Go to the Rooftop

I couldn't get enough of Sword of All Beings, so I came to find this book by the author. I gave up halfway through reading it because someone in the review said it was a bad ending. In addition, I was still building the foundation in the middle, which made me feel very uneasy. I was afraid that if I continued to watch it, I would get deeper into it and end up with a sloppy ending that would make me sad. I saw someone recommending it some time ago, but I couldn't help but pick it up. As expected, I was deeply attracted by the second half. I watched it all the way to the end. The so-called unfinished ending was not as bad as I expected. Although it was a bit sloppy, at least it explained the direction and the ending that was reasonably resonant. The words and sentences were all processed, unlike the comments I originally saw that were perfunctory. But there are regrets about not being able to witness every bit of the time I spent with you. However, it has been completed for so many years. It is more of a disappointment that the story I like ended and I didn't have the chance to see more of their favorites. When I clicked on the software, I couldn't help but want to watch it a few more times, only to realize that it was over. Thank you to the author for building such a world and such vivid characters. It's really beautiful.

Chai Ping Jian Sheng Sheng felt so uncomfortable that I came here to make up for my wife's previous article. 🥺I ended up liking this one too. I was a little scared when I saw that it was said to be a bad ending, but when I saw the ending, I realized that it was a bad ending, and it was obviously my favorite kind of ending! That is, I know that their story will continue forever (in a place that I can't see), their journey has no end, everyone will never grow old or die, and will always be there. I really love this, it is perfect! For me hhh, the development is really too fast later on, I want to see more... (;´ヮ`) 7 After reading the whole book, I like the puppy the most among the supporting characters, and I was surprised to find that the puppy doesn't like Qin Yue either hhh, hiss, could it be the same reason why I don't like Qin Yue? 🥺To protect Xiao Cheng from the catastrophe, wow, who wouldn't like such a loyal puppy Gou! He can even get married (? Ntm) Wow, it's just that it's too late for the puppy to appear, and there aren't many scenes, but every time he appears! It's like he wants to find Xiao Cheng in front of Qin Yue. Qin Yue is not allowed to say that Xiao Cheng can't do it~ Ah ah ah ah, I'm sorry, oh, oh, this is definitely not my fault, it's the puppy's fault! Who made him even have such a hot name? Ahem... Speaking of which, the master looks at his wife Wen Zhen (´ρ`) so comfortable and happy, and Li Ren's wife really whines like a master heaven, I love it so much! ! I really want to see how many people I have in a lifetime! I also read "Tai Xuan Jing", but unfortunately there is no follow-up, so heartbroken...

Reading this book, it was a rare feeling that I knew the author well. The plot development was novel and not confusing, and some common developments were not so cliche. If I have any regrets, it's that my wife is really dead, and the second part is really different from the first one. I skipped a large part of the plot and went straight to the ending. I hope I can read your next book.

Leave a comment before giving up After reading more than 70 chapters, the author's writing style is okay, but he really can't tell stories. The plot looks like boiled water, and various descriptions of how to be reborn before rebirth appear at least 4 or 5 times in each chapter, which completely ruins the reading experience. I hope it can be improved next time. The author has potential.

It's September 2018. Although the show is unfinished, in my heart it remains brilliant and I will always love Cheng Jun! Whether it's the arrogance of youth before rebirth, or the calmness and strategizing after rebirth, I love them all!

The whole story is full of pretense, either pretending to be a pig or trying to be mysterious, sometimes that thing, sometimes that thing, sometimes that person, sometimes testing this, sometimes testing that, but in any case, it is never explained clearly. It doesn't feel like cultivating immortality, but more like suspense. Because the protagonist's actions don't feel fairy-like. This is also the flaw of countless rebirth stories. The biggest opportunity is rebirth, but instead they risk their lives to fight for something that is not available. Since they have stood on top of the world, they do not practice in seclusion, but wander around and seek death everywhere. Let's just talk about the first few chapters. Someone was pulling him out of the underwater cultivation. If he met someone like me, he would dig it out and throw it into the mountains without any treasure. I'm afraid it would be eaten by wild beasts. Are you talking about an extraordinary world where there are no flesh-eating fish in the water? You're so lucky after traveling so far?

Let's take a look today. I've been waiting for the author's new book, but it seems I can't wait any longer. Has another good author closed the book?

His biological father built the foundation, and the protagonist is from a low-level opera singer's background. He is so powerful and can't let the protagonist wander around the world even if he searches for it a little bit? For the protagonist of this kind of family to recognize them and treat them as their own parents is really quite a saint.

