I Became a War Wolf in Bright Sword

This heroine is such a failure - her identity is not an issue, but other people's attitude towards her is very problematic! Do your teammates in your team just accept one-sided words? Political commissar, are you so partial? And the most important thing is, sending things out of nowhere, joining the ace team out of nowhere - there is no such thing as holding back! If I had the ability, it would be okay if I didn't have the vase, but so far, I've been causing trouble there! With a serious background, such a petty bourgeois heroine is disgusting, right?

The author is at the level of a primary school student. After reading the first three chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. No common sense

It is recommended that the leaders, colleagues of the Eighth Route Army, subordinates, Jinsui Army, Central Army, etc. Be written in a fuller and fuller way. Each character should be fully fleshed out, not just a tool person. Li Yunlong, Zhao Gang, brigade commanders, division commanders, and bosses, outside of the plot of the TV series, have gradually become tool men who completely set off the protagonists. They can be described as dumbfounded. In fact, the author noticed this at the beginning. For example, when Zhao Gang speaks, he is very docile, Lao Li is rude, and Monk is upright. But it is written later that many people's roles are the same, they are all the same. For example: Xiao Wang commands four regiment leaders to launch a medium-sized battle. All the leaders said that you are very powerful, as long as you win the battle. This is very frustrating. Not to mention that this is not our party's team, this is not anyone's team. This is completely unconvincing. Even leaders, brigade commanders, division commanders, and bosses all look at things from different heights, and their words to Xiao Wang should also be different, not the same. You are very good and very powerful. I don't care if you secretly contacted the four commanders There are also some very extraordinary plots: the chief of staff said that he hoped he could complete it, and the brigade commander said that it could not be completed. Since it is impossible to complete, why do you let him go? I know that the author wants to contrast or reflect the protagonist's power and unexpectedness in the end. But in reality there is no such thing. Not to mention that in response to Xiao Wang's "misbehavior", the leaders should have made countless plans, or should be able to find out and fill in the gaps for Xiao Wang. How could the leaders take the lead in saying that it is impossible for him to complete the task when the battle has already begun. Disturbing military morale? A small team leader commanded the four major regiments and asked the director and division commanders to cooperate. When formulating combat missions, the boss appoints the squad leader to formulate them. This... In fact, the scale of the battle does not have to be large, and the protagonist does not have to complete the script. The author is forcing the story and plot forward, and you can feel that the author wants to write one climax after another. Kill 10 at first, then 20 next time, 50-1000, 5000, 30,000 and so on. In the process, the characters gradually became thinner, the story gradually became flat and boring. Only the protagonist is left, and everyone is focused on the protagonist who has been reduced to intelligence (the underground party lowered the IQ of our party's underground party to infants. Will our party's emergency rescue plan be like what you wrote?). Becoming empty and floating. The story also becomes how many Japs were beaten, how many weapons were seized, etc. In fact, for a medium-sized battle, from the perspective of the protagonist, a squad or a squadron, you can formulate a very dramatic or complete script, but from the perspective of the bosses, the information they have can completely overturn your script. In fact, in a medium-sized battle, the protagonist can complete his mission perfectly, make countless mistakes, and have the glory of countless supporting roles. From the moment I start a story, I know what the ending will be? For example, which brigade to fight. I basically watched this section in a skip. I started talking about which brigade I wanted to defeat, but in the end I definitely defeated it. Others must not believe it. There must be many Japanese killed and plenty captured. In fact, it is not necessarily necessary to kill them all, and it is not necessarily necessary to complete the task. It would be nice to give the protagonist some setbacks and encourage the protagonist to grow together. The main character is not level 100 right from the start. Of course, this is only one aspect. The key point is to avoid dryness, emptiness, and lack of energy. I really hope that the author can slow down a little. Each story can be written more slowly, the characters can be more fleshed out, and the plot can be more foreshadowed and reasonable. Actually, I have been reading the author's books very early, Bayonet 1937, starting from the Taihang Mountains in Ma. Later, there was a book that I got a little tired of reading. It was about the protagonist giving a lecture to the deserters. After a lot of reasoning (actually it was very embarrassing), the deserters all followed him. It seems very frivolous and hasty. Including the storyline, how many Japanese soldiers we fought and how many we saw. The good guys are shocked and the enemies are angry. From now on, the author has made a lot of progress in describing the enemy, such as the captain of the cavalry company. But not in the description of his own people. In fact, spending more time on characters, plot details, and dialogue does not necessarily mean killing a lot of Japs and seizing a lot of weapons. As long as it's vivid, interesting, and distinctive, it's worth watching. However, it is worthy of recognition that the author's control of the war is still commendable.

