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Essay
The turbid wine supports the words of the book, and I am drunk with sorrow at dawn and dusk. The mortal world pours its own drink, and death and life enter reincarnation. The dim dream under the song, the passers-by's eyebrows. Now that I have the golden black wings, why be afraid of heavy snow flying? ——Memory of "A Song of Remaining Love in the Red Dust" and "Reciting Sutras while Drinking Wine in front of the Grave"
The ears are the best! Cheer up!
There is no doubt that Er Genda is one of the most powerful among the many platinum authors. Over the years, Er Gen has been writing non-stop, and has contributed many well-known works to everyone, such as "The Immortal Rebellion", "Seeking Demons", "I Want to Seal the Heaven", "One Thought of Eternity", "Three Inches of the World", etc. There are troughs and peaks in the middle, but even in the trough period, the performance is not much inferior to that of many peers. These substantial works are the result of more than ten years of continuous creative thinking and long hours of sitting and racking one's brains. I read books with big ears relatively late, and I started reading them around the time of "One Thought of Eternity". I really like the character Bai Xiaochun. I still think that the name Bai Xiaochun is a perfect match for his character. The contrast is so cute and the lively, humorous and funny style has made me laugh countless times. I remember that at that time, my ears were big because something happened at home, which caused me to feel weak in the back half, which was a pity. After that, I was short of books, so I went back to read Ergen Dada's other books, such as "I Want to Seal the Heaven" and "Seeking the Demon". The style is different from "One Thought of Eternity", but many plots are equally exciting. I haven't read the book "Beyond Time" written by Ergen Da, but the comments in the book review area and the enthusiasm of everyone's discussion should be good. I have collected them for a long time and are currently fattening them up. Finally, I hope Ergen will take some time to exercise and stay healthy so that he can continue to contribute more and better books to everyone. I hope we are all healthy and can accompany each other as we go on. I wish "Beyond Time" to achieve greater success! 😁🤭🙏🌹🌹🌹
What I wrote after I exposed Jun Cheng was just a piece of writing. Yun Shen is such a great writer. It's rare to see him. Then several Yun Gods appeared and they all revolved around you, Xu Qing. The Ghost Emperor of Ghost Emperor Mountain turned out to be a Yun Shen, but he could only become your Nascent Soul. Should I say that these Yun Gods, the Crown Prince, are of high quality, or should I say that the Ghost Emperor is of low quality? You Xu Qing are amazing, you are noble, you and the captain climbed to the top of the pillar, and then you gained the authority of the Red Moon. To be honest, the captain is more like the protagonist than you Xu Qing, although if the captain is the protagonist, he becomes like Bai Xiaochun. Also, can you stop the captain from being such a charlatan all the time? Originally, this character was well developed, sometimes funny and sometimes serious and sinister, but now it just feels like a charlatan. I hope to bring it back later. The image that Xu Qing gives me right now is that he always has a cold face without any expression, speaks word by word, pretends to be cool, and then just sits and comprehends, and then he can comprehend anything quickly. In fact, at first I felt that Xu Qing and Su Ming were quite similar, but later I realized something was wrong. Although Su Ming was miserable, he was full of emotions. I could feel his joy, anger, sorrow, and joy from every line of the words. The fact that his big ears shaped Su Ming was particularly good, but Xu Qing is true. Haha. If this continues, after reading this book, he will only be the same as Meng Hao, Bai Xiaochun, and Wang Baole. The only impression left on me is his name, and I can't remember other plot images.
The ears are the best
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Looking back on the first five books, Xiao Qingqing is his biological son, so he has gained so many benefits from building the foundation... He was protected by the Five-Character Nascent Soul before, and now he has protection as well as magical powers... Master clears up the confusion! When Wang Mazi was building the foundation, he worked hard and died once. Although he was in an extreme state, he created it himself! There is no good luck when building the foundation of destiny. Meng Hao was sneaky when building the foundation. It's a trap when you meet the backing ancestor! Although Xiaobai had an uncle, he didn't teach him anything. Fortunately, he had the art of immortality, but it was not passed down by his master. Although he got the blood stream inheritance, it was also part of the art of immortality... Fatty Wang learned how to summon souls, but his cultivation level was too low and he couldn't use the magic weapon at all.
