The Forbidden Zone of Strange Laws

I have always liked horror and supernatural novels. Even after so many years, I still think that Your Hell Apartment and Hell Cinema are among the best high-quality works in the supernatural copy genre. Both of these works could have gone down in history, but in the end they collapsed due to various personal problems. So after hearing that you wanted to reset the cinema, I came here specifically to write a long review and give you suggestions on the remake. This suggestion essentially only has 2 points, but if you can do these 2 points, it is basically enough. Let me summarize the core of these two points in advance: The focus of the cinema should be copy design and horror, and other things can only be touched upon, and must not overwhelm the guest. 1. Don't focus on improving the protagonist's abilities, spend more on designing copies and a sense of terror. Now that supernatural dungeons have been circulated for so many years, popular books basically have one thing in common, that is, props, abilities, and talents are just additions, and cannot harm the ghosts, or have a direct impact on the dungeon. This is the setting of the early stage of the movie theater. The reason why everyone reads this kind of horror supernatural novel is because they want to see the terror and despair brought by the ghosts that cannot be resisted. The movie theater only used this setting in the early stage, but the popular supernatural copy story carried this setting through to the ending. In the final analysis, the core of the supernatural dungeon stream should be the design of the dungeon, rather than constantly trying to improve abilities and worldview to make characters stronger. In fact, the early setting of your cinema has already been perfected. For a supernatural dungeon, what readers love to read is the early setting of the cinema. Players do not have any abilities, props, abilities that can affect the dungeon and ghosts. They can only give themselves a limited chance to save their lives. In addition, there is no need for any settings to improve the player's ability. It is purely based on the dungeon design to attract readers. This is also why many well-written articles in the supernatural dungeon stream are eunuchs, because this setting looks simple, but in fact it is very demanding on the design of the dungeon. After many authors wrote a few good dungeons, they lost inspiration and could not write the plot, and finally had to write the book eunuch. You have a talent for writing dungeons, and the supernatural dungeons you wrote are very good. If you are willing to put all your efforts into conceiving the dungeon, and let the early settings permeate the whole text, and don't let other settings take over the spotlight, the cinema remake may be able to return to the position it once held as a masterpiece. In supernatural copy streams, what readers want to see is horror after all. By the way, in terms of copy design, I really admire Tomato's "Horrifying Nightmare: I Have a Pair of Ghost Eyes" and "Midnight Nightmare". These two books are by the same author, and the readers of these two books he wrote are very highly rated. Ghosts are very smart, and they are excellent supernatural copy articles that are constantly fighting against the strange and very scary. I think you can refer to this idea. 2.Emotional line (key points to note) To be honest, I don't think your emotional drama is poorly written. Although most authors say that your emotional scenes are terrible, in factWhether it is a movie theater or an apartment, the early emotional scenes you write for the male and female protagonists are all excellent. Ying Ziye and Li Yin in the apartment are still Wen Yufan and Ye Xiang in the movie theater. Even now, their early shaping seems to be the benchmark for romantic romance dramas in supernatural dramas. They could have been representative of the excellent emotional lines in supernatural dramas, until you wrote Ziye to death, replaced Yufan's status as the heroine, and allocated it to the second male lead. In the early stage of the movie theater, Yu Fan and Ye Xiang, the two experienced the dungeon together from scratch, supported each other, and trusted each other. Whether it was interaction or shaping, they gave people a good impression. They did not take up too much plot space and would not dominate the dungeon plot. Even now, I have not seen better male and female protagonists in the supernatural dungeon stream than Yu Fan and Ye Xiang in the early stage. This is why readers were so angry when you assigned Yu Fan to the Marquis, because the character you wrote about Ye Wen was really good. No reader in the early stage of the movie would not support the two of them being together. But after you assigned her to the Marquis, the emotional line of the entire book was ruined, and the excellent character Yu Fan once created was destroyed. Why readers will support Ye Bai in the later period is not because you wrote Ye Bai so well, but because you destroyed Yu Fan's once excellent character creation. The Ye Bai you wrote is cliche, boring, and nothing new. It is a completely bad character design and plot. But because you wrote Yu Fan, who was originally a perfect and excellent heroine in the early stage (and later became the second female lead), it became worse and worse. This made the Ye Bai you wrote fresh and refined. Sister Bai, who was a close sister and senior role in the early stage, was really not suitable for the male protagonist in the later stage, and the character design was not innovative. But the fact is that Yu Fan in the early stage is the best female protagonist you have ever written. No reader watching Infinite Liu will not like this calm, smart, and mutually growing and trusting female protagonist from scratch with the male protagonist. So I feel very regretful. You could have written a pair of male and female protagonists that can be used as a benchmark for the love line in the supernatural dungeon stream, but in the end the entire love line was ruined. If after the cinema is reset, if you can maintain the early shaping of Yu Fan and Ye Xiang, I hope you can keep the two of them together, so that Yu Fan can gradually develop feelings for Ye Xiang and respond to Ye Xiang's feelings in the dungeons again and again. I think all readers in the past thought it would have developed this way. Don't do orthopedics on the protagonist, mess up the relationship, etc. These are niche after all, and your writing will only discourage readers who don't like these contents. Although ordinary and normal emotional dramas are bland, they will never go wrong. Remember, the emotional drama is always just a supplement to the supernatural novel, don't take over the main role. If you can read these carefully and listen to my suggestions, that would be great. Finally, Ye Wen was my favorite pair of male and female protagonists in novels. After you removed it, you used various plots to make Yu Fan The design completely collapsed, which I have not been able to let go of for so many years. Obviously, there is no supernatural dungeon series that can compare with Ye Wen in the early stage. It is obvious that Yu Fan was so good in the early stage, why can't he write it honestly... I am really sad.

