Mountain Rain Jiao

Reading progress: Chapter 65 True alien beast style, non-travelers + no plug-ins, no adventures and no skills, a very pure article on the cultivation of immortal beasts, which fully describes the loneliness of cultivation and the melancholy of the changing world, My Immortal Grass Advantages: 1. The protagonist is a simple beast, not even as smart as the fox clan Huang Pizi, but he is worse than his simple mind, able to withstand the loneliness of practice, and practices in the traditional way of breathing in the spiritual energy of the world, bathing in spiritual rain, thunder and calamity 2. The writing is good, the characters are well described, and the interactive plot with the friends is very vivid 3. 3., What's more valuable is that the friends disperse when they need to, which further highlights the isolation and loneliness of the spiritual path, and does not fall into the cliché of staying together for eternity and happily cultivating immortals Disadvantages: 1. The author took great pains to make the protagonist not cannibalistic. It even seemed a little deliberate in the early stage, but as the plot progresses, a reasonable reason is added (after adding it, I even feel that the shortcomings have turned into advantages) 2. The pace is super slow. In Chapter 65, after more than 200 years of practice, I can only transform into a ghostly spirit, and I can't even understand what people say 3. Seedlings, book chasing crematorium, coupled with a super slow pace, you can expect that the experience of chasing books will not be too pleasant Conclusion: The review of fairy grass is mixed with my personal hobbies. If you don't like slow pace, don't like torture, and just want to watch cheating and killing, it may not be suitable On the other hand, if you can accept the slow pace and like the melancholy of traditional cultivation of immortality, it is highly recommended.

The writing style is very comfortable and the slow pace makes it very peaceful to read.

More and more! ! !

The unique slow-paced writing and delicate presentation create a good chemical reaction with the low-magic realistic environment; there is no particularly fast level upgrade, and the four little ones are currently just getting started with Qi training. Chi Ke seems to be old, and I don't know when he will leave the team, or he will continue to have a role; this style of writing feels more realistic, and the feeling of making progress step by step with limited resources is really difficult to find. Competing products of the same kind I have read a book about zombies, but that one has almost no ingenious plot design, and it is all a cycle of routines. When you encounter a boss, it is very boring - throw it away as soon as the plot is over, and use explosive equipment to boost your strength - practice to gain points. Daily life - when the plot progresses and you encounter a higher-level boss - the same routine loops (in online novels, this is just a comment, and it can even be read in some fantasy novels, but it seems particularly bad in this type of novel, so I won't mention the title of the book here). I hope the author won't make this mistake At present, there are more than 30 chapters and I still can't see the reason. I hope the author has an outline. The plot still needs to be polished and it depends on the follow-up development. ------ I feel like something is wrong, the plot is very confusing...

Have you ever been a snake? Just write it as a matter of course! ! !

🙂 Gives people a feeling of peace, a good book

In the early stages, it really felt like a plot, but later on it returned to the author's comfort zone. . .

Hey, I've opened a new book. By the way, I have been chasing your last book, White Snake, for several years. Goodfellas, it's finally over. But I have to take it slow and then go back and do it again. It's been too long and I can't remember many things. By the way, your new book should not contain a little female snake, hehehehehe

The writing is very good, and it looks like I have been a dragon. It is very real, and it is completely consistent with my experience. My memory was a little weak at the time, but now I can remember it all.

The core contradiction is that after leaving the bottom, the ecology of monsters has no reference and is purely imaginary. The author has no comparison and can only refer to real interpersonal relationships to write about the ecology of monsters. The monsters are becoming more and more human-like, and their attractiveness is greatly reduced. In the end, they can only create racial conflicts and dominate the world. To put it bluntly, the ending is hasty The essence of the alien beast style is all about the struggle to evolve in the early and mid-term Of course, there are also weird things like the interface, which is indeed a beast. The problem is that once the logic of the beast is established, the plot will continue to repeat the process of fighting for territory and training. After watching it twice, I will get tired of it, and the plot is too small. It's easy to fly to the sky with speed, don't even think about depth, it's destined not to leave too many people So Alien Beasts is a thankless genre. The balance between human nature and animality is too difficult to grasp. More is too sensible, less is too barbaric. The advantage is that there is a fixed audience. This group of aliens Dragons are the most popular readers among beast readers. However, the eunuch rate of dragon novels is probably among the best among all genres. This is only possible with the help of decades of rich data like DND. It is conceivable how difficult it is to write about strange beasts. Once you have written it, the results will be stuck in ten thousand books, which is sad.