In the past two days, I started to re-watch "Seeking Demons", and I discovered that I personally feel that "Beyond Time" has a lot of shadows of "Seeking Demons", but I just don't understand. I know you want to surpass yourself and change your style. You want to describe big scenes. You have been trying to depict large-scale battles since "Seeking Demons", but don't forget that you made your fortune from personal shaping. We can't abandon the original preciousness while surpassing ourselves. Let's start with the protagonist. Let's look at Xu Qing. He is set to kill decisively and live in the apocalypse. He has some similarities in emotions with Su Ming, but there is a huge difference in the depiction of the two. Let's talk about Su Ming first. Looking back on this period of time, I found that Su Ming's growth was gradual. I could experience the emotional changes and the character's sublimation. Looking back at Xu Qing, maybe the ear root diagram saves trouble. He has an indifferent character from the beginning, which saves a lot of description. We can understand it (but he must not be interested in the character's emotions). He is relatively stable in the early stage, but he is too loose later. They say "Seeking the Demon" is depressing. It is undeniable, but the same character The portrayal is really attractive, and the story of the Ninth Peak in "Seeking Demons" is also a relaxing plot. It makes people comfortable and makes Su Ming feel like home. It makes me feel happy to mention him from the bottom of my heart. Although it is funny, it is moderate. At least it can make me feel depressed all the time. The character has not changed, but has been sublimated. And now Xu Qing, innocent and speechless, the character is ruined, and there are too many funny things. I have said this problem more than once, (although it is very funny), our background is quite depressing, let's talk about the part of devouring the red mother, which is quite depressing in itself. As a result, the whole chapter has been It's funny, how can you integrate emotions, and Xu Qing, it doesn't feel sublimated, but the character is broken. Although this relationship will definitely be used as a contrast and empathy in the future, to be honest, it is really not as good as the plot of "The Demon Seeker" Ninth Peak. It is also relaxing, and Ninth Peak is easier to empathize with. Speaking of which, let's talk about the portrayal of other characters. Here, Qi Ye, the form of the teacher leading the apprentice is really similar to Tian Xie Zi in "Seeking Demons". But in comparison, the difference is too much. The difference lies in the character portrayal. Tian Xie Zi is impressive, but Qi Ye is very empty. The same is the senior brother, Hu Zi, the second senior brother, and the senior brother allows me to feel the sincere master and the friendship between brothers. As for Qi Ye, apart from Er Niu, who is very well portrayed (I personally portray it better than the protagonist), the rest of the second senior sister, third senior brother, and Xu Qing's junior brother are all in vain. They must be useful in the follow-up, but apart from knowing that there is such a person, there is really nothing to portray in this character (perhaps in the follow-up plot, it is really not as good as Ninth Peak). In the original Ergen, there were not many characters, but each one was well drawn and full of flesh and blood. There are too many characters appearing in "Beyond Time" so far, but all of them are too rough. Just the women, there are only a few that can be seen, let alone the other characters, all of them are focused on the big scenes. Let's talk about the plot arrangement. To be honest, what we can see in "Beyond Time" at present is the subsequent plot arrangement, the truth about the residual face, and the complicated divisions and various pitfalls. Everyone knows about the artistic conception plot and the situation of ordinary life. The plot is quite well described. So far, in "Seeking Demons", I am reviewing the plots about the change of heart, the plot of Purple Tianxiezi taking Su Ming to see the damage done, the plots of fortune, creating chaos, flowers, and paintings, and the relaxing plots. They are all really attractive (including "The Immortal Rebellion" turns into a mortal, True or false, reincarnation, etc.), But you have also seen that in current similar plots such as "Beyond Time" and the chapter of the Red Mother, living with