How could there be so many people deliberately trying to hack you? It's just your former readers who are angry at you.

Is the new cinema opening today?

I still like the author's unruly look. Where has your lofty ambition gone? Don't listen to those harem stallion lovers, you have to turn your articles into art

The ancient god of supernatural literature, the founder of infinite supernatural flow, little zhtty I always thought that you had become a great god, but I didn't expect that you could hardly keep level 5 Tianhu played badly in the beginning, but he is still a talent

I have read a lot of popular books, from the Death Curse Island and Strange Horror that I saw when I was a child, to The Apartment and the Movie Theater later (there are so many flaws that I can't stand it anymore), and I have read online articles for twenty years now. I have read more than half of this book. Let me talk about what I think is a very intuitive poisonous point in the content and the reason why I have persisted in reading most of it. The following only represents my personal opinion, and contains some spoilers that will not affect the reading experience. The poisonous points of the plot setting are "deliberate": 1. For example, turning off the light with light sensitivity to obtain a hidden profession at the beginning is actually a tolerable cheating link. However, several consecutive copies of the rules and ghost stories have greatly strengthened this sense of deliberateness. Moreover, this cheat is too tool-based and customized, without any character growth, plot foreshadowing, and even an exclusive cheat. It means that it weakens the protagonist's wisdom and bravery, just like a child picking up a hero-level AK and easily killing terrorists. Readers who are looking forward to watching the supernatural are actually not satisfied, and even want to laugh; 2. For example, the heroine Liu, I agree that Huoda has not written any embarrassing plots where women are strong men, and I have no opinion on this character at the moment, but this character has progressed too quickly with the protagonist in the plot. , So fast. In the first battle, Human Torch and Vanguard used their combined attack skills and took a bag of energy amethysts (those who have watched it will know the corresponding plot). Then I would like to ask where the remaining margin is. Is it too lowering the readers' expectations? 3. For example, the protagonist's team, the leader and nanny who fell from the sky, in such a world full of mysterious academic powers In a world of quantity, the barriers between people should be thicker. At least, I mean, the protagonist shouldn't start to act like "what's the matter, brothers" before the protagonist has investigated the whole story between the group leader and the previous team, and just drag the family with them to form a team. Under the guise of supernatural and infinite flow, we should first be a plot novel that develops steadily, right? The classic official plot of Poison Point: I want to say that as a child from a family within the system, when I observe powerful people doing things, they actually follow at least two basic laws: stance and favor. Decisions made based on these two basic laws also have their own sense of belief, which is at least persuasive. The protagonist Tuan of this book always gives me a feeling of exchange of interests and the law of the jungle in Huo Da's writing. Positioning as a victim, and repeatedly uttering the inner cry of "I am persecuted because I abide by principles and justice", it is very embarrassing. Not being political is also like being political. If you really want to write, you can create a tragic character in a large space, and then go to the knife, use profile to write these things, don't focus on the protagonist, especially an adult police protagonist who was born within the system, it is quite a drama. Too many poisonous cameos: My partner and I both like to read supernatural novels. I showed her a chapter titled "Ghost Eye Yang Jian", and we both frowned and complained (actually, the content of the copy was okay, but the poison was on the surface). And that was an early dungeon. Although the Ghost Controller couldn't kill ghosts, he could easily confront supernatural beings and was no longer a human being. How could such a dungeon be placed in the second dungeon and even Xiao Yang was saved by the protagonist? Even if there was, it should be a later stage. The acceptance rate in the early stage is really not high. The following is the reason why I can continue watching. The single copy design is still excellent: This is Huoda's consistent advantage and the reason why readers are still willing to believe it. I won't say much more. The social background design is relatively interesting: a world polluted by horror movies gave birth to people with supernatural abilities who can fight ghosts. Mixed in the social environment where ordinary people live, many cultural differences and sparks of a scary atmosphere can be collided. The couple's two-pronged sword: It's quite interesting. Everyone likes revolutionary love, and it can also make the characters' social relationships more complicated. A rare type of copy: strange rules stories, especially those with so many strange rules, are difficult to write and very challenging. I have the impression that the copy design of a convenience store worker can be said to be the benchmark for this book at present. It not only has the original novel background, but also an original copy of the rules, and also created characters (Wu Ge, the man from the Chenxi team). It can be said that it is enjoyable to watch. I still hope to create more original characters and original copy content. You can use the background of the story, but don't overdo it. I will talk about whatever comes to my mind. I hope that the fire will be fueled and we can create another classic.