Hold on, the cultivation of immortality from beasts to monsters in the classical cultivation of immortals and beasts is a major attraction. Although the ink is stained, it is also real. It is a very enjoyable process to create something from scratch, so the ink is not real ink, but there are too few updates. Hehe, you know 🤓

I don't know why book friends are so obsessed with the name "Golden Four". Black Snake, as a heterogeneous adult spirit, has a slow growth in intelligence (reflected in the original text that it cannot remember people and things). Gold is born with water, and the five elements are good. "Four" refers to Chi Ke, Fox, Weasel, and Black Snake. The experience of living and practicing together with the four friends is the most important memory of the protagonist at the beginning of his practice, and it is the imprint of Black Snake's life. The name Jinsi is completely based on Black Snake's own experience. It is a self-evidence of the continuous growth of life. If a person shows things that are not composed of his own cognitive experience, it will inevitably be somewhat distorted. In human society, names are given by elders. The protagonist does not have this interpersonal relationship. At this stage, a name based on his own experience is actually the best.

Is the author part-time or busy? Are you serious about the update speed? Even if I recommend your book to people, people will run away as soon as they read a chapter of your book in two days The writing is slightly poisonous, slow-paced, less exciting, and the story refers too much to reality. The atmosphere of Chi Ke's story is the best, one person and three demons are carefree and free, without any worries. At this time, it is a pure animal snake, corresponding to the snake's infancy The Palace Master and He Ning provided almost selfless care and guidance for the semester. Snake has learned a lot. As long as he follows the teacher's instructions, he will get positive feedback. However, the physical experience is worse than the previous stage. The author is too watery. There are good daily routines but few, and there are more meaningless daily routines that are boring to the point of dozing off. At this time, Snake is like a newly enlightened child, corresponding to Snake's semester   Spoiler Warning Spoilers below The story enters the next stage after He Ning's death. The palace master also left. Snake's role as leader and master has left. Snake begins to face the world of immortality alone. However, Snake is already very strong in the village at this time and no one can bully him. Snake can slowly learn to see. It is not yet sure what stage this corresponds to. There is not much change from the previous stage except that he is a little more lonely The summary is that alien beasts provide food and grass, write about beasts and enjoy themselves leisurely, write about beasts and learn from people to stretch their crotch. Of course, this is not entirely the author's fault. It is too difficult to write about a peaceful and comfortable life, and the destiny of the tallest mountain is also difficult to guarantee. Finally, your update is really profitable

Friendly reminder: In the last book, the author's age increased from 18 to 25, with an average of 59,000 words per year But this one is destined to be more difficult to produce.

Just like the title, this book actually has a big problem. Think about it, it's 180,000 words long. Apart from Chi Ke, which character in this book left a deep impression on people? Including He Ning, who is now with the protagonist, they don't have any characteristics. They are not as impressive as the few characters. I was quite surprised when I first read this book. However, the more I read, the more bland it became. The snake demon who practices thunder is obviously a gimmick, but now, it seems that this gimmick has not been used.

When I saw Chapter 185, I didn't want to read it. The beginning was very interesting. The protagonist is a very pure seeker. He is not too righteous but definitely not evil. But by chapter 185, it was boring. The protagonist became more and more human-like. I could have guessed the plots of those chapters. It was too cliché, and the protagonist's reaction was too cliché. He looked like a stupid person who has not grown up, rather than like a demon who has lived for 500 years. He suddenly took some indifferent things too seriously. Alas, it's a pity that after chapter 180, this novel still became cliche.

Why are there so many words at the beginning? Are you here to read the modifiers? If you have something to do, talk about it quickly. If there is a plot, hurry up. There are so many words at the beginning. It's so boring.