people in the ruins, or living with the prince's drug shop, is really not good, the emotions are really ordinary, not real, and cannot be integrated. Go, Ergenna, this was what you were good at before, why are you so useless now? Fortunately, the setting of this story is really complicated. You are not a fool. You can understand it after reading it. It is really readable and interesting. But other than that, the plot description is really awkward. Let's talk about the setting issue again. Let's just say that Xu Qing has an awesome Nascent Soul. All of them are awesome, but there are too many of them. If you put one piece together, it will be like a pile of mud. Let's just talk about a practical issue, how to portray it, how to describe it in the future. The original fighting scenes in "Seeking Demons" are so detailed, and every skill Su Ming has is unique. I have used it to the extreme (of course Ergen was criticized back then because he had too few skills), but now I remember, there are so many skills, but what's the use? From the early stage to the present, the level is too low, no matter how awesome it is, it's useless. In the later stage, anyone can beat everyone, why write so much, besides looking at it, it's of no use. Also, Shadow, and Ancestor, I know they are similar to Demon Xu in Immortal Rebellion and Bald Crane in Seeking Demons, but there is still the same problem. There are too many things depicted, and none of them can be portrayed well. Now they are both as if they are deflated. They cannot be used and cannot be thrown away. It is a pity to throw them away if they are tasteless. Another thing is that the meanings of the characters are different. Su Ming and Wang Lin are for themselves and their families. And Xu Qing is from the human race. I know that a male protagonist with such a heavy responsibility is very good, but the plot of this portrayal is almost meaningless. Well, it is indeed almost meaningless. Of course, it is the first time I write it like this, so I can understand it. <br To be honest, I don't want to say it. You can take a look at my original comments. They were mostly supportive, but now they are getting worse and worse. I'm really scared. This book is unfinished. I support Er Gen because he has written such good books as "The Immortal Rebellion" and "Seeking Demons", and he may also be able to write better books. But currently I don't know why Ergen's writing has declined so much. I really hope that Ergen can wake up. Even if it stops updating for a few months, what will happen? At worst, I will add hundreds of pieces of content to depict the characters, enrich the characters' personalities, throw away the useless characters, and focus on the key points. We are not afraid of being late, but we are afraid that no good works will appear.
Outside time
Ancestor Vajra Beyond Time Ancestor Vajra Sect is also thinking about how to survive... He entrusted me with a dream last night, I was so anxious Treat me, behead him, and be a dog for Brother Xu Qing The King Kong Ancestor has only one way to survive. Become a high-level VIP of Qidian. Only after reading the inventory of Qidian within three days can you find a chance to survive. The King Kong Ancestor is the biggest BOSS ~ Absorb the heterogeneity, use heterogeneity to practice, and directly squeeze out the restricted area Vajra Elder Ancestor said, I have seen this routine, and I knew that this kid was going to take revenge, so I took the entire sect and ran away first Vajra Patriarch transformed into Old Man Tianji and showed Xu Qing the Qidian app [Wangchai] Xu Qing realized that his life had been arranged, and committed suicide after letting out a defiant roar The book ends
The ears are the best
I've read the comics I Want to Seal the Heaven and Xian Ni I've read Xian Ni, Seeking Demons, I Want to Seal the Heaven, I Love Eternity I've almost finished reading Xian Ni, and I really like Ergen's world view, which gives me a feeling of great structure, and there are also some characters in the book Interaction ——Ergen Universe I support Ergen Dada. All I can do now is to subscribe to Time Beyond. Not because of feelings. This book brought me back to the feeling I had when I first read Xianni, and Ergen's writing skills have also improved. Let's briefly talk about the setting of the world view outside of time. It is a huge world. One day, the head of the corpse of the "god" breaks through the sky and appears in the sky. The