Supreme Divine Arts

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First of all, how Zhao Gangyi encouraged Wang and Zhang to attack the protagonist, and some of Zhao's calculations after he succeeded. Here, some plot must be added, which may be better. Otherwise, these two people would really look stupid. If the two of them took the risk of assassinating the head disciple just because they suffered a loss due to the original conflict, even if Zhao promised some benefits, it would not be enough... Because first of all, once the two people get involved, they will have something to do with Zhao. After that, they will either be completely controlled by Zhao, or they will be killed and silenced by Zhao and his master. The most likely ending is that the two idiots were killed and silenced, and the crime of killing the protagonist was framed on them without any evidence. Could it be that these two guys were easily bribed and encouraged by Zhao Gangyi without even thinking about it? If so, it means that the author has failed in his duty and wants to kill the protagonist. Such a mindless plot can easily degrade the intelligence and quality of the story. … Secondly, let's talk about the issue of total annihilation in Chapter 81. Let's not talk about the question of whether it is necessary to put together a paragraph about the conflict between Zhao Gangyi and his master, the protagonist and his sect leader and master... Caused by the struggle for "what sign or what disciple". Just say that Wang and Zhang were completely wiped out, and Zhao Gangyi, whose image had collapsed and was extremely cowardly at the moment, was also killed by the protagonist. And it should be possible to kill Zhang Chaozong before he decisively informs Master Zhao after learning that the three Zhaos were accidentally killed and himself exposed... Otherwise, the protagonist will be in big trouble. Because no matter what Zhao and the others did, and no matter what the book said about death, there is no evidence, and the truth is not important. You know, after all, Zhao is not an ordinary person. He is a genius. He is the elder of the criminal law or a valued disciple. No matter what Zhao did, he was killed like this. As a master, it was shameless! Therefore, he will inevitably point the finger at the protagonist, and unless the sect leader is determined to confront Zhao's master, it will be difficult to save the protagonist... In this case, the plot will go back to being bloody, killing the young ones, and killing the old ones, as if the whole world will follow the protagonist to death... So, is it appropriate to have such a so-called 'total annihilation' that is beyond the protagonist's expectation? Is there a more appropriate and sensible approach? For example, after killing and wounding, he takes the initiative to escape, and then Master Zhao, the master... In this case, the protagonist and the master will hold the commanding heights of morality and justice. Wang and Zhang will not escape death. Zhao Gangyi will also end up being abandoned by his master... Although he may barely survive because of his master's face. Even if Zhao's master is still hostile to the protagonist and his sect master, the firepower will inevitably be focused on the sect master, and the sect master will have enough reasons to openly protect the protagonist, and firmly harvest the results of the "signature disciple or something"... Wouldn't this be wiser than total annihilation? Of course, considering that the protagonist is unwilling to expose the peak strength of the external forging, total annihilation also makes sense. But here's another thing I don't understand: why do you have to hide your peak external forging strength? Is it because they are afraid that excessive genius will create additional risks? Why should Zhao Gangyi be used as the benchmark for the level of genius, while the protagonist only dares to be a little better than Zhao? In fact, the protagonist only needs to hide his magic skills, and he can also hide his martial arts and force. It is OK as a trump card. At this level of cultivation, there is absolutely no need to hide it? Isn't it a special genius? Is Zhao Gangyi, a genius from a small place, a piece of cake? If you are a little better than him, can you be considered a real genius? Don't update the definition of the word genius when the protagonist changes the map, otherwise the plot may turn into a bloody map again... There is another benefit to not hiding one's cultivation level. Isn't the protagonist trying every possible means to acquire internal training techniques? If he shows the peak level of external training, will he still be short of skills? This is an obvious thing. The gang must regard him as a treasure! Does the protagonist still need to think and worry about... Why is this kid's talent so terrifying? Or maybe he is just lucky. He must have a secret or an adventure. If I can get his adventure, then... Then a group of people will inexplicably murder the protagonist himself. That's why you have to hide your clumsiness to cover up your secret... It's ridiculous. The protagonist's hidden clumsiness goes too far, but it's really clumsy! It's okay to be cautious, but it's not advisable to be overly timid. Besides, shouldn't the protagonist consider that if his level of cultivation is passively exposed, the master of the sect and the higher-ups in the gang will think that he has ulterior motives? At that time, people from the same group will have no choice but to part ways or even turn against each other, so why bother! Moreover, the risk of the protagonist's cultivation being passively exposed is actually quite high... I don't believe that the master of the sect will not pay attention to the true combat power of the disciple who has given everyone hope. Even if the protagonist hides well, he can't guarantee that he won't reveal any traces, right? Another thing is, even if the protagonist does not leak any traces of horses, as a master, if he feels that he cannot see through his disciples, then why not create all kinds of curiosity and suspicion, and finally become alienated? ... Okay, it was incoherent and a bit messy. Finally, I would like to add that the gang the protagonist belongs to has carefully cultivated him since he was weak... Although it is just a kind of mutual use, fundamentally speaking, the gang has nothing to do with him, and it feels like a mountain of kindness. And what about the protagonist? He is wary of the gang and his master, and he only regards the gang as a springboard for him to become stronger; the protagonist needs to rely on the gang temporarily, but at the same time he despises and looks down on the gang from the bottom of his heart; the protagonist upholds the sense of superiority of the protagonist who won the gold finger, and is self-righteous and secretly rejoicing, dormant, waiting for opportunities to fly into the sky; and then he thinks that when he becomes awesome, he can set up a gang casually to show the protagonist's own gratitude and three views of justice? ! ... Okay, what I said was a bit confusing again. However, my personal visual inspection of this book so far is that there are not too many failures, but the signs of such failures are becoming more and more obvious through these two chapters. If not handled well, some of the previous bright spots and mediocre areas may be turned into poisonous points. Well, in the end, I don't mean to offend, but I still want to take the liberty to remind you: Take care of yourself!

