Across the Heavens, Starting at Pingshan

Personally, I think this is the best version of Mogai. It is both unconventional and fluent. I don't know what those trolls think. It's not Mogai. They say it's a copy of the original text. It's Mogai. It's also said that it's been Mogai. How about you set a standard and which line is passed?

This book is a good source of information both in terms of subject matter and writing style. It is worth reading. It is much better than the various tomb robberies on the streets and the scripts copied by Uncle Jiu. Those scripted protagonists have no sense of existence. Reading those things is better than reading the original work. It is really ridiculous. This book has been voted for recommendation and monthly votes , Rewarded, please add more updates from the author. Don't be afraid of not having money to subscribe, but I still have some suggestions. In fact, it is best to take the plot characters through various worlds. For example, why can't the clone follow along? This makes me very confused. Then there is no need to write about reality. I already know that there are time-travelers. In fact, you can immigrate abroad and develop.

I don't understand why there is a female protagonist. I just want to complain that if you create a female protagonist for all the gods, you will not have the desire to be watched.

The first volume of "Ghost Blowing the Lantern" ends and returns to the real world. The national team comes to the door and says that everyone can travel through the recovery of spiritual energy. Countless people can go to the same world, but this setting was abandoned in an instant. Too poisonous.

A mortal man pointed at the daughter of the most powerful man in the ghost world and yelled that she was awesome. Author, what are you doing? You are crazy

If you want to write about tomb robbing, at least you can't change the character of the original character. Chen Yulou opened a granary to help refugees, and even sacrificed himself to save people in Pingshan. You wrote that he was a sinister villain. How have you changed most people's personalities? The most important thing in a novel is the character creation of the protagonist and supporting characters, followed by the plot. In terms of the plot, robbing tombs that you have changed is not like robbing tombs, and cultivating immortals is not like cultivating immortals!

In my personal opinion, the fandom is not just making it up. A world of tomb robbers has been transformed into a world of cultivating immortals and cultivating Taoism. A large number of secondary settings have been added, such as disciple selection competitions, various cultivation spells and talismans. The more you look at them, the more interesting they become. A Xie Ling who digs and robs tombs is vividly written into a monastic sect, and various intrigues are added.

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The studies are too complex, there are too many women, and the personality is soft-tempered

There are no major poisonous points, but there are constant minor poisonous points. The writing is on the low side, and it can be watched. However, the protagonist is a very selfish villain who feels good about himself. It is really hard to like. The protagonist is not required to do good deeds. At least he must have a clear distinction between grudges and grudges!       ，，，，！