place where the god opens his eyes and stares will become a restricted area, appearing heterogeneous and weird, giving people a feeling of cultivating immortality in the wasteland. The map is very large, and many Qing is located on Nanhuang Island, the origin of the human race - Wanggu Continent, multiple races, dangerous restricted areas... Xu Qing's character portrayal is also great. He is a "child" created by the environment who seeks to survive in the last days. He has his own set of survival principles - those who threaten his life must be eliminated. Everything is based on survival, living as well as possible, and at the same time, I also want to find my loved ones. Let's talk about a few points that created Xu Qing's environment. Xu Qing was ruthless and decisive in killing. Xu Qing, who was in his early 14th year, first appeared in front of everyone in the slums. The "god" took a look at this city. Xu Qing was very lucky. As the only survivor, he had been living here since 6 years ago. The 8-year-old boy lived alone in the slums, a place where people eat people. His first crisis was when a man wanted to eat him, so Xu Qing killed him, cut off his head and placed it in front of his den. After that, no one dared to have him. Move his mind, this is what Xu Qing learned in the slums - cutting his neck to show that he is strong, and putting his head to warn others. , Learned the knowledge of medicinal herbs from Master Bai, and learned to hold iron sticks naturally from the round-faced base building. The captain taught him to control his emotions, bribe informants... And learn all the methods to strengthen himself and survive. Join the group; Xu Qing, who always keeps his body tense to enter the battle at any time, because the round face makes him look more natural; on the first day after entering the murder department, he patrolled with the captain and saw the captain throwing a spiritual coin to a beggar, Xu Qing also made it... Xu Qing has always been a boy over 15 years old. In many aspects, he will work hard to learn from the people and the environment around him, try to integrate himself into the environment, and gain the right to survive.
The ears are the best
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I have to say that Ergen's writing skills are still improved compared to those of the past. I enjoyed reading the book and was generally satisfied. I will continue to follow it, but many old problems still exist. First of all, in Ergen's book, the protagonist's character seems to be multiple times, but in fact, the spiritual core and essential character are exactly the same: passive, indifferent, vengeful, clear-cut grudges, no sense of humor, and inactive Ergen is not good at describing the protagonist's character with a real and vivid personality. In fact, the essence is that Ergen is not good at giving the protagonist shortcomings and advantages. Secondly, Ergen has been trying to emphasize the difference in stance and whitewash the villain to a certain extent, which even includes the protagonist himself. However, in the real world, there are a large number of pure evils that have little to do with perspective, and even everyone has them. Er Gen has been trying to make the protagonist's grudges clear, but this grudge is sometimes too far-fetched, like Liu Ye. Sometimes this resentment is too cold-blooded, like massacring the enemy's entire family, old, young, women, and children. The biggest improvement Ergen has made this time is the moment when the protagonist makes a decision when facing a big right and wrong, and how to change the status quo step by step when taking action, how to build momentum, and how to turn the tide. It can be said that it is expected and unexpected. But this kind of big deal has too low limitations. The native races under the cruel face of the gods are all oppressed. All intelligent creatures have feelings. If one person gets into trouble, the whole family will be buried with him. What the hell is this? Retribution must be retaliated, and the wrongs must be paid and the debts must be paid, right? In addition, I am also really curious. I keep getting seven or eight girls, always around the protagonist. They are all interesting, but they don't go any further. The protagonist pretends to be stupid and stone-faced. Is this really interesting? Don't the protagonist have the right to love a woman? Can it just be a stone? Is he the reincarnation of Arhat?