Pure, too pure, 99% rare. Pure animal writing without any human elements. The author has been a snake and smells like a snake.

If you want to do it, you can do it. If you don't want to do it, you can write a note asking for leave. If you don't want to do it, don't write a leave note. Here are a few meanings.

I don't want to give you a monthly ticket. Jinsi's name is not nice, so I'd better call myself Big Black Snake. If I don't change my name, I'll show it as little as possible. I can say it in written form. I usually don't write these two characters. It's very funny. I didn't have a name for more than 400,000 words. I'm used to being called Big Black Snake. I also like this little freckled face, so I suddenly named him Jinsi. It's not fun.

So far, it's been pretty good. Whether it's the process of the protagonist slowly developing spiritual intelligence as an ordinary creature, or the peaceful years when the protagonist coexists with other demons and humans, it's rare in other books. Although it's relatively mediocre at the moment, probably because the protagonist's opportunity hasn't come yet, it looks like it has potential. However, there are several issues that I am worried about. First, the relationship between the protagonist and people is still unclear. There have been many situations where the protagonist planned to eat people, but the author forcibly stopped it for the sake of the plot. In fact, I can accept the protagonist even if he eats people. Since they are not the same kind, there is no reason why he is allowed to kill but not eat. Or the author can find a suitable reason for not allowing cannibalism, but don't always create coincidences like this, it's too far-fetched, and this is not a nonsensical comedy novel. Fortunately, this should only be a short-term problem, and the protagonist should be able to determine the code of conduct once his intelligence is enlightened. Another problem is the background of the world. At present, it seems that the monks outside the mountain recognize the demon monks. I hope that the overall world view can maintain such an overall harmonious and balanced environment. No matter what, the protagonist must also clarify his own position. Don't give the protagonist a hard time like the previous book. In a world where monsters are not tolerated, the protagonist is forced to do things for others every day, and then often endures backstabbing and scheming from humans. After finally improving his cultivation, he transformed into a dragon and ascended to the fairy world, and then he had to work as a palace maid and maidservant. When he found out that all the dragons were dead. Then I didn't know what happened later. I was already poisoned to death. In fact, I still like the author's writing style, so I hope the setting of this book can be more relaxed and easier to read.

It's not a problem to have fewer updates and a slow pace, but to cut off updates every three days without any notice? I posted a post earlier. You can write whatever you want, at your own pace, but every time I update, there is no news at all. Maybe I am getting tired of it? Are you treating readers who are still following you like monkeys? Ox! No more service, remove the bookshelf! Not see!

It seemed okay at first, but the more I read later, the less interesting it became. The author of "Golden Four" must have felt that the name he chose had a profound meaning 😄

The soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles.... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Climbing over the mountains and singing... Returning... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe with all our glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥 𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back.... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

Because the author updates too slowly, everyone has the illusion that this is a slow-paced novel about mountain and wild animals. But in fact, the protagonist accidentally became enlightened from a wild poisonous snake one day (unwisely), and after almost the entire process of self-study (the brain was too smooth and no one taught him to understand), he turned into a dragon in one hundred chapters and two hundred chapters. Every enemy you encounter during the whole process will either be run over or run over by your friends. If you don't run, you will be run over so slowly that you will run away from the speed bump. This is not a cool article, what is a cool article! So the slow-burning label of this book actually refers to the author who cannot update it even once a day!

They are all useless modifiers. Looks disgusting

Let me put it bluntly, author, your writing is indeed good, but what do you mean by your update attitude? If you really don't want to write, don't write. There are no updates every two days. What are those readers who wait for updates every day? Are you clowns? Just wait for yourself if you can. This is really the first time I have read so many books 😥😥😥

I think of many novels in which monsters kill monsters and monks come to practice to harm the world and end their own future, while human monks kill monsters. It is to take the essence of heaven and earth, and there are even a lot of them that clearly require essence, blood, bones, skin, etc. No matter how much you use, it will only be beneficial to your cultivation.

Oops, author, you started another one before you even finished writing the book. Isn't it, preparing this book requires eunuchs.

I'm back again! ! ! (Hands on hips, head thrown back and laughing) Ha~ha~