This Is What Cultivating Immortals Is Like

For those who are new readers of Ah Feng's other books, I suggest you not read it. This novel can be said to be Ah Feng's worst novel. I have followed it from 99 Worlds to now. Let me briefly talk about this one. , The plot of Battle Power Collapse is old-fashioned. There is no other plot except for players to gain skill points for the protagonist. The dialogues are all cheap and nonsensical. It is basically the same as the previous books. It takes a long time to set the stage for the characters and it takes a long time to drive infinitely. Alas, I am quite disappointed anyway. The difference between this book and the previous three books is so big that I even suspect that the characters have been replaced.

I have been following it since 99, and I have never understood why Lao Xianyu's writing is so good, so silly, and so interesting, but it often only has word-of-mouth and no traffic (such as The End of the World). I think there are no other good books written by Lao Xianyu that always get traffic. At first, I thought it was the website itself, but after thinking about it carefully, the problem still lies with Lao Xianyu. In many aspects, Lao Xianyu's book is no worse than the top twenty books on the list (or even worse). The only thing missing is the explosive point. What is a breaking point? I think it is something that can capture readers' attention in a short period of time, or to put it another way, there must be a "magic chapter" or something that is difficult to do in other books but can attract people. Sand sculptures are good, but the disadvantage is that they are too bland. Your entire novel can attract some readers to continue reading, but it is better to have one advantage that can attract more people. Take the mysterious resurgence as an example. The book "Mysterious Resurrection" is very popular (at least several times more popular than Lao Xianyu's book). However, after I actually experienced it, I found that this book has very big problems. The protagonist has a distorted outlook on life, a poor emotional line (or in terms of women), and the logic in some places does not make sense (for example, the policeman with a ghost in the beginning goes to the protagonist. The school talks about what to do if you encounter a ghost. But after the protagonist escapes, the entire society does not disclose the fact that there is a ghost. The police initially said that the reason for telling the story was for the safety of the students is untenable, and there is no explanation later.) Why are so many people following such a book with so many problems and poison? The reason is that this author can create a terrifying atmosphere when encountering supernatural events very well, and this is the breaking point. This is enough to attract new readers and keep old readers reading. The sand sculptures in Lao Xianyu's books are reflected in the dialogue between the protagonist and other people and in daily life. People who like it will like it very much, but the design and characterization of the plot (especially Infinite Flow, it is the most difficult to write the plot deeply and eye-catching), the description of the fighting and the unique setting (also the difficulty of Infinite Flow) are often not as good as those novels on the list. For example, if the old salty fish were to write a supernatural story, it would hardly be as good as the atmosphere of Mysterious Resurrection and I Have a House of Horrors. Another example is Feng Bujue of Horror Paradise (I'm sorry that the examples are all supernatural novels, but these are the ones I like to read, and it's easy to give examples). In fact, this book is not very outstanding at the beginning, but when the author wrote the plot of Feng Shen bringing in a mental patient (that is, the first-person perspective of experiencing the life of a mentally ill patient with delusions). Live, at the end of the nesting dolls, there is a plot that makes people say that it is awesome. I will not go into details here, you can go and see it yourself.) Directly becoming a god, this is the explosive point of a single plot (this is not to say that other places in Thriller Paradise are not well written, it is just an example). And I think that in terms of daily description, Lao Xianyu is definitely not inferior to many writers on the list, and the difference is the explosive point I This does not mean that we must let Lao Xianyu imitate those novels on the list with good reputation, but we want Lao Xianyu to make some changes, or try something more bold, such as designing a plot that is enough to amaze many people, or improving his ability to shape the atmosphere (shame when he should be silly, and serious when he should be serious). And I think that in Lao Xianyu's book The length of the sand sculpture is too much, which can easily make people tired of the aesthetics. It needs to be adjusted by other types of writing. Here, I think Super Mechanic is very good and has elements of sand sculpture that surpass many books. However, Qi Peijia is able to combine sand sculpture with other styles of writing and add a unique but attractive setting. The success is not without reason. Every author has his own area of ​​expertise, and Lao Xianyu is no exception. However, when one stays in the comfort zone for too long, people will stagnate and be unable to make progress. I believe that Lao Xianyu is actually aware of this, so he wants to write a different feeling than before, so this time he changed the previous infinite flow writing method and rewritten the fourth natural disaster book. But I think this is not enough. In fact, Lao Xianyu already has a certain reputation and writing style. I can always feel the progress of Lao Xianyu, from the slightly rawness of 99 to the complete sand sculpture of Zhutian, to the more detailed portrayal of characters by Hong Kong TV series, and now to the characters with more distinctive personalities ("mature and sensible"). In fact, it has reached a certain bottleneck. As long as this bottleneck is broken, reaching the achievements of the books I mentioned will be a matter of course. Lao Xianyu is my favorite author. I also hope that Lao Xianyu can achieve higher achievements and not let down so many loyal readers who have accompanied him all the way. So I hope that Lao Xianyu can do better.

