one, it will be a clone of an incredible existence in Western mythology. Based on the basic setting of the novel where the protagonists gradually become gods, the setting of the devil will not appear until later. Appearing in advance will destroy the terrifying atmosphere in the early part of the novel and turn the ghost into a god. People are afraid of ghosts, not God, but fear God. And generally when I watch Western demons and evil spirits, I treat them as science fiction movies, which have a very poor sense of horror. I really have no feeling for this kind of religious horror in the West, which is far less scary than Eastern ghosts like Sadako and Chu Renmei. Because the biggest difference between Eastern ghosts and Western ghosts is that Eastern ghosts have human nature, and there is a reason why Eastern ghosts become ghosts! If you don't complain, you won't become a ghost! Behind every ghost is a tragic story. Only by knowing its resentment can we understand its hatred and understand the horror.

Don't decide on a heroine so quickly for the next book. It would be better if it can be CP-free. Haha, if you really want a heroine, don't choose one right after the novel is written. Also, the heroine shouldn't have too many roles. She is already a bit of a group character. And Tinder also likes to write about weak protagonists when writing, and then there are a lot of people who are better than him, so many people can't see the highlight of the protagonist. This is a bit like the Japanese knotweed in the recent popular spell, which is also very popular. The supporting characters stole most people's attention, and then I read several popular supernatural thrillers recently. Everyone is familiar with the basics. It seems that basically the protagonists have a strong sense of presence. Of course, some start from weak, but they are getting stronger. There are many highlights, and the audience's attention will not be stolen by too outstanding supporting characters. Although I like some supporting characters, I still prefer the protagonist, so I hope you will read the next book no matter what. Whatever genre you write, you must think carefully about how to make the protagonist stand out. Although I like the previous protagonist's calm personality, I can't help but love to abuse the protagonist. The protagonist is always overwhelmed by a bunch of awesome supporting characters. The protagonist can't even lift his head. The only one who lifts his head is Li Yin. Ye Xiang, I liked him a lot at first, but every time I thought he was finally going to rise, and then suddenly you go to abuse the protagonist again. It's just abuse, and you have to form this with him. The male partner in the control group, I won't say who he is here, then tortured the male protagonist's family. It seems that you have tortured the protagonist's family in many books. It's so miserable. If it doesn't work, you can come to Qidian Orphanage. It's not easy to get rid of the protagonist and the protagonist's family. There is also Devil's Apartment. At the beginning, I actually hated the two protagonist brothers and sisters bragging about each other. After all, we haven't seen what the protagonist's two siblings are. They are old. Repeatedly bragging about each other's reputation, and then decided on the heroine at the beginning. The same thing happened in the last Devil's Examination Paper. The two protagonists, brother and sister, always stick together. I can't see any of their mutual achievements. I only see them holding each other back, and then they also disgust us, because the two people's inner monologues are always about feeling sorry for each other and worrying about each other. Of course, this is normal, but every time there is a long inner monologue, basically Originally, they had to come once for every mission, just like conjoined twins every day. Until the chapter before the paradise and the paradise chapter, you started to get bored and the two of them were in the same frame. Even if they were in the same frame, the two of them believed in each other and did what they were doing. After not being distracted, I suddenly felt that it would be okay if they were really together. If they keep this state, both of them have their own tasks, trust each other, and then complete it seriously. If you have this kind of attitude at hand, if you don't act like a conjoined twin all the time, when they are together, you write her to death, just because you said in the comment section that you don't like her, but in fact, you can not write her to death at all, just write a female protagonist, and don't let the protagonist confess to you. But you have to write to death again, and then you are criticized again for always liking to write the heroine to death. I haven't read many devil exam papers. Because I don't like dual protagonists, regardless of whether they are male or female, so I won't comment on the Devil's Examination Paper So I hope that the first point of your new book is not to decide on the heroine at the beginning of the book. You can just read the discussion in the comment area while writing and decide. If you really don't know how to write or you are really afraid that they won't like it and will give a bad review, just don't write it. Anyway, we read horror novels for the plot development. The second point is that there is no need to always be led by the comments section. Although some opinions are indeed listenable, such as whether the heroine can be written or not. If you are not sure, don't write it. For example, don't abuse the protagonist too much. For example, don't bring too much personal emotions into it. There are no other problems. There are only three points. First, don't abuse the protagonist too much. It's okay to abuse the protagonist a little and become stronger, but don't abuse the protagonist so miserably. Second, the heroine can be tortured so badly. You decide whether it is necessary or not, but don't introduce the heroine at the beginning. This will give us a stereotype of the first impression. The third is that the protagonist can start to have weaknesses, but you must remember that the protagonist must always be the protagonist, and don't always be overshadowed by a group of supporting characters. Just grasp the degree. Anyway, I don't know how to grasp it. It depends on how you write it. Small opinion, hope to see, sincere opinion

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Silver League report! I am an 11-year-old book fan! I started watching Hell Apartment in 2011 when I was in high school. It was so shocking at that time. Even now, I think it is the ceiling of supernatural online literature 😭😭😭 Now that I have the financial ability, I must make up for my youth and feelings 😳😳😳

It's a rare book that gets better and better with writing I came here for free, but suddenly I found that I had read it before and abandoned it. I wanted to leave, but I saw the wonderful comments behind it, so I started reading it from the fourth volume. It's really good. The fourth volume is just enough to keep me from giving up the book, but it doesn't get very good reviews. The author's writing power in this volume "Siren Island" suddenly feels soaring, and the sense of suspense is full. Unfortunately, the ending feels a little rushed. I feel like I'm making constant progress in the last few volumes, and Huo Da is finally back. To be honest, I am also a long-time fan of Huoda. I was amazed by it all the way from Hell Apartment. I followed it all the way. I followed it in the movie theater for most of it. Before the end of Devil's Apartment, I followed the beginning of this early book. It really became shorter and shorter as I followed it. I was a bit disappointed with Huoda. I didn't expect that this book would actually go higher in the future. Come on, this is the level you should have if you are hot.

I hope Huo Da will stop interspersing strange emotional lines and not include too many personal items. It is not difficult to maintain the level of the cinema. After all, he is also the originator of the escape flow and prop flow.

I compiled the current No. 444 Hospital rules myself, and may update or correct errors later

Come on, author, please stop writing about the relationship between men and women. What I dislike the most about the Devil's Apartment is the relationship line between men and women. Too much of it dilutes the tension of survival in blood. In addition, as long as you have a high IQ, you can use the apartment casually. These two points are the biggest failure. The other is just my personal opinion. Don't blame me if you don't like it. Finally, come on, author.

"Look at me, Dr. Gao, look at me"