To the Left of the Candle Dragon

I saw this book in a book club. I just wanted to read it at first. It was boring anyway, so I was attracted by just the opening chapter. The description of Nanzhu in this book, no, the overall description is very delicate. Just these first few chapters already have a soul, good I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. If the author's level does not drop or continues to rise, he must be qualified to become a god. In just a dozen chapters, it is gripping. The big snake protects the mountain and the creatures in the mountain. The fox has no regrets in cutting off the road for the big tiger who saved it once. The old man's belief in Taihang or his love for Taihang. The faith of Orochi who saved the village from the flood when he was young, his son's rebellious greed, the repayment of the mountains by the presiding one who sees through the world, Dahu's anger and sorrow for the lost ethnic group and resentment towards the human race, the millennium plan of the human race is just for the ambition to continue to dominate the world, The ignorance of the old man who has the power to obtain souls for immortality comes from the mountains, or the power of nature and time. Every plant, tree, and bird are all endowed with souls. It is really hard to imagine that this was written by a newcomer, and it feels even more like some boss's trumpet. No matter what, keep going

After reading Chapter 128, I feel that the peak is in the first 10 chapters, and the literary youth flavor is indeed getting stronger and stronger in the following. Where are the literary youth? One is the combat part, which feels lack of detailed segmentation. It seems to be quite passionate, but in fact it feels like there is a lack of ups and downs. If the final word or Jedi counterattack is written in a more straightforward and brief language, will it be easier to resonate with readers? Another is that the protagonist includes many supporting characters, all of whom speak in a refined manner. Compulsory education is promoted well, and even a Taoist can master Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism within two years. The protagonist basically has no description of emotions throughout the whole process. After all, he is a god and man, and he can destroy human desires according to natural principles, but readers cannot. I recognize the author's literary background. The whole text is gorgeous and easy to read, but it is too much.

How can I put it, the surprise at the beginning was much less after the transformation into a human being. Maybe it's because of being deflated or something, or because the protagonist started to communicate constantly after turning into a human being, and the character was too much lost Oh I thought it was a fairy tale

I suspect this author is a little sister

I couldn't stand this book until I read Chapter 16. It's like a short essay written by a high school student who suffered from both chuunibyou and literate youth. It's a pile of textual garbage made up of all kinds of useless words.

The plot and character have been declining since becoming human, and it's a bit mindless.

Personally, I feel that there is no need for the author to rely on his writing style to be similar to that of Chen Dong. It is really a bit like a toddler in Handan, and the sense of fragmentation in reading is a bit serious. After all, Hong Mao wrote three books before he was able to reach his peak in Zhe Tian. But the creativity is really good. If you find your own writing style and ponder the plot, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Especially in terms of plot, the scene of the coronation of the mountain spirit was originally the climax of the plot. The atmosphere and momentum were just in place, but it ended hastily, igniting loneliness.

As I write it, I don't want to read it. It's a bit inexplicable.

The world view of this book is excellent. If there is no problem with the update, there will be a chance to become a god. The writing style is better than that, right? The main problem with the writing style is the repetition of the depiction of battle scenes, such as when the male protagonist is fighting the enemy: the firelight caused by the friction of the scales opening and closing is ferocious, as if the bone surface is sneering. They are all words that have appeared many times, and they do reflect the image of the male protagonist to a certain extent, but they are almost the same every time (there are influences from the shape of the male protagonist, but indeed, the repetition rate is too high 🔨) There are also personal problems with the author. From the perspective of a bystander, the author did the right thing. After all, academics are the most important thing. The data in this book may be bad due to some early reasons. In short, it is basically not popular. Then it leads to another question. From the reader's perspective, I, as a reader, basically don't know whether the author is so busy with his studies. Whether you have achieved excellent results in some of the exams during this period, can you be worthy of the reader's consideration? If by chance, the author is still interested in this book, if you can read this text, I hope the author can answer the readers' expectations. If the author successfully escapes from the sea of suffering, he hopes to continue to bring you the story of Li Xi'an. This book is almost over and cannot be run. I suggest starting a new book from the period of Cinnabar. After waking up from the dream, he will introduce the king of New Kyushu one after another, to introduce the unshakability of Old Kyushu, to recall the confrontation between the Cangbang Sea and New Kyushu, and to describe Kunlun. And filthy changes, and finally shortened the length of the battle between good and evil appropriately, maybe because of the update problem. The battle between good and evil took a long time in my memory, which was very ink-stained and unpleasant. It was even more uncomfortable than the Cinnabar period Finally, I still hope that the author did not make any mistakes. I still really hope to see the sequel to Zhulong Yizuo