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. Let's not talk about whether I respect the original work or not, but a somewhat powerful person dares not to listen to Li Yunlong's affairs, and he still needs Li Yunlong's begging before he agrees. What is Li Yunlong's status, identity, and majesty in the regiment? There are still people who disobey orders. It's just one or two. Those who have some ability will resist orders. What is written? The language is not fluent. The more I read, the more awkward it becomes.

I really can't stand this book. I support this book as a support for the Swordsman, even as a support for the Iron-Blooded Ming Dynasty, Zhu Ma Taihang Side, and the King of Special Forces Soldiers. I really miss the "original taste" of the past, instead of the mindless cool articles that have been kidnapped by the system now.

The subject matter is good. After reading eight chapters, let me evaluate it. Anti-Japanese War literature. The system is a common problem. Because, everyone knows that history is painful, and it was earned by the ancestors who sacrificed their lives and blood. This is sacred. Readers who love Anti-Japanese War literature actually need an era in which the country can make it less painful and less sacrificial. Having said that, isn't it the biggest golden finger to be prophetic? There is no need to open a system next time. On the contrary, it is putting the cart before the horse. If writing a system is not as enjoyable as writing my system to create nuclear bombs, and I have the foresight to give you a system, there is no point in writing hundreds or thousands of them.

Background tip: The time traveler Wang Ye opened his eyes and found that his tactical helmet had turned into a gray cloth military cap. The scenery in the scope was a famous scene from "Bright Sword" - Li Yunlong was shouting Italian cannon! In this parallel world penetrated by the soul of the modern soldier king, the bombarded northwest of Shanxi has become his battlefield. Every stronghold is a survival copy that needs to be unlocked, and every Japanese captain is an epic BOSS to be defeated. Setting tips: As a modern soldier, Wang Ye has modern tactical thinking. He travels to Bright Sword, completes tasks and obtains treasure chest rewards, which are all abilities that are beneficial to the battlefield. Commentary tips: It has the passionate pride of "Bright Sword" and the fast pace of modern military novels. The author's description of tactical details is solid, such as the defense settings of "cold soldier-level physique" and the application of sniper tactics, which enhances the sense of battlefield immersion. The portrayal of the original characters such as Li Yunlong and Chu Yunfei is relatively close to the original work, retaining Li Yunlong's "ruffian spirit" and Chu Yunfei's "Confucian general" qualities, while giving the protagonist Wang Ye the position of "super consultant" to form a complement. Members of the independent group such as Wei Dayong and Wang Xikui were also reactivated, and the group portrait interaction was full of "Soldier Assault"-style camaraderie. The tragic endings of the original characters have been rewritten (for example, Zhao Gang and Li Yunlong were saved from committing suicide). The growth line of "Wolf Warrior Squad" is intertwined with the main line of the Anti-Japanese War. From sneak attacks on Japanese strongholds to the liberation war and the war to resist U. S. Aggression and aid Korea, the plot has a long span but a fast pace. For example, in "Laohu Bay Ambush", the protagonist uses modern tactics to win with less, which is both a battle of wits and a hearty battle. Battle scenes. The author is good at creating exciting points through "anti-routine" operations, such as the surrender of the puppet army and the Japanese army being tricked. The minefield is exposed: Some tactical victories are too "gimmick", such as the protagonist's use of modern special tactics to "annihilate the Japanese divisions" in the 1940s, which was criticized as being close to the "anti-Japanese drama". The settings (such as "cold soldier-level physique" that is immune to cold weapon damage) appear abrupt in the early stage. Although the system's presence is weakened in the later stage, it still affects the texture of a serious military story. The cool text framework of "killing monsters and upgrading" causes the plot to advance based on the "battle cycle", and some chapters have a sense of repetition (such as repeated sneak attacks on strongholds and ambushes of Japanese troops). The brief deduction relies too much on the protagonist's "prophetic perspective", which weakens the depth of the game between ourselves and the enemy. There is a sense of separation between the tragic undertone of the original work "Bright Sword" and the "Wolf Warrior" passionate style of the book. For example, Zhao Gang's idealistic tragedy in the original work was rewritten as "martyrdom on the battlefield", which satisfied the need for satisfaction, but weakened the ideological nature of the character's arc.