There are so many people holding up such a useless book. It goes round and round without telling where the main plot is, and there are only three or four minor characters surrounded by numbers. The layout is so small that it looks awkward, and it feels like a frog in the well after being reborn.

Don't leave after school, we'll see you on the rooftop! 😏

I really didn't expect that there were novels of this level in 2012. In 2012, all Tai Xiao read was "Fighting Beyond the Sky". Now, I only recommend novels that can make money in recent years. It's hard to find.

The suspense at the beginning is quite stunning, but the writing style is immature and the setting preparation is inherently insufficient. It even deviates from the outline in the middle, giving people a sense of lack of logic and discontinuous writing. I can only say it's a pity

Last year, I posted it on the rooftop four times, and I just thought I'd comment on it this year. I feel that the pace of Li Ren has always been slow-burning (although I have only read two books), the world view does not slowly unfold until the middle stage, and some settings are not systematically explained but interspersed in a few words. It is easy to ignore the past, leading to mixed reviews. However, there is no need to say that it is useless and uses the author's gender to insinuate.

It's boring to read, it's a pity to throw away, and it will just eat ashes on the bookshelf.

Once upon a time one of my favorite books

It's a pity that this book didn't become a god. It's a work of conscience. I have been reading pirated copies of this book for several years, and I have always wanted to support the author. I have subscribed to all of them in a few days, and I am very supportive and will start publishing new books. ——The author of "The Incense of the Ultimate Way Is in the Heavens" wakes up.

It seems that the opportunities the protagonist gets are all due to luck, otherwise he would have died long ago or would have been worse off than dead. Taking the initiative to enter the vortex did not show any effect, it seemed unnecessary, and he did not get any benefits. He almost died several times, and it was inexplicable. The protagonist was very lucky...

I don't know why I want to write a plot about the protagonist's father and younger brother after rebirth. An old monster who has killed countless people and lived for nine hundred years will be affected by a blood relationship that he has never met. It is nonsense. It has given such a large space and does not see any promotion effect on the protagonist's strength. If his actions are controlled by an inexplicable blood relationship, then these nine hundred years of training are like a dog.

I wonder if the author will still write books? Today is November 11, 2019

A reborn old monster who doesn't make detailed plans and always puts himself in front of monks who can easily take his life is indeed the protagonist, but he just can't die. It was originally an obsession that rose to the top, and the main plot should also be to continuously increase strength, but some inexplicable plots were made to enrich the supporting characters, but the protagonist's strength grew slowly, putting the cart before the horse.

Hello author! When will the Taixuan Jing be updated?

Climbing to the Heavenly Platform, the Way of Mending the Heaven, Sword Intent and Mysterious Swordsmanship, Taixuan Jing

There is no sincerity in calculating this or that. He also said that he was reborn, but he didn't expect this, and he didn't expect that. One moment, his identity didn't change, and he made a mistake. Then, he got a brother who looked exactly the same. He was a person in heaven in his previous life. I don't know if he has any relatives alive, but he still looks the same. It was purely for the plot to set up some twists and turns. On the one hand, it was said that this Taoist book was not planned for the sake of this Taoist book, but on the other hand, it was both calculation and acting. It was really enough. Later, Jiuyan Mountain begged you to go, but I was afraid of harming myself. What you said was really right.

The inexplicable plot, the performance that doesn't match the character, the verbose content, and the slightly weird setting.

It's a pity that I can no longer read this kind of novels.

There are too many inexplicable things. After a good part of the plot, a piece of shit appears. Not to mention the mess of branch lines, but there are not many serious main lines to improve strength. The family line is history within history. I have suffered all kinds of hardships in my previous life and have lived for more than 900 years. Now I am in my second life. Sorry. How much love can we have for relatives who have only met each other, and we have not received any favors, but we have to pay back the favors and take care of them to survive a calamity. The story is the same as that of the former lover in the previous life. They have been running around for more than a hundred chapters and they are still in the foundation building stage and have not practiced seriously.

The characters created by the author are actually quite powerful... Jiang Ding, Cheng Jun, Tang Zhao... Although many plots have room for improvement, the aspect of "the protagonist has aura" is actually very "realistic" (I don't mean real)

To do a survey, if I re-write this book, will anyone read it? Watch 111

Is there a second part called Jump off the Building on the Rooftop?

I still remember the fingertip formation technique when I saw it in junior high school, haha