In the dark depths of the sea of ​​stars, nothingness and silence are the main themes here. Suddenly, a piece of dark gauze floats again, absorbing the light of the stars. Everything has lost its color, just like the walking night, the dark side of the universe. Only in the swing of the gauze can one see a bright golden light, which is a blooming lotus. This is a desolate area, there is not even a small world, only some broken fragments - those are the corpses of stars. Li Xi'an frowned, the strange feeling became stronger, as if guiding him. Continuing forward, more fragments appeared. On one of them, a faint light flashed. It was a palm-sized bronze mirror engraved with unknown patterns. Unfortunately, the mirror surface had been broken into pieces, and most of the magic was lost. Only the simple seal characters appeared and disappeared, and there was a weak attraction. Li Xi'an played with the bronze mirror, "This is a token, or a key to a certain place." Flames burst out in his eyes, burning fiercely. The past and the future intersect here, countless threads are entangled and peeled off, but there is nothing, nothing. What is connected by every clue is false. This space seems to have never existed, it is just an image that remains here. It's strange, but it's not a bad idea to go there. Without this bronze mirror, I'm afraid he would be lost here. Although the Time Law is incomplete, it still allows him to touch part of the reality. The slender and graceful shadows walk with an inexplicable rhythm. Ancientness is performed here. This comes from a race forgotten and buried by the years. Only the same ancient existence knows their name - Xingcai. Li Xi'an glanced at the stars in the distance. They were not static, but they were false. This space was almost comparable to reality, but it also had a sense of violation, as if someone was lying on your shoulder and whispering in your ear. The feeling became stronger and stronger. Finally, it reached a critical point. Li Xi'an only felt that he After passing through an invisible membrane, the scenery suddenly opened up. Countless fragments of buildings and palaces were scattered. Most of the restrictions had lost their effectiveness, leaving traces of Tao and Dharma. A trembling aura remained here. A great war must have occurred here, enough to destroy everything. This was a tomb of a large world. The shadow is attached to a pair of hands, wrapped in red scales. The small bronze mirror lies quietly in the palm of the hand. Only the soft and scattered light flashes on the mirror. Li Xi'an put away the bronze mirror and walked into it. The closer he got, the more his heart felt. It was shocking. The rubble of the mountains was piled up in pieces, motionless, silently telling the past years. The lotus bloomed and closed, and the golden flame dimmed. It was still invisible. Although it was no longer false, it still felt like it was a distance away. There is a layer of weird things, but that thing is probably protecting it. The continent next to him is many times more majestic than his own body. Li Xi'an goes deep again. There is not a single living thing here, not even corpses. Those who stand on the top of the cliff and cross the sea of stars There is no trace of his ancestors. There is only one secret realm in the center of this ruins, the only one that has not been shattered. The still intact restrictions rippled, and the mirror on his body flew out, opening a door, and Li Xi'an stepped in. There is no fairy scene in this secret realm, and it is not a tomb. There is only a crystal wall inside. Li Xi'an stands in front of this wall. He taps his fingers lightly, and the golden flame cannot touch it. The black veil peels off and is reflected in the wall. A young man with black hair, black clothes, golden eyes and dragon horns, with a beautiful face and a beautiful figure, could be called a stunning beauty anywhere else. Li Xi'an looked at his other self with some confusion. At a certain moment, he chuckled. Before he could react, he was reflected in his white silk hair stained with ink, moon frost stained golden candle, and his eyes turned moon white. He stretched out a slender white hand and pulled him into another realm. Li Xi'an suddenly understood that this crystal wall should be a mirror. Li Xi'an fell into a sea of ​​stars with him. A red dragon appeared, majestic, ferocious and mysterious. Opposite it was another white dragon. The soft and quiet moonlight shone on him. Sometimes he turned into a human form, sometimes into a dragon form, like a flying butterfly. Li Xi'an opened his mouth to ask, but he just smiled gently and said nothing. The two chased each other, more like they were playing around. The ice-blue Dharma flashed away, like ice and jade, and his hands that were neither stone nor iron turned into a cage. Laugh, the same hand, just covered with a touch of moonlight. Between the entanglements, eight arms stretched out from the void, covered with scales and claws. They flashed lightly, and the dim sunlight shone around them, like the sun in the sun, like no other. He carries a bright moon on his back, the twelve phases of the moon flash, the moon wheel lies across the sky, and disappears in silence. Li Xi'an held the sword. The sword was covered with dark dried blood, and the eight sides were copper-colored. It was crowned by unquenchable flames. When he waved it, it was the end. He drew his bow, and the embers of the setting sun turned into arrows, vowing to knock him down. The edge of the faint sword moved forward, but the distance between the two seemed to be solidified, and they could not be brought closer. Li Xi'an only felt that he fell into an embrace, and a hand stretched out in the moon phase, pulling time. Li Xi'an's pupils shrank, and before he could With the movement, His figure flashed again, followed by lush branches, the jade plaque made a crisp sound, the quietly flowing Styx River was a bit illusory, and a golden statue also appeared. He held a sword in one hand and hung it in the other. He lightly closed his left eye, and the bright moon rose, like an eye. Wherever he looked, time froze. The frozen star rain surrounded him, and he picked up a sword again. Li Xi'an saw that it was not his unstained Kunlun jade, but just condensed by the moonlight. He swung out the sword, cold and dead, like a blooming flower. The flames were rising, and the white frost was gone. Li Xi'an threw the Dusk Sword, and it turned into a big star. Countless red stars, his jade hands were like a mirror of ten thousand flowers, grabbing at him. When time and light merged, he took a step forward and stepped onto the white jade bridge. The moonlight was torn to pieces, but the bridge could not be touched. A huge red creature was breathing, sparks were flying between the scales, and an unknown song was playing. The bright golden eyes pulled out brilliant light. He was moving very fast. He put a hand on his forehead and fainted. The sword cut him off, and more moon hands held him up. Another bright moon wanted to suppress him, but the scorching arrows knocked him down. As soon as the moon turned, it swallowed him up. It was the shadow of the moon, but the dusk was about to rise and burn out. At this moment, a hazy The figure held him in his arms, their eyes facing each other. Li Xi'an only saw the gentleness of the moonlight in his eyes, and under the moon, the moon-white trees were covered with frost flowers. They moved with the wind and made a rustling sound. They were not like laurels or Changming. They were his trees. His figure dissipated and turned into a pearl, chasing him again, as if dancing together. At the end, with a sigh, the pearl penetrated into his left eye like a kiss. Li Xi'an opened his eyes and returned to the mirror again. Everything before was like a dream in another life. There was no change in himself in the mirror, but his eyes were full of complexity. After closing his eyes for a long time, Li Xi'an let out a long sigh. The Time Method, that is the method He uses, although it is incomplete, the quality is terrifyingly high, not even inferior to the Time Method, it is enough to be used to cast the next Dharma, and the Time Method and the Time Method are incomparably consistent, as one. And... Li Xi'an opened his eyes again. In the mirror, his left eye reflected a bright moon. The twelve moon phases flashed behind him, evolving into the lunar shadow, interweaving the moon's shadow. The pure moonlight turned into a robe to wrap him, obeying his will. Then it turned into a moon-white river, as thin as a ribbon, flowing slowly under his feet. With a thought, it disappeared again. The pure mirror surface was dyed black, and the surrounding scenery seemed familiar. It flipped over. When Li Xi'an came back to his senses, he had returned from the hidden place, covered with black gauze, and the stars began his journey again.