Let me comment on this book. Although it is a bit silly at the beginning, I can still read it. It becomes more and more unreadable as it goes on. I probably know that the author wanted to write a light-hearted comedy that makes no sense, just like Stephen Chow, but the fact is that you wrote Li Cha as Li Cha's aunt in the movie. You forced the jokes to be funny, but it is actually annoying. To be honest, the protagonist of this book is only suitable for supporting roles with ordinary roles to add comedy, like the Bald Crane in Immortal Rebellion and Boob Wang in Samsara Paradise.

I quite like the plot and style of this book, but I just can't stand it when it comes to girls. If it's a mutual love (a passionate love?), It's acceptable, but this kind of semi-forced... Do I really have a million words left? I'm progressing very quickly recently. But it's really good. I enjoyed watching this part of Tai Su. I really like the character of Tai Su. Is this how he merges with his true form? What a pity. Okay, the progress is really fast. I thought that the current copy could have six to eight chapters. Your circle is really chaotic: Hu San is Lu Bei's eldest brother, Hu San is Tai Su's son, Hu Er is Hu San's mother, Hu Er is Lu Bei's godmother, Hu Er is pregnant with Tai Su's son, Tai Su is Lu Bei's clone.

I follow every book written by the author. The biggest difference between this book and the previous ones is that the protagonist's bottom line is too low. I went here for the comedy. Regardless of this label, there is nothing attractive about this book, but 465 really made me unable to hold back. As long as I explained beforehand that he was the Imperial Master and Taifu, it would not make the character of Lu Bei so disgusting and make people feel that there is no bottom line. Even if it was explained later, I would still find it difficult to accept it. Dear fellow Taoists, I wish you a farewell

Tsk... I've read about 100 chapters... I always feel that besides being a transvestite, I'm wearing women's clothing. Why are they all in the third grade... I mean, many things can be used to make fun of people. Why do we think that apart from being inappropriate for children, we are also inappropriate for children?

I just saw the location of chapters three and four hundred and felt that the protagonist's operation was very strange. The front is fine, it's normal to add anything to the system stream, and although the bottom line is flexible, it's still reasonable. Ever since I went to Tianjian Sect, I felt like I was playing tricks on you. Because people recognized you because of the sword intent that your system hard-wired into you, they started instructing your subordinates to treat others the same way. I really feel a little uncomfortable here. I hope it will feel better in the future? Otherwise, this book will have to be discarded.

I can hardly stand this book anymore. It's obviously getting more and more outrageous with the main title.