In fact, the author's novel idea is quite good, and the writing style is also very solid, but the plot outline may be a bit rough. 1. The relationship between the protagonist and the system has not been properly handled. The system can be a boost, but it must not override the protagonist's consciousness, otherwise it will become a disguised oppression. This is equivalent to being enslaved by a "devil". There is no difference at all, except that the master is replaced by a "system", which sounds better in name. (It should be that it was not handled well within the framework of the Anti-Japanese War, so the poisonous points in the early plot were slightly obvious.) 2. The strength of the protagonist team is a bit too "erratic". It may be due to some influence from the TV series. The training process of the special forces is not well shown. The process is basically explained in one stroke, so you will have an inexplicable feeling while reading. For example: Monk Wei suddenly changed from an Eighth Route Army soldier with strong martial arts to a qualified special forces soldier. Because the training process was downplayed, the character's image transformation did not stand up all at once, giving people a slightly abrupt feeling. It should be known that even though Monk Wei himself has extremely high individual combat capabilities, he is still an ordinary soldier, and at most his strength is more prominent. However, the difference between special forces and ordinary soldiers lies in the display of "details", "techniques", etc. It is not that a soldier is suddenly given an "elite-level sniper skill" or something, and he can become a special soldier with a little training. Equipment, training, and ideas are all indispensable for special forces. Otherwise, overly exaggerated descriptions of momentum and martial arts will give people a sense of rejection from a magical drama. 3. The description of the gm party is too rigid. Even if Chang Kaishen is no longer incompetent, his political attainments are undeniable. If you have paid attention to relevant historical data, you will find that this bald leader is as cunning as a ferocious wolf at certain moments. He is a very difficult opponent in the political field, even if his military ability is somewhat inferior. (It's not about vindicating anything, but we need to face uprightly the opponents we have defeated. They were not defeated by us because they were weak, but because we were stronger.) But in the article, the ferocious wolf behaves more like a dog. What does this mean that so many of our brave generals and great men have fought with a dog for so many years? How could someone who can compete with great men be such an idiot? In the classic book "The Dark Knight", a very classic truth is reflected: "A good opponent can perfectly set off the greatness of the protagonist." This novel still has many merits. The concept and plot are unique, and it has the author's own style. It is not as useless as the reviews say. I hope the author can continue to work hard!

If Li Yunlong talks to me like this, I will report it directly to my superiors and make small reports about Li Yunlong every day. I won't even give up my future and will fight to the end 😁😁😁😁😁 Just kidding

Stop posting anti-theft chapters all the time. It's really annoying. Facts have proved that this kind of anti-theft chapters are useless and will only affect everyone's reading experience. I won't read any more anti-theft chapters.

I still think what the author wrote (Chu-Han Zhengding) is more interesting.