I have read all of Ergen's novels, from the beginning of Immortal Rebellion to Time... Which ran through my entire youth, absorbed most of my passion, and satisfied my fantasies and desire for the vast unknown! There are many, many immortality novels on the market now. In fact, I don't like to read them. Other people's immortality novels are either upgrades or cheats. Those with plots have no artistic conception. The interesting ones are either unfinished or I don't like the style... Ergen's novels, among others There are actually routines, but what I love most is the artistic conception of cultivating immortals! That kind of understanding of the Tao. Cultivating immortals actually cultivates the Tao and the true self... I really miss the immortal rebellion back then... At the end of the story, everything is connected... All the seemingly unrelated foreshadowings are scattered in every corner of the book, and finally connected by a sign... I will keep reading. This is obsession. I recently saw the end of Giant, and I was filled with emotion. I hope Er Genda can keep writing and accompany his book friends through the spring and autumn, and the origin and end of each story...
I don't know why. Now, the more I read this book, the more tired I feel. Book friends, what's the reason? I obviously like reading it, but I can't stand it in the last paragraph. It's so strange.
The ears are the best
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Thoughts on the theme beyond time Occasionally I have thoughts, leave a mark to see if you are lucky enough to guess it When immortals go against you, you go against fate; when you seek demons, you seek obsession. Ergen's books always have a theme running through them. This theme is slowly unfolded as the plot unfolds, and sometimes it is even revealed in the later stages. So, what is the purpose of Beyond Time? Beyond time and space, seeing through life and death, and already separated from the material world. I don't think this book will really write about stories outside of time and space. That is beyond the understanding of mortals like us, and it is difficult to grasp. I think the meaning outside of time should be more of a hint of the main theme of the book, emotions? Belief? Ideal?
Phoenix is dead
I have abandoned this book "Er Da" for a long time. I have nothing to complain about, only full of regrets and disappointments. ,+++ Many of them seem outdated now, and even cater to the market. For example, the sense of terror and atmosphere that Erda wants to exaggerate in this book can be said to accurately predict the market. Seeking the devil, the tragic sense of fate, the confrontation of nothingness, the intertwining of truth and falsehood. The current popularity of Daogui can also prove Ergen's keen understanding and judgment of the online novel market, and it can also reflect Ergen's profound quality as a writer. Both of these books can reflect Ergen's lofty ideals, high-spiritedness, plot conception, and writing creation at their peak Fengtian, One Thought, Three Cun, Cool Writing + Joyful Attributes, all achieved dazzling results, and can be said to have reached the pinnacle of their own writing achievements. The above all prove Ergen's strong quality and ability as an online writer. Although it is not conclusive, I want to say that the phoenix who threatened to be unyielding and reborn from the ashes in his three-inch speech has long since sunk into ashes. From his attitude towards readers to his way of writing about time, everything proves that the writer who said, "If you go with the flow, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal." Someone vowed to use up his time to "fly in heaven even if his wings are burned." However, in the end, it is not that the talent has been exhausted, but that someone has lost his original intention in the process of seeking the Tao. This phoenix "fallen in the fire", but can never climb out of the abyss...
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The first thing I knew about Er Gen was probably Xian Ni, "Heaven and earth are the reverse journey of all things; time is the passer-by of hundreds of generations. Life is like a dream, how much joy can there be?" Shocked by heaven and man, it must be juxtaposed with the beacon fire in my heart. Finally, congratulations to Erda {"TopicId":"764217703987806208","TopicName":"New book on the shelves"}, twelve updates, so fierce. "I hope your word count is more than your vote count"🐶
I read the book reviews carefully and found out that there was only one question: Did Ergen offend others? Why are they all talking about "Sky with a Heart"? I'll say this rationally: There's really no need to brag about it or criticize it. Everyone has their own hobbies. If you don't want to read it, you don't have to subscribe.