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Wasn't this guy a great guy before? I remember he started writing books when I was in high school. They were very popular at that time. How many years have I been working now and he is still writing? Shouldn't we have wealth and freedom long ago?

The owner of the barbecued pork restaurant asked Jiang Jin to close his eyes and eat barbecued pork, so Jiang Jin ate it, and as a result, 20% of his SAN value was instantly deducted. How to say it? I really don't have any vigilance at all! According to the boss, the barbecued pork was contaminated. Logically speaking, this should be within the warning range of the death knell, but the death knell didn't sound. So, what is the problem? According to the system, Deathstroke should be absolutely loyal to Jiang Jin. As a result, Deathstroke just watched Jiang Jin eat a piece of contaminated barbecued pork, which was... Very strange. Anyway, either the system lied, or there was something wrong with Deathstroke. Could it be that when Deathstroke wanted to eat the crystal of resentment before, Jiang Jin had to feed it to Deathstroke? Otherwise, as time goes by, Death Knell will lose his loyalty to Jiang Jin? Or perhaps, Deathstroke was arranged by Jiang Jin to attack its former owner, which also caused Deathstroke to reduce its loyalty to Jiang Jin. They are all quite magical. Let's talk about the owner of this barbecued pork restaurant. If you say he is an NPC, you can only say that he is probably so. Because I have a feeling that this boss actually knows that he is an NPC and that Jiang Jin is a reincarnation. There is a high probability that this boss was transformed from a failed reincarnation, and he cannot say anything unnecessary. If you say something unnecessary, a "cleaner" will come out and deal with it. After all, the crazy old lady before seemed to realize something and was taken away by the cleaners the next second. This shows that NPCs should not be self-aware. Once your self-consciousness awakens, you can't talk too much, otherwise the cleaners will show up. The owner of the barbecued pork shop is most likely a person who was transformed from a reincarnation and became an NPC. He may have long recovered the memory of being a reincarnation, but he must pretend that he has not remembered it in order to avoid being taken away by the cleaners. Now facing Jiang Jin, the boss can only serve as a slave of the system to fulfill his profession as an NPC. I wonder if one day in the future, this kind of NPC transformed from a reincarnation can regain its identity as a reincarnation and escape. ——I am "Golden Flash 4", an old reader from Baidu Tieba. My original Baidu Tieba account has been canceled and I am now leaving my own footprints here.

The pace of "Under the World" these days is depressing. Tinder, you should be lucky that "Hell Cinema" was written ten years ago, otherwise the criticism of the plot of giving away a girl would be ten times or more than "Under the World" now. That is a devastating blow, and it will be difficult to recover from a lifetime of writing online.