It's quite a bit of a high start and a low start 😰, and the first few chapters are really amazing. It can be seen that the author's writing is very good, but the plot is not to my liking. I couldn't stand it after about 20 chapters. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to the next book 😚 Come on!

It's a fairy grass. It can only be said that there is no harm without comparison. What are the things written in the top few of the monthly vote list?

I felt good after reading the first 10 chapters. The author's writing skills are very good and the details are well described. There is no unnecessary nonsense and it is very satisfying. It is expected to become a masterpiece. But there are also shortcomings. The previous pace is too fast. There can be more content in the mountains. In addition to the content of human society, these two chapters will go from the rise to the human attack on the mountains. It can be slowly written into a masterpiece! If the pace is too fast, it will feel like a flow of literature. I hope it won't collapse too much in the back

Subjective evaluation (don't like light teasing) Writing style: above average (but a bit weird) Plot: High emotional intelligence: full of sense of the times and full of historical charm. Low emotional intelligence: When you look at the front, you know what's behind you, and you can't stand it at all. . . Setting: Same as above (this one is also quite weird) Personally, I feel that the author's views are not correct, emmm, that's all (medium to low toxicity)

Why have you been so stunned these days?

Author, I think you are also capable

This is the most fairy-like cultivation novel I have read in the past few years.