Judging from the author's last book, it was the Hong Kong comprehensive book. I'm not going to brag about it, but the author's writing skills are much better now than at that time (I skipped all the exercises at that time). The rating of this book is 3.5~4/5 There will be some small discouraging points, but they are not poisonous points, such as the occasional "big scene" and "retro style" fights in two or three consecutive chapters that are full of overlapping rhetoric and nonsense. It can only be said that this is a fantasy article, but it should also be a game article (otherwise the introduction should be changed anyway), and it is also a driving article. I hope the author can grasp the balance between these contents. Judging from the more than 200 chapters I have seen, this is not a game article (game articles have a good balance between the main setting and the player's escape, such as Master XX), and there are no articles that are inclined to game articles in addition to the system, that is, "deep" interaction with the player (the player's presence in the world of the "protagonist" is only slightly stronger than the fish in the river in the world of the fisherman, which is almost non-existent). In terms of non-emotional lines, this article is more concerned with the protagonist fighting in one "mini-map" after another (various secret realms, missions, mixed with emotional lines as an adjustment), and then facing an enemy using nonsense words + "the roads are all wiped out" + rhetoric to describe the fight (it can only be said that it is a bit retro, which reminds me of the feeling of reading fantasy novels many years ago). But the problem is not so much the stacking of rhetoric and the long and repetitive description of "the road to obliteration", but that the author actually did not point out the "tricks" used by the protagonist in advance in many of the fighting scenes in the plots I saw (I don't know if you can understand what I am talking about, in other words, the protagonist's fight Only 30-60% of what is shown during the fight is shown to the readers in advance, and the rest is because the readers are completely confused when it comes to the first time. They have no sense of the protagonist's skillful combination and utilization of known "stunt skills". I haven't thought about how to express this point yet, and I will give it some more thought. Discussions are welcome). But to be honest, the level of this book is still very nice. It is probably at the upper-middle level of a good book that combines the top level of driving writing, the average level of fantasy writing, and the mediocre level of game writing.

Here I want to criticize a person by name. He has no ability, bad luck, and the key endurance is not good, but he is shamelessly getting along. He is a pretty boy who has gotten along by eating soft rice. He has gotten along with his senior sister, friend, brother, son, relying on connections. You think you are incompetent, and you are taking advantage of your brothers. You look at the clones who love the most, and they are more lucky than you. As for you, you are nothing, you will take your advantage, you are greedy for vanity, you are sensual, and I won't say who that person is.

After watching it for so long, I finished reading it in one sitting today. To be honest, I was a little disappointed. I have ordered and read all the previous Phoenix books. They were all very good before, but this one is really a bit unflattering. How to put it this way, both the settings and character construction are very rushed, with many loopholes and unclear logic. This may be related to the fact that the author has been writing about extreme flow and multi-wear in the past. There is no need to think too carefully about fast food, because the scene changes quickly and people have no time to appreciate it carefully. If you stick to the original background, you don't need to carefully consider the settings. The author of this book has many original works, which is a problem. However, if you want to make progress and write your own things, you have to go through many things. I hope the author will persevere and sum up his experience without any shortcomings.

Xiaobai Shuangwen generally don't think too much about the characters and plots

I hope you don't act like a watchman, so you are so good in the front and so awkward in the back. Although your protagonist used to be collected everywhere, you handled it well before. Now this Taifu has a very disharmonious feeling. Now that the map is only open a little, I am really afraid that it will collapse later.

The whole article reads: My little sister is so kind. When she was bitten by a dog, she immediately thought of me and personally delivered me to the dog's mouth. Although I admit that it is indeed a good dog, it was bitten by a dog, which is really disgusting. . . Dead dog! Who told you to let go? ? ! ! 🙂

What's quite buggy is that since the combined monks can take away the secret realm, why explore it? Whose family sends dozens or hundreds of people in, and each person cuts a piece and packs it away.

This is not a knock

Many of the author's books have been criticized and will be published next time.

|: Might as well have two updates at noon!

Is this the promised March update?

Good guy, the more I read, the more I feel that this time Lao Fenghuang is writing about the Zhenwu Emperor.