Unfinished
The roots of my ears are not only red, they are almost burning. I earn more from copyright fees than code words. Writing a book is like begging you. Do you earn enough to send a lawyer's letter? God's umbilical cord, next step God's placenta, and next step God's ears. I'm too lazy to comment on the plot. I just introduced the anime to attract traffic after it was finished. Do you think you wrote it well? I feel free to make money but still want to make a fortune, so I write about it in a high-spirited way, and time is unified. I suggest that I study Buddhism, and the ending is about a new outline. Do you think anyone will read your next book? I rested the longest and wrote the least. Over a dozen chapters were directly upgraded at the speed of light. The question was to open a new map. The emotional description was to recall just meeting each other, and to recall hundreds of years ago, Alzheimer's disease? If you don't want to write, just delete your account and leave. If you want to pretend to be a gentleman, just use your pension to find a nursing home to stay!
Xu Qing and Ling'er's Three Lives and Three Lives
Xu Qing and Ling'er must have known each other in the previous life. Xu Qing saved Ling'er's life, or the Wood Ling clan received Xu Qing's favor. In this life, Ling'er came to repay the favor. In the subsequent plot, Xu Qing saved Ling'er's life in order to repay the favor. The previous lives of Xu Qing and Ling'er were sealed by Prince Ziqing with magic, and the memories of the previous life were forgotten. Ling'er obtained the inheritance of the Wood Spirit clan and unlocked the seal of the previous life.
Even the setting of the realm is vague. Although Chen Dong is also following the old path, at least he is innovating. You are making bad money purely based on the previous traffic, and you still look down on the readers by publishing single chapters.
What kind of shit is written? It's rubbish. It's so pretentious that it doesn't look like it. It's closed. It doesn't write about Xian Ni at all. It's worthy of your parents. Thanks to my big account, I subscribed to the full version of Xian Ni. Fortunately, I didn't subscribe to this book much.
Can you find your own style? Boss Ergen! What did you write during this time? I gave up halfway through and couldn't stand it anymore. It completely changed my taste. I started chasing Xian Ni/I want to seal the sky/seeking demons/seeking demons since I was in school, and then the transformation from Bai Xiaochun to these four different things. Please stop brainwashing Shuangwen! I don't care about the bumpy road of cultivating immortality without intrigues and intrigues. Are you getting happier and purer as you go, are you still the same you I know? It doesn't taste that good, it's as constipating as the third uncle from the Southern School writing romances.
Is it really your fault that readers scolded you? Is it difficult to type two words to ask for leave after 10 days and then click to upload?
Is it difficult to type the word "ask for leave"?
In commemoration of "Seeking Demons" Just for You: Life and Death in the Palm!
For many years, I have been alone, wandering in the world, accustomed to loneliness, silence, and memories in the dark. Years of experience have also made me develop the habit of thinking more and pondering more, but sometimes I don't want to think and ponder; I don't want to think about some things; I am afraid that they are true, and I am also afraid that they are false. If it is true, how should we face it when we meet again? If it is false, is this life just a dream? In the endless reincarnation, I will open my eyes of fate, reverse the years, reverse fate, fight for, and control the life that belongs to me. I want to see how big this sky, this vast starry sky, and this firmament are. I want to break the shackles of fate. I want this sky to no longer be able to cover my eyes. I want this earth to no longer be able to tie my feet. I want to fly between heaven and earth, get rid of the torture of fate, jump out of the cycle of fate, and seek a truth, a fact. When you know that you are you, you are not you; when you know that you are not you, you are you, It is the same as before the devil for thousands of years, watching Sangdie transform into the world. , If I were the only one in the world, I would rather be the only one in the world. For this reason, I cut off the future, unwilling to cut off the past, unwilling to cut off the warmth in the depths, and the familiarity in the memory. The sighs of the years in the wind and snow sigh at someone's youth and haziness; A thousand years of waiting in the wilderness, but the passing of the glorious years can never be regretted; The companion of a hundred years of silence, the altar is sprinkled with beauty to accompany it to move anyone's heart; The forgetfulness swaying in the rain, there is no worry but a lifetime of worry. but of wushan is an indelible, unforgettable and profound memory. In a life, who enters your life is determined by fate; but who can stay in your life is determined by you. Some people are destined to accompany you throughout your life, and some people are destined to become traces. These traces are also divided into deep and shallow ones. The deep ones will be remembered for life, while the shallow ones... Are just passers-by. There is no limit to the limit of this life. I will spend my whole life traveling around the world and stepping into reincarnation to trace your traces and find the familiarity in my memory. How many reincarnations have there been one person missing? How many reincarnations have come to the mortal world? Although there are many people, I will go. ,,, Shape the world and open the gate to the underworld. This world... Has never existed before and will never exist again. This realm: Plastic Ming. The wind is blowing, the snow is far away, In the dream, I don't know how old I am, It's hazy who can climb high in the world. ,, , Since everyone in the world calls me a devil, then simply, I am a devil. I kowtow before the Tao for 30,000 years, and when I look back on this mortal world, I will not be an immortal. This person... Su Ming! Just for you: the birth and death of palm!