This is a novel that has been completely kidnapped by the system. The protagonist exists to complete system tasks, such as capturing two Japanese prisoners alive. A call from the headquarters clearly states that the enemy attack department will instigate rebellion against these two prisoners. At this time, the system starts a task. Bury the two Japanese prisoners alive, otherwise their life span will be shortened by 50 years. It is just kidnapping, and it is such a challenge to organizational discipline. Although two Japanese prisoners are nothing, it is a task that the headquarters has clearly stated. The protagonist openly disobeys orders and provokes. You must know that the Eighth Route Army is the most organized and disciplined.

Let me give you an opinion, that era. Who knows about playing cards, other than the ace of spades, and who knows English. Stay close to the facts. After changing it, I know why the troops use code names. One of the reasons is that the name should be 1. Easy to pronounce, 2. Easy to remember, 3. Close to his personal style, 4. Catchy and easy to call. When you start the poker battle, you should also consider 1. One Ace. Who is who.

I was really disgusted when I read Chapter 7. It makes sense that Monk Wei has the bad habit of bullying people from the Central Army. After all, no one is perfect and some bad behaviors are inevitable due to the influence of the environment. But the protagonist, a new era special soldier, did not hesitate to help Monk Wei fight just because of a task in the system, which is really awesome. In the end, the noise was so loud that it alarmed the two group leaders. Kong Jie, the old team leader, felt that it was enough that the two men looked ugly because they had never beaten dozens of people under his command. The most outrageous thing was that Li Yunlong said without looking at the reason at all, "If you lose in a training competition, you have no ability, so don't complain." This is a training competition? I have really learned a lot. Can a team created in such an atmosphere work together to fight? Don't say it was bullying between soldiers of the same status. Even if a Five Tigers general like Zhang Yide bullied the soldiers, they would be killed in the end. If you want to show the protagonist's strength and Li Yunlong's troubles, can you arrange a school competition? In the TV series, didn't Li Yunlong and Monk Wei have a head-to-head competition after deciding whether to accept or not? Isn't this better than bullying your comrades to show your strength?

It's okay if I don't read the book circle. I was shocked when I saw it. The original work of Liang Jian is just a novel. A lot of people said that this book is not consistent with historical facts. Are you here to learn history? Who reads novels to learn about history rather than to relax and entertain? A bunch of people put it aside that it is not historical, and they also treated prisoners preferentially. I wonder if there is nothing more to this book except that two people were killed by the village at that time, right? Do you think you shouldn't watch this piece of poison? This episode of killing two unrelated prisoners to vent your anger is really poisonous, so skip it and don't watch it.

Is this the great god? Chapter 28 killed the war horse directly, which made me feel paralyzed I said before that I could eat my own meat, but I thought I was going to catch some game. The system's punishment is severe and the war horse is killed? And in front of someone else, Sun Desheng? I can only say that the master of Qidian is at this level. I was about to persuade me to give up on Chapter 7, but I insisted on continuing to read it, but I ended up feeling nauseated. The dark side of the characters is really vividly written. They are all bad people and selfish.

