Sword Sentient Beings

Some people say that the beginning is not good, but I think it is very good. Nowadays, there are few books that can resonate with people from the beginning, and the writing style of this book is also very good. Those high-quality books these days are really hard to read because of the vernacular at the beginning. For an old bookworm like me, at least nine out of ten books would be better than them. If you can read it, you can't read it with your brain. You have to read ten lines at a time. If you read a little slower, you will feel that the logic is incomprehensible. A book is a world. If there is a problem at the bottom of this world, the whole book will collapse. Remembering my previous readings of Jin Yong and Gu Long, I could savor every line carefully. Nowadays, there are many books, but the writing style is not even one-tenth of theirs.

It turns out it's not that I don't like watching Xiu Xian anymore, it's just that they didn't write it well enough. It's just that I discovered it too early. If only I had a million dollars to come back! !

The writing is really very good, Li Ren's writing style is still so good, and the smoothness of reading is perfect. Actually, I thought the beginning of the article was very exciting, but I stopped reading when I got to the middle. It has nothing to do with the writing and plot. In my humble opinion, there is a little problem with the character creation of the protagonist. Tang Zhaotai... Got it right. Yes, he is so smooth. He always implements his youthful sense of justice and is always desperate to save others. Moreover, he is always successful and improves himself almost perfectly. I still feel like a little nerd. This gave me a serious sense of disconnection. The core purpose of a novel is to create a scene for readers, to make us empathize, and ultimately to laugh and cry because of the people in the story. I began to feel that Tang Zhao was not real at all. He had never lost anything, he had never experienced "painful growth", and he still seemed like a childish teenager, unlike the adult I imagined who still loved the world despite all the pain. In fact, the supporting characters in "Sword of All Beings" are really wonderful. I feel that they are more flesh and blood than the protagonist Tang Zhao. I long to see Tang Zhao in adversity. He faces the event of "irreversible loss". None of his relatives and friends can help him. He once hated it, but in the end he chose to love. In this way, the character is not fully fleshed out all of a sudden, and the first half of the book makes me feel that the protagonist is very "thin". I think this is something that can be modified. I like Li Ren's "Up to the Rooftop" very much. Although I regret that the ending is hasty, I still think the writing is super good, the protagonist, supporting roles, and plot are wonderful. I can remember the part of Jiuyan Mountain that picks up Jiuge with a sword for a long time. To show my heart to Li Ren and readers, I hope it will get better and better!

After reading ten chapters, I was immediately hooked. In the comment section, there are always suggestions on how the author can write to cater to the readers. They teach the author how to write a novel that was written ten years ago. Which one is popular now and doesn't have its own unique style? You can write a cookie-cutter article yourself and see if you can get away with it. I can write the eight-legged essay pattern. If you are not a well-known author, you can see if you will be overwhelmed by that kind of article. If you really want to be an online writer, you will know if you write it yourself. Moreover, one can make money, but not one can make money. In short, authors who have at least a fixed group of people are out of the water. I think it's to my liking for old bookworms. After reading too many vernacular stories, it's refreshing and boring. You can read the author's book, and you'll get better and better. It's very interesting. Of course, I've only read ten chapters. You can try it out to see if it suits your taste. If it doesn't, you can also add it to your collection. Some books can't be put down this time, but after a while, when you change your mood, it smells really good when you pick it up. It's worth recommending!

A good novel, but it's a pity that it's not very popular.

The writing is quite good, especially some settings, which split the spirit into will and emotions. These settings are very interesting. The main reason is that the rule-based abilities are given too early, which makes the combat very awkward and cannot write some ideas such as abilities to restrain and offset each other. In fact, this book is a bit like True Heart, but the combat aspect is too different. I hope the author will not give up because he thinks his conception and description of combat are not good. If this area is strengthened, the future will be promising.

This book has its advantages, but its shortcomings are too great. Regardless of the slow update, there is no protagonist in the last few chapters, it is all other people, and there are no fragments to describe it. There is no enthusiasm for reading it. I have read more than 300 chapters in a row. I really don't dare to think about it if I start to follow it. .

I accidentally opened the starting point and found out that Li Ren has published a new book. Going to the Rooftop is my favorite novel. I must support it 😁

Personally, I feel that the biggest problem is the mismatch between the introduction and the content. It doesn't mean that you can't write this kind of slow-burning book, but you have to show it in the introduction. Nine out of ten people who read your introduction thought that the book should be labeled "easy, pseudo-invincible". As a result, in the first few chapters, the protagonist gave the impression that he was crying, tough-talking, and cowardly. People who come to your introduction will definitely not like your plot. People who like your plot may have been dissuaded by your introduction.