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I want to be more refined, I want to be more refined, I want to be more refined, and say the important things three times. Why does it feel weird? I don't care, let's increase the semen first.

I'm really tired of this kind of book that eats settings. I had practiced a lot of five-stage golden body, iron cloth shirt, diamond glazed body, and diamond body training skills before, and all of them were improved to perfection and merged into the magical power of Vajra Indestructibility, which was said to be no worse than the real magical power of Vajra Indestructibility. However, after a few chapters, it was said that the protagonist's physical body was a flaw, so I asked someone for a copy of the Golden Bell Jar. Then those things you practiced before were nothing? The co-author spent hundreds of thousands of points to practice such a bunch of physical training martial arts, and also spent tens of thousands of points to fuse them, is it not as good as a golden bell cover? What kind of garbage does the protagonist practice?

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I remember it was a night with the crescent moon hanging in the south and the breeze blowing in my face. After taking a walk, I was looking for a book and came across a novel called Super Shinto Technique. Then it was more than 400, and now the content is still exciting. Many people started to talk about water, but it is not water, but refreshing and tired. Maybe develop new magical powers, escape, cover up secrets, etc. Maybe we need a few distinctive characters, supporting roles and the like to support the plot, or a twist. Although the relics of the predecessors are very cliché, but sometimes it is easy to write something interesting.

If you want to add a bit of romance to the story, you have to have an inexplicable heroine, so forget it. Why is it that every time the protagonist sees the heroine, he acts like an imbecile junior high school student who is just starting to fall in love?

After reading 400 chapters, I don't recommend jumping into the trap. The whole book is about upgrading for the sake of upgrading. It's neither exciting nor resourceful. The plot is the same and boring after understanding the routine. The whole environment of cultivating immortals is full of killings and it's not safe. The strongest person in the sect is one level higher than the protagonist. It's said that the sect does not train disciples to protect its disciples. This setting looks uncomfortable.