The timing of the heroine's appearance, the way she joins, everything. They all seemed so hard for me to accept. Let's talk about the heroine first, one of whom has not received training. A person without any merit can approach the protagonist so openly. Moreover, the author has never written anything particularly outstanding about the heroine. It is written about being able to endure hardship. Apart from being very beautiful, there is no such thing as being able to endure hardships, not to mention the era and the team the protagonist joined. Not to mention better than the heroine. I can only say that there are many excellent ones everywhere. I don't know how many there are. As for the appearance issue, this is a personal aesthetic point of view. I don't comment. Cheng Yue is the female supporting character. . There is a big problem with this character now, because everything she knows about the situation is only the heroine's one-sided statement. It perfectly explained the situation of what others said, and all of a sudden, my impression of her changed from a good impression to a disgusting impression. Let's talk about Zhao Gang first. I don't admit that it belongs to Zhao Gang. If you must say yes, I have reason to doubt whether he is an enemy spy. First, if you believe the words of a woman who has never been masked without any intelligence support, you have a problem, and it is a big problem. Second. Assuming he has information on this. Then we should know that the heroine does not have any military skills or anything outstanding. She can only be a burden when she is directly arranged next to the protagonist. Yes, it is a burden in my opinion. This does not make sense. Thirdly, he and the protagonist have been in the same unit for so long. He does not understand the importance of the protagonist? The team led by the protagonist, the protagonist himself, these things are no longer something he can decide as a political commissar. If I were his superior, then either I should investigate it carefully, or you, the political commissar, should just forget about farming. In conclusion, it is not that the anti-war theme cannot have a love story, but whether the arrangement is reasonable and reasonable. If the protagonist is just a soldier, no one cares. But he is not, with his combat ability, battle command and strategic vision. Having made so many achievements, it is destined that his relationship cannot be settled by just saying "I like it". Therefore, the appearance of the heroine will not make people feel good, but will only ruin it. That's all

This book is well written, but the part that makes me the most angry is the part about the comfort women. Do you know how to write the word "respect"? I was disgusted when I saw it at the time. Let me tell you that most of the comfort women were Chinese girls. Wang Ye had traveled through time. Would he not be clear? If you're afraid of being banned, don't write this paragraph. The compatriots in it were all killed by poison gas.

Be more original. Don't always copy the original version. I looked at a dozen pictures, all of which contained long paragraphs of dialogue, and they were all exactly the same. Did you find a direct copy of the script?

Now that I have finished reading, let me say something. This ending was something I never expected. I have been reading this book for only a dozen chapters. To be honest, I am really disappointed with this ending. But there is no other way. In our current environment, freedom of writing will probably take another few hundred years. I hope the author will not write about this subject in the next book. If he keeps his writing style, he will continue to support the new book. Come on!

Is this a fucking great god? The novel is so poorly written. This routine has been around for more than ten years.

Author, if you don't write about the War of Resistance or the Bright Sword, will you die? Back then, you were able to write such sacred books as Chu-Han Zhengding, but why have you degenerated into this now? So disappointed in you!

Good guy, the military channel is full of swords, Li Yunlong is too busy!

I really want to say something, can those who write Liangjian not need a system? I read a few books, all of which have systems, and directly provide materials, equipment, and even production lines. . . Why don't you just ask for a missile and throw it at the emperor if you are so awesome? .

I suspected that this book won the third level honor because of internal manipulation. After reading a few chapters, it starts to feed you poison. It gives the protagonist some elite-level skills at every turn, especially the cold weapon that is ineffective in causing death damage, which made me sick.

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The author would like to talk about a setting bug - the silencer. There are three sources of noise when a gun is fired: the noise generated by the explosion of propellant, the sonic boom generated by the warhead breaking the speed of sound (I still can't remember the terminology), and the noise generated by the operation of gun components. The noise of modern guns firing 5.56Mm NATO bullets (NATO standard intermediate-power bullets) without a modern silencer is about 260 decibels. Adding a silencer can reduce the noise by about 20 decibels, which is about 240 decibels. It is still very obvious and harsh. To achieve a good silencer effect, you need to use special subsonic bullets with a silencer (relevant details are reflected in the game "Sniper Elite 3"). For example, the Russian VSS silent sniper rifle (I can't remember the exact name, but VSS is accurate, that is, the gun in the game that comes with a quadruple scope and silencer and uses 9mm bullets. The reason why the ballistic drop is so serious in the game is because of the subsonic bullets used, which have a slow initial velocity). They use special subsonic bullets. In the article, Lao Wang used a homemade silencer to suppress the noise until it was undetectable from 30 meters away. It may need further adjustment. I don't know how to change the 6.5Mm full-power friendly bullet into a subsonic bullet. Maybe it can be done by modifying the bullet to reduce the charge, right? 😰I hope it will be helpful to your creation. I wish the author great success in Changhong 😄

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