Great. Haven't found such a good one in a long time.

So what about today's update? ? ? Burnt green...

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This book looks grand but actually has no substance. It just replaces the words and sentences with mysterious ones. For example, killing other people is deliberately said to be reincarnation. Someone whispers and a hoarse voice comes from the darkness. Those who like Chen Dong's style of floating on the surface are food. Those who want to see the essence are poison.

It took me a few days to slowly read the previous ones, please allow me to elaborate here. I rarely read online articles, and I don't have the habit of looking for books when I am short of books. However, one day I suddenly came across it when I was searching about "elves" and "dragons". The book is very good-looking. It may have been carefully prepared by collecting a lot of information, but I can still feel the calmness and foundation represented by the words, rather than showing off like dropping a book bag. I know Taihang Baxing, but I can't name them accurately. I have heard of the five schools of horse immortals in the Northeast, but it is difficult to name them. In short, although I may claim to love literature and love to write poetry in my spare time, if I were asked to write such a majestic work, I would have to abdicate in favor of others. I feel ashamed that it can be summed up in two words: good book. If that's all I don't need to say more, because if you eat an egg and find it delicious, why bother getting to know the hen that laid the egg? But the author, salute, revealed information after a few words in this chapter that made my heart swell. Although I don't know his gender, height, or person, the same experiments, internship diaries, internship reports, course designs, and final exams that bother me also bother and involve another person at an unknown distance apart. This is the pain of science and engineering. We even still play with our phones in the car, even though we know we will feel dizzy (laughs). Suddenly I realized, isn't this also a way of making friends through literature? Isn't this also the process of a young man with both arts and sciences seeking resonance from the outside world (laughing)? All of a sudden, the five emotions were mixed. I was happy that people of the same sex attract each other, and they were reunited by fate. I was sad that I was looking at flowers in the fog, not knowing what was going on. Today is the hottest day of the year, so I am eloquent and hesitant because of my interest. Please forgive me because I have no extra income due to the summer vacation, so I am cash-strapped and cannot spend money like a rich man. Because I just downloaded Qidian, I don't even know much about monthly passes. Please take it easy, don't be impatient and relax, and when the autumn air is crisp, you dare to laugh at Huang Chao's lack of husband (laughing).

It was a bit fun at the beginning, but became more and more boring as it went on. Don't know why. What the hell is it that makes you feel more and more bored the more you watch?

If the protagonist never speaks or changes shape, this book should be able to become a god. As a result, I started to go high and low, and after I transformed, I started writing routine articles using clumsy, pretentious sentences. It was a pity.

I just saw the protagonist going to the temple and stopped watching it. The beginning gave me a good feeling. The writing and content were very good. I felt like watching Babel Bamboo But as a visitor in the city, it felt very abrupt to me. You suddenly gave me a lot of new things, which was obviously open. The first words are about the mountains and forests, the unique and spiritual creatures in the mountains, and what they said that they have lived for hundreds of years and have never seen the same ones. You can explain it slowly. It will be very interesting to write slowly. But suddenly, the city, the emotionless girl, and the extraordinary creatures suddenly appeared. Very quickly. The war started in one click, and the fight was over in another click. The protagonist has transformed. I want to give it to you with one click. Why write it so quickly? And that thing similar to nuclear weapons. You have developed into modern times, can't you use nuclear weapons to kill him? You have to use that ancient thing that can't kill people. Yes, OK, I know you want to transform the protagonist, but what the hell is that Changbai Mountain Spirit? Why do you hug the protagonist? I hug you, you are just using a bunch of gorgeous words to write about a high-speed flying sheep shit egg. I thought it was chocolate and I just wanted to eat it. But after seeing clearly, it is shit.

To be honest, this book If the full score is 100 points, the author's writing style is 98, and the update speed is 75, but the plot, -80 points, is also outrageous. The writing style of the master and the poisonous plot. If the plot can be less poisonous, the author has hope. I think the author of this book is actually not suitable for writing this kind of text. Really, he can actually write fan fiction with a plot, daily fiction without a main line, and historical fiction. I think he can succeed in writing these with his writing style, but it would be difficult for the author to create his own plot and complete system.

I'm really sorry for such a good start and results. . Drive high and go low, the descriptions and results of the first book are very good, and the competition in the alien beast flow track is very small, it is already a niche, but the author wrote it like this, making the children invincible

It's a pity that the opening chapter was amazing, but it faltered after the transformation. The writing is indeed good, but the story is really not well written.