This is a joyful book about cultivating immortals, with the kind of sand sculpture atmosphere at the end of the world. At the beginning of the game, the protagonist is accepted as a disciple by the old leader who is approaching his end. He inherits a sect. It can't be said that he is busy with each other, it can only be said that he is indifferent.

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The protagonist Lu Bei traveled through the game and was accepted as a disciple by a large sect leader. Therefore, many people helped him on his path to immortality. Lu Bei also gradually evolved from an NPC to a boss.

After reading this book, I think the story is well written, and the characterization of the characters does not seem abrupt due to the plot. It can be said that the author is indeed a mature author, and the size of the writing is well grasped, which is still fresh in my memory.

Hello, author, I am a student. It is my birthday tomorrow. I hope you can update 100 chapters as my birthday gift. Thank you!

I have a friend who is an anorectal surgeon. His name is Duke. Rented a house, and the landlord upstairs was called Russell. There is also a relative in Hong Kong. His name is Liao Wenjie. What to do? Is there any way I can survive? Will I be infected?

I want to know, apart from being mean, how much does the protagonist Lu Bei have to praise? Strength is given by the system, background equipment and skills are given by the master, and the relationship is basically based on mutual support. When I read Chapter 63, although I felt that the transition was abrupt, at least the protagonist began to integrate into the world and felt immersed. When I saw the dog-slaughterers in Chapter 405, I felt that the protagonist finally had his own blood and was no longer a parasite on the system. As a person, no matter what you insist on, at least you have your own persistence. Then, after seven chapters, Lu Bei furiously killed the demon cultivator who was harming the people, beheaded the elder Qinggan who supported the demon cultivator, and took the initiative to set foot on the Immortal Sword Master as the Immortal Sword Master, determined to eradicate Qinggan's influence and master the Immortal Sword Sect. Therefore, as the leader of the clan, it is normal and royal to raid the treasure house and get a wave of supplies before the war. Then he was discovered without any surprise, and the boss battle was about to begin. Lu Bei, who had saved billions of experience, faced two Qinggan elders whose skills were restrained, and decided to fight a few elite monsters on the side to act as an atmosphere group... what the fuxx? You are the one who wants to show off, You are the one who takes the initiative to go to the opposite high ground, It is you who rushes to plunder other people's treasures, You said you are not going to fight the boss after all the monsters are out... (It is said that you are reluctant to give up experience, and you can't get double experience after upgrading) Seeing this, I fell into deep thought, and then I glanced at the chapter title... Chapter 412 - The younger brother is actually myself. Indeed, Lao Niao does have unique insights in naming. The end of the world is really your peak. I have ordered all Hong Kong dramas, although it is not a loss, but it is a pity. Many readers like to compare the protagonist of this book to the protagonists of previous works. To be honest, there is no comparison. No matter how despicable the protagonists of the previous games are, at least they still have some shining points as a person and are not confused about important matters. The protagonist of this work is very petty and tries to show off by himself, but he can tear down half of the stage because of being stingy. If this is your future innovation direction, congratulations, you are indeed very innovative.

Hello, a friend of mine is seriously ill and is about to die. He wants to finish reading your book before he dies. Can you update five or six hundred chapters a day so that his child can fulfill his wish?

I feel that the lower limit of the author's protagonists in his novels is getting lower and lower. In the first Duke, most of the three views are quite upright. In the second book, Russell, although he is a bit petty and likes to play pranks, he also has a certain bottom line. The third Benjie is similar to the Roman eye. These three characters are quite lovable. But Lu Bei's bottom line in this book has almost reached the bottom. He does bad things while hypnotizing himself to say it's not my fault, which is a bit annoying.

This is my favorite author in Qidian. I have read End of the World no less than four times. I admire the character created by the author as Jason, Long Legs and Superwoman. I still hope that the author can write according to his previous ideas. There are too many main chapters now 😭😭😭😭😭