The Dao Stands Equal to Heaven

There is no fate in the mortal world, there is no fairy Gu Wen, it is just the tribulation of the inner demon in the mortal world that Mo Luo, the ancestor of the inner demons, gave to the living immortal Li Changsheng.

There are still tens of thousands of orders for this kind of book. The starting point is hopeless. It's given to me for free and I won't even read it. The way it was written 20 years ago smells like an ancient Internet article. It's a waste of time.

Real or fake

Before seeing Yu Hua die, there was passion and pretentiousness. In short, in my opinion, it is just fairy grass. It has changed after coming out of the small world. The author, Wen Qing, is suffering from a disease. When the performance of each book gets a little better, the author will become more and more literate. He feels that he has become a god, and then deviates from the main line. Is it uncomfortable for me to read this plot of yours? It's like you can say that the plot of "Eagle Water" has been passed over by him. If you can understand the author's mood of considering himself a literati, then let's slowly become a literary person.

When I read the novel, this is what I imagined in my mind

Brother, to be honest, I really like the logic of your writing. But your setting and plot progression are not good enough. The Daoji setting is very cool, but it conflicts with the plot. Daoji and Xiuwei go hand in hand, and the plot is easier to write. Also, if you keep throwing away the setting and forcing the game, your combat power will definitely collapse later. In the early stage, the plot should be written with less setting, in the mid-term setting, the plot should be introduced, and in the later stage, the plot should be written. In short, if you use the mid-term writing method in the early stage, your combat power will definitely be suppressed in the mid-term, and it will be unfinished in the later stage.

The protagonist becomes more and more invincible and powerful, but the more I read, the more depressing it becomes. You will always be invincible in the current stage, and you will always be invincible to the enemies in the next stage. There are more and more friends and partners, and the friends and partners are becoming more and more miserable. The deeper the sense of immersion, the more the protagonist feels out of breath. I really don't know if the author's previous book Harem + Invincible Flow was so good, but he is committing a crime against the literary youth by writing this book like this.

If the protagonist's name is still Li Yi or Li Changsheng, not only will it not affect the reading of new readers, but it will also get old readers to discuss heatedly in the comment area out of thin air. Then new readers will have a chance to watch "The Immortal Just Wants to Lie Down" out of curiosity One stone kills multiple people 🤭

I am just an ordinary book-subscriber. I treat these dozen monthly tickets as food for dogs. I can't afford to criticize or hide. ^^. After all, I wrote hundreds of words to ask about the content, but I didn't point to the author in reply. I discussed it with book friends or checked to see if everyone thought the same. I even discussed a supporting role and didn't let go of deleting comments. Sure enough, this old man has a lot of hands and eyes, and there are always people in and out of the book covering him.

I've finished reading it. The part about hiding in the imperial city is pretty good. It's really good to write about the normal appearance of a little person hibernating after time travel. Later, when I started to look for elixirs, things started to go wrong. The first one was that I suppressed the combat power and did not upgrade. I liked to use advanced skills to kill people beyond the level and couldn't get back my blue. If the author hadn't suppressed you and had a mother by your side, you would have been in trouble sooner or later. The second is that if you don't streamline the skills that you haven't yet become an immortal, you will want to learn everything you see. If you have this free time, your skills will have taken off long ago.