It's the guardian envoy with the fire-like cape❤️

There are many settings in this book, and the introduction is relatively fragmented. Basically, I only talk about it after the plot. I briefly summarize some of the settings mentioned so far. Please correct me if there are any mistakes 1. Warrior Warrior → Warrior (can be named a righteous man) → Knight (can be named a hero) Above the knight, a sect is established and called a grandmaster; practice Xuan Gong, refine Gang Qi, and complete martial arts Fully called Sanren 2. Swordsman Light swordsman, heavy swordsman: use magic weapon, no sword Sword user: use power sword, combat effectiveness should be linked to the realm of the sword itself Swordsman: there is a sword, but the sword heart is not enlightened Swordsman: art realm, only swordsmanship Swordsman: law realm, with swordsmanship and swordsmanship Sword fairy: power realm, sword power, swordsmanship, and swordsmanship. Have supernatural powers? Sword Master: The latest level that appears, seems to be particularly awesome (? 3. Sword Master Talisman Sword Master: Makes arrays, magic weapons, magic weapons, spiritual treasures Sword Forger: Makes swords into swords Currently, the rising target of Talisman Sword Master is only Sword Forger, but there should be more than that, which may be related to the historical background 4. Magic weapon Two classifications a. According to the content: light magic weapon (only magic, not increasing strength), heavy magic weapon (only strengthening strength, not including magic), true magic weapon (with magic, increasing strength) b. According to the formation method: yuan magic weapon (formed by a swordsman splitting with a sword), fu magic weapon (made by a fu sword master) These two classification methods should be able to Extended to Magical Weapons 5. Demonic Cave Wind-type Demonic Cave - Phantom Fire-type Demonic Cave - Metamorphosis Earth-type Demonic Cave - Creation Empty-type Demonic Cave - Space Dislocation From the example given by Mr. The result The Demon, the Demon Cave, and the Phantom: If the Demon comes, there must be the Demon Cave. The Phantom is the servant of the Demon, but it seems that there may not necessarily be the Demon in the Demon Cave? (Empty type) 6. Jianzhi It is only mentioned once by Zeng Liang.

After reading the comments, many new readers said that it was confusing at the beginning and could not understand. Regarding this issue, we cannot just read a few chapters and make subjective assumptions. Li Ren writes relatively slowly, and everyone gets into a good mood after about twenty chapters. At present, the pace of online writing is fast food. Maybe many book friends only read the so-called "three golden chapters", and some book friends even leave after reading only one chapter. There is no way, after all, we don't have that much energy to sift through so many books to find the ones that suit our tastes. Therefore, books with novel themes and eye-catching beginnings tend to do well at first. However, many of these books start high and then go low, and even books are cut off halfway. Sorry, I wrote so many words just because I wanted to say it. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. Everyone knows that Li Ren is an old author who only came back to write a book this year. Don't worry about the plot and writing, it's just that the writing is slow. Those of you who haven't read it yet can be patient and get better at the end, and the aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley. ps: You can go to the profile and join the group to play, write refills for the characters every day, contribute important events, or post articles. Thank you all for your love for the book Jian Zhongsheng and for your support of Li Ren. Acknowledgments🌹🌹

Painted by Tang Zhao (extremely high water content)

It's okay, but there are some plots that need to be put aside 🙂, such as the protagonist's sword intention, light. He can move at the speed of light, and the author emphasizes this repeatedly. I don't understand this. Sword Immortal will not talk about moving at the speed of light, just in case someone prohibits movement. Is there any swordsman who can beat you? Moreover, if you kill people at the speed of light, someone can actually see you move your hands. You are too skillful. I won't say which is faster, death or the speed of light. Why can't death kill celestial bodies? Your celestial body will not die? The speed of light is 300,000 kilometers per second. The earth's equator circumference is only 40,000 kilometers, which means you can circle the earth more than seven times in one second. You can kill the turtle's Yaxian stand-in in just one second. Your world is seven times the circumference of the earth? You can write as if it were light, but the speed of light in the photo is so powerful 🙂 and then there is something else that disappears, blood relationship, these concepts are outrageous. The swordsman disappeared, and the swordsman only had a vague impression. And when you do it, the opponent can't sense it. I also want to know who can stop him from killing someone? I can only say that some concepts are outrageous. It has nothing to do with your own strength, it all depends on which awesome skill the sword has.

Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this article after the tie-up (only my personal opinion). Let's talk about the advantages first The biggest advantage of this article is that the characters are very good. The author's character creation is very easy. He can portray a vivid, full and lovable character in just a few words. Some people say that the pace of this work is too slow and it is easy to abandon the article at the beginning. To be honest, I When I read the first few chapters, I felt that I almost gave up on it, but when I saw that Zhao Zhao was willing to stand up for others even though he was afraid, I fell in love with this innocent and cute little boy who is brave and ideal, and was willing to continue reading. (Except for the recent emperor, I really want to vomit when I look at it. I can just mention the character I hate the most in the whole article.) I also like the rhythm of upgrading in this article. It is like eating and drinking. It is not too vigorous, but over time, it will naturally reach the level it should be, and the strength is always sufficient. It is a very relaxed and healthy upgrade route. There are also some authors who show off their sage in front of others. They always have to pretend to be cool. Some pretend to be too stiff and deliberate, and some want to pretend lightly. In fact, the traces are very serious. However, the protagonist of this article always pretends to be cool, and he pretends to be natural. No matter whether he is pretending to be big or small, there is no need to feel the embarrassment of using too much force. Finally, the CP is really awesome. When I first watched it, I just wanted to arrange and combine everyone to have an amazing party! The next is the shortcomings The first one is too lazy to write for details. Please refer to the article on December 29, 23, which said that certain plots should be thrown out of the mind. Then there are inevitably some obvious bugs in the plot + holes left unfilled, and the exit of many characters is too anticlimactic. For example, the secret realm where the swordsman guards the gate mentioned earlier, and the sneaky brother of Xiaoguang King, have not been mentioned. The latter I just assume that he gave up his revenge plan when he saw that Zhao Zhao was too strong. There were also some characters that I liked very much and were on the character card. I thought they would have a lot of roles, but I didn't expect that everyone would only have a little bit. Only Mr. Xing, Senior Brother, and Dangerous Sex had more roles. Shoujing Highlights went offline for 200 chapters and then came online again and finally found out that this person was not found. Senior Sister Zhu Ying's scenes only lasted for hundreds of chapters. This article is really not suitable for further reading. The author likes to describe a lot of things and then the two sides start bickering. Sometimes when you enter a chapter with full expectations, you will find that the dialogue from beginning to end has a helpless feeling that the whole chapter is watered down. Also, it took hundreds of chapters for this work to be titled "Sword Beings", and it seemed to be finished in a hurry. I hope this is just my fantasy, and the author will slap me in the face with another two million words. The last thing I want to talk about is that it is neither an advantage nor a disadvantage. It is that the description is too detailed, which is good in the first place, but sometimes it is not detailed enough and it gives people the impression that the author is scheming and is trying to limit the number of words. It's rare to have a long review. I hope this work will be completed smoothly and the author will get better and better.

Happy Winter Solstice! Have you ever had the urge to eat a bowl of glutinous rice balls after reading Jiji Zhaozhao's Tangyuan greeting picture~

Dear readers, we are now collecting interesting sword settings. If you are willing to set up a swordsman, you are also welcome. Li Ren will occasionally choose some as supporting roles or even supporting roles (well, it is actually crowdfunding). The sword settings are as follows: Sword: Yanggu Swordsman: Minghao (Sword Immortal) Swordsmanship: Sword Intent: Purple Qi comes from the east, revives, shines Supernatural power: Ten Days Lingtian >Sword Elephant: The Rising Sun (Becomes a Power) Sword Heart: Heart and Sword Unity , Xiaguang Ruicai Swordsmanship: Golden Silk Sword, Crying, Dancing, Thousands of Golden Lanterns, Raising the Clouds, Seeing Good Luck... Send the score: Yanggu, also known as Tanggu We are all smart readers of Qidian, so we must all understand it. Let me just say a few points: Sword meaning is a concept, and sword image is a specific thing with a specific image. It can be real or legendary, but it must be something that the ancients could imagine. Sword power is higher than swordsmanship and is higher than swordsmanship. The higher you go, the more powerful you are, and the more obscure your name is. If the swordsman is a swordsman, then there is only swordsmanship and no sword power. If you are a swordsman, there is only swordsmanship Swordsmanship is subordinate to swordsmanship. The best swordsmanship is swordsmanship. The high-end version is best to have a corresponding relationship, but not a one-to-one correspondence. After all, there is less swordsmanship and more swordsmanship. If there is a good sword, Li Ren may have some deletions. Please don't mind. Well, everyone is welcome to brainstorm. Li Ren is waiting to enjoy the results (escape~)

A belated Father's Day greeting picture🙏🏻 With Tang Zhao and Bi Yan by his side, Xing Ji is really a winner in life! I must be so happy to receive Tang Zhao's gift The way Tang Zhao looks at Xing Ji's reaction with anticipation is so cute! (: poke your head into your head) Wow, so warm

Damn it, I was still remembering "Up to the Sky" yesterday.

During the Mid-Autumn Festival, I wish you all a happy reunion and happiness! Let Xing Ji and Tang Zhao reunite in the painting on this good day, woo woo woo.