Beyond Time is the most rubbish book I have ever read by the author so far.
I finished reading it, but I feel that this book is not as good as before. Although there was a lot of criticism in the comment area before, and I was still a little bit unhappy with the author, it is undeniable that it is getting shorter and shorter. The early writing is great, and it has regained the flavor of immortal rebellion and seeking demons, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. I hope that if the author wants to write a book, he can adjust himself well and write a good work.
I hope the author regains his original intention
The first seven or eight hundred chapters can still reflect your level, but the later chapters become more and more confusing. The realm is exaggerated and many things that should be written are not included. So many holes and details are not filled in. Many book friends say that you are not without reason. I don't know if you will read this comment of mine. I have been following your book for many years. I hope you can "keep your original intention" as stated at the beginning of the book. Maybe you are rich now and don't care what readers think. But I still have to say it: You said before that the book you wrote is for your own children, so should the subsequent content be consistent? A grand narrative should have consistent standards, rather than just upgrading and killing monsters at will. The whole book revolves around the boss and supporting characters, and is it just a hasty ending? {"TopicId":"600149922385362944","TopicName":"Ergen"}
The writing was so good, that was only in the past.
What a disappointment! Ergen I followed your book from immortality to evil all the way How many years have passed? I can't remember I've been thinking, did something happen to you? Why are there such big differences in the content of books You stop updating and keep your words But I can understand you Because people will have many things when they reach middle age Half a year ago, something happened to me because of the company I was imprisoned for half a year and meditated in the party school for half a year I immediately followed up on your book when I came out I thought there would be many chapters to read But I didn't expect There are more than thirty chapters left I always thought it was you who didn't update It turned out to be a completely bad ending I really can't stand it My heart for your support is gone And my own life has brightened up From now on, the world will never meet again~
As you get older, your reputation will fall apart in your later years? Speechless
The Eight Sects were good before, but fell apart later. The world view and combat power system all collapsed.
Closing remarks
The ending is inexplicable. I thought it would be full of twenty-four solar terms when I first opened it, but ended hastily at the fourteenth. The last volume was hard to swallow. I forced myself to finish reading it, but there were a lot of holes left unfilled: Amethyst, Erniu's true form, Immortal Lord... The last chapter is even more inexplicable. Reading the whole book has nothing to do with the title "Beyond Time". Not to mention the gap between it and "The Destiny of Seeking Demons", even the last book "Three Inches of the World" which was generally criticized by everyone is far away from it. Ergen is really getting older. It is understandable that he said a few years ago that he was depressed and needed rest. Answer, but when I opened a new book, I mentioned my "original intention", and the quality and quantity were difficult to guarantee. I updated it intermittently. From Seeking Demonic Destiny, Heaven Reversed Mazi, I Want to Confer Heavenly Meng Hao, to the changing style of One Thought Eternal Black Dirty, Three-Inch Fatty King of the World, after so many years Erda is indeed one of my favorite authors from Qidian, but this book is really far behind the previous one, and it is difficult to say it is excellent at the same time. I don't know if Erda will write another book, and I don't know if I can continue reading Erda...