When I first started reading the book, I thought it was a pity. The pace of a good book is too slow due to too many foreshadowings and is not suitable for online writing. As a result, not many readers paid much attention to it. However, the subject matter, structure of ideas, and writing style are all excellent. But after seeing it later, I can only say, it should be. I forgot which chapter it was, Mrs. Yin said something, and then Tang Zhao translated it in his mind again, analyzing why Mrs. Yin said that, what was the starting point, what would he say when comparing his feelings, what would others think after hearing it, and philosophical principles. . . This is just over a page. Maybe my ideological level is low and I don't see the necessity of this long page. It's not an exception. I can't stand it.

The scene of Xingji's upgrade is really exciting~ The Bifan Brain Ax appears. Different from ordinary tigers, Bifan is huge and its whole body is red (the color of Xingji's iconic red cloak). After looking at its huge claws, I really want to squeeze its flesh pads. I really envy Xingji for being able to rua a big cat. Woohoo, I want to rua too~

It seems too laborious and pretentious. There are dozens of chapters without any progress or system. I won't read it.

Is it good or not? It's not very good to comment on, but the author has a literary background, that's for sure. I stopped reading after reading Chapter 20. The writing is fluent but very obscure. The protagonist has good views but weak abilities, giving people the feeling that he is arrogant but has no abilities to match. It's a bit weak at the back...

Suddenly I understand why good books are not popular these days. The reason why systems, attributes, exchanges, and fandoms are so popular now is because they are "tired". People want to relax. If you can read the book at a glance, you can skip and read it quickly. If you don't want to change another book, there will always be something new in the bottle. The main purpose is to be relaxed and comfortable. This book is a good book, very tastefully written. The speed of reading about 20 chapters is enough for me to read the other 6 or 7 chapters. The plot in the early stage is a bit heavy and heavy, which is more energy-consuming. It can be said that many people have read it in the early stage. People need to taste it carefully. I hope I can be high-spirited later? Sweep the universe

The book is very good. Personally, I think the market for lawful good protagonists may still be too small. My favorite is actually Jiang Ding and Jiang Shengping (I am probably not mistaken about the author's previous vest☺️)

Although it was the Lantern Festival, the sun was already very warm, and I was sweating after standing in the sun for a long time. Xing Ji was wearing a black silk shirt and holding a folding fan, looking at the town ahead with a complicated expression. There lived a child named Tang Zhao. He looked ordinary, but Xing Ji knew that for the next few hundred years, this child would be the absolute ruler of the world. Yes, Xing Ji was reborn. He died miserably in his previous life. After his death, he understood many things. For example, the child Tang Zhao who was brought back by him at will was the protagonist of this world. He had all kinds of tricks and adventures, and in just a dozen years he became a peerless strongman. Xing Ji didn't know this before he was reborn, and he didn't know what he missed. But since God reborn him, he must do something. First of all, start by changing your tragic fate of early death! The first step to change your destiny is to find Tang Zhao. Get close to him when he still doesn't understand anything. It's best to be his master. The master of the protagonist will not die so easily, right? He felt happy and quickened his pace. When he entered the town, he saw an acquaintance. "Xiao Si?" Xing Ji looked at the person in front of him in surprise. The person in front of him was more surprised than him, "Sir?!" Xing Ji looked at Si Yuli and felt that something was wrong all over. Why was he here? He shouldn't be here, he should be in the Prosecution Department at this time. "My lord, why are you here?" Si Yuli said in surprise: "You shouldn't be here..." Suddenly a thunder flashed through their minds at the same time. "Don't you also..." The two looked at each other in shock, and they both saw the exact same emotion in each other's eyes. "My lord, are you reborn too?" Si Yuli felt sad and happy for a moment. "Yes, I thought this was my only gift from God." An embarrassed expression appeared on Xiang Leng's face, "Protagonist, who doesn't want to take advantage of the protagonist's aura?" "That's right." So the two of them went together to find Tang Zhao. As soon as I arrived at the entrance of Tang Zhao's yard, I saw a sneaky figure wandering outside. The man turned around and saw Xing Ji and his two men, and his eyes widened in shock, "You?!" Xing Ji and Si Yuli: "Judge?!" "Fuck... That's not right!" The judge slapped his thigh, "You shouldn't know me at this time, don't you..." "You are reborn too?!" "You are also reborn?!" "..." Silence is in front of the courtyard door today... The three of them are people who have experienced strong winds and waves, what can't they accept? Soon all three of them calmed down. "Hmph!" "Xing Ji called to Si Liyu, "Xiao Si, let's go!" As soon as they turned around and didn't move their legs, the three of them saw a hot woman in a black dress walking towards them with a smile on her hand, holding a teenage boy in her hand. The three were shocked, "Black Widow?!" Black Widow was even more shocked, "You guys?!" Ten-year-old Tang Zhao was holding candied haws in his hand and looked at the four of them with a blank expression.

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